We held a caption contest back in July with this picture:
and now, after all this time, the winner is finally being announced! (Sorry for the delay, I’ll clean the elders’ den for a month to make up for it 😛 )
So get ready ………..
to congratulate ………………..
*drum roll please* …………………………
Craterpaw!!!!!!!!!!!!! 🙂 Her caption was: ““eh whatever those chickens are looking at me-ahh what are you looking at you filthy human!?!?””
(Crater, you prize is an emoji on live chat! Just shout at me what you want it to be in the comments below.)
Now it’s time for our October fanfiction contest!!!!!!!!!! 😀
In honor of Halloween, we have two spooooooooooky prompts (you get to choose which one you want to write about!)
⭐ Prompt 1: A monster is on the loose, and your main character has the strange ability to communicate with it!
(Your monster can be any sort of creature, real or make-believe, but it cannot be an ordinary cat who love murder. 😛 Think more along the lines of vampires, mummies, evil anthropomorphic trees, giant spiders …)
⭐ Prompt 2: A catastrophic zombie apocalypse has begun!!! Show your character trying to survive in this post-apocalyptic setting …
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RULES
• No excessive gore, inappropriate scenes, cursing, or anything else you wouldn’t find on BlogClan. Entries of this nature will be deleted.
• Your story can feature BlogClanners, canon Warriors characters, or your own original characters
• Only one entry per person!
• Be respectful of all participants! Let’s make this fun for everyone!
• Your entry must relate to the Warriors world.
• The deadline is October 31st, 11:59 PM EST.
PRIZES
🥉 Third place: a drawing (fursona, OC, Warriors character)
🥈 Second place: a drawing (fursona, OC, Warriors character) OR the ability to choose live chat’s colors
🥇 First place: a drawing (fursona, OC, Warriors character) AND the ability to choose live chat’s colors
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We need volunteers to draw prizes for the winners, so if you’d like to offer up your services (they’d be endlessly appreciated 😀 ), please fill out this form!
Did you get my entry or do I need to submit it again?
Hmmmmmmm …. I don’t think I see it! Could you post again?! 😀
Of course, Sunny! Just a moment…..
Can my fanfic have some bloody parts cause there are gonna be lots of fights and cats die. Is it OK if I do that cause my fanfic is gonna be published on wattpad and probably only the judges are gonna see it .
As long as it doesn’t exceed anything that you see in the Warriors books, it should be fine 🙂 Do keep in mind, however, that if your entry wins or is an honourable mention, I believe the fanfic entry will be posted publicly in the results post.
Absolutely!!! >:) The scarier the better! Just no intense gore … Tigerstar-death-scene-level violence is okay, but with stuff like that don’t overdue the detail!
Pinned post since there is only a week and a half left to enter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😀
The Last Stand
A Fan Fiction by Spottedspirit
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The zombies started showing up in leafbare. Back when nobody expected any trouble. But first, Dustpelt was gone. W searched and searched, but we couldn’t find him. Then, he came back to camp. But, he was different. He had a oily black layer on top of his fur, and his usually amber eyes were the color of blood. He had a deep gash through his chest, and a steady flow of red pumped out. He started attacking cats, as if he was scared at first. Then, he began murdering them. Berrynose and Spiderleg each died, a terrible death. Nobody was sure who killed them, except for me. I knew, but only because I could scent the distinct scent they carried. Soon, more and more cats dissapeared, and more and more cats were being murdered and more and more cats appeared like this, and each time, they had a steady flow of blood pumping from their stomach, throat, or chest.. And that was just the beginning. Now, they took over our camp. They leave a spew of toxic oil behind them, killing trees and animals. Our once beautiful forest is now a wasteland. They murdered Bramblestar brutally, the same death as his father. And now, they can’t be stopped. Too many cats have died. Crowfeather, Nightcloud, Daisy, Spiderleg, Berrynose, Shrewfoot, Blackstar, Birchfall, and so many more. And now, only me and a group of survivors can try and stop them. But this might be our last stand.
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“Snapfrost,” Dovewing called, yanking me out of my sleep with her horse, dehydrated voice.
“Hmm?” I sat up, my eyes squinting to see through the harsh fog.
“It’s time to go…” she said, her green eyes blurry with exhaustion.
“Is Briarlight ready?” I asked, and suddenly realized my voice was as husky as Dovewing’s.
“Yeah, you’re the only one still asleep.” the pale gray she-cat responded.
“Oh…” I stood up, my eyes finally focusing. Briarlight, Cinderheart, Hollyleaf, Ivypool and Icecloud all stood, expectantly at the edge of our makeshift camp.
Briarlight’s brown pelt was spiked up against the moist fog, her ears pricked to listen for danger. When she saw me, her blue eyes widened.
“Snapfrost, are you ready?” she asked, her voice cautious.
“Yes, I am. Is Cinderheart leading today?” I asked, tilting my head in curiosity.
“Yes, actually.” Cinderheart said, padding up. My mother’s gray pelt shimmered with condensation and her eyes were narrowed in order to see through the fog. Her tail lashed slowly.
“Okay.” I meowed, “And where’s Bristlethorn and Frondbush?”
“Snapfrost,” Cinderheart said, gently, “I’m afraid that the zombies took them… I couldn’t save your littermates.”
