My Top three Least Favourite Characters by Chrysanthemum

Chrysanthemum, otherwise known as I’m in me mum’s cAr, shares their three least favourite characters. Are any of them on your list?

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Top 3 least favourite character
Because I’m bored and sitting in bed with a headache, I’m writing this article 😀
If you disagree with me on anything, that’s fine, just don’t resort to attacking me in the comments
Spoilers for the New Prophecy arc, the Power of Three arc, and Mapleshade’s Vengeance
Take everything I say with a pinch of salt 😊
(Even in my writing I tend to sound more emotional than I actually am, oops)

3. Leafpool
Leafpool is a complete set of problems for the characters and plot of books mainly stemming from her constantly moping about her own decision to break it off with Crowfeather and then acting like her job as a medicine cat was the only thing to ever give her life meaning. It honestly just really aggravates me that the Erins supposedly went out of their way to just outright vilify and demonise Crowfeather’s character in about every book after the New Prophecy. Most of the fandom seems to forget that it was Leafpool who decided to break off her relationship with Crowfeather. LEAFPOOL is the one that decided to hide the fact they had kids. LEAFPOOL is the reason HIS life went to hell. Yet whenever you see the two of them interacting Leafpool constantly acts like her life has been so difficult. And, oh yes, remind me again, exactly how did ThunderClan punish her for running off with Crowfeather and disrespecting the Warrior Code again? Ah yes! That’s right, they didn’t! Yet Crowfeather became a literal pariah within his OWN clan during an essentially aggressive regime change. But the book attempts to convince us that it’s Leafpool we’re supposed to feel sympathy for. But because why? Because Crowfeather decided to enter a political marriage? Because he had a kitten with someone another she-cat than Leafpool? Or was it because he was understandably and justifiably mad at her for throwing away everything they ever had together and ruining his entire life?
Okay, now, I’ll give her that StarClan and especially Spottedleaf manipulated the situation further than they should have, but at the end of the day, Leafpool brought it upon herself to end the relationship between him. And what makes everything worse was that she forced her romantic problems upon Squirrelflight and expected her to solve them all for her. Not only that, but it ended up ruining Squirrelflight’s and Brambleclaw’s relationship.
What a very thoughtful and selfless she-cat you are Leafpool. I tip my hat off to you ma’am.

2. Ashfur
Oh Ashfur. Good ol’ Ashfur. An even more frustrating read than Leafpool. Not only because of all his raging fanboys and fangirls, but because of him, Ashfur, as a character himself. It’s just incredibly disappointing that he didn’t go to the Dark Forest, not only for moral reasons but for plot reasons as well. There were plenty of interesting ways they could’ve gone with his character, but let’s just address the main two:
A redemption arc- Rather than being simply written as a scum-of-the-earth character, he’s written as cat, still not fully over his mother’s murder, watching the she-cat he loved got into a relationship with someone else. It would have been interesting for Ashfur to have been depression feeling he has no other way to turn other than what is impulses are telling him. And when he dies he recognises what he did was wrong and apologises to his victims. That’s the only way I could see his justification in StarClan working. That’s the only way he could be redeemed.
Or,
A full-blown villain- He’s sent to the Dark Forest, and perhaps we get to see how he develops there. Perhaps we could’ve gotten another Darkstripe case, where he regrets his crimes but still has to suffer in the darkness forever. I feel this could’ve been very interesting.
But instead they decide to go with this strange hybrid of the two, a once apparently well-meaning and loyal cat who was sent to StarClan when he really doesn’t deserve it, and only once he’s there are they actually trying to assure us that he’s ‘not that bad’ and coming up with awful excuses for his crimes. It is honestly just unsettling I see his fangirl/boys blaming the innocent victim, Squirrelflight, for what he did and then claiming his actions to be acceptable because he was friend-zoned. I’m fully aware that most of that minority are the younger readers of the books and that they will grow out of it eventually, but it’s still somewhat scary to think about what would happen if this logic was ever applied to real life.
I do not hate Ashfur because of his actions. I hate Ashfur due to the simple fact that he got away with his actions. Tigerstar killed much more cats with much less reasonability, but I don’t hate him mainly because I’m satisfied he got what he deserved by getting sent to the Dark Forest. If Ashfur was treated like the villain that he was, then I probably would be able to find him an interesting and likeable character, a villain driven by emotions rather than ‘ambition’. But his character is just completely and utterly unsatisfying, without any proper conclusion. You can’t have an attempted mass-murderer and then have them instantly killed off and then shoved into Kitty Heaven without redemption and hope that the reader completely forgets about their existence. It literally feels like they had him turn murderous for the sole purpose of having the Power of Three secret uncovered and to kick-start Hollyleaf’s downfall, who would then have Ashfur dead once he had fulfilled his purpose.

