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Hey, everyone. I’m very sorry for how long this took to write and I do apologize in advance for how long this is. I do encourage everyone to read it and reflect on it, even if you feel like you weren’t involved. We’ll be approving most of the comments on this page now while still keeping an eye on things. Some comments will remain unmoderated, though, as we feel that they muddle the water further. -Emberdawn

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Hvn2ullt0iBEcVcDDbk4yqBu9BacOqUnQYwyK0nw0xY/edit?usp=sharing

Secret Page Service

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  • Guys, I’m so sorry. I was on a trip and forgot to tell you guys. Earlier I think you guys let me join but If I can’t anymore, that’s okay. I really want to write fan fiction. Sorry again!

  • Wolfpaw/whisper | Winter Wolf Casting Shadows On Ice (Formerly Icepaw) Read my fanfic Rising Stars! says:

    Alright, who’s up for chapter 4?

    • I believe so. I’ll see what the others think and we might be able to find your character in the chapters to come.

      • Thanks! Maybe I could be a kit age with an interest in herbs even though in BlogClan I am an apprentice. Then Hollykit and me can have some story or smtg. Also, if I am a kit maybe I got attacked by the rats and that is how you found me like very hurt. Idrk

        • Wolfpaw/whisper | Winter Wolf Casting Shadows On Ice (Formerly Icepaw) Read my fanfic Rising Stars! says:

          Sorry, Skypaw is the Med App. You will be a kit, though, and you will start your training alongside Hollykit!

          • okay, could i be found like maybe hurt and hungry and all alone. also can i be very scared and cautious/doesn’t trust others. maybe family betrayed me?

  • Yeah!

    Prologue: Lionpaw (done)

    Chapter One: Amberleaf (done)

    Chapter Two: Shadeleap (done)

    Chapter Three: Pantherfrost (done)

    Chapter Four: Flakepaw if they respond!

    Chapter Five: Hazelpaw

    Chapter Six and up- OPEN

  • Chapter 3 was Great, Pantherfrost! But can I edit something? My pronouns are they/them, not she/her. And… This is going to sound very selfish and you guys don’t have to do it but editors, can you edit me out of Chapter 3(You don’t have to do it, it’s optional. And I don’t mean any harm to Pantherfrost.)? I’m just asking because I thought up of this backstory of myself:
    After waking up in the forest, I was living an OK ish life as a loner. I usually avoided the Clan cats and when Clan cats approached me, I attacked them, and ran away when they were stunned. But one day, the Clan finds me dying from a sickness. They take me to their camp and take care of me. While taking refuge in the Clan, I slowly make a relationship with the Clan and begin to love it.

  • Oop I just flipped back on the comment pages and now I know how you figure out the traits and connections and stuff on the character page! If it’s not too late, then here’s my form!
    Trait one: Secretive and (most of the time) kind, has protruding canine teeth (that’s not a trait but oh well)
    Trait two: Very intelligent, brave and loyal, likes to be alone sometimes

    Ability one: Very good/fierce fighter
    Ability two: Good at being quiet (stalking), will always sacrifice herself for the good of others.
    Weakness one: Sometimes she will be a bit cold-hearted
    Weakness two: She will . . . . *cough* sometimes scare little kits with her teeth(accidentally SHE WOULD NEVER DO IT ON PURPOSE!)

    Connections one: Wolfpaw, because their traits are similar
    Connections two: Marblerose

    • hehe same. sorry if its late. btw even though i am an apprentice, in te story i am a kit
      Trait one: Distant and cautious, doesn’t trust others butvery kind and fun when you warm up to them
      Trait two: Fiercely loyal to those whom she has a connection with. Very smart. Likes to be alone

      Ability one: Fierce and nimble fighter
      Ability two: Good at being quiet and very agile. Good hunter when not injured
      Weakness one: Very easily injured, catches sickness easily, and has sensitive skin (sensitive to bedding, etc.)
      Weakness two: Has many seizures which she can’t control

      Connections one: I don’t know but tell me if you think we could have a connection
      Connections two: I don’t know but tell me if you think we could have a connection

      • I looked it up and pansexual pronouns were all listed differently. Could you give me the specific ones?

        (sorry)

  • Wolfpaw/whisper | Winter Wolf Casting Shadows On Ice (Formerly Icepaw) Read my fanfic Rising Stars! says:

    Flakepaw and Sandbreeze have first dibs, because both of their chapters were taken.

    If neither comment in 1.5 days, then we will go back to the drawing board!

  • Hey guys so the chapters are AMAZING so far!! I would love to claim another one if there’s one open!! I just have a few questions

    Who did lead the rats to the camp?
    In chapter three, I’m shown sending Panthi on the patrol. I’m totally fine with it but am I acting as the leader?
    Are we staying with our blogclan ranks? Because I’m pretty sure Amberleaf is an apprentice still right? That one makes sense with her being a medicine cat and all but i thought Pantherfrost was one too? and we were talking about Icepaw being a kit? Idk but i think we should keep it consistent
    Will there be any mentors other than Skypaw and Amberleaf? I know the majority of us are apprentices but I’m actually Sandbreeze’s mentor on the blog…. are we keeping that? Also will Hollykit have an apprentice ceremony? or any other kit we find?
    What are we going to do with the ‘connections’ we filled out? (also this is more of a comment but if anyone is new or just doesn’t have a connection i could be your friend, i try to be friends with everyone)

    • I am an apprentice, and I wrote myself as an apprentice, but everybody has silently decided that I’m not an apprentice.

      My idea was that it was Specklepaw. Specklepaw is kinda a burden to Amberleaf.

    • 1) idk
      2) if everyone agrees, if fine with it
      3) im not sure bc even though I’m an apprentice in blog clan, im going to be a kit in the story
      4) I think we should have more mentors if we have enough warriors (lol, we probably don’t) and I think me and hollykit should get an apprentice ceremony
      5) I think that is just for seeing how you work with other cats and which are like more your friend

    • 💮🌸Skye🌸💮 [Skypaw//Skymist//Misty Moon On A Fareway Sky//Has two fanfics going on! Check out Shinign Shadows and my newest: Shadowed Path!] says:

      Who did lead the rats to the camp? Idk
      In chapter three, I’m shown sending Panthi on the patrol. I’m totally fine with it but am I acting as the leader? Idk
      Are we staying with our blogclan ranks? Because I’m pretty sure Amberleaf is an apprentice still right? That one makes sense with her being a medicine cat and all but i thought Pantherfrost was one too? and we were talking about Icepaw being a kit? Idk but i think we should keep it consistent Yes she is an apprentice-
      Will there be any mentors other than Skypaw and Amberleaf? I know the majority of us are apprentices but I’m actually Sandbreeze’s mentor on the blog…. are we keeping that? Also will Hollykit have an apprentice ceremony? or any other kit we find? Idk and I think yes
      What are we going to do with the ‘connections’ we filled out? (also this is more of a comment but if anyone is new or just doesn’t have a connection i could be your friend, i try to be friends with everyone) I guess write them on the story? Idk

  • Hi everyone. I just wanted to tell you guys that I’ll be gone for about 10 days because my mum gave me a forced Blog Break because I watched YouTube with her tablet, so I’m really sorry, but I won’t be able to check how A Destiny Calling is going for a while.