Why Tallstar made a mistake choosing Onestar by Violetpaw

Official art by Wayne McLoughlin

Violetpaw analyses Tallstar’s choice of Onewhisker as deputy and subsequent WindClan leader.

Hello, I’m Violetpaw and I’m going to talk about why Tallstar was wrong when he appointed Onestar (Onewhisker) as deputy instead of Mudclaw:

1. Tallstar was ill. He did it at the wrong time and with the wrong witnesses. If he had done it properly, with WindClan cats instead of ThunderClan cats watching, then Mudclaw probably wouldn’t have rebelled, and even if he had, there wouldn’t be enough cats following him.

2. The whole Darktail thing. I mean, I guess Tallstar didn’t know, but that doesn’t negate the fact that Onewhisker had an illegitimate child with a kittypet. If Onestar hadn’t been leader, then he would have been dead by the time Darktail came, and then Darktail probably wouldn’t have cared so much about the Clans and tried to destroy them, and WindClan wouldn’t have closed their borders, and Mudclaw wouldn’t have let him take over the Clans.

3. Like it or not, Mudclaw would have never let Leafpool and Crowfeather run away together. But the thing us, they loved each other so much that they would have been apart without learning that that was better (which probably wouldn’t have happened without running away) and he would have never let Leafpool join WindClan, so Crowfeather would have joined ThunderClan. That way, Jayfeather, Lionblaze and Hollyleaf would have grown up with a happy, honest family and Hollyleaf would have never run away.
Also, Breezepelt would never have been born, would never have joined the Dark Forest and would never become the annoying furball that he is now (I say this as someone who has not read Crowfeather’s Trial, so does not have information on the apparent growth that happened to him as a character)

4. The names. I know this is kind of random, but think about it. Onestar. Mudstar. Onestar. Mudstar…

5. Tallstar’s reasoning was that Mudclaw was too violent for WindClan. But the thing is, Onestar brought much more trouble on WindClan than Mudclaw would have ever done. He almost declared war on RiverClan because a few kits went missing, he had a kit who almost destroyed the Clans and he left this disaster for Harestar to clean up when he died.

Tell me how you feel in the comments!

  12 Replies to “Why Tallstar made a mistake choosing Onestar by Violetpaw”

  1. June 7, 2019 at 2:53 am

    Honestly, I agree wholeheartedly. I still don’t like Onestar (he’s complex but still infuriating) but Mudclaw is meh- I wouldn’t have liked it much, but I would’ve preferred Mudstar over Onestar. (Onewhisker was better tbh.)

    However, I hold the opinion that Tallstar should’ve made Ashfoot deputy instead so we could’ve gotten Ashstar like we deserved. (I don’t particularly like any of the WindClan leaders that much)


    Oof

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    • Violetpaw
      June 7, 2019 at 7:56 pm

      Deadfoot should not have died. Then Crowfeather would have had an alive dad and we would have got Deadstar


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    • Honeypaw/cloud (Honey that reflects summer clouds)
      June 7, 2019 at 10:10 pm

      Same!

    • June 8, 2019 at 12:10 am

      Hazy you are so right 🙂 I 100% agree! Deadstar or Ashstar would have been amazing – Ashfoot was an amazing minor character and my favorite WindClan cat. I really wish she had been leader instead. 🙂


      procrastination is the key 🔑

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  2. June 7, 2019 at 6:30 am

    🙂


    Tina is best Scamander.

  3. June 7, 2019 at 6:32 am

    Personally, I don’t like any of the windclan leaders, but I think that one star was the right choice. I do agree with number 1.


    Everybody say "Colorado"!

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  4. Moonlight- moon that lights up night
    June 8, 2019 at 8:56 pm

    anyone would’ve made a better leader than Onestar }:P


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  5. Firestorm
    June 12, 2019 at 12:19 am

    Breezepelt is not an annoying fur ball, I mean yeah he was in the dark forest but if you read Crowfeathers trial than you will learn that Breezepelt is actually a very loyal cat and puts his clan before himself, plus for like the whole book its like Crowfeather trying to get to know his son better.

    • Firestorm
      June 12, 2019 at 12:20 am

      oops just read on so sorry for that comment but really good book you should definitely read that book, but still he isn’t an annoying fur ball

    • June 12, 2019 at 3:28 am

      That’s a subjective opinion, Breezepelt can be an annoying furball to some. And besides, I’ve read Crowfeather’s Trial and honestly, his redemption wasn’t good. He fought his own Clanmates in the DF battle and almost killed a pregnant queen and blind medicine cat. Breezepelt may have “redeemed” himself but cats still give him glares for his hypocritical statements, as shown in Darkest Night / River of Fire (can’t remember which though). Honestly, he isn’t very loyal in my opinion, and never really puts the Clan before himself unless it’s for Nightcloud (because he’s a mommy’s boy, honestly) or Heathertail.


      Oof

  6. Silverfire
    June 13, 2019 at 9:32 pm

    I don’t know, I think Onestar wasn’t that bad, I think he was just under a lot of pressure. I don’t think it’s fair to blame Tallstar because he didn’t know what would happen. He thought he was doing the right thing.

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