“My littermates….were taken?” I squeaked, my voice suddenly high-pitched.
Icecloud dipped her white head, apologetically. “Afraid so. But there really wasn’t much we could do about it.”
Dovewing thrust her muzzle into the conversation. “We must go,” her voice seemed harsh, but her green eyes danced with fear.
Briarlight nodded. “We haven’t much time to lose, unfortunately.”
Everyone started to nod in agreement before Ivypool set off into the thicket-covered tangle of paths. Everyone followed, but kept their ears pricked and their guards up. I carried Briarlight, who’s brown pelt brushed mine. Her blue eyes were flecked with fear as we walked, the trees around us dying and melted. It hadn’t been long since this place was lush and green, but the zombies left a trail of toxic acid behind them. It burnt the trees and melted the paths with their sticky black oil.
“Hollyleaf,” Briarlight whimpered, “Tell us again where we’re heading?”
“Further away from the zombie camp.” Cinderheart responded, her ears flicking back towards Briarlight.
“Of course…” Briarlight said, sighing.
I felt a rush of sympathy for her. Her brother, Bumblestripe, had just been taken by zombies a few nights back and it had been hard on the young she-cat.
“It’ll be okay…” I murmured in her ear.
Briarlight wasn’t listening, though. Her blue gaze rested on the bushes on the other side of the path. The leaves were rustling, and out slid five cats. Not zombie cats but members of ThunderClan! Out slid a gray tabby she-cat, a tortoiseshell-and-white, a pale gray tabby tom, and a black and white tom.
“Jayfeather, Hazeltail, Blossomfall, Toadstep!” Dovewing exclaimed, her gray pelt ruffled with excitement.
Jayfeather’s eyes were wide with shock. “Dovewing!” he exclaimed in surprise.
He raced forward and wove around the she-cat. He purred loudly, nuzzling Dovewing and the rest of our patrol. He’s face was the definition of relief.
“I can’t believe you’re okay!” exclaimed Blossomfall, her eyes round and as big as a full moon. She padded up to Ivypool, weaving around her mate, their multicolored coats mixing.
Hazeltail’s eyes were round, too, but she didn’t say anything. Her white-and-gray tail lashed back and forth, anxiously. She almost looked guilty.
“I’m so sorry…” Blossomfall said, stepping back from her mate and her ears folding back, “They took Squirrelflight…”
“Squirrelflight?” Icecloud’s eyes were wide, her white ears dropping back to press against her skull.
“I-I am so sorry…” Jayfeather muttered, his head hanging, “W-we tried to save her…”
“Anyone else?” asked Ivypool, her eyes wide with fear and her pale pelt spiking, pressing against Blossomfall, “Did they take Lakepaw or Plumpaw?”
I braced myself for the answer. I knew that Ivypool’s adopted kits were precious to her.
“We never found your kits after the zombies took over. And, sadly, we also lost Leafpool and Brightheart.” Hazeltail mewed, finally, biting her lip.
“There really wasn’t much we could do.” Blossomfall shifted her paws, nervously. Her paws were covered in black muck, proving they had just encountered the zombies. The fur along them was scorched from their toxic acid.
“We should go. Are the zombies close by?” Cinderheart asked suddenly to Jayfeather.
“Hard to say,” he responded, “They carry almost no scent.”
I shivered. The scent of zombie was something only I could scent and it was coming closer. I nudged Briarlight. “The zombies are close.” I whispered, my voice scarcely heard over the sound of rustling of leaves. Black oil rushed out from under the leaves of the trees, lapping at my paws.
Cinderheart!” I called, my voice shrill with fear.
Cinderheart turned to see what I was talking about. Along the edges of the path was a growing puddle of black oil. The gray she-cat’s ears fell against her skull.
“Run!” Cinderheart called, starting to flee.
Everyone turned to follow, running hard. Briarlight started sobbing as we ran. I could feel the wind gush past me, smelling acrid and blistering. It was hard to breath, the smell of death was so thick. I was scared when I heard a ear-splitting scream behind me. Cinderheart’s head turned, and she saw that Icecloud was being attacked.
Her white pelt smoldering and her eyes dull, she was weakly fighting against three zombies. With a jolt, I recognized Bumblestripe, Rosepetal, Poppyfrost and Berrynose. Except now, their fur was covered with oily black goo and their eyes were a deep red color.
Bumblestripe’s claws dug into Icecloud’s face, leaving red welts. Berrynose’s teeth dug into her ear and Poppyfrost helped Rosepetal dig their claws and fangs into her exposed belly. Hollyleaf stopped running and was gaping at the scene in horror.
“Icecloud, fight back!” Hazeltail called, her ice-blue eyes wide.
Icecloud made a strangled cry and then went limp. Her pelt crawled with little black droplets of oil and they seemed to seep into her white pelt. Her eyes opened, and started to turn red, seeping color into every cell. Her burns started to glow an ugly green and her eyes were starting to get wider as if she was scared. Then, she stood, her eyes large and she started to make the gurgling sound that the zombies made.
Cinderheart gasped. Icecloud was now a zombie and there was nothing we could do about it. Icecloud’s tongue darted out from her lips and licked her nose. It left a black trail of oil. Icecloud was horrifying in this form.
