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  • Um… first few lyrics to a song about Storm.

    Very cringeworthy

    First draft. Not even.

    Literally notes. Like random stuff that popped into my head.

    100% original lyrics unless somehow I missed something

    Anyways

    Here goes…

    STORM

    I lost,
    I gave,
    I mourned,
    I cried

    There’s pain in knowing
    That you tried.

    A loss,
    A fail,
    A tear as you cry

    My parents left with no goodbye.

    K

    Cringe

    Not even a first draft…

    I literally just thought of these

    Btw it might sound weird with different tunes….

    Ok
    Bye

    Yeah sorry I’m super embarrassed about sharing that. 🤗

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  • Try to guess
    (Why not 😛 )
    –
    I remember
    When I was afraid
    Of almost everything,
    But until this day

    I’ve never realized
    How much I mean to you
    I thought we were just close
    Didn’t think we would be two

    Of the same
    Linked together
    Like peas in a pod
    Like birds of a feather

    We share fears,
    We share sadness,
    We share with no one else
    How our lives are madness

    I told you my story
    And you told me yours
    We grew together,
    And I imagined moors

    Rolling hills and
    Leafless trees and
    Dawn to dusk
    You spend with me

    I keep them far
    Away from foes
    But oh, honey,
    Now I have to go.
    –
    Ook
    That
    Is a huuuuuge hint
    I think
    Well
    THE ANSWER TO “WHO IS THIS POEM WRITTEN BY” goes toooooooo
    Eclipse
    Because
    Why not

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  • Ok this is is PALm’s level 2-3

    Palm lay silently on the floor, his earring heavy, thoughts clouding his mind. He closed his eyes tight, squinting away the tears.
    Slowly and quietly, he began to sing.
    “I close my eyes and I can see, the world that waiting up for me.”
    He opened his eyes, his friends spirits gathering round him, solemn and silent, in the darkness. Palm let the sparks out of his paws and began to play with them, as they danced and twirled round and round in the night, he smiled.
    “That I call my own.”
    He looked down at his paws the silence of the spirits prompting him to continue playing with his powers.
    Out of the electricity, he formed a small vaguely cat shaped creature, and made it dance around his paws, as he twirled and span with it, he laughed.
    “Through the dark, though the door, through where no ones been before !”
    He laughed as he chafed the sparks, knowing he could never catch them but he didn’t care
    “But it feels like home.”
    He smiled at the moon, suddenly feeling very tired and alone, the silent white forms watching him, as he stumbled.
    His power had drained him and he collapsed on the ground, tears running down his cheeks, Why was he so weak so different ?
    Then slowly but surely, a bright ginger she cat padded towards him, her spirit smiling at him
    “They can say, they can say it all sounds crazy.”
    She brushed her tail down his back and then two more cats padded forwards, Kinkaroy and Harminbal.
    In unison they sung
    “They can say, they can say you’ve lost your mind” their voices were eerie in the darkness but Palm didn’t care, they were with him.
    A figure tinier than Palm headed towards him, and this time, the ginger and sandy coloured tom felt tears of joy flood down his fur.
    “Cobra !”
    “Daddy can you sing with me ?” The tiny tom mewed, puffing up with star flecked neck fur and smiling, his long tooth pocking out over his jaw.
    “I don’t care, I don’t care, so call me crazy.” Cobra’s tiny kit voice was just as loud as Palm’s as they sang together. Mirage came next nudging him up with her small muzzle
    “We can live in a world that we design !”
    He was up on his feet again, sparks around his paws, running with the darkness and the spirits of his past
    “Every night I lie in bed, the brightest colours fill my head, a million dreams are keeping me awake. I think of what the world could be.”
    His tiny electric cat was at his paws again as he ran along side the cats of his past, happy to brush pelts with them again.
    “A vision of the one I see, a million dreams is all it’s gonna take. A million dreams for the world we’re gonna make.
    Palm watched as Cobra chased the electric cat, and changed it from a cat to a lizard, then a mouse, then a bird then back to a cat again.
    As he started to tire, Lmanamly lay her paw on his and new strength flooded through him. He could master this power. He could help save lives.
    “There’s a house we can build, every room inside is filled, with things from far away. The special things, I compile, each one here to make you smile on a rainy day”
    Palm looked round and smiled at all the cats, before a tear brimmed in his eyes. Again Diamond wasn’t here, had he forgotten Palm ?
    “They can say, they can say it all sounds crazy, they can say they can say we’ve lost our minds.”
    He thought of the she cat who had glared at him disdainfully and walked away after he had helped her. He thought of the she cat who refused to believe in her power, and the ghosts that seemed to lay behind her eyes.
    His voice sounded more broken now but he kept singing, and changed the tiny cat to a miniature figure of Diamond
    “I don’t care, I don’t care so call us crazy. Runaway to a world that we designed.”
    He cried up to the sky, as the stars twinkled brightly, seeming to call his friends back to wherever they came from, taking them from him.
    Quixgee looked at him sadly as one by one cats started to disappear back into the stars.
    “Every night I lie in bed, the brightest colours fill my head. A million dreams are keeping me awake. I think of what the world could be.”
    Cats left until the only ones who remained were Quixgee and Cobra.
    Cobra coughed and then started singing, his body slowly fading as he was drawn back to the stars.
    “A vision of the one I see.” He batted one last time at the electric sparks before vanishing into the night.
    Palm was so tired now, so exhausted. His bones ached his head hurt and he just wanted to sleep. But Quixgee remained and he would not rest until she left him.
    “A million dreams is all it’s gonna take.”
    She whispered in his ear, and placed her paw gently on his, and he slowly closed his eyes and fell asleep, as she left him to go after the other spirits.
    Palm awoke later, his sparks gone but the memory still vivid.
    “A million dreams for the world we’re gonna make.”
    He stood up proud of what he could do.
    He would save the cats, he would do all it would take to help them.
    And maybe even keep a friend while he was at it.

