Polls (Retired)

I added more options for my new warrior name 😀 Please vote
https://www.strawpoll.me/20431395/r
(Also in name)

(This is a reply to Crookedmoon about Crookedstar because I am too lazy too find the actual comment)

*Spoiler’s for Mapleshade’s venegence, Crookedstar’s promise and maybe a bit of the prophocies arc tworads the very end, beware*
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You have been warned.
I don’t like Crookedstar much…I prefer his MOM much better (Rainflower)…this will be fun also its going to include tons of bullet points, if you want me to go deeper for your article I can. (Sorry for my horrid spelling I am typing fast.) I will also tell you how I think the erins could of made him a better charchter, and more interisting.

1. He snuck out of camp WAY too many times. Breaking his jaw was his fault, I have no sympathy
2. His mom never loved Oakkit before Crookedkit broke his jaw. (Now this is not Crookedkit’s fault but when his mom stopped spoiling he was way worse than when she never called Oakkit her handsome kit)
3. He LEFT RIVERCLAN his own clan and became a kittypet, then he thinks he can just waults back in nonono!
4. He never did anything that should be known as brave and loyal to Riverclan, he just walks back in EXSCUSE ME HE LEFT!
5. He trained with Mapleshade (that was dumb of Crookedstar)
6. He trained in the dark forest, did it look anything like starclan? NO! Why would starclan train cats anyway?
7. When he realized (he was being super dumb in the first place) that he was training there he did not really do anything.
8. By making that promise he put his clanmates in mortal danger (mostly his family members).
9. He YELLED at Oakheart for having halfclan kits and mating bluefur, WHEN HIS DARK FOREST MENTOR TOLD HIM THE INFORMATION. (I love Mapleshade she is one of the only female villans and what she did right up her ally, she’s been wronged)
10. When Willowbreeze and 3 of his kits died, (since we were reading by his prospective) he cared WAY too much (yes he can grieve but he yelled at everyone and did not even take care of his own daughter.)
11. Oakheart had to fight with him (they either fought with words or claws) to name his daughter, he named her Silverstream.
12. Crookedstar let’s his daughter get away with anything and let her do anything she ever wanted
13. Crookedstar basicly let Silverstream and Leopardfur/star be his deputys, they are both pretty much spoiled brats
14. Crookedstar lets his daughter date Graystripe.
12. He made Leopardfur deputy and she is a spoiled brat to succeced him, and she make the most terrible descisions here. (*cough* *cough* Tigerstar *Cough* *Cough*

Ways for Crookedstar to be a better cat! (hehe this is just extra hehe) The timing is going to be a bit weird tho! Also Crooked if you decide to use this for your article please give creadit to me!

