Shiningfrost takes a look at Hollyleaf’s writing.
Hi! Itโs Shiningfrost, the ThunderClan warrior, here to discussโฆ how Hollyleaf could have been better.
Donโt get me wrong; sheโs still great, even one of my favorite characters, but she does have one over-exaggerated, hard-to-ignore flaw:
She loves the Warrior Code way too much! She acted every time anyone broke the warrior code – even in the littlest way possible – like they had committed a crime against the entirety of Warrior Cats. It really led me to get annoyed with her, and to be honest, I didnโt really appreciate her until her return in The Forgotten Warrior, where she became more intriguing, more fierce, and most importantly, less sensitive to โbreaches of the Codeโ.
Nowadays, I appreciate her for lending Warriors an interesting perspective and a cat who interests me more than I would have expected. What changed?
Well, even over the course of two books, she acted in a way that made it easy to forget her previous actions and opinions; she helped spy on another Clan and teach her Clan of the ways to properly fight underground, and developed a fierce, brave personality that comes to mind whenever her name is mentioned. The novella Hollyleafโs Story helped explain how she changed from an overly code-obsessed character to an interesting, fierce, brave character willing to do whatever it took to make it up for her Clan. (Alright, all Iโm doing right now is praising, and Iโm guessing that thatโs all I will be doing for the rest of the article, but whatever. If youโre not interested, click the โbackโ button, if not, hang in there, Iโm getting to the conclusion).
Hollyleaf has managed to make up for her disappearance, sacrificing her life in the Great Battle to save Ivypool from the Dark Warrior Thistleclaw. And for those of you who accuse her of murder, REREAD the Broken Code and see for yourself why she was justified to kill Ashfur. Even if it was for selfish intentions, Ashfurโs performance in The Broken Code instantly justified her actions. If you still think sheโs a villain because she killed Ashfur, *another villain*, she definitely made it up – remember that nice time when she was stuck in some dark tunnels with no one with an old ghost? Hollyleaf must have loved that – not! She sacrificed herself in the Great Battle for the sake of her Clanmates – that itself should be enough for you.
Well, Iโve decided to start wrapping up – sheโs a great character, brave and loyal, fighting for her birth Clan; but you now know why I didnโt really like her tilโ The Forgotten Warrior.
Great article! (First? Probably not)
Woohoo you did get first Froggy! Also I love your name ๐๐
I love your name. Go Taylor Swift!
great article! Did it get cut off?
oh does it look like that? im sorry ๐
Great article!!! I hated Hollyleaf a lot until I realised she was actually an interesting character ๐
Great article! I love Hollyleaf!!!
Yeah, I’m not the biggest fan of Hollyleaf as well.
I hate how she’s soooooooooo warriored about the warrior code al the time it annoys me! Great article!!
Awesome article!!!
I really like Hollyleaf because of how much she stuck to the warrior code, it’s interesting to see a cat like that, especially from ThunderClan (since a lot of protagonists in ThunderClan break the code a lot) but I enjoyed her more in the Forgotten Warrior.
I think the title should be something like “Why Hollyleaf isn’t as bad as you think” instead of “How Hollyleaf could’ve improved”. This article talks more about how Hollyleaf redeemed herself rather than point out her flaws or say how her story could’ve been improved. Now, I like Hollyleaf, but I don’t think she was right in killing Ashfur. If she or her brothers or Squirrelflight had told Firestar or really anyone, they could have exiled Ashfur, he would be gone without needing someone to kill him. She killed him because she was stubbborn, because it was the easy way out. Murder isn’t ever justified. I love Hollyleaf, but I know she isn’t a purely good cat.
That’s an interesting suggestion, and it’s probably true. After all, I’ve been mostly talking about how she had improved, more than how she could have.
(If you’re wondering about the name, Shiningfrost was my old account but now I’m using this one.)
Great article!