    Tell me if it isn’t 200 words

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  • Time for Marina’s well-deserved level up! Storm will follow once she’s gotten her chance to help in this test.

    ~ ~ ~ ~ ~

    Marina was floating.

    She realized it, even though her eyelids hooded her eyes. A light feeling had overcome her, and she felt like a soft bird’s feather.

    What was happening? The last thing she remembered was seeing an absolutely huge wave of water – the one that she, of all cats, had created – slosh into the three buckets before the fuzzy figures of Stormy and Quintessa appeared as she faded into a soft black…

    But somehow, she was here. She could feel if in her bones, she didn’t need her eyes. She knew where she was. She’s never been here before, but all the same, she knew.

    This was the heavenly world her mother and father had sought after – and received. She had only seem them in dreams after that.

    Slowly, she flipped around so that she was standing in midair. Very gently, she landed. Her eyes fluttered open.

    It was picturesque, to put it frankly. It was magical, to put it dreamily. It was a place that her parents would have wanted, and you would know if you knew them.

    Soft green hills rolled into one another, fading into the distance, their outlines slightly blurred. Low-hanging clouds wafted in front of them, the only things breaking the beautiful blue sky.

    The sky was the color of her sister’s eyes. It was the type of blue that you could get lost in for hours and then still feel like you had merely scratched the surface of the wonders in that one shade of blue.

    A large mirror of silver water was the center of the masterpiece, though. It twinkled, glimmered, sparkled, and danced in front of her eyes, the silver liquid almost…. teasing her.

    And then there was the grass. Soft to touch, cool on her paws, and a beautiful, brilliant fresh green. She smiled as the scents if herbs wafted into her nose, the scents coming from all around her. Oh yes, definitely a parent trademark – at least, for her parents.

    There was more – the trees, the tunnels, the jeweled flowers, the prey, the little hidden areas, perfect for sunbathing, and the caves scattered throughout this little land. She could go on, she definitely could, for hours and hours, gushing about the natural wonders.

    And she would have, most definitely, had it not been for a silver pelt, a warm touch, and two almost-forgotten scents.

    Marina could have cried with joy. Instead, she called to them. “Mom! Dad!”

    “My little ‘Rina.” her dad gushed happily, nuzzling her face.

    “Mari,” her mom laughed happily, pressing her pelt against Marina’s.

    “You haven’t visited me in ages! I can’t believe that I’ve finally seen your home.” Marina purred.