Not only was Ashfur an attempted mass-murderer, he also showed signs of being emotionally-abusive/manipulative. So, if they wanted to tackle this sort of character in children’s story, it must be done with very much care. And it can reach a very harsh but valuable lesson that needs to be learned, that being the ability to tell the difference between a healthy and unhealthy relationship. Ashfur should’ve displayed more possessive and obsessive behaviours, such as stalking, and it should’ve been made very clear that those were abnormal traits for the average person. And when Ashfur commits his crime, it’s made abundantly clear that it should be the innocent victims you sympathise with before you even consider thinking pitying the attempted mass-murderer. Attempting to kill your Clan leader, a blind medicine cat and your own apprentice because they were supposedly related to the innocent she-cat who friend-zoned is the single most pathetic motive yet in the entire series.
I’ve also never understood why Ashfur is treated so differently from other villains by the fandom. Why is he given so much sympathy? I certainly have absolutely none for him. For a feral cat, he actually led a very good life. He lived in a perfectly stable environment in the form of the ThunderClan camp, and was surrounded by his friends and kin, all who he could’ve turned to for support. Age isn’t too much of an issue for these cats as long as both parties are consenting warriors/adults, so he could’ve moved onto another she-cat. All that happened to him was self-inflicted and the reasonings behind his crimes are utterly pathetic. He had no right to hurt innocent cats around him.
To put it short, I think Ashfur is an unlikable character and a poorly-written villain.

Before I reveal number one, here are some dishonourable mentions:
-Lionblaze
-Breezepelt
-Nightcloud
-Millie
1. Mapleshade
You probably saw this all coming, mainly because I don’t shut up about how I hate her on the Blog. Unless you’re new here and probably didn’t expect this and when you read ‘Spoilers for Mapleshade’s Vengeance’ at the top you most likely guessed Appledusk would be here. (Although the front picture is literally of Mapleshade)
But that’s all irrelevant, let’s just get to point of why I hate this cat with such a burning passion.
Firstly, her personality
She’s so self-absorbed to the point where I find it unbearable and enraging to read about, she’s constantly unwilling to admit to her own mistakes and so she shifts the blame onto others, believing she could be the only cat in the right. She also unfairly dragged innocent cats into her crimes, like Ravenwing and Frecklewish, when they had nothing to do with it. Expecting them to just ‘get over it’ or worse, actually become a liar/traitor themselves just to protect her. And not only that, but she’s shown to be incredibly reckless throughout the entirety of her novella. But the two main parts of the book where this personality trait really begins to shine was:
One- bringing her kits to the river to see Appledusk. Mapleshade took her kits to the RiverClan border and let them swim around in the water, very clearly showing off their RiverClan traits. And back in the ThunderClan camp she constantly mentions her forbidden mate, Appledusk, not being subtle at all: “I wish I could be there to see that too. Make sure you tell them that I’ve had three perfect, strong kits who are going to be great warriors!” she told Frecklewish. “Especially Appledusk. Tell him first” – Chapter 3.

Two- Making her kits swim across dangerous waters. Sure, you can make the argument that while in exile she was in a state of panic, however she still decided to make them swim the flood unaided without an attempt of a safer alternative, such calling for a RiverClan patrol, searching for a safer route, ect. Patchkit (?) even protests against her idea, wailing that there was ‘too much water’. If a kit can quite clearly see these dangers, Mapleshade has no excuse. She had JUST left the camp and they weren’t being actively chased, so was in so such hurry and could’ve at least attempted a better option.
Secondly, an I’m aware how over-dramatic this sounds, I do feel her character justifies murder/revenge quite a bit. Just find anything Mapleshade related on the internet, scroll through the comments and the amount of people saying, ‘Her victims deserved’, ‘She did the right thing’, and, most disturbing of all, ‘I enjoyed reading about her murder them’ (I see this one said eerily commonly) is truly astounding. When an innocent character is being mauled by a snake or a pregnant queen is forced to watch her mate and father of her unborn kits be brutally murdered, the majority of the fandom will instantly be going ‘Aw, poor little mass-murder… Boo victims!’, and it’s just… unsettling. And no, I’m not claiming children are going to go around slitting each other’s throats and leading each other into venomous snakes, but, just like what I said with Ashfur, it’s scary to think about the dangers of applying this logic to real life. And sure, you could make the argument that her victims were NOT innocent, but if you try and look past Mapleshade’s bias point of view, you will see that they were. Ravenwing was young and inexperienced and had no other way to turn other than spilling Mapleshade’s secret, simply because she posed a risk to the Clan. Frecklewish was a ThunderClan cat who couldn’t get involved unless she wanted to worsen the situation, and Appledusk chose loyalty to his Clan over the forbidden mate who killed his kits through her recklessness. I would go further into detail, but I’ve already written a whole article on it which I would link you to, but it hasn’t been published at the time I was writing this.
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And that is the end of the article in which I have meltdowns over fictional talking cats. Hope you enjoyed and have a great day! 😀

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Sparrowfeather
Sparrowfeather
December 15, 2018 12:26 am

I totally agree!!!!! (accept on the Mapleshade part 😐 she was just avenging her own kits)


Courage, Run, Done :3

I'm in me mum's cAr
I'm in me mum's cAr
December 15, 2018 6:08 pm
Reply to  Sparrowfeather

But she put them through the dangers in the first place. By her own logic, she deserves to die.


mr poop man!!!

