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I have a question how do you get one??????????????
Get what?
Sunny has a youtube video on it.
Claimed (thank you Sky!)
Anytime! 🙂
Okay, here we go. Frosto’s gonna do a Blogfic! 😛
Falling Sparks (I’ll probably change the title) (a cross between Warriors and WoF – no spoilers are on this page) (kind of like the WeirdClan roleplay)
In the time before humans,
There were dragons.
Clans of them.
FireClan, AirClan, EarthClan, WaterClan, NatureClan, IceClan, LightClan, and DarkClan.
Each Clan has its own powers and element. Queens (leaders) have the -fire suffix. Heirs (queen’s children; deputies) have the -scale suffix. Healers (medicine cats) have the -leaf suffix. Warriors have the -wing suffix. Apprentices have the -paw suffix. Dragonets (kits) have the -tail suffix. Mothers (cats expecting or hatching dragonets) have the -flower suffix. Elders have the -flight suffix.
But then there are others.
There is a prophecy:
In the time of dire need
They will come.
Clan and Clan
Shall mix elements
Using the unknown.
Danger awaits,
Fierce talons that kill,
For any dragon born
With half-Clan traits.
Find the four,
Each will be mixed.
Fire, air, earth, water, nature, ice, light, and dark,
Each one will be two of these.
The war is coming on a bloody shore.
Find the four
And they will save you.
For with light comes darkness,
Hope comes gore,
Happiness comes grief,
Gain comes loss.
Because without them,
The flame, the breeze, the rock, the wave, the frost, the sun, the moon, the leaf,
Everything will be gone.
Yay. CRINGINESS.
Okay, here’s the list of important Clan dragons.
FIRECLAN
Queen
Brightfire
Heir
Flamescale
Healer
Ashleaf
AIRCLAN
Queen
Cloudfire
Heir
Breezescale
Healer
Grayleaf
EARTHCLAN
Queen
Rockfire
Heir
Tunnelscale
Healer
Mudleaf
WATERCLAN
Queen
Aquafire
Heir
Sapphirescale
Healer
Oceanleaf
NATURECLAN
Queen
Greenfire
Heir
Ivyscale
Healer
Vineleaf
ICECLAN
Queen
Crystalfire
Heir
Frozenscale
Healer
Snowleaf
LIGHTCLAN
Queen
Sunfire
Heir
Brightscale
DARKCLAN
Queen
Shadowfire
Heir
Acidscale
Healer
Nightleaf
Now, here’s the description, abilities, queen, enemy (opposing Clan that deals a lot of damage to that Clan), and alliance of each Clan’s dragons (from the WoF front pages)
FIRECLAN
Description: http://monster.wikia.com/wiki/Dragon?file=DragonRed.jpg
Abilities: can create rings of fire, can make fire shields, can go a long time without water, can breathe fire, can catch on fire
Queen: Queen Brightfire
Enemy: IceClan
Alliance: fights alongside AirClan, NatureClan, and LightClan in the war
AIRCLAN
Description: https://www.deviantart.com/amisgaudi/art/Blue-Dragon-138136026
Abilities: can make tornados, can make voids, can turn invisible, can fly without the use of wings, can make powerful ripples of air that knock other Clan dragons out of the sky
Queen: Queen Cloudfire
Enemy: EarthClan
Alliance: fights alongside FireClan, NatureClan, and LightClan in the war
EARTHCLAN
Description: https://www.ancient-origins.net/sites/default/files/field/image/Dragons_0.jpg
Abilities: can make earthquakes, can trap dragons underground, can move the ground into any shape, can make rocks shoot out of the ground and stab dragons
Queen: Queen Rockfire
Enemy: AirClan
Alliance: fights alongside WaterClan, IceClan, and DarkClan in the war
WATERCLAN
Description: http://narutofanon.wikia.com/wiki/Dragons_(AlmightySavage)?file=WDragon.jpg
Abilities: can make huge waves, can breathe underwater, can “breathe water” instead of fire, can drown dragons
Queen: Queen Aquafire
Enemy: NatureClan
Alliance: fights alongside EarthClan, IceClan, and DarkClan in the war
NATURECLAN
Description: http://jonvilma.com/image-post/372-dragon-18.jpg.html
Abilities: can grow things, can hypnotise dragons, can make a plant forcefield
Queen: Queen Greenfire
Enemy: WaterClan
Alliance: fights alongside FireClan, AirClan, and LightClan in the war
ICECLAN
Description: https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/dragon-story/images/3/35/C9bbb64405474daf7902e0735c02894c-d9tkxf6.png.jpg/revision/latest?cb=20160601090514
Abilities: can freeze things, can make the air cold, can turn their claws into icicles
Queen: Queen Crystalfire
Enemy: FireClan
Alliance: fights alongside EarthClan, WaterClan, and DarkClan in the war
LIGHTCLAN
Description: https://i.pinimg.com/originals/4c/e8/99/4ce89953614df6607ea8ba5610a4b9bd.jpg
Abilities: can time-travel, can temporarily or permanently blind dragons, can make light shields
Queen: Queen Brightfire
Enemy: DarkClan
Alliance: fights alongside FireClan, AirClan, and NatureClan in the war
DARKCLAN
Appearance: http://animal-dream.com/data_images/dragon/dragon2.html
Abilities: can posses dragons, can shoot a deadly mist that instantly kills, can blend into shadows, has night vision, can read minds, give prophicies
Queen: Queen Shadowfire
Enemy: LightClan
Alliance: fights alongside EarthClan, WaterClan, and IceClan in the war
There’s that. Now, here’s a quick explination of things.
Six years ago, Queen Shadowfire came to power. She wanted all of the Clans’ territory and began to posses the Clan dragons. Shadowfire formed an alliance with Queen Crystalfire and IceClan. Shadowfire promised the IceClan queen half of the territory if they took over the Clans. WaterClan and EarthClan joined them out of fear. FireClan, AirClan, NatureClan, and LightClan fought back, marking the beginning of the Dark War.