1. Mapleshade had 4 kits, Patchkit, Larchkit, Petalkit, and Rainkit!
2. Mapleshade was exiled, she crossed over to riverclan territory and she and her kits made it.
3. Appledusk always loved Reedshine and he saw her first. He had told riverclan that she would be exiled and he only “Loved” her because he wanted revenge on every thunderclan cat because his sister uhh (he may of never had a sister so uh I am going to name her Blossempaw) Blossempaw from a younger litter had been best friends with Flowerpaw and jumped in to save her. He tried to kill Mapleshade and the kits with some other Riverclan rebls/cats because of Blossempaw’s death. Mapleshade cried when he drowned Patchkit, Larchkit, and Petalkit. Rainkit survived and Mapleshade met Myler, she let him help her because she was too tired. Then she did her kill, Appledusk, Ravenwing, and Frecklewish thing.
4. Frecklwish survives and Mapleshade tells her everything that happened and how sorry she is and Freacklewish in return helps raise Rainkit.
5. Mapleshade and Frecklewish go to the DF.
6. Rainkit goes to riverclan and pretends to be Myler’s kit named Rain.
7. Riverclan take Rainkit in and she becomes Rainflower.
8. Rainflower becomes mates with Shellheart (Reedshine and Appledusk’s daughter’s son to get revenge for her mother Mapleshade and for her foster mother Frecklewish) and gives birth to Oakkit and Stormkit. She hits Stormkit against a stone so that she can rename him Crookedkit.
9. Stormkit becomes Crookedkit.
10. Oakkit becomes Oakpaw and Shellheart is his mentor.
11. Mapleshade and Frecklewish still walk in their daughter Rainflower’s dreams.
12. Crookedkit runs away to the frm to get herbs for Brambleberry. He decides to spend time there and Riverclan only thinks he went to get herbs.
13. Rainflower kills Shellheart and becomes deputy.
14. Rainflower lets Reedwhisker take Willowkit and Graykit well Hailstar is sick with greencough.
15. Hailstar dies of greencough and is on his last life. He tells Rainflower this.
16. Oakpaw becomes Oakheart.
17. Rainflower kills him because she has ambition for leadership.
18. Rainflower becomes Rainstar and Frecklewish and Mapleshade praise her.
19. Crookedkit becomes Crookedpaw and Mapleshade starts to teach him, he makes the promise.
20. Crookedpaw relises his mistake after and decides to spy on the DF.
21. Rainstar decides that Oakheart will be deputy because he is breaking the warrior code with Bluefur.
22. Bluefur becomes Bluestar and becomes friends with Rainstar.
23. Bluestar has Mistykit, Mosskit, and Stonekit.
24. Blustar, Mistykit and Stonekit die.
25. Oakheart sneaks Mosskit to riverclan and Rainstar helps him raise her.
26. Oakheart trains with Mapleshade and Crookedpaw.
27. Frecklewish starts to train Tigerpaw because Redtail killed Thistleclaw because he was angry about him “Dating” his sister, Spottedleaf.
28. Crookedpaw, Willowpaw, and Graypaw become, Crookedjaw, Willowbreeze, and Graypool.
29. Rainstar and Oakheart die. (Oakheart killed himself because he wanted to see Bluestar who want to the DF with Mistykit and Stonekit for breaking the warrior code and Crookedjaw kills Rainstar because she trains in the dark forest and because he found out she killed Shellheart)
30. Crookedjaw becomes deputy and becomes Crookedstar. He makes some random riverclan cat his mentor (Bettlenose or Cederpelt I guess. This might be rocky I have not read Crookedstar’s promise in awhile.)
31. Willowbreeze and Crookedstar have Silverkit, Mapleshade slits Willowbreeze’s throat.
32. Silverkit survives because she is only a kit and Mapleshade will kill her soon.
33. Mosskit and Siverkit become Mosspaw and Silverpaw.
34. Mosspaw and Silverpaw become Mosssnow and Silverstream.
35. Mosssnow pushes Graystripe in the river just so Silverstream will pull him out of the river and hopefully fall in love.
37. They start meeting and all the Gray x Silver shipper fall in love and give birth to Featherkit and Stormkit (Me: YES!!! GRAY X SILVER)
38. Silverstream and Graystripe decide to follow in Mosssnow, Oakheart and Rainstar’s footsteps.
39. Crookedstar dies and so does the deputy and Mosssnow becomes Mossstar saying she is the only one who is good enough to lead well Mapleshade fakes a sign.
NOTE: You may be thinking why did starclan give Mossstar and Rainstar leader’s and give them nine lives. Well it is because they didn’t the dark forest gave it to them.
40. Mossstar plots with Tigerstar and Mossstar is like Leopardstar except Crookedstar did not pick her to be deputy. She also does NOT like reform riverclan again she is with Tigerclaw till the end.
41. Featherkit and Stormkit have a simialer life they become riverclan warriors except they are not trapped in a cage down there is just riverclan cats who uhh hated Tigerclan. Featherpaw/tail does not trust LeopardFUR as she supported Tigerstar and yeah everything pretty much stays the same.

*Spoilers end here*

This might be a little rocky as I have not read Crookedstar’s promise or the prophocies begin arc in awhile. So hope you like it. Tell me your thoughts on Crookedloser sorry Crookedstar lovers.

Edit: OoF ThIS iS LOnG. Mods I am so sorry