“Come on,” Jayfeather called, “We can’t save her!”
I turn away, and follow. I don’t remember running so fast before, and yet, I felt strangely alive. The wind ripped past me, my spotted fur ruffling out into spikes. But the experience was ruined, when a sickening scream caught my attention.
We had run into the zombie camp.
“Daughter…” Cinderheart said, “Stay still…”
I turned. My father, Lionblaze, stood behind me, his eyes wide and calm. But his pelt was one of a zombie. His normally amber eyes were red, and his jaws was slack and dripping the black oil. He had a terrible red gash through his throat and he made a quiet gurgling noise, and oily black blood pumped from the wound.
“Snapfrost, come here.” Cinderheart said, her voice commanding.
I stepped away from my father.
Lionblaze closed his mouth. His slackened jaw tightened and his eyes seemed to flare with fire. His breath was so acrid, I could smell in from where I stood. Cinderheart growled. Lionblaze flicked his tail. A zombie version of Tigerheart, Bramblestar, and Dustpelt joined him. They all advanced on us. Their black oily fur dripped and sagged, as they slowly walked towards us. I suppressed a whimper. Lionblaze and a zombie Bramblestar started to come closer. They had their claws unsheathed, dripping with oil.
“Snapfrost, take Briarlight and go.” Jayfeather said, his voice pleading.
“No, I’m not leaving you.” I told Jayfeather, my voice frail. I slid Briarlight off my back, and onto my uncle’s.
Lionblaze then spoke, but his voice was ancient and sounded almost like rock sliding against rock. “I see, daughter, that loyalty is your weakness.”
I figured the voice he spoke with was the voice of whoever murdered the first cat. He had started this, and was now using my father’s boy in order to maintain his rank as leader. “No, father.” I said, “My loyalty is my strength.”
Then, I charged.
I don’t remember the end for most of my friends, I just remember fighting alongside them. It was a thrilling moment of adrenaline, coursing through my veins making me fight with more strength than I thought possible. I remember killing Dustpelt, my claws making contact with his throat and then his breathing silenced. Then, I remember killing Leafpool, my teeth biting her scruff until there was a sickening crack. I knew I was killing my former friends, but then again, I knew this fight was in vain. I saw the body of Cinderheart thud to the ground, her blue eyes wide and her mouth open in one last snarl of defiance. I remember whipping around, digging my claws into anything black and oily and fleshy, until the last sounds of the battle was me panting, and a groan of pain from Jayfeather.
I looked his way, my gaze starting to blur. I was exhausted.
Jayfeather lay, his pale pelt lined with stars and his blind blue eyes wide and alert as if he could see. He pushed into sitting position, his eyes wide with grief. “Briarlight?” he called, his eyes wide.
Briarlight’s body lay dead on the other side of the clearing, along with Dovewing’s. I whimpered, and limped over. Briarlight’s sky-blue eyes were wide, her mouth open as if to plea for mercy or as if she was cussing them out. I pressed my muzzle into her fur, and I lapped at her muzzle with my tongue. Her fur was still silky and soft, unlike the rest of them. She was killed with a bite to her throat, breaking her spine and killing her painlessly.
“Jayfeather,” I managed, “She’s dead.”
Jayfeather shook hit head, his wide ears pressing against his skull. “No, we can fix her!” he said, though it sounded like a plea. “She’s fine.” He nuzzled Briarlight’s limp remains.
But, then a spirit rose from the body as if it was just some replaceable shell. Briarlight’s sky-blue eyes were now full of life and she walked on her back legs, which had been paralyzed for so long. Jayfeather suddenly purred, and he nuzzled Briarlight.
“Oh, Jayfeather,” she purred, her voice full of joy, “You stupid furball.”
Leaving them, I padded over to my mother’s body. Cinderheart looked wasn’t so peaceful, her eyes open and angry. I pressed my muzzle into her pelt, breathing in her sweet scent. Then, her spirit arose, her speckled gray pelt now full of stars. She purred and pressed against me. Then, I saw Blossomfall’s and Toadstep’s. And even Lionblaze and Bramblestar’s spirits. Even the zombies were now spirits, released from their terrible bodies.
“Don’t be sad, daughter.” Cinderheart said, “Look around.”
I looked around. I saw Blossomfall, Briarlight, Cinderheart, Toadstep, and Lionblaze’s bodies all scattered across the zombie camp. I knew they were dead, but it looked like they were sleeping. All of them, except Toadstep, who had massive wounds on his throat and belly, still pumping a steady flow of red blood. It was horrifying to see them so still. So lifeless.
“We have all left our bodies. They are nothing but shells. And look, even you have.” Cinderheart gestured to a lifeless spotted lump.
I peered at it more closely and realized it was my own body. It was almost too much for me to bear. I was unaware of Jayfeather when he walked up to me until he said;
“Snapfrost,” Jayfeather said, though it sounded like saying my name made him feel better.
I looked back to look at Jayfeather. I was told many times how much I looked like him. His angular ears, his lithe build, and his wide blue eyes. The only difference, they said, was our pelts and attitude. Now, I stared at my look-alike, and realized just how much we actually had in common. We both were loyal to our Clan, and we both loved our Clan more than anything.