During this time, four dragons met in secret with another dragon from an enemy Clan. They believed that if they mixed their powers with enemies, their children would be even stronger. However, only one egg survived from each mother, and Shadowfire kidnapped these eggs as soon as she knew about them. Now, the four dragons must escape and help Shadowfire’s enemies win the Dark War.
I need some BlogClanners’ help to write the story. The first three people to sign up get to make a dragon in the prophecy. The dragon has to have opposing Clan elements. Their name also must relate to one of their elements, or a combination of both.
Here’s the form (the prophecy dragons are six years old and are apprentices) :
Dragon Name:
Elements:
Description:
Combined Power:
Personality:
Here’s my example:
Name: Frostpaw
Elements: fire and ice
Description: FireClan dragon body; IceClan dragon scales; IceClan dragon eyes
Combined Power: can make cold fire, can make hot snow
Personality: stubborn, brave, quick thinker, kind, irratable, can be annoying
Icy may be doing it, and Ivy(kit, not flight) is doing it. So there are two things available at most! (But you can still join after the spots are filled up.)
Here are the available powers:
Air and earth
Water and nature
Light and dark
Now here is a rough draft of the prologue!
Sunlight drifted in through a hole in the roof. Sparktail shivered as she inched closer to it.
Well, not that I can get any closer to it. Crystalfire wouldn’t care if another “useless FireClan dragonet” dies. A hollow feeling opened up inside Sparktail’s chest as she thought of Emberwing. Her brave father had tried to escape the Ice Prison and had been tortured to death by Crystalfire herself.
A moon had passed since then. Now, the one-year-old FireClan dragonet had no dragon to murmur comforting words to her about stopping the Dark War as frost crept through her scales, agony and near-death looming over her head like a dark, grief-filled storm cloud. Now, Sparktail was alone, filled with numb sorrow and fury as the icy air in her cramped prison cell seeped into her scales in a never-ending frostbite.
The dragonet slammed herself against the icy bars of her cell. As soon as she did, fresh pain screamed in her side and shoulder, in the places she had rammed into the bars. Letting out a weak, agonized moan, she collapsed onto the frozen ground.
“She knocked herself out again.”
“….little…”
Sparktail opened her eyes to see two IceClan guards standing over her. Hissing, she scrambled upright, snarling to Coldwing, one of the guards.
“I’ll shred you,” Sparktail stood at the edge of the cell, trembling with anger. A new fury filled her, seeping into every scale and fueling her.
“Pitiful little one-year-old dragonet. You can try.” Yanking her out of her cell, Coldwing undid the cuffs on her legs, muzzle, and tail that ensured she couldn’t set the prison cell on fire. In its place, he forced her mouth open, avoiding her thrashing and hissing, and shoved snow down her throat.
This routine happened every day. But it still didn’t stop the horrific pain of felling snow rake Sparktail’s insides. Immediatly, she felt herself slowing, unable to move her body. Going limp, she felt new cuffs being attached to her legs as Coldwing and Hailwing dragged her down the hall. Snow-filled torches sculpted by ice flashed by Sparktail’s vision.
Finally, they arrived at the room.
It was marked by scribbles that seemed to indicate something – Sparktail could never figure out what. Coldwing shoved her inside, slamming the icy door. He motioned with his tail, and another FireClan prisoner scampered over, carrying a bucket of sizzling lava. The dragon gingerly sent it down Sparktail’s throat. Immediatly, she felt energized, the effects of the snow ebbing away.
“Sit,” Coldwing snarled, showing his icy teeth.
Sparktail sat, showing her teeth in return. The IceClan dragon hissed angirly. “Don’t talk back to me, or the next thing you’ll see is my fangs in your throat.”
I didn’t talk back to you! I only showed my fangs, which you deserved, you-
“Fire,” Coldwing growled, cutting off her thoughts. “Now.”
Sparktail felt him yank her mouth open again. Resisting the urge to set him on fire, she shot her flames into the bucket.
I still don’t get why they need our fire in the first place. Coldwing snapped her jaw shut, shoving a muzzle made out of ice onto her snout.
Suddenly, another IceClan dragon burst into the room, breathing heavily. “Her Majesty has called a Meeting.”
Coldwing turned to glare at her. “What about this one?’
“I’m sure she can come,” Hailwing murmured. Coldwing’s talons slashed along his jawline, and a mark appeared there.
“It’s urgent. We don’t have time to take her back.” Without another word, the IceClan warrior turned and hared down the hall.
“If we have to bring her,” Coldwing snapped to no one in particular. He shot one last glare at Sparktail, then started running after the IceClan guard, yanking the dragonet behind him.
I wonder what it’s about, Sparktail thought as Coldwing sped down a corridor, crashing into an elderly IceClan dragon. He didn’t slow down as she crashed to the floor.
Maybe I’ll learn how to escape this awful place.
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“We’re here. Get out.”
Coldwing shoved Sparktail into another room, one that she had never been in before.
It was huge. Statues and sculptures adorned the walls, piles of the softest and finest snow gently placed in the corner. Paintings hung on the walls of Queen Crystalfire – in each one, her wings were splayed majesticly as her head faced forward, her icy eyes gleaming. Every scale on her pelt glittered. In the center of the room was a throne, intricate designs placed and carved into it. There was ice along the outer rim, but inside the chair, soft snow was placed.
Suddenly, the snow-filled torches lining the room’s walls gave off a soft hiss, and the snow rose, becoming flickering fire.
Flickering, icy fire. It was a pale blueish-white, and it wasn’t warm, like most fire. Well, all fire, to be exact. Sparktail shivered. She didn’t know how they made it, only that if this meeting was so urgent, they should really get started. Not that Sparktail was curious – the dragonet only wanted to know if there was any information she could obtain to help fight against Crystalfire in the Dark War.
But the cold fire had been a signal. A huge, beautiful IceClan dragon stepped out from behind a snowy curtain. She began to walk down a path of snow layed out for her, every crystaline scale on her gleaming just like in the paintings.
Queen Crystalfire.
But if you asked Sparktail, she didn’t deserve the title of queen. But then again, she was just “another FireClan dragonet.”
