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Archpaw and a bunch of grapes
Archpaw and a bunch of grapes
October 16, 2020 4:18 pm

Archstone

 and 

Moonclaw’s

 Adventure

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Chapter 1

The Capture
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Hi. My name is Moonkit. I have two sisters. One whose name is Archkit and another named Shadowkit. Shadowkit is a black little kitten with one white paw, and Archkit is gray with a crooked tail and teal and green eyes. I am a black and white cat. A tuxedo cat (as the Twolegs call it) to be exact. Our mother’s name is Windwhisker. Our father is the clan leader. His name is Pebblestar. We are part of Riverclan but dream of being part of Skyclan. We also had some other kits that we hung out with. Fluffykit, Sripekit, Cloudkit, Dirtykit, and Riverkit. One day I wake up ready for a regular day. It was till a Twoleg came to the camp with a basket. They took every kit but Archkit, Shadowkit, and me. I told Windwhisker that I could save them. She didn’t listen. I already knew where the Twoleg lived. Thankfully I was going to be an apprentice the next day. I became Moonpaw, Archkit is now Archpaw, and Shadowkit is now Shadowpaw. Now Windwhisker let Archpaw, Shadowpaw, and I go. We went into the woods and towards the Twoleg nest. We got there and the Twoleg’s monster was gone. I didn’t see any cats inside the house. We stuck around till we saw the monster. The Twoleg  got out of the monster and had the kits in crates. We snuck in with all the other cats. We hid under the couch. I watched everything that happened. There was a boy kitten that lived with the Twoleg. He was an orange tabby or that’s what the Twolegs call it. The Twoleg called him Tiger. He had a collar with his name on it. All the kits now had collars too. Fluffykit was called Snowball, Stripekit was called Tiger, Cloudkit was called Sky, Dirtykit was called Brownie, and Riverkit was called Spots. Riverkit doesn’t even have spots! After a while the Twoleg gave them food and went to the room of their nest. They didn’t come back down for a while, so I knew it was safe. I came out and I helped all the kits take their collars off and put them under the couch. I jumped and opened the front door. All the kits ran out except the kittypet named Tiger, Shadowpaw, Archpaw, and I. Tiger insisted that we stayed. The Twoleg came down stairs and saw the door open and closed it right in Shadowpaw, Archpaw, and my face. She put all of us in a crate with Tiger. I knew kittypets were trouble. We would have been long gone with Tiger if he didn’t stop us. We refused to talk to Tiger. We would only talk to each other. We didn’t even try to be quiet. We didn’t care if he heard us. Shadowpaw said, “So much for becoming apprentices. We don’t even get to do anything other than be stuck in this Twoleg nest!” Archpaw replied, “Yeah but we saved the kits so that they can be apprentices. That’s the only thing that matters.” I could just be quiet at a time like this, “ We wouldn’t be here if it wasn’t for the Kittypet.” I said this making sure that Tiger was listening. Tiger asked, “Why are you so against being with people? They give you food, shelter, water, and everything you need!” I started to feel bad for Tiger. He kept on asking questions that I knew the answer too, just I didn’t say anything. This time I told him, “Because We are clan cats! We are cats that already have what we need. We don’t need some Twoleg to give us stuff. The only thing I have seen Twolegs do is get in monsters and put cats in crates! Am I right or am I right?!” He was a little offended by this question. Only a little though. Shadowpaw and Archpaw looked at me like I was crazy because I talked to a Kittypet. Tiger looked at me like I was crazy as well. I had a little bit of anger in my voice when I said this. “Look, We don’t like being cooped up in places. We didn’t even when we were kits! All we wanted to do was go outside of the nursery for all the kits.” I said in more of a calm, sweet tone. Shadowpaw and Archpaw relaxed a little and realized that Tiger didn’t know anything about where they came from. Tiger looked like he was just hit by a branch. I had just started noticing that my paw had been hurting alot since I left camp. I picked it up and saw that it was bleeding. All the cats around me looked at my paw and Archpaw said, “What did you do?! DId you step on a thorn? Did you break it?!” I looked at her and with a calm voice said, “I think I broke it….. Because I can’t feel it……,” I looked down at my paw then back up at Archpaw, “ It’s fine!” She looked at me like I just said I saw a Starclan cat! Tiger just looked concerned now. He was able to slip out these words, “ Is.. Is this what you clan cat do all the time?” I responded quicker than a cheetah can run, “Nope! I just don’t want to worry about it!” I was very tired and I laid down and Shadowpaw and Archpaw did too. Tiger tried to move closer to use but Archpaw hissed at him and he went to go lay by the door. We fell asleep and woke up to a Twoleg looking into the crate. I jumped up and landed hard on my paw that was already broken and let out a cry of pain. This woke Archpaw and Shadowpaw. Tiger was already awoken. My paw started to bleed again.

Chapter 2 
Death
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I shifted around in the box, thinking about what had happened today. We became apprentices, found the stolen kits, and now, the worst one ever, we were KITTYPETS!!  AND, Moonpaw is friends with a KITTYPET!! I mean, being with a kittypet is bad, but FRIENDS!? NO mousebrained WAY I’ll steal Moonpaw away from me. My thoughts were interrupted by a scuffling sound of Tiger and Moonpaw playing. She was showing him the hunter’s crouch, how to sneak up on something, and all of the other things we used to do as kits. I grumpily turned away from where they were playing. If she doesn’t want to play with me, then I will not play with her. I let out a low growl warning Tiger not to mess with my Shadowpaw or me. For all I care right now, Moonpaw can go fight a badger by herself.
“Shadowpaw, come play with me! We CLAN CATS should work on our apprentice skills, so when we go back to the clans, we won’t be behind.” I emphasize clan cats just to make Tiger feel bad. He glances at Moonpaw. She stares at him like he’s some sort of StarClan cat. Then, it hit me. MOONPAW AND TIGER!!! She likes him!! WHAT WHAT IN STARCLAN’S NAME?! Out of all the cats in the world, why this on?! She’ll stay with him when we can get rescued, become his mate, have his kits, and die together!! You know that wave of understanding when reality kicks in, that’s what happened. Oh StarClan. What is she, mousebrained. I can imagine it already, three kits, one black and brown with bright blue eyes, one white kit with one brown paw and deep green eyes, and, finally, one a brown tabby, just like his father! I scorn at the idea of my kits being taken away. If I have any kits or a mate, it’ll be a part of RiverClan! Not a stupid kittypet! Suddenly, Moonpaw falls over, while showing Tiger how to do the swipe and reach. She withers away in agony when Tiger tries to help her up.
“Archpaw, help me! Hurry!!” she meows in short, hurried, breaths. As she speaks, blood pools from her paw. Her eyes twitch and her head rolls back limply. 
“Archpaw!” Tiger meows with such pain and horror. He looks at her body. “What happened here?” I ask with hate and anger trembling in my voice. “We were playing and she said her paw hurt. I said we should stop, but she insisted we should keep going. And then, she collapsed. I’m sorry! I don’t know what happened.” I sighed and fell down in a pile, with Tiger curling around me. 
Chapter 3
Starclan
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I thought that I lost my chance at life.. Hey, At least my paw feels better! LOok on the bright side. I went to Starclan after the incident at the Twoleg nest. I do miss Tiger, Shadowpaw, and Archpaw though. I miss Tiger the most. He was less boring. He didn’t know anything about clan cats so I was the one who told him. He enjoyed listening to me talk about all the different clans. I didn’t think that I would have the chance to meet all types of leaders so quickly! I got to see friends and family who had died. I also got to meet Leafstar, a leader of Skyclan. Jayfeather, a medicine cat from Thunderclan who was blind. Jayfeather told me that I still had a purpose in life. I asked him, “How can I have a purpose in life if I already died?” He responded, “Because you’re meant to be a medicine cat. Medicine cats are very important. especially with how much you get hurt! It also helps to be calm when bad things happen. That is exactly what you do. That is a gift from Starclan to help you be a great medicine cat! You will be able to help Archpaw, Shadowpaw, and Sunpaw.” “Who’s Sunpaw?” I quickly asked Jayfeather. Jayfeather shook his head, “You don’t think! Tiger is Sunpaw. I know you want to mate him. It is very obvious.” I was horrified. “Can medicine cats have kits?” Jayfeather looked at me, “No, unless you are in Skyclan.” My eyes lit up like a firefly. That was the clan I wanted to be a part of anyway! Then Jayfeather said, “ Try not to die again!” Then everything became fussy and I was back at the Twoleg nest. It was like a dream. I saw Archpaw, Shadowpaw, and Tiger all curled up by each other. I said, “What happened?” and Archpaw and Tiger Looked up in disbelief. “Are you a ghost?” Archpaw asked cautiously. “Nope!” I replied with happiness. “How is this possible?” Tiger asked. I am supposed to be a medicine cat for Skyclan. The one in the George, remember. And I am supposed to take care of Archpaw, Shadowpaw, and Sunpaw.” Tiger looked at me like I just ate a fox. “Who’s Sunpaw?” “Yeah” Shadowpaw and Archpaw echoed.  I stared at them for a little while. I didn’t know if I was supposed to tell them. Then Jayfeather’s voice echoed in my head, “Tell them.” “Sunpaw is YOU Tiger. You are Sunpaw.” Tiger gave that look which meant you are so smart. “Tiger can I speak with you, alone.” I said. Archpaw looked at me like I killed a cat. They walked into a different room in the Twoleg nest. I told Tiger, “We are meant to mate. And I need to go to Skyclan so I can kits as a medicine cat. Only way I can be a medicine cat and have kits!” Tiger replied, “I understand, completely. But we need to tell the others.” I was quick to respond, “Have you gone mousebrained! NO WAY can we tell them! My parents would never approve of me mating a kittypet! They might not stay in Skyclan with us. That is where we are meant to live. This is where we need to thrive! Being here as a kittypet is a waste of time.” Tiger responded, “ I know. I didn’t choose to be a kittypet.” “I am going to tell the others they can come back in.” I told Tiger. “No talking about this around the others, unless I say  you can.” Tiger muttered something to himself but I didn’t hear him. 

