Briarkit shares their opinion on Tawnypelt’s transition to ShadowClan.
Hi! It’s me, Briarkit, writing my first ever paragragh! It’s going to be about why Tawnypelt shouldshouldn’t have moved to ShadowClan. First up, I’m going to say I think she shouldn’t have. You’ll see down below why. Also, I’ve only read to Thunder Rising, so please don’t blame me if I get something wrong.
Why Tawnypelt should have moved to ShadowClan.
1. Flametail, Tigerheart, and Dawnpelt would never have been born!
2. Rowanclaw would never had found a mate!
Let’s get out of love stuff, okay?
3. Blackstar got a strong Warrior.
4. Dovewing would never have gotten Tigerheart, and be stuck with Bumblestripe!(By the way, Dovewing is my fav Warrior cat, so I simpathize for her a lot.)
5. Blackstar wouldn’t have gotten three strong Warriors if she stayed, and one Medicine Cat apprentice. (Tawnypelt herself, Tigerheart, Dawnpelt, and FlametailI)
6. Littlecloud, Oakfur, and Smokefoot wouldn’t have gotten an apprentice named Flamepawtail, Tigerpaw, and Dawnpaw.
7. Littlecloud would have had no one to take care of him in Night Whispers when he caught Greencough.
Now, for reasons why Tawnypelt shouldn’t have moved to ShadowClan.
1. Jayfeather wouldn’t have had to get blamed for Flametail’s death.
2. Flametail wouldn’t have had to die!
3. Tigerheart wouldn’t have had to go to the Dark Forest.
4. Tigerstar wouldn’t have had to get another Dark Forest recruit.
5. FirestarBramblestar would have gotten a good, strong Warrior. (Tawnypelt)
6. Flametail wouldn’t have had to drown!
7. Brackenfur wouldn’t have had his heart broken by Tawnypelt (Tawnypaw, at the time) because she moved to ShadowClan.
8. Bramblestar (Bramblepaw, at the time) wouldn’t have had to endure his sister living in another Clan.
9. Goldenflower wouldn’t have had to watch her kit grow up in another Clan.
10. In Fading Echoes or Night Whispers, forget which, Ivypool (Ivypaw, at the time) wouldn’t have had to get caught on the ShadowClan side of the border by Tigerheart.
11. Tawnypelt, Flametail, Tigerheart, and Dawnpelt, (Flamepaw, Tigerpaw, and Dawnpaw, at the time) wouldn’t have to go to ThunderClan because Sol took over ShadowClan.
So, what do you think about my paragragh? I hope you liked it! You can comment below about it, and I would like to hear what you’re thoughts are on my paragragh. See ya later-Briarkit