[the Clans make their way down the mountain and Squirrelflight looks back at Stormfur, who stands back with Brook]

Why I Don’t Like The Tribe in TNP by Shroompaw

Shroompaw shares their thoughts on the Tribe of Rushing Water in The New Prophecy.

[the Clans make their way down the mountain and Squirrelflight looks back at Stormfur, who stands back with Brook]
Art by DarianYunidi
[the Clans make their way down the mountain and Squirrelflight looks back at Stormfur, who stands back with Brook]

Hi, I’m Shroompaw! This is my third article so it probably won’t be as *COUGH COUGH* cringe as my first two. (no promises tho).

Okay. I do NOT like the Tribe in TNP (The New Prophecy). Here’s why. Recently, I’ve started rereading TNP, and I realised something. The Tribe sucks in that arc. Don’t get me wrong, I LOVE the Tribe in more recent books, they’re pretty cool. However, in TNP, Stormfur, Brambleclaw and the gang were minding their own buisness, trying to get back to the forest. Then here come Crag and Brook, on their way to ruin the Tribe for me. From here on, I’m gonna call Stormfur, Brambleclaw, Feathertail, Squirrelpaw, Tawnypelt and Crowpaw THE SUN-DROWN PLACE GANG because its shorter than typing their names out. The Sun-drown Place Gang are kinda sus of these new cats, but since Tawnypelt had that rat bite, they decide to follow them. Brook takes a few looks at Stormfur and is like: Wow. Let’s bring this one to Stoneteller, he’s obviously the chosen cat even though his sister is also silver, he’s just more attractive.

They reach the cave and Stoneteller’s like: That Stormfur. The like 7th chosen cat yet. Maybe this one will work finally.

Let’s time skip to when they try to leave.

When The Sun-Drown Place Gang try to leave, Stoneteller is like: Oh heck no, you’re not leaving until you save us from Sharptooth. Stormfur does not know who that is. Crowpaw makes me like him even more by attacking the cave-guards. Brook makes me hate her even more by telling Stormfur: It’s for the sake of the Tribe. Please. Brook. These cats are NOT here to save YOUR TRIBE. THESE cats are here to save THEIR CLANS. LIKE 3-4x MORE CATS THAN WHATS IN YOUR TRIBE. Sorry about the rant haha. The Sun-drown Place Gang’s priority is to save their homes, but The Tribe just couldn’t understand that. The fact that there were like 6 cats before him that your ancestors sent makes me dislike The Tribe of Endless Hunting even more than I do StarClan.

What makes me infuriated with the Tribe more is, after ALL OF THIS, Brook has the audacity to want to share tongues with Stormfur. Luckily for me, Stormfur refused, letting me have the peace of mind that Stormfur has a braincell remaining.

And after ALL THIS, THE TRIBE WAS WRONG. Most of us know that the chosen cat was actually Feathertail. FEATHERTAIL. BRUH. Even more, Sharptooth caused Feathertail’s DEATH.

Sorry about all the ranting, but then again, I do have The Tribe to thank for creating JAYFEATHERRRRR, because if The Tribe didn’t cause Feathertail’s death, Crowpool wouldn’t exist, making the Three non-existent.

Thank you for your time, Shroomy out!

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