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    • This is the page we will discuss the allegiances and the general layout of the story. I have three basic formats for the three parts already, but it needs improvement. I will post a diffrent page where we write the story itself.

      The way I am running this, is that I will set up a basic layout for each chapter, just a paragraph or two of diolouge and other stuff that needs to be included in the story. From there, anyone else working on it can just pop in and add on to the origanal one, or if someone already posted in response to the origanal one, they can add on to theirs untill no one has anything else to add. I am working on the alligences for the Ravenstar segment which will be comming soon. Then you guys can tweak the plot untill we are ready to write! I hope you have fun. I know I will.

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  • These three have always had special destinies
    Always guaranteed to possess power
    But power is a corrupting force
    One turns greedy and cruel
    Power is a great burden
    One feels crushed under the weight of responsibility
    But power, if wielded in the right paws, can be a tool for good
    Can the last use this power wisely?

    – Evil one: Ravenstar. She-cat, leader of ShadowClan, loves being in control, takes whatever she wants for herself, starves others, and pretty much goes against everything the warrior code is for. This story takes place when the cats are still named like ancients, but have developed clans and a code.

    -Crushed one: Eveningstar.Tom, leader of ShadowClan many generations later, feels crushed by responsibility, goes mad, is a horrible leader, and in the end, runs away, or for a darker turn, may or may not, well…, maybe I just won’t do that. This happens by the time we have actually clans.

    -Last one: Icestar. She-cat, leader of ShadowClan many generations after Eveningstar, goes through times where it seems like she might turn out like either Ravenstar or Eveningstar, and her story revolves around becoming a good leader. This takes place in modern times

    -How the story works. It will be in three parts. Each part will cover one of their leaderships. We start with Ravenstar as an apprentice, and track her descent into evil, we see Eveningstar as an apprentice and watch him as he eventually goes mad, and watch Icestar try to become a good leader, almost becoming like Ravenstar at some points, or like Eveningstar at others. Icestar’s part will be the longest because she has the most to go through. Ideally, Ravenstar would get the first quarter, Eveningstar would get the second quarter, and Icestar would get the other half.

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    • Allegiances for the Ravenstar section:
      ShadowClan:
      Leader: Dawnstar: Tortoiseshell and white she-cat with green eyes
      Deputy: White Stripe: Gray tom with a white stripe running down his back and pale yellow eyes
      Medicine cat: Marigold Pelt- Fluffy golden she-cat with amber eyes

      Warriors:
      Swan Shadow: Gray tom with blue eyes
      Quiet Leap: White she-cat with pale yellow eyes
      Apprentice: Quiet Fall
      Chasing Water: Gray she-cat with sky blue eyes
      Proud Gust: Gray tabby tom with green eyes
      Tiger’s Eye: Brown tabby tom with amber eyes
      Short Briar: Brown speckled she-cat with green eyes
      Apprentice: Owl Song
      Rapid Sea: Blue-gray tom with blue eyes
      Dove Dream: Gray and white she-cat with amber eyes
      Proud Night: Black tom with pale yellow eyes
      Apprentice: Hazel Eyes
      Shell Stripe: Cream tom with green eyes
      Dark Snow: black and white she-cat with amber eyes

      Apprentices:
      Hazel Eyes: Gray tom with hazel eyes
      Quiet Fall: White she-cat with black paws and amber eyes
      Owl Song: Gray speckled tom with pale yellow eyes

      Queens:
      Jumping Petal: Dark ginger she-cat with amber eyes, mother of Swan Shadow’s kits, still expecting
      Lost Cloud: White she-cat with blue eyes, mother of Tiger’s eye’s kits: Eagle Feather, Standing Water and Quick Leaf
      Lonely Flower: Tortoiseshell and white she-cat with pale yellow eyes, mother of Rapid Sea’s kits: Whispering Shadow (dead) and Raven Feather

      Elders:
      Lonely Sky: Gray tabby she-cat with blue eyes
      Lion’s Scar: golden tom with amber eyes
      White Feather: white she-cat with green eyes
      Gentle Night: Black she-cat with green eyes