“I believe that today,” I said, “Is the start of a new era.”
Jayfeather nodded. “We must keep ThunderClan alive.” he agreed.
The other StarClan cats nodded.
“I believe that whoever started this apocolypse wanted to draw us apart. But, he has failed.” Lionblaze said.
“Then, let us start with burying our bodies.” I replied, and I knew that though life was bad, we would pull through.
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But, somewhere, an ancient voice rumbled and whoever it belonged to, smiled. He chuckled to himself and then said, “Is it that easy to rid yourself from Fear?”
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THE END
The prompt is the apocalypse, obviously.
Okay, so I left my story in the comments, here, but at the bottom, it says it was marked as spam? Help?
Sorry, that would be the spam monster 😛 I’ll fish out your comment and leave it in moderation!
Argh. Totally forgot about this….
Welp, time to get to work!
ahaha gonna procrastinate on homework to do this so much
Hiya! Thought I might just enter for the sake of it. I mean…why not? Here’s my story: Based on prompt 1
It was coming closer.
The thing.
That thing.
The evermoving shape edged closer. Plunging the surrounding greenery in darkness, it was as if a blanket of obscurity had been painted vigorously over the area. Darkness. That was all anyone could see now.
It was clear that this was the thing that had killed Darkflower. Not that anything in particular gave that away, it was the general aethereal gaze of the thing that seemed to remove all questions. Floating, it was floating, gingerly padding towards to camp.
The camp.
Goldclaw scurried from underneath the bush she had been hiding in. Baring her jaws and the urge for vengeance oozing from her pelt, “You,” she spat the words, and even dared to take a step closer to the hooded figure. “You are the one who killed my sister.”
10 hours earlier
Silence, that was all you could hear. The deafening silence. With only the gentle rise and fall of my breath. Considering you were normal of course. I on the other hand…am not. The voices. The voices incessantly chattering away in some dark corner of my skull. I had learned to live with them, in a way, they guided me, controlled me with their commands. Since I was a kit, they had haunted me, and only my sister could look at me without a remote sense of fear glazing over her eyes when she looked at me. Darkflower was the only one who understood.
The wind howled, a low gruff noise. Engulfing me in an area of complete silence…the silence was deafening. My breath rattled within it’s chains as it tried to break free, breaking free from the fear that was coursing through my veins.
Darkflower padded towards me, “Are the voices troubling you?” she rubbed her tail gently against my flank, a flash of genuine concern in her eyes. I nodded, I was frightened that if I opened my mouth…I would start screaming. This was normally the part where Darkflower pressed herself close to me and would simply talk; she knew that talking eased the pain slightly. She didn’t, sighing, she sat down and bowed her head. “Goldclaw…there’s something…that you need to know.”
I cocked my head. Why?
“I’m…expecting kits.” My head sharply looked up. Tears began welling in the corner of my eye, they trickled down my face, and fell to the ground harshly, though I woefully tried to hold them back. I was going to have kin. As me and my sister cradled each other within our paws, I couldn’t help thinking: How blissfully perfect this moment was.
5 hours later
I couldn’t stand the questions. “Are you alright dear?”, “I’m sure we’ll find her,” “You’re doing really well,”
No I was not alright. No, we would not find her. No, I was not doing well.
My sister was dead. She was dead. Dead.
It had been Redblaze who had found her, he had been edging his way past the river, the water sweeping itself over the body, as if it were a mother protecting its child. The voices wouldn’t stop, they seemed to feast themselves of such an incident, smiling that sick smile. ‘You got rid of her. You did this. How happy you are. Do you remember her face, the black veins that had hidden her features, her lifeless body? No don’t try and hide away from the memory. Coward. Remember. Remember. ‘ They wouldn’t stop, but they couldn’t help but share the clans’ curiosity. Those black veins…that was nothing like any of us had ever seen before.
Grief consumed me. Though my heart yearned, enflamed with heat, an icy breeze couldn’t help but peck at my cheek, and caking me in numbing cold.
1 hour later
‘You did this. You did this. You did it. Your sister is dead because of you. Dead. Dead. Dead. How marvellous. You’re happy that she’s dead. Be happy my dear be happy. Go out into the woods. Find the thing. Allow yourself to be destroyed. You deserve it for what you did. ‘
The voices were relentless, as my eyes began to droop they would slam me with an endless concave of maddening slurs. I would yell. I would scream. I would admit everything they accused me of. They ignored my begging and began again, stating the same things on a loop. “Alright!” I hissed, so as to not alarm my sleeping denmates and cautiously made my way into the beckoning night.
I expected the thing to lash out. To mercilessly murder me like it had Darkflower, I didn’t care, I would join her in starclan, grief blinded my thoughts. ‘You came.’