Chapter 4
The Broken Adventure
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“What did you talk about?” I asked Tiger, since I know he can’t keep a secret. “Umm… I can’t tell you!” I glared at him and that broke him down and he told me everything. It was fast, but I caught SkyClan, mates, Jayfeather and Sunpaw! “Oh, so we have to go to SkyClan and you and Moonpaw can be mates. But, if you haven’t noticed, we’re STUCK in a Twoleg nest.” As I said that Tiger slumped down. “But you know more about these nests than any of us combined. Is there any way we could get out of here?” Tiger jumped up and started prancing around and meowing. “What ARE you doing?!” I looked at him so confused. “I do this if I have to go to the bathroom, and they let me out. Do it!” he urged me. “All right but ONLY if it gets us out of here.” I muttered darkly. His Twoleg came into the room clearly annoyed with us. Shadowpaw and Moonpaw had joined us after laughing at us for a bit. I admit I would laugh at me, too. The Twoleg opened the door, and we raced to freedom. “Can you open the weird border locker thing?” Shadowpaw asked Tiger. “Well… YES! It’s made of trees. So, you can climb up it. And flip the silver thing. Then, we will be free.”   
Moonpaw climbed up, and flicked the silver thing and the gate opened. We ran out, just as the Twoleg opened the door to see what’s taking us so long. We raced out and ran until we couldn’t see the Twoleg anymore. Till we ran into another Twoleg. She gave us some kittypet food, we were so hungry we ate it. It tasted funny, like herbs. We all fell asleep, but at the last second before I fell asleep, I saw a cobweb like thing fall over us, and Moonpaw trying to fight it. Then, I fell asleep.

Chapter 5
The Kittynap
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The Twolegs that captured the kits were nice so I thought that all Twolegs were nice. But I was wrong. The girl that put us in the box wasn’t nice. She had long fingernails that she shoved into your belly and made it hurt. She put us in a box after she looked all over us. There were holes in the top of the box so we could breathe but not big enough to fit through. She taped the top shut so we couldn’t push it open. She took Tiger first, then Shadowpaw, next Archpaw, and lastly, me. I heard her go out the door of the house and went into a monster. Then I heard her say that she wanted to take us to the big city to sell us all to just one person to get a lot of money. At least she is keeping us together! None of us could sleep, not even Tiger! Tiger was pacing around the box. Archpaw curled up with Shadowpaw to keep her company. Shadowpaw was crying because she missed being free. THe plan was to leave right before Bareleaf. Now we won’t be able to follow through in that plan. And we were going the opposite way of Skyclan. I wasn’t able to sleep for long but I managed to get a tiny cat nap. I got to see Jayfeather for some advice. Once I got to Starclan I just trembled to the ground and started crying. Jayfeather came over and told me, “You will be okay.” “How is this ok?! Everything is falling apart! How are we going to go to Skyclan?” Jayfeather could tell how much I wanted to go to Skyclan. Jayfeather said, “Yes, it is, but you will make it to Skyclan.” Then it felt like all the cats in Starclan were right beside me encouraging me to move on. I looked up and I was in the box. There weren’t any other cats other than Shadowpaw, Archpaw, and Tiger. They were all doing the same things as last time. Then I heard monsters honking their horns. We kept on going fast then slamming on the breaks. Archpaw was still curled up with Shadowpaw and I curled up with Tiger, who just settled down. I was kinda glad because with the monster going slow then fast he could have broken a paw! And I don’t see any leaves to rap it in if he did. Then I finally heard the monster screech to a complete stop. Then I heard a door open. Then the girl picked up the box and went into a house… Or was it an apartment. I don’t know… Just somewhere in a big city. Far, far, away from Skyclan. She finally let us out of the box but put us in the bathroom. Archpaw got impatient and kept on running into the door hoping it would either open or break. The girl came in and saw that we had collars and took them off. She put on new collars with new names. Archpaw was Stormy. Shadowpaw was Midnight. Tiger was Sunshine. And I was Blacky. WORST NAME EVER!!! At least do like Boots or something! After running into the door so much Archpaw’s ear hurt like crazy. I heard Jayfeather’s voice echo in my head saying, “Find Violets”. I didn’t know what violet looked like and had everyone help look. Shadowpaw had jumped up on a desk and accidentally knocked over a vase full of purple flowers. Jayfeather’s voice was in my mind again, “That’s it!” I grabbed a flower and put it to Archpaw’s ear. Her face changed from agony to relief. The girl heard the crash and came in. Tiger and I were now standing where the vase was before Shadowpaw knocked it over. She looked at me and Tiger, then just shook her head and took all the other breakable things in the room. Then she opened up the bathroom door and let us out. Then one by one put us back in separate boxes and sealed them. We all chewed our way out of these boxes because they were cardboard. The box we were in before was plastic. We hid under the couch and waited. We saw a different girl come in and ask, “Where are the kittens?” She sounded way sweeter than the girl that kittynaped us. I emerged from under the couch with Tiger next to me. Shadowpaw and Archpaw right behind us.

Chapter 6
  A New Twoleg
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She looks nice enough. I thought to myself. But what will she do to us? A little voice quickly asked me before I could push the thought out of my head. Do you trust her? The Voice asked again. Yes! I do! I quickly thought. You know that’s not true…. Deep down The Voice was correct. I don’t trust Twolegs anymore. “Here are the kittens. Now give me my money, and take these wretched beasts away. They keep knocking over my stuff and breaking it.” the mean Twoleg hissed in a gravel like voice. “Did you put them in a room with the door shut?” The mean Twoleg siffed in annoyment. “Do ya want them or not.” The new Twoleg looked at us again, and I fell in love with her eyes. They were blue like our mom’s were.  Don’t be deceived by her eyes. Look into her heart. Again, The Voice. I can’t see into Twoleg’s hearts. I thought to The Voice. Yes you can. Not JUST Twolegs, but everything that has a heart.  “Archpaw, are you okay?!” Shadowpaw was staring into my eyes looking very worried. Now’s the time! Look INTO her soul!  “I.. I.. I’m fine.” I stared into her eyes and saw me dying and her screaming with grief and pain. “Are you gonna die?” she asked, trembling so much. See you CAN see into her soul. The Voice said with a smug hint of happiness. The new Twoleg put us in a box, but she left the lid open, and she took us into the monster. We got to her nest and she let us out of the box. We went into her back outside nest. A white cat with black paws shot out of the ferns hissing and spitting. We fluffed up and hissed. The black and white tom stopped hissing and cocked his head. “What’s your name? Mine Hiss, because I hiss a lot.” Hiss liked his chest fur, clearly embarrassed. “I thought you were some rogues. They have been bothering me.” We looked at each other. “Um.. I’m Archpaw, this is Moonpaw, Tiger, and Shadowpaw.” I looked at Hiss. His ear was bloody, and his left front paw was swelling and very bloody. “The rogues are still here, so you have to be quiet. By the way, why do you have such weird names? ARE YOU CLAN CATS?! I heard you grow to the size of badgers when you’re angry, and line your nest with bones!! AND you can defeat anything! Could you help me with the rogues?! Could you!!” I stood there blinking for a bit, trying to understand what he had just said. One minute he was acting like ShadowClan protecting their borders, then, like a little kit listening to the elders stories. Honestly, this cat is so hard to understand. I took a deep breath. “Yes. We are Clan cats. NO we don’t grow to the size of badgers when we get angry, and CERTAINLY don’t line our nest with bones. Just moss. Bones are to uncomfy. Yes we are the best fighters ever. And yes, we will help you fight. I mean, for a while this is our home, too. How many of them are there? Tell me all about them.” I concluded, just as I ran out of breath. Hiss looked over his shoulder. “I’ll show you. Just promise not to get too freaked out.” And with that, he flicked his tail, as to show us the way.  

