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So I’ve been working on my chapter, and there’s just a few things I’d like to say!

I realise that originally, I made Acornpaw the apprentice who dies, and Silverpaw’s sibling. But in the chapter I’ve made Acornpaw about 6 moons older than the rest, so I’ve created Lightpaw, who will die.
Additionally, I’ve edited the allegiances to give Silverpaw white paws for no reason at all. Also he’ll grow up to be quite muscular.
I’ve edited what I’ve already written to include Lightpaw.
I’ve decided that Volewillow, Squirrelleap’s sister mention in the prologue, is Silverpaw and his sister’s mother. They could eat prey when she died, and Squirrelleap pretty much raised them. (Their father is unknown, and Volewillow never named a mate, and it is supposed to by Rainsky, who also died.)
I’ve edited the prologue to include a mention of Volewillow’s kits.
I’ve mentioned a gathering, but instead could that be next Silverpaw chapter, I’d assume chapter 6?
I’ve set it in Leaf-Fall/Autumn/Fall, but this can be changed.
And finally, can I make a cover? If I do, is there anything you’d like included.