Really? I couldn’t take the voices now, not when I should be focussing.’ No, I am here.’ Shut up! No, no. Nonononono. The figure was moving closer and the voices wouldn’t stop pestering me, like a mother pestering their teenager about getting off social media. Goldclaw,’ I am not in your mind. I am here.’ Here? My voices couldn’t be present, they were as abstract as any thought.’ Listen to me, I am here, in front of you. I sent you in the forest to speak to me.’ Then I understood, the thing was the one who was speaking. “You know the voices?” my voice sounded so weak, barely audible, as the harsh wind galloped past. ‘No…I am the voices. I have always been there. Inside your head, waiting for the day that you would come. ‘
“How?” I shook my head, shaking it, denying this to be real. “No, this isn’t happening, I am currently sleeping in my bed with Darkflower. I never had any voices, you are not real.” I was more speaking to myself than the thing in front of me. ‘Don’t waste your foolish fancies.’ “You killed my sister,” a hoarse wail escaped my throat.
‘You never had a sister.’ My head jerked up, backing away slowly, “You don’t know me! She was the cat you killed this morning. Don’t deny your sins. You cannot make them disappear!”
‘Listen to me. She was never there.’ “How can my clanmates see her, talk to her, mourn her…” ‘She is as real to them as she was to you. ‘
‘Come to me. Come. We have a lot to discuss.’
That was the moment was I was engulfed into never-ending darkness.
Hiya! Thought I might just enter for the sake of it. I mean…why not? Here’s my story: Based on prompt 1
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It was coming closer.
The thing.
That thing.
The evermoving shape edged closer. Plunging the surrounding greenery in darkness, it was as if a blanket of obscurity had been painted vigorously over the area. Darkness. That was all anyone could see now.
It was clear that this was the thing that had killed Darkflower. Not that anything in particular gave that away, it was the general aethereal gaze of the thing that seemed to remove all questions. Floating, it was floating, gingerly padding towards to camp.
The camp.
Goldclaw scurried from underneath the bush she had been hiding in. Baring her jaws and the urge for vengeance oozing from her pelt, “You,” she spat the words, and even dared to take a step closer to the hooded figure. “You are the one who killed my sister.”
10 hours earlier
Silence, that was all you could hear. The deafening silence. With only the gentle rise and fall of my breath. Considering you were normal of course. I on the other hand…am not. The voices. The voices incessantly chattering away in some dark corner of my skull. I had learned to live with them, in a way, they guided me, controlled me with their commands. Since I was a kit, they had haunted me, and only my sister could look at me without a remote sense of fear glazing over her eyes when she looked at me. Darkflower was the only one who understood.
The wind howled, a low gruff noise. Engulfing me in an area of complete silence…the silence was deafening. My breath rattled within it’s chains as it tried to break free, breaking free from the fear that was coursing through my veins.
Darkflower padded towards me, “Are the voices troubling you?” she rubbed her tail gently against my flank, a flash of genuine concern in her eyes. I nodded, I was frightened that if I opened my mouth…I would start screaming. This was normally the part where Darkflower pressed herself close to me and would simply talk; she knew that talking eased the pain slightly. She didn’t, sighing, she sat down and bowed her head. “Goldclaw…there’s something…that you need to know.”
I cocked my head. Why?
“I’m…expecting kits.” My head sharply looked up. Tears began welling in the corner of my eye, they trickled down my face, and fell to the ground harshly, though I woefully tried to hold them back. I was going to have kin. As me and my sister cradled each other within our paws, I couldn’t help thinking: How blissfully perfect this moment was.
5 hours later
I couldn’t stand the questions. “Are you alright dear?”, “I’m sure we’ll find her,” “You’re doing really well,”
No I was not alright. No, we would not find her. No, I was not doing well.
My sister was dead. She was dead. Dead.
It had been Redblaze who had found her, he had been edging his way past the river, the water sweeping itself over the body, as if it were a mother protecting its child. The voices wouldn’t stop, they seemed to feast themselves of such an incident, smiling that sick smile. ‘You got rid of her. You did this. How happy you are. Do you remember her face, the black veins that had hidden her features, her lifeless body? No don’t try and hide away from the memory. Coward. Remember. Remember. ‘ They wouldn’t stop, but they couldn’t help but share the clans’ curiosity. Those black veins…that was nothing like any of us had ever seen before.
Grief consumed me. Though my heart yearned, enflamed with heat, an icy breeze couldn’t help but peck at my cheek, and caking me in numbing cold.
1 hour later
‘You did this. You did this. You did it. Your sister is dead because of you. Dead. Dead. Dead. How marvellous. You’re happy that she’s dead. Be happy my dear be happy. Go out into the woods. Find the thing. Allow yourself to be destroyed. You deserve it for what you did. ‘
The voices were relentless, as my eyes began to droop they would slam me with an endless concave of maddening slurs. I would yell. I would scream. I would admit everything they accused me of. They ignored my begging and began again, stating the same things on a loop. “Alright!” I hissed, so as to not alarm my sleeping denmates and cautiously made my way into the beckoning night.
I expected the thing to lash out. To mercilessly murder me like it had Darkflower, I didn’t care, I would join her in starclan, grief blinded my thoughts. ‘You came.’
