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  • Lightnnggaze smiled at his newly made apprentice, “How about we start training tomorrow? Get some rest!” He touched noses with the young tom and watched as he dashed away, his tail held high. Where is my mate? we worried to himself.

    He stared blankly at the calico tom who was nervously crouching. He walked over to him and asked simply, “Where is Tulipstrike, why are you in our camp, and do you want to go home young one?”

    Koi stared up at him, then opened his mouth to speak.

    • Koi Pov: As he opened his mouth, he suddenly felt himself growl, and the other cat flinched away from him. Koi looked up, and studied the other tom. He was ready to spring, when MudPaw suddenly stopped him. Koi looked at her in blurred anger, but quickly, he felt it all dissolve. “I don’t know, but TulipStrike… he intruded on our camp,” he meow, and he spat, then he turned to walk again, but MudPaw stopped him. “I want you by my side,” she insisted, and Koi sighed. then, when he was sure no cat was listening but MudPaw, he meowed, “fine, then at midnight, let’s leave-“

  • [2 days later]

    Scarletstar takes his place infront of Daypaw and stares down at her, Lightninggaze at his side, she is buzzing with excitement. I’m going to be a warrior!

    “I, Scarletstar, leader of MeadowClan, call upon my warrior ancestors to look down on this apprentice. They have trained hard to understand the ways of your noble code, and I commend them to you as a warrior in their turn.”

    “Daypaw, do you promise to uphold the warrior code and to protect and defend your Clan, even at the cost of your life?”
    “I do.” she meowed with no hesitation her eyes glimmering.

    Scarlet star nodded “Then by the powers of StarClan, I give you your warrior name. Daypaw, from this moment on you will be known as Daybeam. StarClan honors your determination, and we welcome you as a full warrior of MeadowClan.”

    The leader touch their muzzle to there head, and she licked his shoulder.

    “Daybeam! Daybeam! Daybeam!” The cheers rose aorund her, she puffed out her chest in pride, and her eyes landed on Weedrose, who was smiling warmly, the to her former mentor, who was bursting with pride.

    • Stripepaw 🐯🐾 can't wait for Chirstmas (click my name for roleplay!) she/her platonic mate to the radical Reedpaw and BlogSis to the marvellous Nightpaw, Lynxpaw and Frostedpaw! says:

      Splashpool:
      She cheered along with the crowd, but secretly her mind was on different things. That illness..

      Birdheart:
      He was just murmuring. Not cheering. He felt weird, really weird..

  • (AaAh guys- your killing me with all the new characters – we already have 16 warriors, 3 not being roleplayed already, and 6 apprentices! one being dead, so there’s really only five, but still! :O Could possibly even one character just- die? I know it’s a lot to ask, but- think about it- that means we have 20 Povs, not including Koi’s, or the medicine cat’s or the deputy’s and leader’s Povs! (Oh, and those two characters I haven’t given Povs for) If you don’t believe me, you can take a look at my newly updated Allegiance list on the CC page.)

    • ❄❄🌸Creamypaw/mist 🌸❄❄🥀app to the amazing Bloddynight🥀❄☃ready for christmas☃❄🩸bestie is bloodynight🩸🎄she/her🎄All i want for christmas is you🎄 says:

      (everyone looks at me puts both paws up) Don`t look at me i allready had a cat die soooo (ponits at some one )

    • CloudPaw/Song, your local Spoof!, "How could you be so blind? You close your eyes but open mine! I hate the way YOU make ME hate myself for sharing eyes!" - Shared Eyes /She+Her/ says:

      Alr, well- I don’t think any character of mine should die, because- MudPaw is too important I think, CuriousPaw is getting juicy and has potential, OtterLily and GentleBlaze just got saved from being killed, none of the wanderers will have much of a Pov except Koi and River, but they won’t be as important until later, which means if they die, it won’t be too dramatic, oh, and I’m planning on Koi and MudPaw mating soooo- that. RiverRipple and ForestPaw are background characters, therefore they aren’t important enough to kill, and besides, that won’t help the amount of Povs, since they don’t have one. For others, maybe FrostWhisper, but Sil doesn’t really have the time to oof her so- Splashpool and BirdHeart are too new, DayBeam (whom I will call DayLight just because) just got her warrior name, TulipStrike seems important, and besides that, hasn’t got completely infected yet, FawnSpirit is going to do her thing with River, and yeah. I can only think of NightPaw, cause- idk, I feel like he thinks he deserves it, and he might be happy with SkyPaw, but she says he’s important so- we only have LightningGaze, WeedRose, MagmaPool, and some other characters who haven’t appeared yet. so- idk. oh, we can’t do MagmaPool for the justice of being dramatic so- yeah, idk. also, somebody should just die for drama lol- 😛

      edit: just counted – 38 characters. also, sil- shattered stars has multiple clans, so of course there’d be more- but MeadowClan is just one clan, so I’d say it’s alot

    • I know we have a lot of characters! I don’t feel like killing them off… Hmmm… I just don’t know.

