[the spirit of Jagged Peak scolds a crying Cinderpelt, saying "You could've been a warrior..."]

Why Yellowfang cheated Cinderpelt by Dawnkit

Dawnkit argues why Yellowfang held Cinderpelt back from her true potential.

[the spirit of Jagged Peak scolds a crying Cinderpelt, saying "You could've been a warrior..."]
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[the spirit of Jagged Peak scolds a crying Cinderpelt, saying “You could’ve been a warrior…”]

It is I, Dawnkit, formerly known as Dawnpaw/song. So we all know the story. Tigerclaw set up a trap for Bluestar, Fireheart told her to stay in camp, but Cinderpaw left anyway and had her leg twisted by a monster, Yellowfang said she couldn’t become a warrior, and she became a medicine cat instead and trained Leafpool. But what if Yellowfang was wrong? What if Cinderpelt could become a warrior? Besides, StarClan themselves had the destiny of a warrior planned out for Cinderpelt. She was cheated out of her destiny, and this is why I think Yellowfang cheated Cinderpaw out of her destiny.

Yellowfang
So, here’s my theory. Yellowfang was getting old, and she knew this. She figured she needed an apprentice, but nobody would volunteer. She decided she would keep going solo as a medicine cat. Suddenly, young Cinderpaw got hit by a monster, and she saved her life and enjoyed Cinderpaw’s company. Still, she realized Cinderpaw would struggle as a warrior, knew she needed an apprentice, and knew she got along with Cinderpaw and made up the excuse that Cinderpaw couldn’t become a warrior. This wasn’t true! Cinderpaw still had potential! Just because a cat has a disability doesn’t mean they can’t become a warrior!

The fire
So, let’s just believe Cinderpaw is still a warrior apprentice. With only one medicine cat, ThunderClan wouldn’t have allowed Yellowfang to go with Fireheart into the camp in the first place, so Yellowfang is still there. A long time later, she begins training Leafpaw, and eventually, Yellowfang dies. Leafpaw goes on to be the full medicine cat. Or, Yellowfang does go into the fire anyway, oh, no Cinderpaw to save Littlecloud and Whitethroat! (Smacks face and groans) Does Cinderpaw know herbs from being in Yellowfang’s den for a while and save them anyway?

Other cats
Cinderpaw/pelt was cheated! What about Deadfoot, the deputy of WindClan? He has a twisted front paw, he’s still a warrior and even went on to be deputy! What about Briarlight? Her situation was way worse than Cinderpelt’s, and she’s technically considered a warrior! (Sure she can’t patrol and hunt and stuff but she still got a warrior name) But hey, you may be going, Deadfoot’s front leg was what’s wrong, Cinderpaw had her back leg damaged, but consider this! JaGgEd PeAk.

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