Really? I couldn’t take the voices now, not when I should be focussing.’ No, I am here.’ Shut up! No, no. Nonononono. The figure was moving closer and the voices wouldn’t stop pestering me, like a mother pestering their teenager about getting off social media. Goldclaw,’ I am not in your mind. I am here.’ Here? My voices couldn’t be present, they were as abstract as any thought.’ Listen to me, I am here, in front of you. I sent you in the forest to speak to me.’ Then I understood, the thing was the one who was speaking. “You know the voices?” my voice sounded so weak, barely audible, as the harsh wind galloped past. ‘No…I am the voices. I have always been there. Inside your head, waiting for the day that you would come. ‘
“How?” I shook my head, shaking it, denying this to be real. “No, this isn’t happening, I am currently sleeping in my bed with Darkflower. I never had any voices, you are not real.” I was more speaking to myself than the thing in front of me. ‘Don’t waste your foolish fancies.’ “You killed my sister,” a hoarse wail escaped my throat.
‘You never had a sister.’ My head jerked up, backing away slowly, “You don’t know me! She was the cat you killed this morning. Don’t deny your sins. You cannot make them disappear!”
‘Listen to me. She was never there.’ “How can my clanmates see her, talk to her, mourn her…” ‘She is as real to them as she was to you. ‘
‘Come to me. Come. We have a lot to discuss.’
That was the moment was I was engulfed into never-ending darkness.
This is called Diamond Mind, and it’s a poem I seriously procrastinated, but finally wrote!
She took me
I deserved
It.
All
Those
Words
Were right
All along
As she comes,
Singing,
My
Breath
Fades faster.
I can hear
Her
In
My
Head.
Make
It
Stop
I
Can’t
Think
Straight
The world
Is spinning
Faster
Faster
Faster
Memories
I
Thought
I
Once knew
Disappearing
Like
Rain
Over
Dew.
She’s
Taking
Me
Ripping
Me
To
Shreds
With
Her
Diamond mind
You would
Think
I’d
Gone
Blind,
For
The
Life
Of me,
As
Slowly
Her
Long legs
Twined
Her
Eight blue eyes
And her
Diamond mind
Spinning a web
With lissome and lilt
Swiftly
The
Broken
Hell
Was built.
Faster, faster
Faster, faster
Why can’t you
Hear her?
She’s
Putting
Thoughts
In my head
Run away
You’d say
But you don’t speak
When you’re dead.
Prompt 1: A monster is on the loose, and your main character has the strange ability to communicate with it!
I sat in the back of my den, waiting for It to come. It was what I called the mangled creature made of pure Darkness and with a crave for blood that it would thirst for many years upon years. The creature was so terrifying it would make a Dark Forest cat cry for it’s mother, in fact it was too evil to go to the Dark Forest or anything that StarClan could think of that would serve as it’s everlasting punishment for the wicked it had done. It lived alone in a place even worse than the Dark Forest, it is said that the forest has no prey or water, just a gigantic maze with rotting stumps and a sticky black substance that carried the scent of death. It had a good side once, but that time is long gone. It had a name once, and it still has one but no matter how silent you whisper it’s name it always hears your cry and comes for you. Longfang, that was it. He was named after his long overgrown fangs, well overgrown for a cat at least, but he wasn’t a cat. He was something totally different. He was a monster, and it’s only purpose was to kill. Soon an eerie cry would sound in the distance, along with it along with the sound. I shuddered as I imagined the spine-chilling cry in the distance, or was it my imagination? I thought I heard It’s voice. I was correct, a dark creature padded into camp. It’s fur blew in the wind backwards and it’s pelt was rotting. It’s face was twisted with scars edged across it along with a sharp set of fangs, stained red from his recent attack. “Come out littermates, don’t you miss me? It’s Longfang!” He called with a wicked cackle. “It’s not nice to hide from your ancestors!” Several cats looked confused as if they couldn’t hear what he was saying. “He speaks the language of his ancestors, in a language spoken only by the wicked.” Mintberry, our medicine cat explained to the confused cats. Why can I hear him? Is this a dream, my imagination, or is this a vision? “I missed you Mintberry.” Longfang hissed as he stalked forwards towards her slowly, as in taunting “You know I can beat you, you gonna run yet kit?” I did hear him! This isn’t possible, am I destined to be just as wicked, or am I already and yet not noticing it? I ran up to Longfang and arched my back “Go away!” I hissed hiding my fear. “Don’t be rude to your ancestor!” Longfang spat narrowing his eyes. “Ancestor or not, you don’t deserve to be treated with respect, you have done to much evil and StarClan has judged you.” I snarled. If Longfang was shocked because I could understand this twisted tounge he did not show it but instead jeered before unsheathing his claws. . “Run back to your den kit, unless you want to come back home with me.” I growled before jumping at the massive tom. I fell right through Longfang and gasped in shock. “You can’t kill me kit, I’m dead and you can’t move me in a new section, I’m already as far back from StarClan as possible.” Longfang mocked as he slashed his claws across my face. “Stupid little runt, you can’t defeat me, I’m invincible!” He growled raking his claws across my face between each word. I fell over and my whole body felt numb with fear. Suddenly Longfang stopped and Hissed at me, saliva splattering on my face as he looked at me through blood red eyes. “I have a better use for you kit.” He growled and allowed me to get up before pushing me back down again and this time he sunk his teeth in my neck. I yowled in pain and soon my vision went black. I opened my eyes to see myself floating above my own limp body. “Welcome to the dead!” Long Fang laughed wickedly.
That’s it BlogClanners, I hope you enjoyed!