Chapter 7
      The Battle
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“Wait, Hiss!” Hiss looked back at me startled. “Let me fix up your ear.” HIss look at me like I am a mousebrained kit. “No it’s ok.” Hiss told me. I told him firmly, “No! I‘m gonna fix your ear or else! Now sit.” Hiss rolled his eyes then sat down. “Shadowpaw you stay here with Hiss. Archpaw and I will go get supplies.” Archpaw and I went into the woods. We went in the bushes so that no rogues saw us. I found the things I needed and went back to Hiss and Shadowpaw. Then I saw a cat standing right in front of Shadowpaw with their back arched. I snuck up on the cat and pounced on them and they rolled over and looked up at me with big eyes. He was horrified. “Why are you here?” The cat looked at me like I was the meanest cat in the woods. “ I am just a kitten from next door.” His voice was trembling when he said this. I stepped off of the cat and started tending to Hiss’s ear. “What is your name, kittypet?” I asked. The cat was a tortoiseshell. “My name is Redwood, and WHAT did you call me?” “Kittypet.” “I am not a Kittypet!” “Yeah you are. You live with a twoleg.” Redwood looked at Hiss. “ What kind of cat is she?” “You know I can hear you right?” Redwood ignored my comment and stared at Hiss with confusion. Hiss finally answered Redwood’s question, “ They are clan cats.” Hiss was a little annoyed at me because I was “embarrassing” in front of his friend. “CLAN CATS!!!!! WHY IS THERE CLAN CATS ALL THE WAY OUT HERE??????!!!!” “Wait how far away are we from any clan?” “ How am I supposed to know? I have been here my whole life.” Archpaw finally stepped up and was trying to make me feel better, but only made me more worried. “ The monster ride was really long to get to the Twoleg with the apartment. Also really long to get here.” Tiger had noticed that I was worried. “ Okay, Hiss your ear looks like it is brand new!” I told Hiss when I got done. “Moonpaw could I talk to you for a minute?” Redwood asked before I could answer, “ Who’s Moonpaw?” I pitched in and said, “ Yes Tiger, and to answer your question Redwood, I am Moonpaw. This Tiger. That’s Archpaw. Also this is Shadowpaw. Archpaw, Shadowpaw, keep watch.” They both nodded then I walked towards the house with Tiger. “What’s on your mind?” Tiger asked me. I was caught off guard when he said this. “Oh… It’s nothing.” “It sure doesn’t seem like nothing.” Tiger’s voice helped me calm down a little. “ It’s just…. I don’t know how much longer I can take not being in a clan. We are just getting farther and farther away from Skyclan.” Tiger looked at me with the look on his face which meant I understand. Tiger looked down and said, “ It’s all my fault. You wouldn’t be here if I didn’t stop you from leaving. I just……” Tiger got cut off by the cry of Shadowpaw. We sprinted to where the sound came from. I heard Redwood say, “ The rogues are here! The rogues are here!!!” I sprinted and pounced on their leader. Everyone stopped fighting. They stared at me and the rouge’s leader. He said, “ Finish me off now Kittypet, I dare you!” I stared deep into his eyes. “No.” He blinked at me confused, “No? Oh come on you Kittypet you are so boring!” “ I am no kittypet. I am Moonpaw. A member of Riverclan. A medicine cat apprentice. It would be against the warrior code to kill you.” I stepped off the leader. I told him, “ You want to fight. I will fight. Just no killing!” “ Deal!” Archpaw looked at me concerned and so did Tiger. “ I will be fine,” I turned my attention to the rogue’s leader. “Give me your best.” The leader of the cats was shocked that I was going to try to take him on. I set my paws and he pounced I scratched his eye. He trembled to the ground with cries of pain. “I never said no scratching!” I smiled as I said this. “ You are a poor fighter” The rogue said. “You want to test it?” “I do, actually!” “Bring it!” He pounced I let him land on me. I had my legs over my stomach and had them in the center of his. I pushed up and sent him flying backwards and flopping onto his back. I pounced on him again and asked, “ You really think you’re a better fighter than me, still?” “ No…..” “Then leave forever!” “ Fine. We will leave. Rogues, retreat!” We went inside the Twoleg nest and ate. Then we went to sleep. 
 
Chapter 9
The Wet Escape
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“What now?” Moonpaw asked. “Well… you just defeated a rogue leader, and without any training.” I answered. Shadowpaw looked at me like I was a mouse brain. ” She had training! Remember when we were kits and played together? That’s training, silly!!” I thought about this for a bit. She’s right. The Voice came again.  Aww. What do you know?  I asked The Voice, grumply. More than you do. They answered smugly.  They are right. I thought to myself. “I vote we see if any of the rogues or loners want to come with us.”  “Ok” “Yeah, sure.” Came the replies from everyone with me. “Helllo! Anybody here?” “Here here here here…” came the echo. “What happened?! Where’s our leader?!” I heard voices coming from the end of the camp. “Your leader is gone. He left, and doesn’t want you to follow him.” I answered, flatly. “Well, then, can we follow you?” “Show yourselves and We’ll make that choice.” A black cat with white legs came out of the shadows, followed by a white cat with black legs. “Wha… Are you siblings?” Hiss asked with confusion. The black cat with white legs bowed his head and licked his chest fur, “Yes, we are. I’m Glass and this is Black. What happened?” Glass said, looking around the camp. “Well… I defeated your leader and now you can go with us or be chased away, like your leader.” Black perkes up when we tell them about their “Leader”. “He was never our leader, he was a coward who made others do his dirty work. The only reason cats followed him is because he had these HUGE bodyguards that killed anyone who disobeyed Fang, he was our leader. THANK YOU!!!“ Black is meowling with delight, like a little kit. “Do you want to come with us?” I ask, and Glass looks at me happily and says “Sure, if that’s okay with everyone else. We would be honored to join someone who is a good cat. Why didn’t you kill Fang?” “Because, I don’t kill, we don’t kill.” Moonpaw answers. “Are there others who don’t like him, and might want to come with us?” I ask. “Well.. Guys! It’s okay. Come out.” Two other cats came out from the shadows. “We hid when we saw you defeat Fang, knowing that he would make us come with him. I’m Thia, and this is Mexico, and these are FrenchFries, Lemon, and PeanutButter.” Thia, a tortoiseshell she cat, nodded to her kits, FrenchFries, a red tabby tom with a white underbelly and clouded over eyes, Lemon, a calico she cat with piercing violet eyes, and PeanutButter, a nervous, yellow tabby tom with big blue eyes. ‘’Is FrenchFries blind?” I ask. ‘Blind? What does that mean?” Lemon looks at me and answers her brother, “It means you can’t see. Right?” Again she looks at me with those piercing eyes. What does she want? I think. Out loud I say, “Yes, you are correct. Good job.” I see her eyes flicker with happiness. “I know a lot.” Lemon smiles. She’s around five moons old. The Voice tells me. Just two moons younger than you. Glass is just a moon older than you. You could be mates. Have kits. Find your way back to the Clan. The Voice tells me. Who are you? I ask The Voice. Now not the time for you to find out. But, go to the river and cross. You will find SkyClan. Just keep going, My daughter. “Guys let’s go across the river. Do you want to go to SkyClan with us?” Wait, did the Voice call me her daughter?! What the heck does that mean?! Windwisker’s my mom! We crossed the river and Redwood fell in!! “Tiger! You pushed me in!!” He screams through the water. I Shadowpaw dives in and grabs his scruff. She pulls him out of the water. And then, Shadowpaw lickes him dry. “You really should stay off the thin ice.” “How should I know where the thin ice is?!” Redwood exclaimes in annoyance. “Look for the fish, silly! If you can see the fish under the ice, then it’s not safe to step on that section of the ice.” “Wow! That’s smart!’’ It’s just a trick every kit in RiverClan knows.” 

Chapter 10

Not Again!

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(Help me)