      ThunderClan:
      Leader: Vinestar: Silver tabby tom with green eyes
      Deputy: Quick Willow: Brown tabby she-cat with silver eyes
      Medicine cat: Silver Creek: Silver tabby she-cat with blue eyes

      Warriors:
      Dove Spots: White she-cat with green eyes
      Apprentice: Dappled Dusk
      Doe Fur: Golden brown tom with amber eyes
      Swift River: Gray she-cat with pale yellow eyes
      Silver Brook: Silver she-cat with blue eyes
      Falcon Spot: Brown tom with amber eyes
      Racoon Eyes: Black and white tom with black circles around his green eyes
      Light Gust: Gray and white tom with blue eyes
      Apprentice: Shaded breeze
      Light Leaf: Brown tom with gray eyes
      Active Wind: Gray speckled she-cat with green eyes
      Elm Spring: Brown tabby tom with pale yellow eyes
      Apprentice: Burned Blossom

      Apprentices:
      Shaded Breeze: Black tom with gray eyes
      Dappled Dusk: Brown she-cat with amber eyes
      Burned Blossom: Tortoiseshell and white she-cat with yellow eyes

      Queens:
      Daisy Leaf: Cream tabby she-cat with green eyes, mother of Light Leaf’s kits, still expecting
      Rare Flame: ginger tabby she-cat with green eyes, mother of Falcon Spot’s kits, Lion’s Leap, Jagged Vine, and Sleeping Fire

      Elders:
      Tiny Gust: A small gray she-cat with green eyes
      Lost Petal: Tortoiseshell and white she-cat with amber eyes
      Smooth Willow: Brown tom with green eyes

      RiverClan

      Leader: Swiftstar: Gray tabby tom with amber eyes
      Deputy: Dawn Snow: White she-cat with yellow eyes
      Medicine cat: Lost Night: Black tom with a white tail tip, white paws, and green eyes
      Medicine cat apprentice: Bold Sun: Golden-brown tom with green eyes

      Warriors:
      Half Stone: Gray tom with blue eyes
      Jagged Briar: Brown tabby she-cat with green eyes
      Sleeping Dream: Blue-gray she-cat with light gray eyes
      Apprentice: Streaked Sun
      Leopard Patch: Golden tom with black spots and amber eyes
      Light Thorn: Golden-brown tom with yellow eyes
      Silver Spring: Silver tabby she-cat with light blue eyes
      Apprentice: Soaring Condor
      Broken Leaves: Tortoiseshell and white she-cat with green eyes
      Twisted Ivy: Silver she-cat with ivy green eyes
      Apprentice: Whispering Shadow
      Evening Fire: Dark ginger and black tom with green eyes
      Chasing Night: Black tom with blue eyes
      Apprentice: Lost River
      Dark Cloud: Dark gray tom with yellow eyes
      Apprentice: Falling Ash

      Apprentices:
      Whispering Shadow: Black she-cat with blue eyes
      Streaked Sun: Ginger tabby tom with amber eyes
      Lost River: Gray and white tom with green eyes
      Falling Ash: Gray she-cat with yellow eyes
      Soaring Condor: Brown tabby tom with yellow eyes

      Queens:
      Eagle Wing: Brown and white she-cat with amber eyes, mother to Light Thorn’s kits: Silver Vine, Wild Leaf, and Dove Patch

      Elders:
      Silver Mist: Silver Tabby she-cat with light blue eyes
      Falcon Flight: Dark brown tom with green eyes

      WindClan
      Leader: Maplestar: Tortoiseshell and white she-cat with green eyes
      Deputy: Wilting Blossom: White she-cat with pale yellow eyes
      Medicine cat: Tumbling Breeze: Speckled gray tom with blue eyes