“Ahem.”
Every IceClan eye turned toward Crystalfire.
“Your Majesty. Queen Crystalfire of IceClan!” A cheer started up from every IceClan dragon.
Sparktail quietly sang her own version, one that she hoped she would someday be able to sing.
“Your Majesty. Queen Brightfire of FireClan!”
Crystalfire cleared her throat. “Silence.”
The murmuring of every dragon stopped as they turned toward their queen, bowing low.
Whatever. Sparktail knew that she wouldn’t be under the queen’s imprisonment once she learned how to escape. So she acted like a decent prisoner should, bowing like everyone else.
A quiet snort of disgust came from her nostrils. Who was she, respecting this murderer – the reason her father was dead?
“Thank you all. Loyal citizens, warriors of IceClan. Today, we have been given a great gift. Queen Shadowfire herself, the reason we will have our territory when we win this war! She is here!”
An astonished cheer rang out. Dragons clapped, belowing out praise for the DarkClan queen.
Another figure stepped out from the curtain. Her scales were as dark and menacing as the night sky. Streaks of neon blue flashed through her underbelly and mouth. And most terrifying of all, they shone through her eye sockets – where eyes should have been. Instead, there was just a blue haze.
The queen lifted her tattered wings – all DarkClan dragons had tattered wings. She also stood on her hind legs, revealing a large spike on her chest.
Crystalfire bowed to her. “Queen Shadowfire. Your presence pleases my kingdom. Now, why have you come, Your Majesty?”
“Crystalfire,” the NightClan queen grunted. She turned her head, showing her sharp, dirty fangs. They gleamed in the bright ice. “A prophecy has been given to me.” She smiled terrifyingly, and now her back teeth showed as well.
“A prophecy?” Crystalfire repeated, dumbfounded. “But…we haven’t gotten a prophecy in ages. I don’t even know if I was born yet when the last one-”
“Can we get on with it? I have a war to fight, even if you don’t,” Shadowfire snapped mockingly.
Crystalfire didn’t seem to care that her ally was treating her like a prisoner. “Yes, Your Highness,” she replied. Shadowfire wanted dragons to say Your Highness in every sentence they spoke to her.
“The prophecy.” Shadowfire turned her snout up, shook out her wings, and began to speak in a low, quiet voice. The blue streaks on her began to blaze and catch fire. The ones in her eyes started spinning and churnng.
She’s using her powers.
“In the time of dire need
They will come.
Clan and Clan
Shall mix elements
Using the unknown.
Danger awaits,
Fierce talons that kill,
For any dragon born
With half-Clan traits.
Find the four,
Each will be mixed.
Fire, air, earth, water, nature, ice, light, and dark,
Each one will be two of these.
The war is coming on a bloody shore.
Find the four
And they will save you.
For with light comes darkness,
Hope comes gore,
Happiness comes grief,
Gain comes loss.
Because without them,
The flame, the breeze, the rock, the wave, the frost, the sun, the moon, the leaf,
Everything will be gone.”
“That’s a long prophecy,” Crystalfire murmured. Seeing Shadowfire’s look, she added in hastily, “Your Highness.”
“Now, I have a few ideas about what this prophecy means.” Shadowfire sat down, ruffling her wings. “Now, tell me which one makes the most sense.”
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“But, Your Highness, I don’t understand,” Crystalfire whined. “All of Sleetwing’s dragonets died. And how would she be mates with a dragon from another Clan? It’s just not possible.” The IceClan queen opened her mouth to say Your Highness, but Shadowfire cut her off with a flick of her spiked tail.
“She lied to you, Crystalfire. How many times do I have to say it?” She sighed, exasperated. “And they were somehow mates. Discussion over.” The queen flicked her tail again.
They had settled on the opinion that Sleetwing, an IceClan warrior whose dragonets had all died the night they hatched, was hiding one that had survived – one with FireClan and IceClan blood.
They were now hurrying down a hall, toward Sleetwing’s room.
They seemed to pass corridor after corridor, until finally, Crystalfire stopped at a room. She slammed her tail on the door, and it burst open.
Sparktail had only come to carry a bucket of lava. And she had a pretty good idea of why she had it.
Inside the room, a dragon was eating something. Her eyes bulged as soon as she saw Crystalfire, and she darted toward a corner in the room, hiding a shape there.
The IceClan queen shoved her aside, snatching the shape.
It was an IceClan dragonet – but with the body of a FireClan dragon.
“I was right,” Shadowfire hissed. “Crystalfire. Take the dragonet to my guards. And you.” She thrust her talon at Sparktail. “The lava.”
Sparktail had guessed right. Sleetwing’s punishment was to burn to death. She scampered over to the wailing dragon.
Suddenly, claws closed in around Sparktail’s throat. She flailed, choking and clawing.
“Where’s my Your Highness?” Shadowfire’s eyes gleamed.
“Your Highness,”Sparktail stammered.
“No – please! I can explain!” Sleetwing began to sob, covering her head with her talons. Sparktail looked at Sleetwing, mouthing don’t worry to her.
Crystalfire was still in the room. Good.
Taking the lava bucket, Sparktail flung its contents not at Sleetwing, but in the direction of Crystalfire.
Crystalfire shrieked, dodging it. The lava melted a hole in the ice.
During Crystalfire’s panic, Sparktail shot over and pried the dragonet from her mouth. She sprinted away, flying up and burning a hole in the roof with her fire. She leaped through it and continued flying.
By now, both queens had noticed that Sparktail had the dragonet. Roaring with fury, Shadowfire shot out of the hole after her.
Sparktail wouldn’t be fast enough; she knew that. So she set herself on fire and turned to face the queen. Hissing, she flew away before Shadowfire could figure out what she had done.
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Sparktail was exausted. Gasping, she curled her tail around Sleetwing’s dragonet.
She had flown for hours. Shadowfire luckily hadn’t caught her. She had collapsed on an island in the sea once she was sure no one had followed her.