Redwood hadn’t been acting normally around Black and I. I was starting to be getting worried. I could tell that Tiger could sense that I was worried. He kept on asking if I was okay. I told him every time that I was fine. He sat by me when I was helping cats that were hurt. Then Redwood came to see me because he said his paw hurt. I was getting the herbs to help with his paw. Then I heard Tiger meow a cry of pain. I saw Redwood biting Tiger’s ear. I ran over dropping the herbs because I knew that all Redwood came to do was to try to kill. I jumped on Redwood and pinned him to the ground. Then I jumped off and ran around the house with Tiger. I meet all the other cats in the front yard. Glass and Black went to the back yard with me to go see what was happening. I ordered Tiger to stay with the cats at the front. He gave me that look that he gave me when we were first captured with Tiger’s first Twoleg. The time right before I died for the first time. I don’t like to think about it. Any way the look meant. Are you going to be okay? I looked him in the eyes and said, “I will be fine. I have Glass and Black with me.” Tiger just nodded his head and turned around and said to all the cats,” No one go to the back yard! I repeat. No one go to the back yard!” I smiled and ran to join Glass and Black. Black raced over to me with fear in her eyes. “ Redwood isn’t who we thought he was…. He is a traitor! He tried to kill me!” “ He tried to kill me too.” I muttered this to myself. “ Where’s Glass?!” I asked this frantically. Black looked up at me with more fear in her eyes. “He is fighting Redwood isn’t he.” Black nodded she was very worried for her brother. I had Black show me where Glass and Redwood were fighting. Black and I sat on a branch hiden in a tree near the fight. Black told me that Glass told her to run and that she should never come back to the spot. Black was heart broken by leaving Glass. Black said that right before she left Glass she saw Redwood scratch Glass in the eye. She told me, “I just turned and ran. I couldn’t bear to see Glass being hurt so bad.” “I understand. I felt the same way about Tiger earlier today. But instead of me leaving Tiger I defended Tiger and then we ran together.” Black looked at me like I was mousebrained. “Is there something I am missing about you and Tiger?” Black caught me off guard. I nearly fell out of the tree. “NO. Nothing at all.” I was feeling a little embarrassed. I don’t know why though. I was keeping my eyes fixed on the battle between Redwood and Glass. The Glass fell on his back and looked like he was defeated. Redwood pounced on him and yelled, “ I am the……” He got cut off by Glass’s powerful legs hitting his stomach and sending him into a branch that was very sharp. He hit it and fell to the ground. His back was bleeding, bad. Black and I jumped out of the tree and Black and I raced to Glass. Glass’s ear was bleeding and so was his tail. After I was sure that Glass was all right I walked over to Redwood. Redwood had no movement and now life in him. I looked at the others and said, “ That is taken care of.” Glass looked at me and said, “ Do you have anything to help with my ear and my tail?” “Yep! Let’s go back to the house and get you fixed up.” We got back to camp and meet Tiger in the front yard. He saw Glass and said, “Where is Redwood?” Let’s just say now he is very red and he is in the woods.” Tiger blinked a few times, “Is he dead?” TIger sounded worried. “ Yes…” It was starting to get late and the Twoleg gave us all of our food and left us outside. She stopped letting us inside when I scratched the couch. I got Glass’s ear and tail covered with cobwebs and asked him, “Is your eye ok?” “I can’t see out of it at all…. So no?” I gave Glass a very serious look. “Did Redwood scratch it?” “Yes.” “ Let me make sure it isn’t infected. You don’t want to have an infected and blink eye!” I checked to make sure it wasn’t infected and it wasn’t. Then I was on night duty to watch over all the cats. It was nice because I didn’t have to worry about Redwood. That night someone came and put us in one box. I hadn’t slept for a long time, so I was very tired. I tried to stay awake but I found myself falling to sleep. I had a vision from Starclan. It was a map. A map of were we came from and where we were going and every place we had been taken. Also where Skyclan was. The opposite way from where we were going. This time I saw Leafstar. She said, “Don’t be discouraged. You will find a way.” Then I awoke and told all the cats about it. Most looked at me like I was mousebrained, but Tiger was the only one who looked almost proud. I wasn’t quite sure why he looked so proud. I remembered my mother and father and how proud they would probably be if they saw me now. I pushed this thought out of my head because now wasn’t the time to get emotional. I had different problems on my paws now. What did the map mean? How do I get all these cats away from the life of a kittypet? Also how do we get to Skyclan? For me, Glass, Black, Archpaw, and Shadowpaw it will be easy getting away from Twolegs, but for Hiss and Tiger it might be a little harder. “Starclan help us!” I heard Archpaw mutter to herself. She hated being in boxes. Archpaw found an opening in the box and we all crawled out. The door was wide open and we went the way we were coming from. We ran all night then came to a Twoleg walking. For some reason she had a net with her. She threw it on all of us and I went nuts! She put us in a plastic crate with a metal door. It was locked. We went to the Twoleg nest. There were ten kittypets there. They all were asking questions at the same time. “ Who are you?” “Why are you here?” “What type of cat or you?” “ Why do you not have a collar?” “ Why?” “Why?” “Why?” I lost track of the questions. I hissed at them, “ JUST BE QUITE!” All the cats stopped saying things and looked at me like I was mousebrained. EVen Tiger looked at me weird. I heard him whisper in my ear, “ Are you ok?” I just put my paw on his. He didn’t say anything for a while. THe Twoleg let us out of the crate and I went to find a place to sleep in peace. “ We will talk tomorrow.” I said walking away with Archpaw, Shadowpaw, Tiger, Hiss, Black, and Glass. Thia and Mexico were with us too with their kits. I was helping carry Lemon. Mexico had FrenchFries. Thia was carrying PeanutButter. The next day came. We met the other cats where they were the night before. “Hi” one of the cats said to me. “ You’re finally awake.” “ I let out a small hiss of annoyment. “ My name is Queen. I am in charge here so you can back off.” “ I think no. My name is Moonpaw. And I am a proud clan cat.” Queen looked at me like I was mousebrained. “Yeah you heard me. I am a clan clat.” “There  aren’t any clan cats around here. You must be mistaken.” Queen looked like she was a know it all. “We aren’t from here.” Tiger said in a stern voice. “Are you all clan cats or what?” Tiger looked at at Queen with an evil stare. “I am no clan cat.” Every cat that knew Tiger knew what he meant. I had to go between the two of them and whisper to Tiger, “We are trying to make friends here not enemies.” Tiger backed down. I introduced everyone to Queen. “This is Shadowpaw, Tiger Archpaw, Hiss, Black, Glass, Mexico, Thia, FenchFreis, Peanut Butter, and Lemon. Shadowpaw and Archpaw are clan cats as well. Tiger and Hiss are kittypets. Black, Glass, Mexico, Thia, Lemon, FrenchFries, and PeanutButter were forced to fight with the Rogues.” Queen responded, “ Nice to meet all of you. I should probably introduce everyone to you shouldnt I. This is Sally, Cream, Pumpkin, Smoky, Mystery, Courage,Peanut, Cally, and Princes. This is Mystery’s kitten Tinypaw. Mystery and Tinypaw claim that they were clan cats but we still don’t believe them.” Tinypaw came up to me and said, “ Are you a clan cat apprentice too?” I looked softly down at Tingpaw, “Yes, I am. So is Archpaw and Shadowpaw.” Tinypaw’s eyes got big with happiness that she had found another apprentice that was a kittypet. “Mystery..” Mystery looked up in surprise. “Yes.” “My I talk to you and Tinypaw alone?” Mystery nodded and walked with me grabbing her kit in her mouth. “Hey put me down!” Tinypaw squealed. Tiger ran up behind me and asked, “Can I come too?” I nodded not wanting to hurt Tiger’s feelings. We walked up stairs to where all the cats that had come with me had gone to sleep. When we got there the Twoleg was in there and picked me up and put me on the bed. Then she gave me a big hug. I didn’t enjoy being inside. I thought that it was cruel to cats. She let go and I went under the bed. Mystery, Tinypaw, and Tiger were already there. “Where were you clan cats at?” I asked. “Shadowclan” Tinypaw answered. She seemed sad and happy at the same time. “What was bad about Shadowclan?” Mystery looked at me like I was mousebrained.

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Here a story me and a friend made more to come soon

Frost is dancing with the blue and red lights and is getting ready for 2021 (Frostcrystal, I'm Frost)
Frost is dancing with the blue and red lights and is getting ready for 2021 (Frostcrystal, I'm Frost)
October 16, 2020 8:34 pm

Warriors High! New characters will be in this chapter! Chapter 5 (or six, lol i don’t know which chapter we’re on) here we go!

Normal pov:
Briar, Cindy, Leo, Jay, Ivy and Dove (Dovewing, this’ll be confusing so I’ll call dovewing Danielle sometimes) froze. “Hello?” We heard Faith. She sighed. “Ok, come out.” They sheepishly walked out, sitting down on a table. “What and why?” Briar asked, feeling hurt. “Ok,” Faith took a deep breath. “We’re spies, we’re here to steal the power point, don’t ask, we have to take it to the Cheetah, don’t ask again, and you know what else we’re gonna do, also I’m the boss of the group.” She narrowed her eyes. “Don’t ask questions.” Everyone nodded, taking it in. “Frost, why did you tell them?!” Shawn/Star hissed. “Because, they’re from warriors and we’re suppose to take the power point so Cheetah can use it for something bad!” Frost whispered. “Wait, Cheetah’s bad?” Sallie asked. “Yeah, she is, I heard her muttering her evil plan in her room.” Faith glanced at the six teenagers. “I guess our covers blown, don’t tell anyone or I’ll mot hesitate to track you down and kill you.” Frost eyes grew cold. “Err, yeah sure.” Everyone said. “Now, we’re going to stay here at Warrior cats I mean Warriors High, until I get further instruction, bye.” She walked away with her friends walking after her. “Well, we should stay out of there business.” Cindy commented as the group walked into school’s park. “Yeah..” They all agreed. “Cindy, Ivy, Dove!” A voice called.

DUDUDUDUDUDU Please welcome, SUMMER!! And its not my oc! It’s Rainy’s oc!!

“Summer!” Cindy hugged her clumsy friend. “Hey!” Ivy and Dove smiled. “Hi girls! Oh and hi Leo, Briar. A-and you, Jay!” Summer said Leo and Briar, but was looking at Jay. “So what’re you doing here?” Ivy asked. “Well, I was going home, actually! I have to walk Rocky (Rocky is her dog)!” She chirped. “Ok, well see you tomorrow.” Dove grinned. “Yeah! See you, Jay!” Summer blushed. “And you all.” She added, running to her car. Jay kept on walking as the others stare. “You do know that Summer has a crush on you, right?” Cindy teased. “Yeah, I know. I don’t like her that way.” Jay grumbled. “Mkay.” Everyone stared at him, doubt flickering in their gazes.

Jay’s pov:
I don’t like Summer. Is it so hard to take in? “Hey Briar, Leo, Ivy!” A blue-black haired teen, oh god no, Izzy…
An oc from Icepelt! “Hey!” ~ A mad Jay Oh sorry… “Wait aren’t you Faith?” ~A confused Jay Ummm, no! Uh I uh gotta go!
“Jay.” Izzy hissed. SOMEHOW she hates me, I don’t know why. “Hi guys, I gotta go! But hey!” She ran off, before, she gave a smile at Ivy. “She obviously loves you, Ivy.” Briar giggled. “Sorry, but I’m Brandon’s boyfriend (Breezepelt. Please no hate).” She shrugged. Good, I don’t want my cousin being in love with that b-
NO CURSE WORDS!!!! “I was going to say brat!” ~Jay *le sigh* She’s not a brat…
I run to my room, but before I got there I saw Hallie, with her long white hair. “H-hi Jay!” She stammered. “Hey.” I tried not to mess it up. “Um, so could you come to the dance with me? It’s ok if your going with Briar..” She looked down at her shoes. “No no, I’ll go to the dance with you.” I said. “O-oh ok!” She brightened up. “I’ll see you later!” She waved goodbye. I walk to my dorm and lay down on my bed, wondering why Hallie had said Briar. I shook my head and sighed, Hallie…

ARGHHHH THIS WAS SOOO SLOPPY!!! I’ll try to put other oc’s in tomorrow’s chapter!! Also, I hope I wrote your characters good. Sorry this was sloppy! Now I have to go! Frost, out!