      Warriors:
      Leaping Breeze: Gray and white she-cat with blue eyes
      Apprentice: Silent Foot
      Keen Briar: Brown tabby she-cat with yellow eyes
      Rising Leaf: Gray tabby tom with green eyes
      Raven Shadow: Black tom with white paws, a white tail tip, and amber eyes
      Small Leaf: Golden-brown tom with yellow eyes
      Nimble Gust: Gray and white tom with pale green eyes
      Apprentice: Holly Fern
      Sleek Fur: Ginger she-cat with green eyes
      Misty Fern: Blue-gray she-cat with green eyes
      Quick River: Blue-gray she-cat with blue eyes
      Apprentice: Sprinting Deer
      Tiny Petal: Tortoiseshell she-cat with yellow eyes
      Rising Mist: Blue-gray tom with amber eyes

      Apprentices:
      Sprinting Deer: Golden-brown tom with amber eyes
      Holly Fern: Black she-cat with green eyes
      Silent Foot: White tom with black feet, a black tail tip, and ice blue eyes

      Queens:
      Bold Wave: Blue-gray she-cat with gray eyes, mother to Rising Leaf’s kits, still expecting
      Muddy Flower: Brown she-cat with blue eyes, mother of Nimble Gust’s kits, Lightning Stripe, Lion Pelt, and Whispering Breeze
      Twisting Silver: Silver tabby she-cat with blue-gray eyes, mother of Raven Shadow’s kits, Ice Breeze, Gust Bird, Dusk Brook, and Tiger Stripe.

      Elders:
      Night Whisper: Black and white tom with yellow eyes
      Misty Dream: Blue-gray she-cat with blue eyes
      Poison Blossom: Tortoiseshell and white she-cat with green eyes
      Heather Bloom: Brown tabby she-cat with purple eyes

      Please tell me if you see any repeat names!

      Also, I used a name generator for some because there were so many, and sometimes, I got some… funny results.

      Cloudy clouds
      Curvy rain
      Grumpy dream
      Scary Bush

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      • Here is the Ravenstar plot.
        -Raven Feather is apprenticed to Proud Night
        -Proud Night abuses her when no one is watching,
        -A cat comes to Raven Feather in her dreams. (Not Mapleshade, she isn’t dead yet.)
        -He promises her that he can help her get revenge on Proud Night
        -Proud Night continues to abuse her
        -Her leader finds out and does nothing about it
        -Raven Feather thinks that a stricter leadership would prevent this
        -Raven Feather takes her assessment
        -Proud Night purposefully fails her
        -Her parents are disappointed in her
        -Raven Feather becomes bitter and angry
        -Raven Feather trains harder
        -Raven Feather retakes her assessment.
        -Proud Night lets her pass
        -Time skip
        -Raven Feather becomes deputy
        -Raven Feather learns that her leader is on her last life
        -Raven Feather kills her leader
        -Raven Feather gets her nine lives
        -Raven Feather becomes Ravenstar
        -Ravenstar becomes evil and basically breaks the warrior code in ways similar to Brokenstar

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  • Maybe the power should be to literally be the DF, cause it can be a good thing or really bad😛its also a really spooky power

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    • So you are saying that they can control the DF? Maybe it would make more sense if they could control StarClan. Otherwise, how could any of the end up good?

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  • So here is the basic prologue material that should be included. I think you can make some great stuff out of it.

    Proud Night padded out of camp, right on mentor, Gentle Feather’s heels. His best friend, Lonely Flower scampered out of the undergrowth beside him.
    “Isn’t it so great that we’re finally apprentices?” She chattered.
    “Yeah! I can’t wait to start training!” He replied.
    “Slow down, today all we are doing is practicing hunting techniques.” Swan Shadow warned
    Swan Shadow was Lonely Flower’s mentor.
    As they neared the training hollow, Proud Night and Lonely Sky went to separate sides to practice. As Proud Night practiced his hunting crouch, he couldn’t help noticing how perfect Lonely Sky’s was. When Swan Shadow sent them out to catch one piece of prey each, Lonely Sky caught her piece first try, but it took Proud Night a few attempts. This dynamic didn’t change throughout his apprenticeship. Lonely Sky was soon praised for her great skills, and Proud Night grew envious. He was rude to Lonely Sky, and their friendship slowly deteriorated into hatred and rivalry. And when Lonely Sky was made a warrior early, Proud Night vowed he would get his revenge.

    So that is all that I have, feel free to add more detail and your own ideas to this short bit.

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