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  • Okay, so in this fanfic series there are five Clans
    -LightningClan(instead of ThunderClan)
    -StreamClan(instead of RiverClan)
    -BreezeClan(intead of WindClan)
    -DarkClan(instead of ShadowClan)
    -FangClan(instead of BloodClan)
    -StarClan(i didnt wanna change it)

    Oh i forgot to mention it’s called “The Wars Begin”

    This is the discription of The Wars Begin:
    There is even more rivary between the Clans then usual; is there a reason? Through it all Jewlspark wondors if her life really matters.

    Also the main character is Jewlspark, her best friend is Sandstream, she’s in StreamClan, and she’s in love with a tom named Smokefire who’s in LightningClan. And Smokefire is in love with Jewlspark. And i want the first book to start out when she was a kit! Oh and these are jewlspark’s quotes: “hiya Sandstream!” “I’m not a kit anymore, mom!!!” “WATCH YOUR TONE BLUESTORM, I’M NOT YOUR APPRENTICE ANYMORE!!!!” “*touches noses with Smokefire* “I’ll see you at the next gathering, Smokefire!!!”

    We need to decide the following things:
    -what is Jewlspark’s personalaty?
    -what is Sandstream’s personalaty?
    -what’s Smokefire’s personalaty?
    -why are the Clans fighting so much?
    -why does Jewlspark hate her life?
    -after meeting Smokefire does she still hate her life?
    -what is jewlspark’s reaction when Sandstream dies?
    -do Jewlspark and Smokefire become mates? If so, do they have kits? How many?
    -will anyone find out about their relationship besides sandstream? If so, what is their punishment?

    So comment your ideas, and remmember to be creative!😉😊😎

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    • I think it should more super edition length rather than a series, otherwise then the chapters will have heaps of filler.

      Jewelspark should be slightly snarky and pretty bossy and a bit spoilt, but overall, a pretty nice cat
      Sandstream is the ultimate friend to pull off some dare with, and as apprentices and even warriors, you’d always stay up late listening to their silly stories.
      Smokefire is pretty quiet and shy, and very secluded and never really talks to many cats, and when he first met Jewelspark, he thought she was pretty annoying, but grew closer to her.
      Oof I don’t know
      Yes
      She’s a pretty silent mourner for a short period of time, but thinks about him constantly, and remembers the times they shared.
      They don’t become mates after Smokefire says that they aren’t right for each other, and even though this shatters Jewelspark and she disagrees, she eventually learns he’s right. In the epilogue, Smokefire and Jewelspark are still close friends, and Smokefire fathers kits in LightningClan.
      Yes? Not too many cats, though. There is no punishment

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    • 1- I agree with Ospreymist, Jewelspark should have be a generally nice cat who can be bossy and is somewhat spoiled. I also think that she should be talkative.
      2- I agree with Ospreymist, and also I think she should be daring. clever, and a quick thinker.
      3-I agree with Ospreymist, Smokefire should be quiet and shy.
      4- I think that we could say that the clans are fighting so much because of a natural disaster that they were recently hit by and that that natural disaster caused the clans to be low on prey which makes them want to take territory from each other. Maybe the natural disaster could be a drought or a flood?
      5- I like your idea on this one!
      6- I think that Jewelspark should still hate her life even after she meets Smokefire.
      7- Jewelspark feels very sad and shuts everyone but Smokefire out.
      8- I don’t think Jewelspark and Smokefire should become mates.
      9- Yes, I think the Lightningclan medicine cat should find out. They do not receive no punishment because the cat who found out about their relationship chooses not to tell.
      10- I agree with Osprey’s idea of making a super edition instead of a series and Sandstream dying could be near the climax of the book.

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  • Okay, so i thought of why Jewlspark hates her life; when she was a kit she was very close to her littermate, Mintykit, but when she was 3 moons old Mintykit was killed by a badger, leaving Jewlkit(spark) traumatized, then she became best friends with Sandkit(stream), at the age of 6 moons they became apprentices, and when Jewlpaw was 8 moons old, both of her ears got torn in a battle, and she entered a world of darkness(mentally) then when she was 10 moons old she and Sandstream got their warrior names, and at a gathering she met Smokefire, and got to know him, then they talked at gatherings, and eventually started meeting in secret, and the whole world turned bright(to her) but then(like you said) Smokefire says that they are not right for each other, she knows he is right but is shattered, and once more she enters a world of darkness, and then only 5 moons after that, Sandstream is killed in a battle against LightningClan, Jewlspark is devastated, and whishes that she was dead, whenever someone tries to comfort her she pulls away, and yells “I DON’T NEED YOU, MOUSE-BRAIN!!!”. Smokefire is currenly her only close friend, and she still loves him even though she knows that they can’t be mates. Did u like this idea?

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    • Okay so, im changing how Jewlspark and Smokefire met; they met when they were apprentices, heres what the scene might be like:

      Smokepaw was on a border patrol, on the border of StreamClan, then he heard a screech of fright. What was that?! He wondered, then he saw his mentor, drowning in the river! Oh no! He thought, he wanted to help him but, he knew that that would just make him drown too. But then, he saw a gray and white she-cat running towards the river, and she jumped in and grabbed his mentor by the scruff with her jaw, and was swimming very quickly, and finally she pulled him out, “what kind of mouse-brain are you? GET OFF OF STREAMCLAN TERRATORY, NOW!!!!” the she-cat hissed. “We were just on a border patrol” his mentor hissed “come on, Smokepaw” “I’m coming” he replied irritatedly. “Hey, thanks uh…”
      “Jewlpaw.”
      “Thankyou, Jewlpaw. I’m Smokepaw by the way.”
      “Your welcome. But you should get back to you own terratory now.”

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