♥️Dancing in the Rain/Raindance (Rainyyy)♥️
♥️Dancing in the Rain/Raindance (Rainyyy)♥️
October 16, 2020 10:46 pm

thanks for including summer!! I love her upbeat personality. I know that jay and summer won’t end up together, but can they still be friends? Also after summer gets rejected, i have a vision of her on her couch eating ice cream and watching sad romance movies. Last chapter, didn’t you write that Hallie had short white hair? 😛

Frost is dancing with the blue and red lights and is getting ready for 2021 (Frostcrystal, I'm Frost)
Frost is dancing with the blue and red lights and is getting ready for 2021 (Frostcrystal, I'm Frost)
October 16, 2020 10:55 pm

oh i did? Oops… Uhhh. I guess her hair could grow really fast…. So yeah, she has short white hair…. Anyway I’ll make Summer’s pov!

Icy Snowflakes Falling from Sky (Icepaw/pelt)
Icy Snowflakes Falling from Sky (Icepaw/pelt)
October 18, 2020 8:42 am

Aaa thanks for including Izzy 😀 <3

Frost is dancing with the blue and red lights and is getting ready for 2021 (Frostcrystal, I'm Frost)
Frost is dancing with the blue and red lights and is getting ready for 2021 (Frostcrystal, I'm Frost)
October 18, 2020 7:46 pm

no prob 🙂

Flamepaw/flower ~Flamey~ (she/her)
Flameflower
October 18, 2020 5:07 pm

This is amazing! I was inactive for a few days, so I missed a quite a few chapters so I’m kinda lost but great work!

Frost is dancing with the blue and red lights and is getting ready for 2021 (Frostcrystal, I'm Frost)
Frost is dancing with the blue and red lights and is getting ready for 2021 (Frostcrystal, I'm Frost)
October 18, 2020 7:47 pm
Reply to  Flameflower

Thanks ^^

Dawnstar(light)
Dawnstar(light)
October 17, 2020 3:26 am

I’m making a fanfiction on wattpad. Its called Surfstory’s calling. Also it was made by Dawnstar/Dawnstarpro so look for that, shes me.

Shinestorm
Shinestorm
October 17, 2020 5:29 am

hello all of you out there,
so i promised i would send the updated version of that blurb i posted earlier so here it is:

Chapter 8 gets less depressing :D
Shinepaw saw Pigeonpaw sharing with Hawkpaw, and when Skypaw joined them, Hawkpaw and Pigeonpaw looked at each other wearily.

Shinepaw purred in amusement and joined them.

“You two are closer than a burr on a fox,” Skypaw teased. 

Hawkpaw sniffed indignantly, while Pigeonpaw looked away, embarrassed. Shinepaw padded over to the apprentices’ den, and found Streampaw curled in a tight ball.

When Shinepaw emerged, Streampaw didn’t move a muscle, and kept on sleeping.

Shinepaw looked at his tired brother and left the apprentices’ den, joining Skypaw at a clump of ferns.

“I bet kits are coming soon,” Skypaw purred, flicking his tail at Hawkpaw and Pigeonpaw.

Shinepaw twitched his ears. “Speaking of kits, have you seen Nimblekit and Mistkit? They’re so cute!”

Skypaw nodded. “Lakeflight is protective of them.”

and one more thing: I am still accepting character for my book, here are the criteria:

  • Must be in either StormClan (the main clan), CloudClan, RainClan, or LightningClan
  • Must have gender
  • Once you submit your character, they will be born as a kit, and I will use the warrior name that you provide

Also here are my current added characters:

  • Nimblenight (currently he’s a kit)
  • Littlelight (not born yet)
  • Possibly Whisperheart (more criteria needed)

For Nimblenight, he (right now hes Nimblekit) has a sister called Mistkit, their mother is Lakeflight and their father is Cloudheart

Anyways thats the end of this long post
heres sum cookies since you read the whole thing 🍪🍪🍪

Shinestorm
Shinestorm
October 17, 2020 7:15 pm
Reply to  Shinestorm

crud i forgot to say that you need to also list your cat’s appearance

Mapledrift
Mapledrift
October 17, 2020 7:31 pm
Reply to  Shinestorm

I’ve got a character idea !!!
Name : Warblerkit / Warblerpaw / Warblerfoot
Gender : Genderqueer
Pronouns : se/hem/hes/hes/hemself and dae/daem/daer/daemself
Sexuality : Lesbian
Description : Se is a dark ginger cat with darker paws and a darker stripe down hes back. Se has bright green eyes and thick, fluffy fur
Clan : StormClan
Personality : Incredibly talkative, sometimes to the point of being annoying, is desperate for other cats to like hem, and will often go out of hes way to make other happy. Dae is very optimistic and has high hopes for the future

Shinestorm
Shinestorm
October 17, 2020 9:32 pm
Reply to  Mapledrift

Well, there arent any queer cats in warriors… Like could you do either male or female? (please no hate I just want it simpler, i have no hate towards LGBTQ)
Sorry, and I’ll probably get a lot of hate for this

I have no hate for and I respect LGBTQ, just to make it clear.

Birchfoot
Birchfoot
October 17, 2020 10:15 pm
Reply to  Shinestorm

Not Map but I’m gonna weigh in here 🙂

No, there aren’t any LGBT characters in warriors, but the point of fanfiction is to expand beyond the canon material, and it’s often a medium in which LGBT and other marginalized people can have themselves represented! I understand that there’s a lot of different identities, pronouns, and definitions within the LGBT+ community, and that it can be difficult to learn them all, but it’s still important to try to be inclusive and to educate yourself on the whole community, because these words can be really important to someone’s core sense of self^^

Shinestorm
Shinestorm
October 18, 2020 2:31 am
Reply to  Birchfoot

I understand what you’re implying
Just to clear things up even more, I will accept gay/lesbian cats, but just not, like, cats that don’t use he or she, to make things simple.
Also, since gay/lesbian cats can’t have kits, the only real way to indicate their affection is just to make them do a lot of things together, or just be afffectionate. Another thing is that since Shinestar is the main character, not many cats will be mentioned, so some characters might only be mentioned like 5 or 6 times.
Again, I have no disrespect or hate towards LGBTQ communities.

Birchfoot
Birchfoot
October 19, 2020 3:25 am
Reply to  Shinestorm

As someone who’s writing a genderfluid character in a story where a. it is not the primary focus of the story and b. it exists in a universe in which that specific language might not exist, it’s actually not too difficult to explain this! I had about one or two lines of dialogue where the character explained they weren’t female, but were fine with all pronouns, and it was really easy to work it into the conversation naturally 🙂 – there’s no lengthy discussion necessary, just a brief comment on the pronouns they use, and perhaps other signals that their experiences with gender might be more fluid. Something like: “Shinestar saw [someone] pass by on their way to [do something] and nodded to them” would alone indicate that this character could be nonbinary, without detracting from the main plot 🙂

The thing is, nonbinary and gender nonconforming people have always been a vital part of the LGBT community, and have existed for centuries before the modern gay rights movement. It isn’t possible, nor is it fair to pick which members of the LGBTQ community should be included and which cannot, especially since many LGBT people have overlapping identities and unique relations to gender as a concept. It can be invalidating to people with diverse experiences with gender to be limited to just male/female options. I can’t force you to write these characters, but I urge you to think closely about why you are resistant to the idea; being great a writer involves learning and stretching your writing abilities, so it’s always good to be expanding past your current views/experiences 🙂

Mapledrift
Mapledrift
October 18, 2020 4:14 pm
Reply to  Birchfoot

To add onto this, I am a nonbinary lesbian myself so when I create characters with my identity, I am often making them to reflect a part of myself that I never see in books or any form of media for that matter !!
Of course I understand that you don’t hate LGBTQ people, yet it’s just nice to have some diversity !! I’m happy to talk it through and discuss if you’d find any other pronouns easier to use for hem !!

Shinestorm
Shinestorm
October 18, 2020 7:09 pm
Reply to  Mapledrift

I could use they/them, if you wish!

Mapledrift
Mapledrift
October 18, 2020 8:09 pm
Reply to  Shinestorm

Yeah that’d be fine !! of course I’d refer some neopronoun use for this character (and it’s good to get used to neopronouns as multiple blogclanners including myself use them) but obviously if you aren’t confident enough using them to have a character who uses them that’s fine !!!
You can use they/them for Warblerkit 😀

Poppypaw/sky
Poppypaw/sky
October 17, 2020 11:30 pm
Reply to  Shinestorm

What other info do you need about Whisperheart? Sorry if I didn’t include everything.

Shinestorm
Shinestorm
October 18, 2020 1:43 am
Reply to  Poppypaw/sky

You just need to say exactly which Clan, I’m presuming StormClan?

Poppypaw/sky
Poppypaw/sky
October 18, 2020 4:29 am
Reply to  Shinestorm

Yep,Stormclan is the one I chose.

Shinestorm
Shinestorm
October 18, 2020 4:56 am
Reply to  Poppypaw/sky

okay!