This is from the POV of 2 characters, the monster and the main character
Prompt 1
The Runaway Monster
By Hawthornclaw
Nighthope
I wake up. I know that sound. That’s the sound I heard when I was an apprentice. I remember it like it was yesterday. Cloudstar screaming, telling everyone to leave the camp. Wishstream giving herbs to the cats in pain. Us fleeing our territory. That sound. Cloudstar died that night. We live in a new place now, but when I here that sound, I know it’s over. We’ll leave the territory. Lakestar will stay behind. I know this because I know that sound. That buzz. The screaming. The lasers. All at once, making that horrible sound. I leave the warrior’s den, and see cats running and screaming, Wishstream helping some others, and Lakestar telling us to go. But I can’t go. I can’t bring myself to do it. I go back in the warrior’s den, and wake up those who are asleep. I tell them to go, to run far away, with the other cats.I stay. Everyone leaves. Except Lakestar. And me. “Nighthope, go! Go with the others!” Lakestar says. I swallow, trying to hold back the tears. I don’t want to go. I see Lakestar, trying to fight the horrible monsters. “Lakestar, I’ll stay here.” I say, “Go!” Lakestar stares at me, “I can’t leave anyone behind.” She says. I try to smile at her, “Go!” I say. Lakestar runs out. “Thank you.” She says softly. The horrible monsters fly away, but I can’t let them. I can’t let them torture any others cats. I race after the ship. Then they stop.
Buzzy
I miss my home planet. I miss the trees, the birds, the lakes, and the purple sky. But it was invaded. Now we must leave. I cry as I look out the window of my space ship. We see a land of blue skies, green grass, and furry cats, and we land on a grassy green spot with a few cats. When we land, all the cats start running and screaming. That’s too bad. We could be good friends. But everyone’s scared of us. They come to our planet, then they go, screaming and running. They don’t understand us. No one does. When all the cats leave, we fly somewhere else. We open the doors to our space ship, and see a cat.
Nighthope
They open the doors to the ship, and I walk up. I can’t say anything to them. They don’t understand us. The other ones who came to our old territory didn’t. But first, they speak to me. “We are here for a new home. Our planet was invaded.” How do I understand them?
“W-wh-wo are you?” I say. “We are aliens of the planet of Evergreen.” How do they understand me? I don’t know what to say. They walk over to me, and one says, “Please-we don’t want to be hurt.” I understand this. Neither do we. “I am Nighthope of LightningClan. I hope you do not hurt us either.” I say.
Buzzy
She walks closer, and Star, the leader, tells her who we are and why we’re here. She looks scared, and I come over to her, telling her we don’t want be hurt. She looks at me with an understanding face, saying she doesn’t want to be hurt either. Her name is Nighthope. She is from a place called LightningClan. We get to know her, and tell her our names. She met all of us, Laser, Rocket, Sky, Purple, Ship, and all the others. I am a little scared, but she is nice. The only problem is that we still need a place to live.
Nighthope
I tell them all about myself, and soon they are introducing themselves to me. Suddenly I get an idea. “I can find you a home.” I say. I knew exactly where they would live. They tell me thank you and that they are so grateful the whole way. Then we get there.
Buzzy
Suddenly, something happens. She says she can find us a home! We rush through the beautiful forest and say thank you the whole way. Then we get there.
Nighthope
We reach the top of the mountain, covered in snow, where they will live. They are so grateful and so happy. I was kind of sad to let them go. Once I say goodbye, I run to the lake, where my clan is. “We can go home now!” I say. When they ask me why, I tell them the whole story. They are so happy I’m back and Lakestar thanks me for my bravery and courage. Everyone was happy to have their territory back, and to have peaceful rest of the day.
Buzzy
We get to our new home, which is a beautiful mountaintop with lots of snow. We are so happy to have a new home. We thank Nighthope and she leaves. Our new home was ready, and we enjoyed the rest of the day.
THE END
I sighed, looking down, I was about 12 yards above the ground, thats 11.9 yards above my preferred distance from the forest floor. The other cats were now moving dots of gingers, greys and browns among the green of foliage, they’d probably go on without us anyway, not that it mattered.
The brown tabby pelt of my apprentice, Owlpaw, was just ahead of me, and I shimmied across the ever-thinning branch, my fur catching on just about every molecule of wood possible. Just within grasp of the she-cat’s tail, I tried to beckon her down from the pine tree but it was no use. As we approached each other, I noticed her green eyes were wide, and her fur stood up in spikes resembling a hedgehog’s pelt.
“What’s wrong?” I gasped, whilst helping her stalk down the tree towards me.
No answer, just the whispering of the harsh wind in pine needles. I tried to look reassuring but my face didn’t really go beyond expressing emotions that weren’t hyper or goofy which didn’t help the situation.
As I guided Owlpaw down the tree, I noticed she was shivering even though her pelt had long since flattened down.
What happened to her? I looked up, the sky was inky and the moon lit up the forest around us but in a pale and sickly wash. Maybe it was a hawk or an owl that got too close? I looked at her again, her claws retracting and then sliding out again. A fox or badger?
However, something told me that it probably wasn’t any of my guesses. Maybe be the fact that it was Halloween tomorrow made me slightly more on edge, or that it was so dark and ominous out here. But I couldn’t help but have a hunch it was something much more than an owl.
