Two cats who lost and won (spoiler warning) by Sapphireheart

Sapphireheart shares two characters she admires for their experiences throughout their lives.Β 

Artist unknown

Hello, this is my first article and I hope you like it. Also here is a spoiler warning of the super editions Crookedstar’s Promise and Hawkwing’s Journey so if you hadn’t read these books you should move onto a different article.

1. Crookedstar
Cookedstar stated his life with the name Stormkit but then there was an accident where he damaged his jaw and his mother change it to Crookedkit and thus his mother then became ashamed of having a kit with a damaged jaw. Ahe then paid more attention to his litter mate Oakkit. Crookedkit ran away when he couldn’t handle any longer the way the other clanmates looked at him. He came upon a farm where he stayed with some barn cats that accepted him. (I may have placed this out of order. if I did let me know) Mapleshade appeared in a dream to him after he returned to Riverclan. Mapleshade made him promise to be loyal to his clan and nothing else. Later when he was a warrior Crookedjaw, a pack of dogs invaded. His mother bonked her head on rock at a stream. He hesitated but then Mapleshade told him to remember his promise and he regretfully went to stop the dogs. Thus, losing any chance for his mother’s appreciation. Then his father Shellheart dies of a stomach sickness. His father was the deputy of riverclan so when before the deputy was named they found a squirrel in the fresh kill pile with a broken jaw. Thus the deputy chosen was Crookedjaw. His leader died then he became Crookedstar. He had mated with Willowbreeze but she died with most of their first litter leaving Silverkit. His brother Oakheart falls in love with Bluefur a Thunderclan cat and dies in battle. His daughter Silverstream mated with Greystripe and died giving birth to her kits. All these sufferings yet he was a noble cat who leaded Riverclan with his head High.

2. Hawkwing
Hawkpaw loses his brother Darkpaw in a fire and he’s later named Hawkwing. He blames Pebblepaw because he saved her before he saced his brother. Later Darktail betrays Skyclan by joining the rouges, He killed Hawkwing’s father Sharpclaw. Then Skyclan was on the move. When they arrive at Barley’s farm Cherrytail (his mother) and Cloudmist (his littermate) stay with Barley. He mates with Pebbleshine and she later tells him she’s pregnant. Later they find a monster with chickens inside. They try to take some of the chickens but a twoleg drives away with Pebbleshine inside. He suffered a lot but he protected he clan and became deputy after the deputy that took the place of Sharpclaw is captured by twolegs.

These two cats suffered yet they stayed strong and this is why I admire these cats.

  16 Replies to “Two cats who lost and won (spoiler warning) by Sapphireheart”

  1. Jadepelt
    May 5, 2017 at 12:25 am

    Darktail was a rouge from the start and he only did all of this because _______ _______ ___ ___ ___ ______. Fill in the blanks if you want this is only because I think spoilers aren’t allowed on book three yet

  2. Butterflypaw(flower) Who Loves Reese's Peanut Butter Cups
    May 5, 2017 at 2:04 am

    I might be wrong too but I think Crookedkit was on his way to the Moonpool when Mapleshade appeared to him before he went to the farm and then she told him to go back to RiverClan

    • Jadepelt
      May 5, 2017 at 3:27 am

      Moonstone not Moonpool, wrong setting

    • May 5, 2017 at 3:11 pm

      It’s been months since I read Crookedstar’s promise and I did warn you some thing’s might be out of order. Also, I forgot to type that Mapleshade took credit for the squirrel..


      A wild Sapphie has appeared

  3. Owlheart
    May 5, 2017 at 3:15 am

    Great article! I agree completely on both of them.

  4. Mintkit(feather)/Mint That Grows Where Feathers Fall
    May 5, 2017 at 1:05 pm

    You’re completely right! I feel so sorry for Crookedstar especially…. πŸ™


    When in thorns, look for roses

  5. Waffles
    May 5, 2017 at 2:58 pm

    You’re right! I feel so bad for Crookedstar! Rainflower’s a piece of fox dung.

    PS: Darkpaw should be Duskpaw πŸ™‚


    Christmas. That’s my siggie.

  6. May 5, 2017 at 3:00 pm

    Awesome article! πŸ˜€


    Running for SW!!

  7. May 5, 2017 at 3:13 pm

    *celebrates* I’m glad my first article finally came πŸ˜›
    Alot of things happened since I sent in this article πŸ˜›


    A wild Sapphie has appeared

  8. May 5, 2017 at 7:13 pm

    Great job explaining acts who continued to do good acts even though they suffered much.

  9. Emberstorm
    May 6, 2017 at 2:03 am

    Which book was hawking in

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