“Frosttail,” Sparktail whispered. She had named the dragonet that. “We’re safe now. I’ll find the other three in the prophecy, and then-”
Wingbeats. Straight overhead. Frosttail whimpered in fear, clutching Sparktail’s talons.
Shadowfire.
She had found them.
“Oh, if it isn’t the dragonet who tried to kill a queen and kidnapped a prophecy dragon!” Shadowfire sneered. “You can’t hide from me. I already have the three other dragonets in the prophecy.” Her fangs gleamed. “You thought you would be so heroic if you saved them! Well, guess what? This is where your story ends. Say goodbye, FireClan prisoner.” She opened her mouth, and her deadly, venemous blue spray started to leak out.
“Just don’t hurt Frosttail!” Sparktail wailed.
“Frosttail.” The DarkClan queen examined the dragonet. “Yes. I think I’ll keep that name.” She picked Frosttail up, passing her to a guard.
No! Images of Emberwing flashed in her mind. I can’t lose this one after my father.
Sparktail sprung at the guard, but not fast enough.
Shadowfire’s deadly venom shot out of her mouth, straight at her.
She didn’t think. Grabbing Frosttail, she shoved the guard in the way of the venom. He vanished in the blue mist, howling in agony.
“You…” Shadowfire leaped at Sparktail, snarling. She slammed a talon down on the dragonet’s throat, grabbing Frosttail.
There was nothing Sparktail could do. Before the queen could shoot her venom, Sparktail shot into the ocean, a sure way for a FireClan dragon to die.
I’m sorry, Frosttail. A farmilier ache tore at Sparktail as she sunk deeper. Eveloping herself in flame, she watched from the water as Shadowfire flew away.
Sparktail had saved herself using the flame. But she couldn’t save Frosttail in time.
Closing her eyes, Sparktail made a solemn vow to herself.
I promise that I will save Frosttail and the other prophecy dragonets. I’ll convince them to fight on our side.
I’ll save all the prisoners dying at the claws of enimies.
And I will stop the war.
There’s the rough draft of the prolouge! Lots of spelling mistakes; yay 😛 . Now, if you have any suggestions, I need your help editing this! Spelling mistakes, confusion, not enough detail, etc. Please help! Thank you 🙂 !!!
Once the prolouge is on the Fan Fiction page, I’ll give the outline for the entire story. You can choose which chapters you want, and there will be chapter outliners.
If you have any questions, ask me.
Thanks again!
Ahaha I have an OC Clan called IceClan 😛 (to be fair, it’s a common Clan name) I haven’t read Wings of Fire, but this looks great!
Thank you! 🙂
I looked on your wiki a while back and saw that you had a Clan named that 😛
Okay, I’ll help if you need it!
Dragon Name: Shadowpaw (shadows are dark but are caused by the light?)
Elements: light and dark
Description: black like DarkClan, uh, DarkClan eyes,
LightClan scales, Male, lives in DarkClan
Combined Power: hmmmm, can make shadows bright? Can make light dark? Idk
Personality: can be rude, but in a funny way, will probably start arguments, but loyal and won’t want to fight friends from the opposite side in the war, hot-headed, can be annoying, stubborn, will probably get into arguments with Frostpaw because they are so alike, if offered to be saved will refuse
Here! I hope this helped 🙂 – the prologue is GREAT – I love it! It’s such a great, original idea, and I think it’s one if the best ideas I’ve seen on BlogClan 🙂
Thank you! When you said it was one of the best ideas, I felt honored! 🙂
Dragon Name: Willowpaw
Elements: fire and nature
Description: she is basically a nature dragon with patches of ice dragon scales and firey amber eyes
Combined Power: can make fire that climbs like ivy and ivy that if you touch it, it burns you
Personality: shy, not very confident, smart, when needed she can be cunning, and she is very strange and dorky.
Dragon Name: Deltatail
Elements: Water and Nature
Description: Water dragon build, aqua, more green color. Nature eyes
Combined Power: Can grow plants, and breathe some sort of slime, similar to mud
Personality: Very Optimistic, stubborn, cheerful, goofy, hates when she’s sad, wants to help
Dragon Name: Emberwing
Elements: dark and fire
Description: looks for the most part like a dark dragon but has the sail and wings of a fire dragon, there’s a kind of gradient on the scales of her wings, tail, and legs where the end half of it is the red scales of a fire dragon but fades into black when it gets closer to the body, one blazing icy blue eye and one black eye, a short horn between her nostrils like a fire dragon’s, and needle-like spikes all over tail like a dark dragon’s
Combined Power: can breathe a mist that burns (kind of like firescales in the WoF books but the burns are caused by the mist instead of by touch), smoke doesn’t affect breathing or sight and can see in the dark
Personality: usually pretty funny and jokes around a lot, does her best to make her friends feel better if something happens (though is often pretty terrible at giving advice), she’s pretty smart, she gets jealous easily, she has a kind of dark side and can get snappy and rude when upset, she often hides her feelings and pretends to be happy when she’s not so her friends don’t worry about her, she also has an uncanny excitement about fighting and will happily attack dragons that are jerks to her or her friends
Woah this is really neat! I suggest Grammarly for spelling mistakes and extra commas (i hate that about grammarly. You thought you needed a comma? nope) but it’s pretty good and free
Can I be a minor character?
Dragon Name: Shinewing
Elements: Water and Nature (NatureClan)
Description: Water dragon eyes and wings but Nature dragon scales (including tail) and body. She has fins of a water dragon and even though her scales are the shape of a nature dragons, they are the colour of a water dragon.
Combined Power: Breathes underwater, grows plants but they grow better because the water feeds it? idk
Personality: tries to feel important and tries to act a bit rude but actually kindof a cinnamon bun, but if you go deeper, she’s actually pretty mean. Even deeper, and she’s the softest sweetest cinnamon roll.
Also is the two element thing just for the prophecy dragons? if so, just make her natureclan
Okay, after this, I’ll put the plot outline out!
EDITING
I’m going to put the prolouge, paragraph by paragraph, below. Each paragraph will be numbered. If you feel like you could add more description to it, put your new sentence or other thingy in bold. If you want to reword a phrase, action, sentence, etc., strike through what was already there and add your new thing in bold.