      I feel all of the characters will be useful to the plot, so I don’t know.

      I don’t want anyone to be forced to kill off their characters, But If they want to, or think the should go right ahead!

      Generally important characters: Daybeam, Tulipstrike, Lightninggaze (?)

      Less-than important, but still very useful: Weedrose, and Nightpaw.

      Yet to be seen: Sharpflower

      I only have… 6 characters :> heh-heh… I’m the problem aren’t I? /J

      • CloudPaw/Song, your local Spoof, "It seems to me I've ALWAYS been the PROBLEM, though I wish to solve it, foolishly I've gone and charred each star that's fallen," - Shared Eyes /She+Her/ says:

        Well… people shouldn’t be forced to kill off their characters! I never meant that! Although, if we don’t deal with that problem soon… pretty much, there will be a thousand Povs. (shivers)

        For now, we can just wait, and see what happens- let’s get back to Rping.

        Also, you’re not the problem- I have more OCs than you- (although half of them are not very major-)

        • Asherpaw pov (ALERT ALERT THEIR WILL BE DRAMA rehehehehehe)
          (Also Asherpaw has been a app for 2 days)
          Asherpaw paddled trowards the apprentices den when he felt paw go up his paw “ouch” he groaned “i guess i got to go to the medicen den” he started walking torwards the medicen den when he saw Streamcloud sleeping outside the den ” she is probaly tired from treating her paticens” he thought so he started to sneck past Streamcloud to see if Nightpaw was awake but he steaped on a twig and instanly Streamcloud woke up and looked at him.
          But as he saw her he yelp in shock cause with one look at her he knew things got worse

          Streamcloud pov
          Streamcloud woke up from her sleep when she heard a twig snap her head was fuzzy but when he saw a young tom she forgout about erveything and got lost in his green eyes.
          The tom yelped in shock as he saw her but she was to los to care then a black tom walked out of a den.
          But when he saw he he shreked “NOT YOU!!!”
          (I am so evil.)

  • ANNOUNCEMENT!

    Okay, I understand why Cloudpaw is stressed about all the characters. But let’s NOT kill any off for now, unless you want to of course. I’ll consider killing off some of my characters, or something of the sort. But we NEED characters so we can have many interactions.

    Like Cloudpaw said, let’s continue to roleplay! Love you guys! <3

  • CloudPaw/Song, your local Spoof!, "How could you be so blind? You close your eyes but open mine! I hate the way YOU make ME hate myself for sharing eyes!" - Shared Eyes /She+Her/ says:

    MudPaw Pov: She gawked at Koi, like he was crazy or something. why would she leave her clan, when she was just made an apprentice…? then she frowned. Her “mentor” wasn’t around, so she couldn’t get to training… She sighed, and meowed “fine”. Koi grinned, and his tail brushed hers, and then she meowed, “Let’s go to the apprentice den, shall we?” Koi grinned more, and nodded goofily. But as they walked, MudPaw felt an strange… disturbance… then she remembered the wounds CuriousPaw bore. She shivered, then she wondered if she’d get scars like those. A sick feeling curled in her stomach, and she felt the need to run. She blinked, and suddenly, the camp was gone, in it’s place, a dark, mysterious forest. She turned, and saw two pairs of glowing green eyes with spirals in them, and a big, wide grin full of malice. She quickly turned, and tried to run, but it was like she was held in place. A low, heavy voice growled, “You can’t escape fate…” and she felt like wailing. Then, almost as quick as the first blink that took her here, she was back in the camp clearing, shivering. “Are you.. okay?” Koi suddenly asked, and MudPaw quickly nodded. “let’s get to the apprentice den now,” she meowed. She could feel CuriousPaw staring at her, but she brushed it off. Anything to not relive that nightmare.

  • (Continued)

    Birdheart shouted, then said, “Do you want a mate?”

    Sharpflower turned and stared at him, “What?” Her face showed disgust openly “Why?”
    She narrowed her eyes and searched his gaze, Weren’t his eyes green? Now they are a pail amber… with green tinges… almost pink.