    “We couldn’t visit. Harbor forbids visits without good reason during the Tests. The only way for you to see us is if you summon yourself to us. You just did.” her mother explained.

    “The Tests have been..” Marina shuddered, thinking about all of the terrible things.

    Her father rested his tail on her shoulder. “We know.”

    “You need to stay strong, you hear us?” Her mom whispered. “Don’t break for anything and anyone but your sister. It is the only way.”

    “To what?”

    “To staying.” her dad cut in quietly.

    “W-we only did it to see you again. We wanted to live together again…” Marina mewed sadly.

    “I know honey, I know. And your dad and I will do everything we can to help you – which isn’t very much, but hopefully enough.” her mom replied.

    “How DO I summon myself to you?” Marina asked.

    “It can only happen when you need us. Need, not want. It can only happen if your mine is clear. And it can only happen if Harbor lets you pass.” her mother replied once again.

    “That’s… not very helpful.” Marina joked cheerfully.

    “Hey, ‘Rina,” her dad mewed, his face serious as he faced her. “Hope will be your biggest helper. Never lose it. We WILL be together. And let your sister know that too.”

    “Yeah.. I will, daddy.” Marina purred, using her most affectionate name for her father.

    “We gotta go now. You gotta return soon. Remember that we love ya.” her dad mewed.

    “We will come if you need us.” her mom assured.

    “I love you two.” Marina whispered sadly.

    “And that was some awesome wave,” her dad purred. “You keep exploring those powers you got from me, alright? Maybe if you come again I can show you a thing or two to keep you from passing out.”

    “Alright, dad. I will.”

    “Bye Mari. Tell Storm that we love her.” her mom whispered.

    “I will.”

    “And… remember… hope!” came the faded news of her parents as she slowly faded into a blinding whiteness.

    The contrast of the peaceful black that had came when she arrived in her parents’ world.

    Mom… dad… please help us. Stormy and I. We can’t finish this without you. she thought.

    Words engulfed her mind, faint yet audible as the whiteness overtook her.

    We will. Stay strong, Marina… We will be together.

    There’s love connecting you, your sister, and the two of us, and never forget that, because that’s a rope that won’t be broken.

    We love you two so much…

    As feeling began to return, as the cool of an icy paw began to bring her back to the normal world, she engraved that in her mind.

    Love.

    Marina’s eyes opened to a bright light and two faces – one white, a little familiar, and one that she loved.

    Her sister’s.

    “H-hey.” she croaked.

    ~ ~ ~ ~ ~

    So that ends my little story, I believe that it’s longer than 200 words. So level three for my little black water girl!

    Anyways, I hope that you enjoyed it, I was under a bit of a rush while writing it.

    I just wrote this off of what I imagine the gods living as… so basically each has his/her own land that they can either share with family or just have their own with visitors. They will occasionally gather if Harbor calls. They can watch over the living world like StarClan and have two forms – normal cat and god/goddess form. Sorry if that’s incorrect, but I wrote my story according to that.

    In case you’re interested, the names of Marina and Storm’s parents are Sylver Lily and Orion.

    Sylver Lily is a silver she-cat, which is where Storm gets her unusual silver sheen from. She also gives Storm her blue eyes, although Storm’s are more brilliantly colored. She also gives Marina the bluish tint in her eyes.

    Orion is a black tom, and both sister’s have black pelts like him. However, Marina’s fur also has his thickness while Storm’s fur length is like her mother’s – long and slightly silky. Marina gets the green base of her eyes from her father. who has green eyes.

    I might have more to add on but that’s it for now! Please leave a reply to this with feedback/thoughts. 🙂

    ~ Sky out

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    • Yep gods have two forms, sometimes gods can change their god form, like Harnor used to be bright yellow before Diamond left a blood red scar on him, so to not show weakness Harnor turned blood red

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  • Heres me trying to write a song ! If it fails I’ll call it a poem

    Ami :
    No, no no no
    This isn’t real
    This is a lie,

    You can’t be dead
    You can’t be gone
    I can’t let you go

    Maybe I’m wrong
    My mind is not sound
    I’m having hallucinations
    Maybe it’s not you still on the ground

    Am I dreaming
    Is this all a lie

    I came here to save you
    And now you’re gone
    I don’t know what to do
    Should I stay or should I go
    I’ve lost my whole life along with you

    Your last breath
    Your final words
    Smashed the memories and dreams we shared

    I don’t know what’s real anymore
    My family tree, my ancestory
    Is ripped and fake, it was all a lie

    True and false are switching sides
    My heart is broken, my mind is tied
    What do I believe and what is wrong
    I don’t know anymore everything seems fake

    Am I dreaming ?
    Is this all a lie ?