Here’s an example:
Original Script
17. Thistletail clawed Spark. She fell onto the floor.
18. She went still, dead.
Here’s the edited version:
17. Thistletail roared with fury, leaping at Spark.
Thistletail clawed Spark.The black tom’s paw lashed out, his claws tearing at her throat.She fell onto the floor.With a yowl of mixed agony and terror, the she-cat’s legs buckled under her. She hit the snowy, blood-slicked with a sickening thump.18. Spark’s eyes closed for the last time. “You’ll regret this, Thistletail.” Hissing, she spasmed in desperation. Blood poured from the wound in her throat. “My rogues will destroy your wretched Clan. ThunderClan will be nothing but a bunch of slaughtered weaklings by dawn.” She spasmed once again. “Remember that.”
She went still.The reddish-ginger tabby went still. Spark was dead. The battle was over.I’m putting it on here tomorrow, ‘cause I’m lazy 😛
I hit a page on accident and lost everything I was typing (I had a lot of stuff!) on this page! 🙁😢
I’ll type it later. Uggggghhhhhhh 🙁
Here’s the editing thing! Some of the things should be in italics, but I’m lazy, so I’ll do it for the official prologue. (Just don’t edit the prophecy lines) See my above example on how to edit. I also decided that if you want to replace a word or phrase with a different, more descriptive one, still strikethrough the original, but put the changed version in italics. Also, if something is supposed to be in italic that you add in (like someone’s thoughts) put (italic) around each side. For example, (italic) Stop annoying him! (italic)
1. Sunlight drifted in through a hole in the roof. Sparktail shivered as she inched closer to it.
2. Well, not that I can get any closer to it. Crystalfire wouldn’t care if another “useless FireClan dragonet” dies. A hollow feeling opened up inside Sparktail’s chest as she thought of Emberwing. Her brave father had tried to escape the Ice Prison and had been tortured to death by Crystalfire herself.
3. A moon had passed since then. Now, the one-year-old FireClan dragonet had no dragon to murmur comforting words to her about stopping the Dark War as frost crept through her scales, agony and near-death looming over her head like a dark, grief-filled storm cloud. Now, Sparktail was alone, filled with numb sorrow and fury as the icy air in her cramped prison cell seeped into her scales in a never-ending frostbite.
4. The dragonet slammed herself against the icy bars of her cell. As soon as she did, fresh pain screamed in her side and shoulder, in the places she had rammed into the bars. Letting out a weak, agonized moan, she collapsed onto the frozen ground.
5. “She knocked herself out again.”
6. “….little…”
7. Sparktail opened her eyes to see two IceClan guards standing over her. Hissing, she scrambled upright, snarling to Coldwing, one of the guards.
8. “I’ll shred you,” Sparktail stood at the edge of the cell, trembling with anger. A new fury filled her, seeping into every scale and fueling her.
9. “Pitiful little one-year-old dragonet. You can try.” Yanking her out of her cell, Coldwing undid the cuffs on her legs, muzzle, and tail that ensured she couldn’t set the prison cell on fire. In its place, he forced her mouth open, avoiding her thrashing and hissing, and shoved snow down her throat.
10. This routine happened every day. But it still didn’t stop the horrific pain of felling snow rake Sparktail’s insides. Immediatly, she felt herself slowing, unable to move her body. Going limp, she felt new cuffs being attached to her legs as Coldwing and Hailwing dragged her down the hall. Snow-filled torches sculpted by ice flashed by Sparktail’s vision.
11. Finally, they arrived at the room.
12. It was marked by scribbles that seemed to indicate something – Sparktail could never figure out what. Coldwing shoved her inside, slamming the icy door. He motioned with his tail, and another FireClan prisoner scampered over, carrying a bucket of sizzling lava. The dragon gingerly sent it down Sparktail’s throat. Immediatly, she felt energized, the effects of the snow ebbing away.
13. “Sit,” Coldwing snarled, showing his icy teeth.
14. Sparktail sat, showing her teeth in return. The IceClan dragon hissed angirly. “Don’t talk back to me, or the next thing you’ll see is my fangs in your throat.”
15. I didn’t talk back to you! I only showed my fangs, which you deserved, you-
16. “Fire,” Coldwing growled, cutting off her thoughts. “Now.”
17. Sparktail felt him yank her mouth open again. Resisting the urge to set him on fire, she shot her flames into the bucket.
18. I still don’t get why they need our fire in the first place. Coldwing snapped her jaw shut, shoving a muzzle made out of ice onto her snout.
19. Suddenly, another IceClan dragon burst into the room, breathing heavily. “Her Majesty has called a Meeting.”
20. Coldwing turned to glare at her. “What about this one?’
21. “I’m sure she can come,” Hailwing murmured. Coldwing’s talons slashed along his jawline, and a mark appeared there.
22. “It’s urgent. We don’t have time to take her back.” Without another word, the IceClan warrior turned and hared down the hall.
23. “If we have to bring her,” Coldwing snapped to no one in particular. He shot one last glare at Sparktail, then started running after the IceClan guard, yanking the dragonet behind him.
24. I wonder what it’s about, Sparktail thought as Coldwing sped down a corridor, crashing into an elderly IceClan dragon. He didn’t slow down as she crashed to the floor.
25. Maybe I’ll learn how to escape this awful place.
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26. “We’re here. Get out.”
27. Coldwing shoved Sparktail into another room, one that she had never been in before.
28. It was huge. Statues and sculptures adorned the walls, piles of the softest and finest snow gently placed in the corner. Paintings hung on the walls of Queen Crystalfire – in each one, her wings were splayed majesticly as her head faced forward, her icy eyes gleaming. 29. Every scale on her pelt glittered. In the center of the room was a throne, intricate designs placed and carved into it. There was ice along the outer rim, but inside the chair, soft snow was placed.
30. Suddenly, the snow-filled torches lining the room’s walls gave off a soft hiss, and the snow rose, becoming flickering fire.