Brightshine// Brightshine has no New Year's name
Brightshine// Brightshine has no New Year's name
October 18, 2020 1:58 am
Reply to  Shinestorm

Ooh, I’ll submit a cat! Brindlefire, a pale tabbly she-cat, of StormClan or CloudClan. If you need a personality, she is sassy, energetic, and happy.

Shinestorm
Shinestorm
October 18, 2020 8:38 pm

Okay, thanks!

Brightshine// Brightshine has no New Year's name
Brightshine// Brightshine has no New Year's name
October 17, 2020 6:57 pm

Hi! New here. I am working on a fan fiction that I might post. I’m not sure.

❄️🐍Viper In The Box; Worst Restaurant Chain🐍❄️
❄️🐍Viper In The Box; Worst Restaurant Chain🐍❄️
October 17, 2020 7:17 pm

that’s cool! share it anytime :3 we love seeing new stories <3

Brightshine// Brightshine has no New Year's name
Brightshine// Brightshine has no New Year's name
October 17, 2020 8:12 pm

Okay, posting a fanfic! It has no name (yet), and here is the descripition-ish thing:

In the forest, there are five clans.

LeafClan, The clan of the smart and loyal.

FlowerClan, The clan of the kind and honest.

BranchClan, the clan of the strong and brave.

GrassClan, The clan of the flexible and and calm.

and StreamClan, the clan of the quick- witted and bold.

For now, the clans live in peace. But that is because they are united in the face of a common threat: EagleClan. Each half-moon, EagleClan steals a clan kit and replaces it with one of their own, before vanishing into the shadows. Each half-moon, the clan leaders swear to stop them. And fail. But that is all about to change…

Prolouge coming soon! (hopefully) Hope someone likes it!

❄️🐍Viper In The Box; Worst Restaurant Chain🐍❄️
❄️🐍Viper In The Box; Worst Restaurant Chain🐍❄️
October 17, 2020 8:17 pm

Oh my gosh that sounds like a really cool story! I’ll be looking forward to the prologue :3

Brightshine// Brightshine has no New Year's name
Brightshine// Brightshine has no New Year's name
October 17, 2020 8:18 pm

Thank you!!!!!!

❄️🐍Viper In The Box; Worst Restaurant Chain🐍❄️
❄️🐍Viper In The Box; Worst Restaurant Chain🐍❄️
October 17, 2020 8:19 pm

;D

♥️Dancing in the Rain/Raindance (Rainyyy)♥️
♥️Dancing in the Rain/Raindance (Rainyyy)♥️
October 17, 2020 11:56 pm

i’ll love to read it!!

Brightshine// Brightshine has no New Year's name
Brightshine// Brightshine has no New Year's name
October 18, 2020 1:07 am

Gathering Shadows
Prologue
The she-cat slipped through the bushes, quiet as an owl. She narrowed her eyes as she saw her target: the StreamClan nursery. The small gray kit in her jaws fidgeted, and she drew her tail gently down its side, silencing it. The guard outside the nursery whipped his head around, but she was to fast. If he had been quicker, he might have caught a glimpse of the white blaze on her chest, the only giveaway on the she-cat’s otherwise black pelt, but she was already halfway across camp. She spotted an extra guard on the other side of camp. Inside, she laughed. I am Raven, the best Shadow in EagleClan, and you think an extra guard will stop me? She thought. The cat, now known as Raven, slipped into the nursery through an almost invisible hole, and looked around. From the moonlight spilling in through the den entrance, she could see two queens. The first, a silver and white cat, had no kits, so Raven fixed her attention on the other one, a cream she-cat. The queen had three kits squirming around her. Crow told me to take the one that would make the best Shadow, Raven thought. But none of them seem very good, she added to herself. The first was a golden tom. He would never do; his fur would gleam like a second Sun at night. The second was a calico she-cat. Better, but her white patches would catch the attention of even the most nearsighted cat. That left a silver tabby she-cat. For some reason her pelt reminded Raven of moonlight on snow. Pretty, but useless as a Shadow. 94- wait a minute, snow…. This kit would be perfect for Leafbare, when even the most intrepid Shadows were forced to hide away. I’m one swift motion, Raven bent down and exchanged the kit in her mouth for the kit in the nest. She crept quietly out of the nursery and stalked through the forest until she came to the edge of StreamClan territory. From here, she had to cross LeafClan territory before she could be safe. Raven took a deep breath and plunged into the undergrowth. She emerged face to face with an angry LeafClan warrior. Cold dread filled her from nose to tail-tip. I’ve been caught, she realized. Acting on pure adrenaline, she sliced the warrior across the face and raced away. Behind her she could hear the sounds of pursuit. Straining her ears, Raven realized she could make out the sounds of two individual sets of pawsteps.
“On StarClan, not another.” She muttered under her breath. Suddenly the ground disappeared from under Raven’s paws. She had fun right over a cliff! She plummeted down and felt the shock of cold water on her pelt. She had landed in a river. Before she had time to feel relief, Raven heard voices above her.
“That’s right, run away like a coward!” The first voice jeered. Raven unsheathed her claws. Just you wait until I’m not on a mission, she thought, then drew back. Why don’t they know I’m here? She wondered. The water is masking your scent, mouse- brain, she answered herself almost immediately.
“Let her go.” The second voice mewed. It’s not worth it. ”
“But what about the kit she was carrying?” The first voice asked.
“Not out clan. Not our problem. ” The second voice spoke again, although this time it had a trace of uncertainty. “We should get back. Hawthornstar will be wanting us.” Raven wondered who he was trying to convince, his companion or himself.
“Fine.” The first voice muttered. “But if it causes a war between us and StreamClan, it’s your problem, Turtle Foot.” The footsteps faded into the distance. Raven waited for a few minute, then slipped out of the river. Now that she could pay attention to her surroundings, Raven realized that she was on EagleClan territory. The kit in her jaws began to stir, and Raven began licking it to try to warm it up. The kit gazed around, wide- eyed. Well, get used to it, Raven thought. This is going to be your new home.

,………………
“My kit! They’ve taken my kit!” A screech suddenly woke Brookstar from her sleep.
” Rowan Stripe? ” she called, recognizing the queen’s desperate mew. “What is it?” Brookstar pushed her way through the nursery entrance.
” Those EagleClan monsters have taken my beautiful Willow Frost! ” Rowan Stripe choked out. “And left… This.” ‘ This’ was a small gray kit with matted fur. It looked horribly pathetic, and Brookstar couldn’t help feeling a twinge of pity. “Rowan Stripe.” Brookstar need gently. ” I know this kit will never replace Willow Frost, but she needs a mother. Will you take care of her? ”
“I, I…” Rowan Stripe’s resolve melted as she looked at the kit. She nodded. “I shall call her Gray Dawn for her gray pelt.” The queen mewed. She gently began licking the newly named Gray Dawn . “Little kit, welcome to your new home.”

So there it is, the prologue of my new fanfiction! Now that we have met some of the characters, which ones do you like? Which names do you like? Please comment!

♥️Dancing in the Rain/Raindance (Rainyyy)♥️
♥️Dancing in the Rain/Raindance (Rainyyy)♥️
October 18, 2020 10:07 pm

Willow Frost is a pretty namee

Brightshine// Brightshine has no New Year's name
Brightshine// Brightshine has no New Year's name
October 19, 2020 3:57 pm

Thanks!

Poppypaw/sky
Poppypaw/sky
October 17, 2020 11:34 pm

Ok so I have a story but I don’t know if I should post it on here.

It’s about all my rouge/loner characters and their lives outside of the clans I’ve made. I don’t know if that would be too hard to follow because it’s a whole new set of clans.

❄️🐍Viper In The Box; Worst Restaurant Chain🐍❄️
❄️🐍Viper In The Box; Worst Restaurant Chain🐍❄️
October 17, 2020 11:37 pm
Reply to  Poppypaw/sky

I feel like you can post it anyway! If people get confused, they could ask questions. :3

Poppypaw/sky
Poppypaw/sky
October 18, 2020 4:31 am

True…

♥️Dancing in the Rain/Raindance (Rainyyy)♥️
♥️Dancing in the Rain/Raindance (Rainyyy)♥️
October 17, 2020 11:56 pm
Reply to  Poppypaw/sky

i’ll read anything 😛

Frost is dancing with the blue and red lights and is getting ready for 2021 (Frostcrystal, I'm Frost)
Frost is dancing with the blue and red lights and is getting ready for 2021 (Frostcrystal, I'm Frost)
October 18, 2020 1:22 am

Warriors High! Wahoo!! This is a special chapter! A singing chapter (I’ll make more in the future). Anyway I love this fanfic and I think it’s the only one I haven’t given up on!

Briar singing Undo by Sanna Nielsen
Normal pov:
Briar trembled as a wave of memories crashing into her, quietly running out of the gym, she just saw Drake (her ex boyfriend, he’s not in Warriors High but he is in this chapter) kissing Adriana. No, he doesn’t love me anymore. Briar shook her head. She bit her tongue, ignoring the pain. Happy thoughts! She ran, skidding to a stop at the auditorium, she sat down on the stage, no one was here so she started singing. Her negative side showing.

“Silent, I can wait here silent, working up a storm inside my head. Nothing, I just stood for nothing, so I fell for everything you said. Hear my rumble, here my voice. Silent, I can’t wait here silent, gotta make a change and make some noise.” She paused then continued. “Undo my sad, undo what hurts so bad, undo my pain, gonna get out, through the rain. I know that I am over you, at last I know what I should do. Undo my sadness,” Briar didn’t know Cindy, Holly, and Leo standing outside the doors, listening.

