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Hello, Dusklight! If you are reading this, I have finished the storyboard for The Great Flame, chapter one. I am about 1/2 done writing it!
(Also beware my 3rd person style suuuuuuuucks.)
I can’t wait to read the first chapter! Does that mean I’m allowed/should start work on my own? Also, is there an allegiances for this that I should pull characters from?
I’m excited to read your chapter!! I think your writing style is great! If you enjoy writing, and keep working at it, it’ll keep improving. Don’t be too hard on yourself! Thanks again for including me in this collab!!
sorry I couldn’t work on it, I haven’t been able to type for about a week. Sorry for the inconvenience!
There’s no inconvenience on my end! I’ve been super ultra busy too 😛
Finished the prologue and now I’m writing chapter 1!
My progress got reset and allegiances take SO LONG to write.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTmj2UsALx-fCvx_ZTnAYfrgFQRc3a3b9DTxCvfAW6KdCmcIXEk0OcRvfibBGPDpNfmzj4IlOsJTvV6/pub
Wowwwwow! That prologue is so cool and creatively done, and the rhyming is so amazing! I guess I’ll get started on my own chapter too!!
You can add your own fellow apprentinces btw! I couldn’t think :p
I’m almost done!
Awesome!! I’ve started my own chapter, and I’ve added in a few apprentices for WindClan in it! Quick question – do any of the characters in the WindClan allegiances have set personalities?
Nope, it it’s recommended that they are devoted to The Great Flame, but not in a stupid way like ThunderClan, and perhaps (NOT RIGHT AWAY) they look down on ShadowClan.
You can start typing btw!
Okay, I’m about 1000 words in! (Just so you know, I’m going to be away for the next three days! I’ll be back on the blog on Tuesday!)
I’m 2074 words in! Can’t wait to see you on Tuesday!!!
Welcome back! I’ve finished my chapter!
Hiii! It’s great to be back!! I just read your chapter- it was really good! I thought it had nice exposition, and Ravenpaw was an interesting character with a unique personality. I’ll try to get my chapter finished today/tomorrow!
Alright! Sounds great!
Alrighty, here’s the chapter! I hope you like it, and I’d love to know what I should change to make it better/more in line with your aim for the story!
Also, I updated the allegiances with the WindClan characters I intend to add. Would you mind including it in the master doc? Thanks!!
Anywho, here’s the link!
https://docs.google.com/document/d/15vCERi-VUAGpLAgRgt0rsLdJK20144Xir1gS7lL28OY/edit?usp=sharing
Hi! THE CHAPTER IS GREAT! But, there are a few things that I noticed.
– Those cats are not ThunderClan cats. The Great Flame’s bloodline is spread out due to forbidden relationships.
– ThunderClan cats can’t make fire. The Great Flame only summons it at the climax.
-ThunderClan isn’t in full control, The Great Flame is. Clans congregate from time to time to speak, however, for only a few minutes. 😀
-Try to keep the first chapters calmer.
– Climax No. One is supposed to be secret, so the fire shouldn’t be revealed so quickly, along with the talking of ShadowClan.
– (So sorry!)
Other than that, it is good!
Cool, thanks! (I realise that my writing was mainly focussed on TC and the way I thought everything was running, so when I marked which parts would need to be removed, but… the majority of the chapter was flagged.)
I’ve started my second draft, and even now, if you want to give some feedback to make it better, feel free. I want this to be as accurate to your vision as feasible, so I don’t mind the corrections!
One question, though: approximately how many chapters am I going to write for this story? I want to make sure I pace the chapters correctly, so I was just wondering! Thankssss!
I’m thinking this will be a trilogy, but we will have a PoV swap like Shadeleap did for Growing Flames. Remember, this will be the only book we see Strikepaw as PoV.
Also, I think 45 chapters is what I’m gunning for.
When you’re done, please post the chapter! I’ll be gone for a week because of vacation!
I’ll let you know when the chapter is done! Feel free to check my doc for progress too!!
Have a nice vacation!!
Welcome back from vacation! I just got back too, and am super jet-lagged! I’m only now able to use my chrome book, so I haven’t been able to finish my chapter yet! I promise I’ll get it done soon, though! 😉
Thats okay!
Here is the completed chapter (draft 2)!! I don’t mind a few revisions! (hopefully I don’t have to rewrite it like last time haha, but I will if you want me to!) I hope you like my characters!! If you don’t mind, could you add the WindClan apprentices I inserted onto the completed allegiances? Thanks!!
https://docs.google.com/document/d/15vCERi-VUAGpLAgRgt0rsLdJK20144Xir1gS7lL28OY/edit
Started writing Shiningpaw’s chapter!
Oooo cool! I can’t wait to read it when it’s done!!
Working on a lil storyboard for Ravenpaws character arc 😀
Also Lionpaw how are you doing?
Ooo I should do that for my main character (I’ll have to keep it vague tho, so I don’t go completely off the rails like I did for my first draft of chapter 2 😛)
still here?
Yep!! Want me to start work on my next chapter?
Sure! I’m in Canada rn. Lionpaw is going tthrough a tough time with anxiety, so she can’t write, so I’m finishing the chapter for her 🙁
Alright! I hope you enjoy your vacation!
I hope Lionpaw is doing alright. Anxiety is a hard thing to deal with, yet it’s something unfortunately a large portion of the world struggles with. You aren’t alone, Lioness!
Chapter is done & posted!
YAY!!
I’m on my third page I think (:
I’m thinking of starting my second chapter!! Do you have any things that I should include? Or any ideas for Eveningpaw (Shades’ character)?
Eveningmist should be a Warrior, nothing really special but I think she has her moments 😀
You should totally start! Go wild, I don’t really care what happens! These early chapters are made to be foundations!
Okay, thanks!!
Almost done! Sorry for the wait, school is busy, got my first test!
Alrighty!! Unrelated, but I love your pfp!
Heyy Dusklight!!
Have you ever considered putting your fanfictions on the wiki?
I put one of them on!
https://blogclan-2.fandom.com/wiki/Dusklight%27s_Fanfictions