    “Do you feel well?” She asked, nose still scrunched.

    • ❄❄🌸Creamy/paw/heart 🌸❄❄🥀app to the amazing Bloddynight🥀❄☃ready for christmas☃❄🩸bestie is bloodynight🩸🎄she/her🎄All i want for christmas is you🎄 says:

      lol i haven`t seen nightpaw`s pov so i guess he dissapered (i am just asking to see his reaction when he sees Streamcloud have love fever

  • Stripepaw 🐯🐾 can't wait for Chirstmas (click my name for roleplay!) she/her platonic mate to the radical Reedpaw and BlogSis to the marvellous Nightpaw, Lynxpaw and Frostedpaw! says:

    (Continued)
    Birdheart:
    “Me? I feel great. But what about you? Do you want a mate?” Birdheart repeated.
    He couldn’t think, couldn’t feel. All he knew was that this she-cat was beautiful. And would be a perfect mate…

    Splashpool:
    “Sharpflower! He’s got the illness,” Splashpool shouted.

  • OtterLily Pov: She looked around and sighed. She was tired. She walked to the Warriors den to take a nap, but when she saw GentleBlaze shivering there, she knew there must be a problem. “what is it?” she asked, and GentleBlaze meowed, “Oh nothing- it’s just with how fast the disease is spreading-“. He stopped, and meowed, “well- I’m not sure MeadowClan will be any safer.” Suddenly, RiverRipple stormed in, and huffed, “Another day, another warrior sick.” OtterLily turned to look at him, and she realized he looked tired and ill. “What have you been doing?” she asked curiously. “Oh nothing- just found that kit, Koi, tangled in a tree.” he meowed with a sigh. OtterLily shook her head with amusement, and sat down to rest.

    Koi Pov: Koi shook his pelt and sighed. He couldn’t get anywhere around this camp without getting caught in something. He decided that his pelt had had enough, and so he went to the “medicine den”. “hello?” he meowed, and stuck his head inside- but that was when he saw another cat about his age, AsherPaw he thought, and a adult she-cat staring each other off, like it was a intense competition of staring- Next to them, a black tom stood, terrified looking. Koi couldn’t understand anything, so he slowly backed out of the den. clan cats are weird… he thought, but then he regretted that- clan cats are weird, all except MudPaw he re-thought. He decided he had put up with the wierdness- tonight, he would leave. Slowly, he walked back to the Apprentice’s den to get MudPaw.

    MudPaw Pov: She rolled around, and she opened her eyes, and saw a blurry image of CuriousPaw battling dark forest cats- and again and again it replayed. She shivered, and waited, but then she felt somebody’s paw on her. She gasped awake, but she realized it was just Koi. She smiled, and meowed, “Why hello Koi!” Koi looked at her dully. Then she realized what was going on… they were leaving again, at last.

  • Wait… Cloudy, has Mudpaw told the Clan about Willow’s story and the love-fever? Since she’s come back, she should know about the problems so…
    Maybe she can tell Nightpaw, who tells Streamcloud and Scarletstar (Who don’t care, they’re in a daze-thing) and then Nightpaw using his status as a med cat calls a meeting. Then Mudpaw tells everyone about Willow’s story?
    Also, I progressed like 8 pages in the doc today. Also did more of the Allegiances. Cloud, the 10 Wanderer PoVs were a pain to do 😛 I’m up to the part that Mudkit(Now Mudpaw) and Koi run away
    Just a quick check-in from me! ^^

  • (Reply to spiritwalker: lol i meant walked into the den not walked out of the den)
    Asherpaw POV
    Asherpaw stared at Streamcloud then at Nightpaw “uhmmm are you okay Streamcloud?” he asked
    Streamcloud blinked a few times and meowed “oh yes i am fine it’s just…” she looked at his paw and Meowed “oh you are hurt let me take care of that” she quickly dragged him into the den and treated him “there!” she meowed
    “um t-thanks Streamcloud” he stammeed looking into her now pink eyes.
    her face lit up as he thanked her then he walked out of the den towards a VERY shocked Nightpaw he didn’t even move from where he was.
    “hey nightpaw” he hissed
    Nightpaw blined and stared at him
    “what is wrong with Streamcloud” he asked

  • Hey Cloudpaw i have a very evil idea
    What if koi and libra had a lost Sister that got lost and evreyone thought was dead but in the stroy they find her