Mary Sue? by Snowyfoot

Snowyfoot discusses some possible Mary-Sues of the series.

By the title you can already tell what this warriors fan article will be about. Mary Sues. I have no right to your opinions so if they are not positive or polite please keep them to yourself.

First up we have Dovewing.

Now Dovewing is a bit of a Mary Sue in my opinion not because she whined but for the reasons she did. They always kinda irked me. I get that she would be upset over the loss of her power but she was and adult that should not act that way. Now one reason she whined was because her powers wouldn’t work properly, sounds a little MS to me (MS means Mary Sue) she automatically expects them to work with the twitch of an ear (I can’t say snap if a finger though XD). This pretty much tells me she wants things to work her way. That everything should be prim and perfect. And finally when she looses them which I should note when she first got them she wished she never had them, she whined more because things became harder for her, which I should say her power made a lot of things easier. Many people reading this can say that’s just lazy or that doesn’t make her an MS but getting to my point is that she expected everything to be perfect after the battle affecting her total being.

Now that is the end of dovewings part and now on to. *drum roll*…, Spottedleaf
Now I have recently purchased Spottedleafs Heart and I didn’t like at all the SpottedxThistle ship! At all!!!!! But that’s not my reason. She is not an MS because of this but she is for theee reasons. Now from the time we met her and in StarClan she seemed perfect. Stood up to the bullies, got everything from StarClan right, and I am not saying she was perfect only for that because that what medicine cat should but she completly understood them without confusion, and the fact that she always seemed a bit of a stalker and was the perfect role model still! Now when we first meet her she seemed perfect, already had wounds patched up from the whole battle and received a sign and completly understood it. But it almost made me wanna put the book down when I saw more unexplained love between her and the young apprentice Firepaw. But when she died she completly swarms every dream he has, and to top it off dead vs living romanxe never usually worked just look at Jayfeather and Half Moon. *points to a glaring Jayfeather* Now the fact that she was always was prim in StarClan and was always sought out in dreams and gave prophecies looked like special treatment to me. That’s just my opinion though. Spottedleaf was a good character but some flaws would have made her more interesting and I am not saying she had non but more in text flaws.

Now last but not least we have…, Star Flower
She was always kinda a playa to me… she just went on to Thunder then his FATHER! She was never even questioned about her loyalties by the people who liked her well maybe one person or cat did but when Thunder swears hatred in her, he then begs his father to let her in his group! Come on! Now once there you know how clear sky is you live him and his mate alone for two minutes and bang she’s expecting kits. You all have to agree with that XD. But the fact she was just a free roller and so prim and pretty to all cats made her perfect and flawless ugh! Even when her father turned out to be one eye she was still just a pretty face that was chased after! Te fact she was never questioned by Thunder even though he HATED her was always a problem to me, but she was a briefer character so this ends my case. Now before I go let’s just say something about what I said about clear sky. He is seen wth Bright Stream, two minutes later she is revealed pregnant. Storm comes to his camp and next time we see her she is pregnant. Now we have
star flower, she moved to camp and a chapter or so later she is pregnant, and you know in your heart of hears its true XD XD. Well peace out!
~Snowyfoot