“Oh, Briar..” Holly murmured. “Wow, she’s really…Um… Sad.” Leo said, awkwardly scratching the back of his head, he was awful at girl drama. “Duh, every girl is sad when her boyfriend cheats on her.” Cindy snapped. “I’m calling Jay.” Holly grabbed her phone. “I’m killing Drake. He’s the only guy who could make her like this.” Cindy’s face grew hard and ran to the gym, Leo running after her, trying to hold her back. “Jay, it happened. Yeah, it finally came out. Drake. She’s at the auditorium, singing. K, hurry.” Holly hung up, put her phone in her pocket, waiting for Jay. In three minutes he came. “Ok,” He glanced at the doors. “You can go, Holly. I got this.” Holly nodded and left, Jay’s grumpiness showing on his face disappeared and was replaced by sympathetic.

He opened the doors, making sure he wasn’t making a sound, he tiptoed to a chair far from the stage, sitting down, when Briar was in this mode (which she was rarely), she couldn’t focus on anything except what she’s doing. “Trouble, baby I’m in trouble, when I look into your eyes. Save me, oh I’m gonna save me, far away from all the crazy lies. Hear the rumble, hear my voice.. Undo my sad, undo what hurts so bad, undo my pain, gonna get out, through the rain. I know that I am over you, at last I know what I should do, undo my sadness….” She sang, sadly. Jay turned around to hear a creak coming from a small closet next to him, opening. “Hey, I heard Briar singing,” Faith appeared, her eyes a little puffy, which wasn’t surprising, Briar’s sad singing could make even Faith cry. “help her.” She whispered, running out of the room. ”

Briar,” Jay walked to her. She looked up, surprised, still gloomy. “I know you’re not okay with Drake being with someone else, even if you said you were.” Jay sat down next to her. “Yeah, I’m not.” She voice wobbly, then she burst. She lunged at Jay, crying into his shoulder. He let her, patting a hand on her back, she was like that for a few minuets. “Now snap out of that attitude.” Jay said, Briar pulling away from him. “O-okay,” She whispered. “I’ll try, I’m going back to my dorm,” She walked towards the door, then stopped. “and thanks, Jay.” She left, leaving Jay thinking, I’ll always be here Briar.

I think I’m literally gonna cry now, poor Briar… I’ll make chapter 6 tomorrow…

♥️Dancing in the Rain/Raindance (Rainyyy)♥️
♥️Dancing in the Rain/Raindance (Rainyyy)♥️
October 18, 2020 3:44 am

i don’t think i’ll ever get a boyfriend in high school since I’ll be studying every day and i can’t imagine crying over a guy at that age, but if my boyfriend cheats on me, I’ll probably be slumped on my bed listening to taylor swift, not singing songs in the auditorium since I suck at singing 😛 Also if I had a guy friend who fuzzing comes to me and comforts me like that, I’ll probably cry even more and then immediantly fall in love with him 😛 Honestly, Briar is quite lucky to have such good friends…

Frost is dancing with the blue and red lights and is getting ready for 2021 (Frostcrystal, I'm Frost)
Frost is dancing with the blue and red lights and is getting ready for 2021 (Frostcrystal, I'm Frost)
October 18, 2020 7:13 pm

yeah, Briar does have awesome friends, if my boyfriend (which I don’t have) cheated on me, I’d slapped him.

Bramblefire
Bramblefire
October 18, 2020 8:10 pm

Yeah uh, probably don’t do that. Cheating super sucks honestly and it’s really disheartening and breaks you but violence as revenge isn’t going to get anyone anywhere. It won’t change what happened.

Frost is dancing with the blue and red lights and is getting ready for 2021 (Frostcrystal, I'm Frost)
Frost is dancing with the blue and red lights and is getting ready for 2021 (Frostcrystal, I'm Frost)
October 18, 2020 8:45 pm
Reply to  Bramblefire

I know but at least I won’t feel that bad… but yeah I would probably just say whatever and go to starbucks

˜”*°•.˜”*°•Bee That Rests Near Golden Fire(Goldenbee) •°*”˜.•°*”˜
˜”*°•.˜”*°•(Goldenbee) •°*”˜.•°*”˜
October 18, 2020 5:45 pm

omg briar and jay are so wholesome ;w;

Frost is dancing with the blue and red lights and is getting ready for 2021 (Frostcrystal, I'm Frost)
Frost is dancing with the blue and red lights and is getting ready for 2021 (Frostcrystal, I'm Frost)
October 18, 2020 7:11 pm

yeah, they are 😀

Bramblefire
Bramblefire
October 18, 2020 8:21 pm

Nice story but I would like to point out that cheating isn’t “girl drama” and can affect people of all genders. It isn’t something exclusive to women and it can be problematic to phrase it this way because of it. It also isn’t just drama. It can cause a lot of anxiety and can be traumatic as well.”Drama” is a word that implies that it’s a little thing and can discount the severity of different situations involving cheating.

Frost is dancing with the blue and red lights and is getting ready for 2021 (Frostcrystal, I'm Frost)
Frost is dancing with the blue and red lights and is getting ready for 2021 (Frostcrystal, I'm Frost)
October 19, 2020 1:23 am
Reply to  Bramblefire

oh yeah.. But he is actually bad at what to say at a girl, but good point 🙂

Shinestorm
Shinestorm
October 18, 2020 1:55 am

Hi, I am having a vote on a cat (in SL) here
Anyways, this cat, a she-cat, is currently called Mistkit. She’s the sister of Nimblenight (also currently Nimblekit).
This is her description in the current allegiances:
pale gray she-cat with darker gray patches and blue eyes
Anyways, I’m gonna decide on her warrior name, and the following are the options:

  • Mistfur
  • Mistpelt
  • Mistbranch
  • Mistpool

Also I am open to more suggestions

♥️Dancing in the Rain/Raindance (Rainyyy)♥️
♥️Dancing in the Rain/Raindance (Rainyyy)♥️
October 18, 2020 2:43 am
Reply to  Shinestorm

mistbranch
mistshade? mistcloud? mistsky?

Shinestorm
Shinestorm
October 18, 2020 3:40 am

thanks for voting! and since suggestions are unlimited I cant use many of them lol

Bramblefire
Bramblefire
October 18, 2020 4:00 am
Reply to  Shinestorm

I like Mistpool or Mistbranch but here are a few other suggestions too

Mistdrizzle
Mistspirit
Mistcrystal
Misttrickle
Mistdapple

Flame of Streaky Autumn Leaves (Flamepaw/streak)
Flame of Streaky Autumn Leaves (Flamepaw/streak)
October 22, 2020 7:58 am
Reply to  Shinestorm

I like Mistpool 😀
My suggestions: Mistlight or Mistshine

Brightshine// Brightshine has no New Year's name
Brightshine// Brightshine has no New Year's name
October 18, 2020 1:56 am

Is anyone hosting a Fanfic contest? Just wondering…

Frost is dancing with the blue and red lights and is getting ready for 2021 (Frostcrystal, I'm Frost)
Frost is dancing with the blue and red lights and is getting ready for 2021 (Frostcrystal, I'm Frost)
October 18, 2020 2:19 am

Ooh that’s a good idea.. If there was, I’d insert one of my favorite fanfics

Brightshine// Brightshine has no New Year's name
Brightshine// Brightshine has no New Year's name
October 18, 2020 4:02 am

Now I want to host a Fanfic contest. So I will xD Anyways, the rule is it must be a one-shot. The prompt is: What would happen if the clans lost the Great Battle? (The DF one) You can go anywhere you want with this, just no excessive violence/gore/blood please. The deadline is November 5th but if you really need an extension you can have one. I am not really sure what the prizes are yet if anyone wants to volenteer that would be great! (Note: I just recently joined BlogClan but I had been reading the Fanfiction page for a while before I joined. So if this is not a thing anyone does anymore just let me know please)

Brightshine// Brightshine has no New Year's name
Brightshine// Brightshine has no New Year's name
October 18, 2020 4:34 pm

Okay so I just wanted to say that have been reading the fanfiction page on blogclan for a really long time and I was so excited to finally join yesterday that I went a little crazy and did everything, including hosting a fanfiction contest XD so mainly I just wanted to post this so hopefully every one doesn’t think I’m insane for hosting a fanfiction contest on my first day. Although maybe I still am😉I hope not.

Frost is dancing with the blue and red lights and is getting ready for 2021 (Frostcrystal, I'm Frost)
Frost is dancing with the blue and red lights and is getting ready for 2021 (Frostcrystal, I'm Frost)
October 18, 2020 7:10 pm

I’m going to host one too! Later though, cause I’m busy with Warriors High and Singing Stories…

Windstorm/paw
Windstorm/paw
October 20, 2020 8:18 pm

So, I want to do this, because I already have the beginning of something pretty close to this. HOWEVER, I am rewriting the great battle and the characters are slightly different in the story. I don’t know if this is allowed, can you please tell me?