31. Flickering, icy fire. It was a pale blueish-white, and it wasn’t warm, like most fire. Well, all fire, to be exact. Sparktail shivered. She didn’t know how they made it, only that if this meeting was so urgent, they should really get started. Not that Sparktail was curious – the dragonet only wanted to know if there was any information she could obtain to help fight against Crystalfire in the Dark War.
32. But the cold fire had been a signal. A huge, beautiful IceClan dragon stepped out from behind a snowy curtain. She began to walk down a path of snow layed out for her, every crystaline scale on her gleaming just like in the paintings.
33. Queen Crystalfire.
34. But if you asked Sparktail, she didn’t deserve the title of queen. But then again, she was just “another FireClan dragonet.”
35. “Ahem.”
36. Every IceClan eye turned toward Crystalfire.
37. “Your Majesty. Queen Crystalfire of IceClan!” A cheer started up from every IceClan dragon.
38. Sparktail quietly sang her own version, one that she hoped she would someday be able to sing.
39. “Your Majesty. Queen Brightfire of FireClan!”
40. Crystalfire cleared her throat. “Silence.”
41. The murmuring of every dragon stopped as they turned toward their queen, bowing low.
42. Whatever. Sparktail knew that she wouldn’t be under the queen’s imprisonment once she learned how to escape. So she acted like a decent prisoner should, bowing like everyone else.
43. A quiet snort of disgust came from her nostrils. Who was she, respecting this murderer – the reason her father was dead?
44. “Thank you all. Loyal citizens, warriors of IceClan. Today, we have been given a great gift. Queen Shadowfire herself, the reason we will have our territory when we win this war! She is here!”
45. An astonished cheer rang out. Dragons clapped, belowing out praise for the DarkClan queen.
46. Another figure stepped out from the curtain. Her scales were as dark and menacing as the night sky. Streaks of neon blue flashed through her underbelly and mouth. And most terrifying of all, they shone through her eye sockets – where eyes should have been. Instead, there was just a blue haze.
47. The queen lifted her tattered wings – all DarkClan dragons had tattered wings. She also stood on her hind legs, revealing a large spike on her chest.
48. Crystalfire bowed to her. “Queen Shadowfire. Your presence pleases my kingdom. Now, why have you come, Your Majesty?”
49. “Crystalfire,” the NightClan queen grunted. She turned her head, showing her sharp, dirty fangs. They gleamed in the bright ice. “A prophecy has been given to me.” She smiled terrifyingly, and now her back teeth showed as well.
50. “A prophecy?” Crystalfire repeated, dumbfounded. “But…we haven’t gotten a prophecy in ages. I don’t even know if I was born yet when the last one-”
51. “Can we get on with it? I have a war to fight, even if you don’t,” Shadowfire snapped mockingly.
52. Crystalfire didn’t seem to care that her ally was treating her like a prisoner. “Yes, Your Highness,” she replied. Shadowfire wanted dragons to say Your Highness in every sentence they spoke to her.
53. “The prophecy.” Shadowfire turned her snout up, shook out her wings, and began to speak in a low, quiet voice. The blue streaks on her began to blaze and catch fire. The ones in her eyes started spinning and churnng.
54. She’s using her powers.
55. “In the time of dire need
56. They will come.
57. Clan and Clan
58. Shall mix elements
59. Using the unknown.
60. Danger awaits,
61. Fierce talons that kill,
62. For any dragon born
63. With half-Clan traits.
64. Find the four,
65. Each will be mixed.
66. Fire, air, earth, water, nature, ice, light, and dark,
67. Each one will be two of these.
68. The war is coming on a bloody shore.
69. Find the four
70. And they will save you.
71. For with light comes darkness,
72. Hope comes gore,
73. Happiness comes grief,
74. Gain comes loss.
75. Because without them,
76. The flame, the breeze, the rock, the wave, the frost, the sun, the moon, the leaf,
77. Everything will be gone.”
78. “That’s a long prophecy,” Crystalfire murmured. Seeing Shadowfire’s look, she added in hastily, “Your Highness.”
79. “Now, I have a few ideas about what this prophecy means.” Shadowfire sat down, ruffling her wings. “Now, tell me which one makes the most sense.”
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80. “But, Your Highness, I don’t understand,” Crystalfire whined. “All of Sleetwing’s dragonets died. And how would she be mates with a dragon from another Clan? It’s just not possible.” The IceClan queen opened her mouth to say Your Highness, but Shadowfire cut her off with a flick of her spiked tail.
81. “She lied to you, Crystalfire. How many times do I have to say it?” She sighed, exasperated. “And they were somehow mates. Discussion over.” The queen flicked her tail again.
82. They had settled on the opinion that Sleetwing, an IceClan warrior whose dragonets had all died the night they hatched, was hiding one that had survived – one with FireClan and IceClan blood.
83. They were now hurrying down a hall, toward Sleetwing’s room.
84. They seemed to pass corridor after corridor, until finally, Crystalfire stopped at a room. She slammed her tail on the door, and it burst open.
85. Sparktail had only come to carry a bucket of lava. And she had a pretty good idea of why she had it.
86. Inside the room, a dragon was eating something. Her eyes bulged as soon as she saw Crystalfire, and she darted toward a corner in the room, hiding a shape there.
87. The IceClan queen shoved her aside, snatching the shape.
88. It was an IceClan dragonet – but with the body of a FireClan dragon.
89. “I was right,” Shadowfire hissed. “Crystalfire. Take the dragonet to my guards. And you.” She thrust her talon at Sparktail. “The lava.”
Sparktail had guessed right. Sleetwing’s punishment was to burn to death. She scampered over to the wailing dragon.
90. Suddenly, claws closed in around Sparktail’s throat. She flailed, choking and clawing.
91. “Where’s my Your Highness?” Shadowfire’s eyes gleamed.
92. “Your Highness,”Sparktail stammered.
93. “No – please! I can explain!” Sleetwing began to sob, covering her head with her talons. Sparktail looked at Sleetwing, mouthing don’t worry to her.