Sparrowfeather
Sparrowfeather
December 15, 2018 10:12 pm

Yea, I know. She could have taken them one at a time, looked for help, or wait a day or two for appledusk. But, it wasn’t her fault, Appledusk is the one who straight up rejected her, she already got her punishment. Poor Patchkit. He didn’t deserve this. Well, anyways Appledusk is still a sicko for rejecting Maple for just his Clan, and having 2 mates, also reedshine. And he HARDLY cared about his kits. So, in her own logic, she actually dreamed of her kits, and knew she had to avenge them!


Courage, Run, Done :3

Spring
Spring
December 16, 2018 3:31 am
Reply to  Sparrowfeather

It was Mapleshade’s fault as much as Appledusk’s for taking a forbidden mate. Appledusk was right to reject her, as she’d tried to cross the river with young kits, knowing that the river was dangerous and shouldn’t be crossed. Appledusk wasn’t there. He didn’t know what happened like us, the readers do. For all he knew, Mapleshade could’ve murdered their kits. And he cared very much about their kits. He immediately goes to help find them after the RiverClan patrol finds Mapleshade and brings her to shore. He promises that he’ll save them. Earlier, when he finds out he’s a father, he’s ecstatic. When he finds out Mapleshade deliberately had her kits cross the river, he’s angry because she got them killed. There are so many better options she could’ve done, yet she chose the most dangerous one. Being blinded by grief isn’t enough to excuse her actions. She still was a major contributor to the death of Petalkit, Patchkit, and Larchkit. Appledusk is angry about this, because Mapleshade put their kits in danger and got them killed. So apparently he doesn’t care about his kits? This evidence shows that he cares about his kits.

Appledusk is allowed to have more than one mate, is there a rule in the code stating a cat can only have one? Crowfeather, Dovewing, Tigerclaw/star, Willowpelt, and others have taken more than one mate. Yet Appledusk isn’t allowed to have more than one, even after it’s shown that he’s broken ties with her beforehand? He knew what he and Mapleshade were doing was wrong, and was right to try and find love in his own Clan afterwards. He doesn’t have to care for Mapleshade anymore if he wants to. Appledusk found love with Reedshine, and was moving on from Mapleshade, a forbidden mate of his from a Clan that hates him.

Appledusk was more careful about this than Mapleshade, and we are reading this all from Maple’s biased POV. Of course it’s going to seem like he’s some horrible fox-heart for leaving her, even though she brought the kits’ death and the exile from her Clan upon herself. She didn’t try to move on, leading to the Clan to be slightly suspicious because the kits’ father was never officially revealed, and then her exile because she never said anything, so that’s why she was exiled so quickly. Appledusk sacrificed his life saving Reedshine and their kits from Mapleshade. It doesn’t matter if it was an accident or not, she directly was intent on killing Reedshine and their kits because of her obsessive love towards him and not wanting him to move on with his life. Mapleshade deserved what happened to her because of her foolishness. She killed cats because of her grief. Just because she was grieving it doesn’t mean you try to “avenge” that person (people)’s death. Think of it this way in human terms. Your children die because of a mistake you did, such as causing a car accident or something like that. Your spouse rejects you because they’ve moved on from your affair, and mainly because your own mistake caused your children together to die. They tell you to leave them and their new family alone, causing you to be heartbroken. Do you go on a murderous spree to kill the people who you think helped kill your children, to avenge them? No. But that’s what Mapleshade did, and she paid the price for it. No one was in the right in the whole situation, and everyone was stupid during it. But Mapleshade was the dumbest of them all, and caused most of the chaos to the Clans later on because of her foolish actions.


Daffiolet is otp

Creekdapple
Creekdapple
December 16, 2018 12:34 am

And when she found out that her kits were dead, she did think something along the lines of “why couldn’t it have been me? My kits were innocent; if anything, I deserve to die, not them!” (I don’t remember the exact words, but I remember the basic sentiment was she would rather StarClan take her instead)

Spring
Spring
December 16, 2018 3:38 am
Reply to  Creekdapple

But she still took them across the river in the first place. Her kits noticed the danger of the river, and if a kitten can see that the river wasn’t a safe option, then Mapleshade should’ve too. Even if she wishes it could’ve been her, it’s still her fault and nothing can change it. She made her choice, and there was no going back. All of her actions after finding out she was expecting Appledusk’s kits in ThunderClan led up to her kits death. Her regrets and remorse doesn’t change anything about the fact that she deliberately took her kits across the river without thinking about it properly.