Windstorm/paw
Windstorm/paw
October 21, 2020 1:27 pm
Reply to  Windstorm/paw

Oop, never mind, it wouldn’t be a one-shot

Frost is dancing with the blue and red lights and is getting ready for 2021 (Frostcrystal, I'm Frost)
Frost is dancing with the blue and red lights and is getting ready for 2021 (Frostcrystal, I'm Frost)
October 18, 2020 7:09 pm

Warriors High: Singing chapter!!
Briar singing Nothing Stopping Me Now by Vicetone

Normal pov:
Briar walked to the center of the stage. “Hi! So today, I’m going to sing, this song is for someone out there who I loved.” She started singing, staring at Drake. “Just when I realized, you been shutting me out. I start to reach for the sky and nothing’s falling down. Ooh. Everybody knows how the story goes, but fairy tales have been lying to me, every time I try, you just run and hide. Now I’m finally feeling free.” Briar sang,noticing Drake’s face, he was bored, but a little surprised she could sing, she was wearing a gray hoodie and black jeans, which in Drake’s case, was boring. Briar’s hair was in a loose ponytail.

“Tell me, can you see me now, while I rise above the crowd. Who would’ve known I’d make it out. Your broken world, no. You thought you tore me down. I’m not giving up now, you know. So tell me, can you see me now rising above? And nothing’s stopping me now. And nothing’s stopping me now. And nothing’s stopping me.” She could see Faith sitting down in one of the chairs on the back, she winked at her, getting ready.

“Now I know my feet. They won’t fail me now. So thanks for showing me. All that I am about. Everybody knows how the story goes. But, fairy tales have been lying to me. Every time I try, you just run and hide. Now I’m finally feeling free,” She smiled as Faith snapped her fingers, making Briar levitate in the air, Faith and her gangs have some sort of power (because they’re in the elements), Sallie, Petal (I forgot her real name so I used her code name), Genevieve, and Shawn made smoke lights, everyone gasped as she flew up, her blue eyes, gleaming.

“Tell me, can you see me now. While I rise above the crowd. Who would’ve known I’d make it out. Your broken world, no. You thought you tore me down. I’m not giving up now, you know. So tell me, can you see me now rising above, and nothing’s stopping me now.” Suddenly her hair turned into a flower bun and a waterfall braid (Sallie made it), her hoodie and jeans turned into a beautiful sky blue dress with a shiny diamond on her left and right sleeves, she had golden hoop earrings with black high heel ankle boots. She continued, grinning at Drake’s open mouth. “And nothing’s stopping me now. So, can you see me now? Oh. Can you see me now? Oh. Tell me, can you see me now. While I rise above the crowd. Who would’ve known I’d make it out. Your broken world, no. You thought you tore me down. I’m not giving up now, you know. So tell me, can you see me now, rising above and nothing’s stopping me now.”

She finished, smiled, flew down (obviously with the help of the gang) and walked behind the curtains, down the stairs, while everyone clapped. “You were great!” Holly squealed. “Amazing!” Cindy agreed. “Briar!” She turned around to see Ben and Britney (Bumblestripe and Blossomfall) “That was so cool! I never knew you could sing!” Ben laughed. “Hmm, it would be much better if I could kick Drake….” Britney stared at the brown-haired boy. “Yeah, let’s go.” Cindy growled, they both ran over to him. “Not again.” Leo and Ben groaned in unison, racing after them.

That was long! I love it! Anyway, I think this song was the perfect theme for Drake and Briar, BOO BRIAR X DRAKE!!

♥️Dancing in the Rain/Raindance (Rainyyy)♥️
♥️Dancing in the Rain/Raindance (Rainyyy)♥️
October 18, 2020 10:05 pm

take that drake!

Frost is dancing with the blue and red lights and is getting ready for 2021 (Frostcrystal, I'm Frost)
Frost is dancing with the blue and red lights and is getting ready for 2021 (Frostcrystal, I'm Frost)
October 18, 2020 11:42 pm

XD yeah

Moons that shine on a random cat's pelt (Moonpaw/pelt)
Moons that shine on a random cat's pelt (Moonpaw/pelt)
October 18, 2020 7:37 pm

Okay, posting story that might be continued to be posted. It’s called Orbstar’s Destiny, and it’s made by me and my brother, Mosterkit. So, hope you like it!:
Note: The reason why there is only six cats in HollowClan, is because the rest died from attacks
HollowClan
Leader: Viperstar 
Orange tabby she-cat with green eyes
(Orbkit’s mother)
Deputy: None
Medicine cat: Pebblewish 
Black tom with only one eye and the other is blind blue, and has battle scarred legs
Apprentice: Pebblepaw 
Warrior
Polarwing 
White she-cat with golden eyes and one black ear
(Winterkit’s mother)
Apprentices: 
Pebblepaw 
Large brown tom with amber eyes and big white paws
Kits
Orbkit 
Very blue blue-gray tom-kit with dark green eyes and a darker tail tip
Winterkit 
Dark brown tabby she-kit with large white markings that look like snowflakes and light blue eyes
Elders
None

Prologue:

Vipersight walked into the hollow where the Moonpool resided with Pebblewish at her side, limping as he walked with his battered legs. 
“Are you ready?” Pebblewish said, his raspy voice echoing in the still air. 
“Yes.” Vipersight replied, her mew still heavy with grief. The former leader of HollowClan, Bearstar, had died, and Vipersight was the new leader. 
Dipping their noses to the clean, cool water, the two cats laid down and fell asleep.

A bright light shined on Vipersight’s eyes, and she dared to open her eyes a tiny bit. With amazement, her green eyes flew open. She was in a clearing of a beautiful forest, surrounded by oak trees. But there was no StarClan, no kind, starlit cats waiting to give her nine lives. 
Vipersight.” The orange tabby she-cat whirled around and gasped. Eight cats stood behind her, with Bearstar at the front. His dark brown tabby fur was sleek and clean, his amber eyes bright. He looked calmer, and happier, better than he was, dying on the Thunderpath and killed by a monster. 
Bearstar blinked friendly at her. “Are you ready to receive your nine lives?”
“Yes.” 
“Okay. Your first life is mine to give.” He stepped forward and touched his large muzzle on the top of her head. A breathtaking wave of pain swept over her, but somehow, she stayed on her paws. “With this life, I give you faith. Darkness may claw at your borders, but with faith, you and your clan shall stay strong.”
After he pulled away, a feather-gray she-cat stepped forward. 
“You would not know me, young one, for I died long before you were born.” She explained. “With this life I give you pride. Never forget how much you have to be proud of.” She said, ending in a kind whisper.
Warmth seemed to glow in Vipersight, her chest feeling like it would burst with the happiness in her. When it disappeared, she felt a twinge of sadness. 
A tiny shape in the grass padded up to her, and her heart caught in her chest. It was Shimmerkit, the tiny orange kit that had been in Polorwing’s litter, Winterkit’s sister. 
“With this life I give you kindness.” Shimmerkit said in her tiny voice. Vipersight felt all her energy disappear, and her paws crumbled to the ground. She suddenly wanted to take a long nap. 
Was this how much effort you had to give to be kind? She wondered. 
A small cat stedded her, and she looked down to see a sleek raven-black tom, with nervous green eyes. After she stood up again, he began to speak. 
“I’m Ravenfern.” He said, and then she realized who he was. He was the elder that died the day she was born, her mother’s father. “I give you a life for caring.”
A fierce feeling streaked over her, and she remembered this feeling, which had never faded. She had felt it the day Orbkit had been born, the strong feeling of caring that bonded her to her kit, even after his father disappeared. 
“I give you a life for forgiveness.” An impatient voice sounded above her, and she looked up, meeting a gray she-cat’s large blue eyes. Pain streaked through her, like a stone cracking. It eased suddenly as the she-cat added. “Forgiveness shall give you more gifts than revenge will ever give.” She stepped back and a golden tom took her place. 
”Vipersight.” Vipersight nodded and he went on.”With this life, I give you hope. As long as hope burns in your heart, it will burn in the hearts of your clanmates and kin.”
Heat seared through Vipersight’s pelt. Flame seemed to burn through her fur like a forest fire, but she could flee. Her paws weighed like boulders. The tom broke away and the fire subsided.  
The tom walked away, and a black and snow-white she-cat padded up, her beautiful pelt sparkling with stars.”I am Sageshadow, once of HollowClan.” Her green eyes shined as she leaned close and touched her pink nose to Vipersight’s ginger head. “With this life I give you peace.” Vipersight felt the peacefulness of the night sky fill her until she thought she couldn’t hold anymore. 
Viperstight looked around at the rest of the cats. Who would give her ninth life? Was there even more to give?
A rusty ginger tom padded forward, with gleaming green eyes the same as Vipersight’s.

“Your mother is here.” Her father, Firefall murmured. His green eyes boarded into her’s, as if he could read her thoughts. “But I will give you your last life. With this life, I give you a life for trust, for trusting in all cats around you. Dark times are coming, daughter, and you must be ready, but it is not always the leader that holds the destiny of the clan.”
The nine cats lifted their heads and chanted her new name as HollowClan might have chanted a newly apprentice or warrior. “Viperstar, Viperstar!” 
Nine lives. The realization seemed to shake her whole body. I have nine lives. 
“Viperstar.” She looked at her father as his mew turned wise and raspy, almost sounding as if another cat was speaking his tongue. “There is something I need to tell, but to your kit:
Seek out the trail of the flames.
Take back the eye of the storm.
Only one can stop the fall of the clan.”
The sight of her father swirled around her, and her gaze turned dark, as if she closed her eyes. She felt a strong paw prod her, and she slowly woke up. Looking up, she saw Pebblewish above her. Without talking, they both started to head home, but as they did, she heard the raspy voice again, saying the last line of the prophecy.
“For thunder shall save the hollow.”

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