94. Crystalfire was still in the room. Good.
95. Taking the lava bucket, Sparktail flung its contents not at Sleetwing, but in the direction of Crystalfire.
96. Crystalfire shrieked, dodging it. The lava melted a hole in the ice.
97. During Crystalfire’s panic, Sparktail shot over and pried the dragonet from her mouth. She sprinted away, flying up and burning a hole in the roof with her fire. She leaped through it and continued flying.
98. By now, both queens had noticed that Sparktail had the dragonet. Roaring with fury, Shadowfire shot out of the hole after her.
99. Sparktail wouldn’t be fast enough; she knew that. So she set herself on fire and turned to face the queen. Hissing, she flew away before Shadowfire could figure out what she had done.
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100. Sparktail was exausted. Gasping, she curled her tail around Sleetwing’s dragonet.
101. She had flown for hours. Shadowfire luckily hadn’t caught her. She had collapsed on an island in the sea once she was sure no one had followed her.
102. “Frosttail,” Sparktail whispered. She had named the dragonet that. “We’re safe now. I’ll find the other three in the prophecy, and then-”
103. Wingbeats. Straight overhead. Frosttail whimpered in fear, clutching Sparktail’s talons.
104. Shadowfire.
105. She had found them.
106. “Oh, if it isn’t the dragonet who tried to kill a queen and kidnapped a prophecy dragon!” Shadowfire sneered. “You can’t hide from me. I already have the three other dragonets in the prophecy.” Her fangs gleamed. “You thought you would be so heroic if you saved them! Well, guess what? This is where your story ends. Say goodbye, FireClan prisoner.” She opened her mouth, and her deadly, venemous blue spray started to leak out.
107. “Just don’t hurt Frosttail!” Sparktail wailed.
108. “Frosttail.” The DarkClan queen examined the dragonet. “Yes. I think I’ll keep that name.” She picked Frosttail up, passing her to a guard.
109. No! Images of Emberwing flashed in her mind. I can’t lose this one after my father.
110. Sparktail sprung at the guard, but not fast enough.
111. Shadowfire’s deadly venom shot out of her mouth, straight at her.
112. She didn’t think. Grabbing Frosttail, she shoved the guard in the way of the venom. He vanished in the blue mist, howling in agony.
113. “You…” Shadowfire leaped at Sparktail, snarling. She slammed a talon down on the dragonet’s throat, grabbing Frosttail.
114. There was nothing Sparktail could do. Before the queen could shoot her venom, Sparktail shot into the ocean, a sure way for a FireClan dragon to die.
115. I’m sorry, Frosttail. A farmilier ache tore at Sparktail as she sunk deeper. Eveloping herself in flame, she watched from the water as Shadowfire flew away.
116. Sparktail had saved herself using the flame. But she couldn’t save Frosttail in time.
117. Closing her eyes, Sparktail made a solemn vow to herself.
118. I promise that I will save Frosttail and the other prophecy dragonets. I’ll convince them to fight on our side.
119. I’ll save all the prisoners dying at the claws of enimies.
120. And I will stop the war.
Wow! 120 paragraphs!
I don’t have the entire plot figured out yet, and I’m considering adding in another exiting thing…okay, I just got a really good idea of what it might come in handy for. I also have a really intresting plot twist. And here’s my big thing: I had the idea of dividing it into four books, each with a different prophecy dragon’s point of view. But I need help with the title for book one – Falling Sparks or Burning Frost? I’m also considering naming the series Falling Sparks – as you may see, Sparkpaw/wing will have a BIG role in this (I almost wrote something else that would’ve spoiled a LOT 😛 )! I plan to have the plot outline out today, but it’s already been deleted before I can post it three times. And I also have to judge my games today. So, I’ll probably procrastinate for a few days, try to do it, and then finally post it. But I’m exited for this!
2. Well, not that I can get any closer to it. Crystalfire wouldn’t care if another “useless FireClan dragonet” dies.
A hollow feeling opened up inside Sparktail’s chest as she thought of Emberwing.A familiar numb feeling draped itself around Sparktail’s body as she thought of Emberwing.Her brave father had tried to escape the Ice Prison and had been tortured to death by Crystalfire herself.
4. The dragonet slammed herself against the icy bars of her cell.
As soon as she did, fresh pain screamed in her side and shoulder, in the places she had rammed into the bars.White hot pain shot through her side and she let out a strangled cry.Letting out a weak, agonized moan, she collapsed onto the frozen ground.
Question here, did she knock herself out on purpose? Because I have an idea if she did.
5. “She knocked herself out again.” An exasperated voice growled.
6.
“….little…”“Pathetic.” Another snapped.9. “Pitiful little
one-year-olddragonet. You can try.”10. This routine happened every day. But it still didn’t stop the horrific pain of
fellingfalling snowrakeraking Sparktail’s insides. Immediatly, she felt herself slowing, unable to move her body. Going limp, she felt new cuffs being attached to her legs as Coldwing and Hailwing dragged her down the hall. Snow-filled torches sculpted by ice flashed by Sparktail’s vision.I have to go right now, but I’ll go through rest later! This is really good so far!
Thank you! 🙂 I don’t know if she knocked herself out on purpose, but what’s your idea?
4. Something like,
She clenched her teeth in pain and smiled weakly in spite.
Though I’m not exactly sure why she’d do it. 😛 ehh scratch that idea.
Falling Sparks sounds coooooool! Burning Frost is nice too, though 🙂
You missed quotation marks when they spoke a few times
34.
ButIf you asked Sparktail, she didn’t deserve the title of queen. But then again, she was just “another FireClan dragonet.” (((((and the quotation marks should be the single ones, since no one is talking. ‘ instead of ” too lazy to edit it out, sorry)))))Oh, and exciting, not exiting, in your last paragraph. I’m not that great at catching mistakes, as you can see (: I can’t wait to read the rest!!!
Dragon Name: Ryokoshade, but if that doesn’t fit what you want for their names, then Darksky
Elements: Air and Dark
Description: Air dragon build with all dark dragon coloring. Smaller than most adult dragons, lithe, and fast.