Daffiolet is otp

Pastelblossom 🌺 Pasty
Pastelblossom 🌺 Pasty
December 15, 2018 1:23 am

I agree with all of these. Great job! 👌🏻


Welcome to the losers club

I'm in me mum's cAr
I'm in me mum's cAr
December 15, 2018 6:08 pm

Thanks! 🙂


mr poop man!!!

Forestkit
Forestkit
December 15, 2018 1:23 am

I love Leafpool & Lionblaze! BUT I agree that Mapleshade is a super she-cat villain. She killed Spottedleaf for the second time, causing her to fade away forever!

I'm in me mum's cAr
I'm in me mum's cAr
December 15, 2018 6:23 pm
Reply to  Forestkit

I don’t really dislike Lionblaze as much as I did when I wrote this article, but my opinion on Leafpool hasn’t really changed 😛.
It’s not really the actions of Mapleshade that made me hate her, but mainly because of how she was written.


mr poop man!!!

shadööööööööööö (Shadowmoon)
shadööööööööööö (Shadowmoon)
December 15, 2018 2:11 am

haha, DIShounerouble mentions (not that I hate those cats, I just think it’s clever. :P)


gimme my chainsaw

I'm in me mum's cAr
I'm in me mum's cAr
December 15, 2018 7:07 pm

Haha, thanks


mr poop man!!!

Spring
Spring
December 15, 2018 4:57 am

I’ve never liked Leafpool or Ashfur either (I could write a rant on the two of them right now)! Mapleshade’s more on the fence for me, for the reasons you listed. Appledusk, Frecklewish, and Ravenwing were definitely innocent victims (although I may dislike Ravenwing to some extent) of Mapleshade’s, they didn’t really do anything wrong to her for the most part. She honestly brought it upon herself. Nice article.


Daffiolet is otp

I'm in me mum's cAr
I'm in me mum's cAr
December 15, 2018 7:07 pm
Reply to  Spring

Yup, basically.


mr poop man!!!

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Aster is Meowing for Chinese New Year!!! (Asterstorm/ Meowing Aster/ Astie)
December 15, 2018 2:47 pm

I’m neutral on Leafpool and agree everything on Ashfur, but disagree with you in Mapleshade. I don’t think Mapleshade thought what she’d done is right, as she thought she deserved the Dark Forest. I don’t think she makes murdering right either, since she’s supposed to be a villain and it’s the readers’ choices to see killing as righteous or not 😉. In my opinion, nobody’s innocent in this case too. For me, Mapleshade’s my favourite villain, because she’s special and well-developed. I never enjoy reading her killing or see her as a role model– I just like her as a character. I sometimes just feel that she shouldn’t be punished that hard, considering her mental state when she started murdering (she had hallucinations then). Nice article anyway 😸.


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idk
idk
December 15, 2018 5:10 pm

i like leafpool but I agree with the rest

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Bracken (Brackenpaw/light) is ALIVE!!!
December 15, 2018 5:13 pm

I agree! ^^


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Wolfpaw (Wolfie)
Wolfpaw (Wolfie)
December 15, 2018 7:30 pm

I like Leafpool, but I hate Ashfur. He wasn’t even a good villain, in my opinion. On Mapleshade I’m mostly neutral but I kind of like her as a villain. Anyway, great article. 🙂


Oof....

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Lightningstrike
October 12, 2019 5:00 am

I’ll never understand why people hate Leafpool so much.
I hate Ashfur a lot
I love Mapleshade as a villain…but you can hate her. She IS a villain after all. You didn’t really surprise me with the other cats you didn’t rant about. I was never really fond of Lionblaze myself anyhow.

Rosebreeze
Rosebreeze
March 6, 2020 5:48 am

I loved this article, but I do have a few things to say. I really like Leafpool, she is one of my favorite cats. But I VERY strongly dislike Ashfur. However, I am neutral on Mapleshade. I have to admit, she is pretty evil- OH WAIT, SHE IS! I JUST REMEMBERED THAT SHE KILLED SPOTTEDLEAF!!!! But I do feel a bit of pity for her. She did suffer much, I guess.

Jaggedheart
Jaggedheart
April 16, 2020 5:22 am

I agree with MOST of them. The ones I disagree with are Mapleshade and Leafpool. The rest can burn in the Dark Forest!
Note: Fight me if you dare! 😈😛

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October 9, 2020 9:25 pm

My thoughts on these cats:
Leafpool- I love and defend her.
Ashfur- I hate him! Why do people defend his actions?
Mapleshade- She’s awesome! Why on earth do people hate her?

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