    I came here to save you
    And now you’re gone
    I don’t know what to do
    Should I stay or should I go
    I’ve lost my whole life along with you

    I could have prevented this,
    I didn’t have to watch you die
    If only I’d seen the signs

    I should have known
    I should have seen
    Why did I let you die ?

    She’s smart they say
    Well you got two things wrong
    I’m not a girl,
    And I I couldn’t see you were sick all along

    Am I dreaming ?
    Is this all a lie ?

    I came here to save you
    And now you’re gone
    I don’t know what to do
    Should I stay or should I go
    I’ve lost my whole life along with you

    Iciclefur :

    Why did I go with her
    Why did I play along
    Pretend that all was ok
    When my whole gut said it was wrong

    I betrayed her trust
    She thought I was her father
    But I didn’t stop, didn’t correct
    I was so selfish to my ‘daughter’

    Is she gone
    Is her mind broken
    Why did I think she could handle the truth
    I should have known it would break her

    She will mourn, I know
    But will she trust again
    Will she ever believe
    In honesty and faith

    Sickness clouded my mind
    Why did I have to die
    At this time in her life
    She needed my lies

    Is she gone
    Is her mind broken
    Why did I think she could handle the truth
    I should have known it would break her

    I let it go to far
    I let her trust me so
    This is all my fault
    I have to do something

    I’ll go to Harnor,
    Beg him to fix her mind
    I don’t care about the cost
    I just want her to be happy

    Is she gone
    Is her mind broken
    Why did I think she could handle the truth
    I should have known it would break her

    Harnor :
    He wants me to help her
    He wants me to change her mind

    But I will not
    I shall not,
    Her mind is too far gone

    She will trust one day
    Yet it is out of my control,
    When that day will come
    Or what events will unfold.

    What he does not see
    Is that she won’t believe in me
    Not now not ever
    So I have to leave her be

    I can’t reach out to her,
    Can’t make him pay the cost
    Can’t cause more pain
    So it’s my loss.

    I could have taken his soul
    I could have made him scream
    But instead I am stuck here,
    Unable to change fate

    Why won’t she believe in me
    After the gifts I’ve given
    Why won’t she let me control
    What’s going on inside her

    She’s seen things
    And they have come true
    Yet when the time comes the only spirt she will believe in
    Is you.

    Ok so here is a poem (it’s not a song) about Ami, starring Iciclefur and Harnor

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  • Five Chatacters, Five stories
    A poem
    –
    (Heidi)
    My sister left for you
    She wanted to see the world
    Iyda was very beautiful
    With tabby stripes whorled
    She was snappy and rude
    Though I saw her every day
    So I got used to it and loved her
    Though be snappy she may
    When she left to find you all
    I couldn’t help but worry
    When she didn’t return
    I left in a hurry
    I found you all instead,
    And I am happy here
    Though battle is on every side
    I have yet to shed a tear

    (Black Bird)
    She left me, she hurt me
    She threw me to the ground
    But if I had done the same to her
    She wouldn’t make a sound
    She prefered him over me
    And I couldn’t help but wonder
    When I attacked her, why?
    And that turned my cries to thunder
    I hurt her, I hurt her!
    Oh I wish I could go back!
    Wish I had never followed her on the trip
    Wish I had never done that track

    (Eclipse)
    I know my future
    Though my powers don’t
    I can’t visually see it
    But I know in my heart
    I met him and knew
    That we would be together
    A future with more than just us
    I almost feel like Feather
    I don’t want to kill anyone though
    Only one part I relate to
    I’ll save myself from the embarasment
    If telling him I do

    (Pebble)
    My mama died when I was young
    And I only had my brothers
    My father loved me more, though
    But I wish I had my mother
    I was pushed across cut rock and dirt
    Cutting up my paws
    I like the scars, they make me though
    And I never think they’re flaws
    I won’t leave her, I love her
    I really think she’s great
    Not sure if she thinks the same of me
    But to her I won’t bait.