Combined Power: Can turn invisible, has night vision, has some telepathy, can open voids.
Personality: quiet, creative, sly, intelligent, mysterious, keeps to herself, bluntly honest, arrogant.
THIS LOOKS AWESOME
Dragon Name: Frostsong
Elements: Light and Dark
Description: The traditional DarkClan appearance, but with whiter scales and the purple crystally things
Combined Power: Can turn invisible, time travel, can see in extreme dark and extreme light, anythings else like that but I’m too lazy to think of…
Personality: quiet, intelligent, mysterious, attack first questions later, can be rude, sometimes kind, and very formal
Do you want mind reading and seeing the future?
The first people to respond to this with the opposing elements were Ivykit and Potato! The slot for air and earth elements is still open!
(The reason why I didn’t talk about Spotty, Arkie, Blu, and Star is that for Spotty, Arkie, and Blu, you had different elements than the opposing ones; for example, Spotty’s entry, Forestpaw, had fire and nature but should have fire and ice or water and nature. Star, your elements were already taken. I’ll add all of you in at the end, though.) Ivykit, can Shadowpaw have visions of the future and/or read minds? So he can have a vision with Willowpaw, Rykoshade, and Frostsong in it? Thank you 🙂
Yes!!! Litterally, my fav powers *cough* *cough* ever 😀
Here’s a poll to decide what the book name should be (it should probably go on the polls page but eh 😛)
https://www.strawpoll.me/16184344
WAIT. Sparktail died?! If she did FORGET MY VOTE ON BURNING FROST. Pretend I said Falling Sparks. So the score would be:
Falling Sparks – 2
Burning Frost – 0
😛
If she’s alive then FORGET I POSTED THIS
😛
She might die, but I don’t want to spoil it! 😛 (Gosh darn it I’m turning into Kate)
HELP REVIVE THIS!
BLURB FOR BOOK ONE
Okay. Soooo, I’ve decided the book will be called…BURNING FROST! The series name will be…FALLING SPARKS!
One more thing before I start. Do you think it would be easier with just prefixes, like Frost, Delta, Shadow, etc.? (And by the way Ivykit if I do that I’ll either need to change Shadowfire or Shadowpaw’s name. What about Star for Shadowpaw’s name? Or Moon? Or something else? Or I could change Shadowfire’s) Also, what about tribes, like in the Wings of Fire books (FireWings, AirWings, EarthWings, WaterWings, etc.)? I’m just going to do prefixes and tribe names for now, and call Shadowpaw Star, so there’s not confusion:
Frost wakes up in Queen Shadow’s prison, where she has been for almost her entire life. She’s just had a horrible nightmare about her mother, Sleet, dying. Her companions, Valley (AirWing and EarthWing dragon), Delta (WaterWing and PlantWing dragon), and Star (LightWing and DarkWing dragon). Queen Shadow kidnapped them as dragonets so that they would fulfill the prophecy her way, with the DarkWings winning the war. They are trying to find a way out of fighting when they see a dragon in the distance that quietly helps them escape. Shadow doesn’t notice until it’s too late. The dragon introduces herself as Spark, a FireWing who is trying to save them. She takes them to the Kingdom of Fire, where Queen Bright of the FireWings welcomes them with open wings. Frost befriends Phoenex, a young FireWing, almost instantly. She learns that her father is Ash, but he is extremely low in the FireWing society. Star and Frost get into an argument when Star says that they should go find the IceWings and attack, but Frost wants to stay. Star runs off, and they find out Crystal has captured him and he is a prisoner in the Ice Kingdom. Along with Phoenex and Spark, they go to rescue him. However, Crystal somehow knows they were coming, and takes them prisoner as well. Spark convinces Frost that it was Phoenex who led the IceWings to them, and they betray her, giving her to Crystal. She is killed, and despite thinking she was a traitor, Frost feels horrible. They find a way to escape, but it involves leaving Spark to die. Frost refuses to let Spark die, ignoring Star wanting to leave her and save them. Spark replies that her life is a small cost to win the war, and her eyes darken. Frost reluctantly leaves her, and they end up flying toward the Snowy Mountains, where the Kingdom of Air, Queen Cloud, and their allies the AirWings await.
Epilouge coming soon
Genders:
Male – Valley, Star, Ash
Female – Frost, Delta, Phoenex, Spark
I thought there could be a cover for each book (someone would draw it). Reply to this if you want to draw the cover for Burning Frost, and put a link to your drawing! Frost has white scales with a faint icy-blue tinge to them.
Here are the roles for the book:
Cover Artist: open
Plot Outliner (chooses chapter number): open
Chapter Outliner: open
Chapter Writer (more than one slot avaliable): open
Chapter Editor: open
To sign up, put your name and role you want, like this:
Frostfire
Cover Artist
Here’s the summary:
Frost has always wanted to save the world. She dreams of being in the heroic tales that she reads about. And, amazingly, she is one of the four dragonets chosen to save the world from Queen Shadow. She can’t wait to fulfill her epic destiny and be a dragon in a scroll that others read about.
But Frost soon realizes that saving the world isn’t everything she once dreamed it would be. She must learn to handle the loss of those she loves. And at every corner is a challenge, a threat of death. Soon, Frost must learn to be a different kind of hero than the ones she’s read about – or risk losing the war and everyone she loves.
It’s super cheesy 😛 (if you want to change it, you can)
I don’t really mind. I just couldn’t think of anything else. Storm maybe??? I don’t really want to ruin Shadowfire’s epic affect, so maybe Stormpaw would be okay??? Idek, unless you come up with a better idea for Shadowfire, here is a list of okay names: 🙂
Shade (easily the best option 😉 😛 )
Storm
Crow
🙂 😀
I think Shade would be the best. 🙂
I’ll do Shade, then! Everybody
dance now!regard Star as Shade from now on! 😛I could draw the cover if nobody else is doing it! 😀
also darkwing haha 😛I can be a cover artist! Not that good though I have to warn. If anyone else wants to be, let them be, they’re probably gonna draw a better one than I can : )
Lilypaw
Chapter Editor