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I looked hopefully towards Flowerstream and Birchfoot, “Will she be alright?” My whiskers quivered a bit, I disliked the smell in the medicine den, there were too many herby scents that didn’t match with each other and just kinda clashed, but at the same time the atmosphere it gave off was nice, kind of like herbal tea. Woah. I didn’t think that last bit. What?
Birchfoot glanced at me, “She’ll be fine, still a bit shaken, that’s all. We still don’t know what happened though.”
“Are you ok? You look slightly… nervous.” Flowerstream interrupted.
I shot my head up quickly, surprised she’d noticed, but I’d probably just made anything more obvious with my reaction. “Oh, yeah. I’m fine. Nothing to worry about.”
Flowerstream looked unconvinced, but hey, what could I say? ‘Yeah I’m thinking thoughts that I didn’t think.’ That’d look totally normal.
I thanked both medicine cats and shot one last glance at Owlpaw’s sleeping form before stepping out of the den and back into the BlogClan camp. I was about to go out and do some hunting but to be honest I really couldn’t be bothered, all I wanted was sleep, but then didn’t I always?
I flopped onto a pile of amber and ginger crispy leaves, casually watching the world go by. A couple of minutes passed before my eyelids went heavy, and they slowly drew closed and I went into deep sleep.
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I woke to the rather unpleasant feeling of claws digging into my flank. Not the best way to wake up in my personal opinion. I shot up, sending leaves and acorns scattering across the clearing, but was pinned down again by the unknown attacker.
I yelped, only to be responded to by another clawed lump landing on me, attacking my tail.
“Ahhh! Help!” I cried, “We’re being attacked!”
The only reaction was laughter. That couldn’t be good. Well, it wasn’t evil laughter, that was a good sign, right?
My attackers removed themselves fortunately, allowing me to get up and look around.
Oh. I’ve just been attacked by kits. Well done me. I met the eyes of Jayfrost, Iceflower and Sundance. Well, that couldn’t be any less embarrassing right? They were only deputy and main senior warriors of BlogClan and I’d just made a complete fool of myself in front of them. Good going me.
They looked amused so that was probably good. I think.
Sundance looked down at me sympathetically, “Don’t worry about it, it could have happened to anyone.” She smiled and her eyes were warm.
She was right, but I couldn’t help but feel embarrassed. “Well, I guess it couldn’t be any worse, right?” And from the corner of my eye I saw Cakestar watching from her den, she must have seen the whole thing.
Oh StarClan.
And I just flopped back onto the ground in the most undignified way possible, but as I said, it probably couldn’t get any worse so I didn’t really care.
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Some hunting, alone, was just what I needed. Fresh autumnal air to clear my head would do me a world of good.
There was a small twitching in the pretty dead ferns ahead of me, a squirrel I presumed from the way it was over excitedly burying something which I assume was acorns.
Well, not like a rabbit or fish would be burying nuts I guess. I said to myself, purring mildly if you could use mildly as a way to describe purring. Well, not like a fish would be on land though. I purred louder. WAIT. I didn’t think that. Noooo not that weird thought-thing again…. I shook my head to clear my mind, taking a deep breath, I regained my balance and began to crouch.
I stalked slowly towards the not-fish, my paws folding out one by one in front of me, my head tucked in, and my chin nearly dragging across the leaves.
My haunches quivered as I was about to pounce– NO! DONT HURT IT! STOP! I fell over in surprise. My mouth parted in shock. The squirrel dashed out from behind the ferns and leapt over me but I was too dazed to even acknowledge it.
“Who’s there?!” I shouted, dragging myself into a bush for cover. “Show yourself!”
An immense disturbance of leaves told me there was a large monster (or animal) pretty near me. Whoops. Better shut up now I guess.
To stop myself making any further noise, I shoved my feathery tail into my mouth before I almost choked on it. I spluttered and coughed but then realised that I had just given away my whereabouts to a probably murderous monster…
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Not at all what I expected. A qilin? Definitely not what I expected.
I sipped at my vegan, chocolate-free hot chocolate occasionally dabbing a paw at the vegan marshmallows.
The qilin was beautiful, he had antlers that looked like bronze tree branches and jade scales that overlapped each other in a way that resembled… knitting? Above his hooves, he had tufty feathers that swayed from side to side in the wind along with his long carp whiskers that were kind of like two pieces of string hanging down from his cheeks.
He smiled at me, “Still shocked, huh?”
I nodded, I would have vocally answered but I was glad for the excuse of a marshmallow in my mouth.
“I’m sorry for scaring you like that, and your apprentice.” He added, swirling a steaming liquid in a china cup.
I grinned back, “No worries, it was partly our fault, you know, being Halloween and stuff, I guess we just overdramatised it, sorry.”
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Idk how to end it so yeah 😛 Btw, a qilin is a real mythological creature. 🙂 They’re an ancient Chinese myth and personally, I love the idea of them 😀 They’re vegetarian and won’t walk on grass in fear of hurting any of the blades.
Anyways, hope you enjoyed and happy Halloween! 🙂 <3
I started mine long ago, but I kept restarting it, because every day, I would get newer and better ideas. *long sigh*. Well, I have three-ish days to finish, wish me luck. :/