    (Rattlesnake) (Last one)
    I lived next to a dessert
    And was named for my curly tail-tip
    But now I’m different, I have fire powers
    And I feel like I might flip
    This one thing will destroy me
    Nothing else ever could
    Than being forced to remember
    And I don’t feel so good
    I’m going to kill everyone!
    Why not wait for it to happen!
    Its paranoia that makes me go crazy
    Like a bird, you can hear is flapping

    Oh my gosh
    I can’t
    Here’s one for me
    –
    (Jazzy)
    More characters I love this
    This roleplay is great
    I’m crying, I’m killing
    And this stanza won’t rhyme.

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  • https://blogclan-2.wikia.com/wiki/User_blog:Brook_That_Reflects_Blue_Skies/Eclipse_and_Black_Bird/Tests_drawings
    Jaoien’s 1-2 level up, Eclipse’s 2-3 level up!

    –
    Pebbles/Not Written in Stone
    Pebble’s 2-3 level up
    –
    I looked around the cats and then at the water. I closed my eyes and thought, happy, happy, happy means bubbles, sad means ripples, mad means poison liquid, jealous means fog.
    My closed eyes burst with color, and the flashback begun.

    I pressed closer into Boulder. My other brothers would just tease me if I lost this race, but Boulder was slow so he would stand up for me. I look across the barren, rock-covered landscape father told us to run across. I looked at Father, who nodded.
    “GO!” He yelled. I sprinted across, taking lead and gaining ground. My three brothers were behind me, my father keeping up behind all of us.
    The sharp rocks tore at my pads, and dirt flew up behind me. After about fifty heartbeats, i only slow down a bit. I was almost half way there. And Stone was getting closer! As the old twisted willow tree came into view, Rock got in front of me, but only by a hair. So, as we were in the last few yards, I pukled ahead.
    I had won! I won the race, I won!

    And then I opened my eyes,and a cat-sized wave of water had gone into the bucket.
    –
    204 words! I did it! She tested her powers as much as she could, without hurting herself. I thinnnnnnk this counts?

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  • Here is my daily post on songs!
    Also, Maple can Tawny be on level two now? Do you need to tell us after we’ve posted our thing? Or do we just level up after we’ve posted it?

    Well, I know Maplepaw posted this song already, but it’s epic for . . .
    Weather – Tawny x Thunder
    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y_-Q1EC76Wg

    Uh, idk. Probably Mei x Eclipse
    Freeze your brain – Mei x Eclipse
    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GAOxJv96VE8

    I can’t think of any other ones. Sorry.

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    • They all fit so well !!
      I would just like to say, Deather is now in the running’s for canon Dune ships
      Just to build some suspense here, the options at the moment are Duana Deather and Dunessa.
      But I’m not going to reveal which is canon for a while, becuase it’s kinda funny to see people’s view on it all

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  • We should all make a page for our characters on the Wiki 😛 😉
    No seriously.
    I haven’t been posting songs for ages! Now I am here to do more . . .!

    AHHH I LOVE THIS SONG SO MUCH NOW A CAT HAS THE PERMISSION TO HAVE IT!
    Monsters – Quintessa
    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h99O6bi7Grw
    ❤️❤️❤️

    Yep I’m sorry.
    But uh,
    Tears to shed – Idk, probably . . . uh, this is Feather. But Dune doesn’t love anyone except from Feather. Oh well, Luana is a character. Yup, sorry Lu
    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aI872tnmH6c

    I no think of any others, but uh, I love this song sp much, so uh,
    If anyone can think what cat’s theme song this should be,
    Taboo – ???
    I thought maybe just the tests in general?
    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vGJFdb1PhC0
    ❤️❤️❤️

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    • Ivykit / Cinnakit, in roleplays I am Tawny, Clover, Primrose, Diamond, Luca, Crystal and Rosica ( Росика ) says:

      Nu Taboo is like, perfect for my little Rosica!

      ❤️❤️❤️

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