Jackdawpaw and Juniperpaw share their thoughts on some ships from Dawn of the Clans.
Hello and welcome to our second article together! Today we’re going to rate DotC ships (as the title says)! Also, we’re not very good at ship names so we’ll just go with [name x name]. Let’s begin!
First up: Gray Wing x Turtle Tail – 10/10
Jackdawpaw: 10/10! I love this ship! I really love how Gray Wing is just very stupid and doesn’t realize Turtle Tail loves him, and she gets so angry when he meets Storm she actually goes to live with Bumble and her Twolegs. Also, I like both characters as individuals, so that might help too. Turtle Tail’s attitude is also wonderful… she kind of bullies Gray Wing. And how he takes care of the kits! Yeah, I have a lot of beautiful things to say about this ship, but I’ll leave some of it to Juniperpaw!
Juniperpaw: Thank you for that, Jackdawpaw! Now, one thing I absolutely adore and hate at the same time is what an AMAZING and loving father Gray Wing was. He was basically like a role model, even when he was in arguments. The thing I hate about this is the short amount of time that the authors gave him with Turtle Tail. I was horrified when she just all of a sudden died. She didn’t even get to see her kits grow up! She died for her kits, and that combined along with Gray Wing’s father skills just makes them a great ship. 10/10 from me too.
Secondly: Jackdaw’s Cry x Hawk Swoop – 8/10
Jackdawpaw: 8/10. It’s a fine ship, especially since Falling Feather left Jackdaw’s Cry and Hawk Swoop was the only one he had. They’re cute together, and without this ship Lightning Tail wouldn’t exist (yes, I love Lightning Tail).
Juniperpaw: I agree! The ship is great, and I think it’s a bit like the Gray X Turtle for me. Jackdaw’s Cry and Hawk Swoop were great parents together, and I really think that they brought their kits up amazingly. I mean, Acorn Fur and Lightning Tail inherited many good skills and manners from them. I mean, for example, Lightning Tail was able to see right through Star Flower (skill) but only told Thunder politely, no matter how mad he was (manner). So yeah, even though it’s kind of a minor ship, I also give it 8/10.
And now: Holly x Jagged Peak – 5/10
Jackdawpaw: 4/10. I mean, it looks like a good ship to begin with, as Holly seems to make Jagged Peak much more self-confident despite his injured leg, but the problem is that he becomes just TOO self-confident, making him kind of rude to Gray Wing. He seems to think he’s better than everyone else and he’s the leader of the group. I think this is a lot because of Holly – but I don’t blame her for that, only Jagged Peak.
Juniperpaw: Same goes for me, like exactly the same… only thing left to say that makes me rate the ship 6/10 is, as you mentioned, the sole support that Holly offered him. I feel like it really took him out of that dark pit and made him feel seen. He was very lonely before Holly came, and kind of pushed the rest of the camp away. But, just as Jackdawpaw said, this made him way too confident, making him basically uprise against Gray Wing, pure rebellion when all he did was being kind and help? He went all out on Gray Wing and even lashed out on him for fussing with him because of his injury. And I get it, he was tired of being babied when he’d learned to take care of himself, but he could’ve just told Gray Wing that politely and accepted the father figure Gray Wing offered him. But, overall, it’s still a 6/10 from me.
And, finally, Storm x Clear Sky – 0,5/10
Jackdawpaw: So, I was going to give this ship -7/10 or something, because Storm was just so mean to poor Gray Wing and just moved into Clear Sky’s camp without even a “sorry”, but what made me give them a 0 was that still, they did love each other… a lot. They couldn’t help that, and their son was THUNDER, and I mean, that must be a good sign. Still, it hurts not to give them -something.
Juniperpaw: A valid opinion. I feel kind of the same. I mean, it was awful that Gray Wing had literal butterflies in his stomach whenever he even thought about going out to meet Storm, when all this time, it was still going to end up with the she-cat of his dreams literally looking at his brother and bam, in love. Poor Gray Wing. He never even stood a chance. Gray Wing literally sacrificed his friendship with Turtle Tail for Storm, and that means he of course hurt Turtle Tail a lot because she was in love with him. He sacrificed his best friend for someone who went “It wouldn’t work out; I love your brother. Sorry I guess”. Storm rejected him so simply, seemingly without a thought about how he felt. I would give this ship -10, but in the end, how ridiculous it may be, they loved each other. So I’ll give it -1/10.
Jackdawpaw: So, unfortunately, this has to be the end of this very, very long article! Tell us if we should make a part 2! Jackdawpaw out!
Juniperpaw: Juniperpaw out!
I AGREE SO MUCH
Great article!
THIS ARTICLE JUMPSCARED ME
how?
MINE ALWAYS DO THAT TOO LOL
Great article guys! I quite enjoyed reading this!
Great article! I love DotC and I definitely agree with your first rating. TurtlexGrey is the best!
Great article! I agree with most, I ship Gray X Slate but not Gray X Storm or Gray X Turtle.
Nice Article! Here are my opinions
Gray x Turtle- 7/10
It was indeed very cute, but I’m annoyed at the very reason you love it so much. Gray suddenly says he’s in love with Turtle after she confesses, and I have to admit it’s a good ship. I just don’t like how Gray takes a mate after. He’s a good father figure but yea. 7/10
Jackdaw x Hawk- 9/10
It’s actually really cute and I like it. Not much to be said ^^
Jagged x Holly- 6/10 I agree with what you guys said and I honestly don’t like how Holly suddenly turns into a daisy while Jagged is the protector. Thought they helped each other, but nope, Holly turned into a bland she-cat-queen with their same personality.
Storm x Clear- 3/10
I don’t like love at first sight and this was extremely rushed. I don’t hate it because “Gray Wing had it hard” though. I don’t like how the she-cats in this series were just used as toys for the toms to have character development, and this ship is just… ugh.
The way Jaggedpeak and Holly used each other to harass Moth Flight’s kits for having “mixed blood.” *Sighs*
Great article!!!
I agree with all of these opinions! DOTC is very underrated because like no one has read it. (including me, but I did read Moth Flight’s Vision, so I guess that’s something?)
I never read DoTC but I saw a few parts of the first book, so I can only say that this was a great article, and i’ll be sure to read it and reply back later about my opinion on it 🙂
When Moth Flight returned from Shadowclan, Jaggedpeak and Holly show their rudeness. They complain about how Moth Flight’s kits will have “farm cat blood” and Skyclan blood. But the clans have just started so genetics can’t really be a thing. yet Even though Holly and Jaggedpeak basically made their kits have “mountain cat blood” and “rouge blood” they still both complain about Moth Flights kits even though they know the father DIED. And both still use each other to complain. WHY DID THE ERINS RUIN JAGGEDPEAK!