What if Rainflower was kind to Crookedstar even when he hurt his jaw? by Monkeyfur

Art by PureSpiritFlower

Monkeyfur wonders what would’ve happened if Rainflower had treated her son differently.

Crookedstar was born to Rainflower and Shellheart along with Oakkit, he was originally named Stormkit but when he injured his jaw. His mother hated him and renamed him Crookedkit. Rainflower was mean towards him ever since.

Here are 5 things that would have changed if Rainflower had been kind to her son:
1. Crookedkit wouldn’t have left RiverClan and become a loner
2. His name would change
3. His bond with Rainflower would have changed
4. Crookedkit wouldn’t have been trained by Mapleshade
5. His family and friends wouldn’t have died.

1) Crookedkit was upset that he had been treated unfairly by his mother, so he went out of camp. He made a living but found out that living in a clan was better. Crookedkit returned and got his apprentice name. As I have said before Crookedkit left because of his mother’s behavior towards him. If that was changed Crookedkit would have gotten his apprentice name, the same time as his brother Oakkit.
2) After he got hurt, Rainflower wanted to rename him, but if Rainflower didn’t Crookedkit would be called Stormkit. Then Stormpaw, Stormsomething (I would think Stormshine or something), and lastly Stormstar.
3) If Rainflower was kind to Crookedkit then obviously their relationship would have changed, since they would still love each other.
4) Mapleshade saw potential in Crookedkit, he had suffered around the same as her. Mapleshade decided to use him to destroy RiverClan. She trained him and convinced him that she was a StarClan warrior. She made a deal with him saying that Crookedkit would become a great warrior one day and he would help her. If he breaks off the relationship with her, his friends and family will die. So let’s get back on topic, the reason why Mapleshade saw potential in him because he was unloved. If Rainflower treated him nicely, then maybe Mapleshde would have to find another cat to invest in, because he was loved and wouldn’t suffer Mapleshade’s pain.
5) When Crookedjaw broke the relationship, Mapleshade told him that his family and friends would die. Hailstar, Willowbreeze, Shellheart, Minnowkit, Williowkit, Rainflower and Silverstream they all would have still been alive.

It only took one cat to make Crookedstar suffer, and many other cats died because of that.

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November 2, 2019 2:59 am

:oooo amazingggg


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Monkeypaw
Monkeypaw
November 2, 2019 4:39 am

Aww thank you! My next article will be much better though!


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Blossomkit
Blossomkit
November 2, 2019 3:52 am

Yes I would love an AU where rainflower loved crookedkit!

But in warriors rainflower was a fox-hearted, fish-brained, stupid furball and I hated her! She hated her kit because he broke his jaw! That’s like if your mom hated you because you broke your arm! I’m sorry for ranting 🙁 . But really, rainflower was mean and pushed her mate and kit away because they didn’t believe that her kit was ugly, and because the kit broke his jaw. She was mean 🙁


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Nightfeather
Nightfeather
November 5, 2019 12:30 am
Reply to  Blossomkit

Soooooo mean

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November 2, 2019 7:32 am

Ooooooh great article! Good points as well!


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Monkeypaw
Monkeypaw
November 2, 2019 2:43 pm

Thank you!


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November 2, 2019 11:44 am

I’m thinking how different Warriors would be if this had happened… 😮


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November 2, 2019 3:31 pm

Nice article! There should be a fanfic about this.


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Nightfeather
Nightfeather
November 3, 2019 12:18 am

I agree with Hailfall and Briarpaw and Pumpkins.
Warriors would be so different! It’s so hard to imagine what would happen… but there should defiantly be a fanfic about this.
Also, great job by the way, as soon as I read your reasoning, I was like, “oh yeah, so, so, true, this is all of Rainflower’s fault.”

Ravenpaw
Ravenpaw
November 4, 2019 7:35 pm
Reply to  Nightfeather

I agree 😋

Potato 🌸(Blueflower)💙
Potato 🌸(Blueflower)💙
November 4, 2019 3:10 pm

Great article!
I don’t know if it would have prevented everyone’s death tough. I think Rainflower or maybe Hailstar are the only ones who would’ve survived.

Monkeypaw
Monkeypaw
November 28, 2019 6:44 am

But Mapleshade did say that she would kill all of the cats that Crookedstar loved if he didn’t follo the promise though.


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Brightpaw (pool)
Brightpaw (pool)
November 4, 2019 10:02 pm

Really interesting article, Monkey! Great job 😀

Monkeypaw
Monkeypaw
November 6, 2019 3:42 am

Thank you Brightpaw!


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Rainshine 🌸 Rainie
Rainshine 🌸 Rainie
November 4, 2019 11:43 pm

nice article, Moky!


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Monkeypaw
Monkeypaw
November 6, 2019 3:41 am

Thank you Rainie!


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Purple Dusk
Purple Dusk
December 2, 2019 4:18 pm

Interesting article Monkeyfur!

I compend you for writing this article. If I wrote it, the article would be rant filled. Some how you kept it under control. Well done!

I don’t know about Mapleshade becoming interested in some other cat. Mapleshade knows of Stormkit’s destiny to become RiverClan leader AND that he is Appledusk’s great-great-grandson. (Appledusk’s daughter, her daughter, ShellHeart, Stormkit). It would be a dream if Mapleshade let go of her vengeance but I have a feeling she still would use Crookedstar’s broken jaw and unsure feelings against him. Maybe this time, thanks to Rainflower, Crookedstar would shake Mapleshade off long before she becomes a problem.

Keep up the good work Monkeyfur!
I am looking forward to reading more of your work!

Purple Dusk

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July 4, 2020 2:23 pm

Also Oakheart wouldn’t have fallen in love with Bluestar


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