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    • Blossomclaw dived past a couple of warriors, & into a den. It was the nursery, the queens & kitsch the corner of the den. Blossomclaw swallowed hard. “I’m not going to hurt you but I need to know where my mate is, Gorserunner.” She mewed gently to the cats.
      A queen pointed her tail & Blossomclaw ran up to a mossy part of the grass at a tree’s roots. “Gorserunner?” She called, & heard murmuring.
      With a gasp, she started digging down. “Quickwind! He’s here!”

        • Blossomclaw gasped with relief as she saw Gorserunner’s black fur(is that his fursona? I furrgot), digging faster. “I see him! I think he’s unconscious…” She breathed out, pulling him out of the hole by the scruff.

          Dust matted his pelt & his breathing was slow. Soil was scattered across his fur. “Gorserunner! Gorserunner, can you hear me?” Blossomclaw meowed to him, licking the dirt from his fur.

            • Gorserunner only heard faint voices, he couldn’t make out what they were saying. He tried to yowl so they new he was there, but dirt filled his mouth. He wacked his paws up and down, but that only made a pile of moss and dirt fall on top of him, he couldn’t breathe as he fell deep through the ground. Finally the ground loosened and he landed on hard stone. Gorserunner could hear a faint trickle of water, but the sound of voices were gone completely.

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    Wow that was lame……

  • “Gorserunner! No!” Quickwind yowled, scraping away the dirt even harder. His back paws pushed hard on the ground, and he tripped into the hole. He fell on his belly, and he heard a small water sound. He tried to stand up, but his limbs felt weak. “BLOSSOMCLAW! BLOSSOMCLAW!” He yowled through the dirt. “Gorserunner? Are you here?”

  • Opening her eyes, Blossomclaw coughed dirt, soil making her vision blurry. The water’s trickle became louder as she felt herself being pushed by its force. “Gorserunner? Quickwind?” She gasped out, bristling as the water started pushing her.
    She saw the two toms’ muddy pelts barely, her eyes flickering.
    Blossomclaw let out a gasp as she realized where they were now…
    ‘An underground river!’

    Heaving herself against the current, she tried to paddle towards the two.

    • Quickwind watched Blossomclaw. “Gorserunner is right here, but I don’t know how strong he is. We’re going to have to climb out somehow.” He said to her.

      • Gorserunner heard footsteps and voices his vision was blurry and his mind was delusional, “Get away from me you you fox rabbits!” he screeched.

        Thistlestar growled the clan wasn’t ready, they needed training, “Retreat!” she slashed a tom then rounded her cats out of camp.

        • Everlight heard the call for retreat. What?? They had clanmates they had to save! “Come on,” Redleaf hissed. “Thistlestar said–”
          “I don’t CARE what Thistlestar said! We’re not leaving our clanmate,” Everlight shouted.
          “WE DON’T HAVE A CHOICE,” Redleaf yelled back. “We’re outnumbered! You can’t fight off all of ShadowClan alone, so COME ON. We’re LEAVING.” She grabbed Everlight’s tail and pulled, hard. “Move your tail or I’ll knock you out and carry you back.” Everlight was stunned. He knew Redleaf was loyal, but to abandon their clanmates just because Thistlestar wanted to run from a fight? This wasn’t right! Redleaf had been idolizing Thistlestar ever since she became leader! This hadn’t happened with Greystar before, so what was going on? In the end, Everlight didn’t have a choice but to follow his fleeing clanmantes as they ran away back to ThunderClan.

          • Cricketkit saw some cats from her clan fleeing, so she followed them. She ran as fast as she could, as hard as she could.

  • “I dont know.” Quickwind meowed, looking into the hole in the top. He yowled. “HELP! HELP! IS ANYONE THERE? ”

    Bramblepaw chased Cricketkit, stopping the kit in her tracks and picking her up. “You’re too weak to run. Let me carry you.” She meowed through her scruff, breaking into a sprint.

    • Cricketkit nodded gratefully, and let herself be held.
      Sweetspark was panicking, worried for her mute daughter. When she saw the cats returning to camp, she let out a sigh of relief and picked Cricketkit up from Bramblepaw.
      Pinewhisper looked at her daughter and granddaughter reunite. She suddenly felt very tired and closed her eyes.
      (She’s dead btw. I can’t make her do anything interesting 😛)

    • Fawnheart swam up from farther down the tunnel. “Come on , I know how to get back. Quickly.” She walked forward and paused to see if the others were following, and if they weren’t, she needed to see if they could follow.

  • Poolstorm heard thistlestar call a retreat, but she wasn’t about to leave her best friends. Acornsplash grabbed her shoulder, shaking her brutally. “Didn’t you hear thistlestar?” He snarled. “Leave them!” Poolstorm growled and scored claws lightly down his shoulder. He dropped her and she took off “blossomclaw? Gorserunner? Quickwind?”

    Ryecloud rushed out of the nursery. “What happened?” She shrieked. Then she saw the elderly she cat slumped on the ground. “Pinewhisper?” Gladekit padded out from behind her. “What’s wrong with Cricketkit?” He mewed. Ivysnow bustled out of her den, armed with herbs. (Marigold, feverfew, And dock.)

    This would be a great dusktail moment 😉

  • Gorserunner felt his fur soaked he must of fell in the underground river when he slipped. Why won’t these Fox-rabbits leave me alone! he thought delusional. His limbs started to twitch and he collapsed on the ground, screeching.

    Cinderfall perked her ears she was almost free from a Shadowclan tom when Thistlestar had yelled retreat, but she heard something else, it was coming from the nursery, she guessed. Cinderfall launched the tom away and headed for the nursery, a queen started growling at her but she paid no attention, voices were coming from below the nursery. Sniffing around she noticed a hole. Looking down she saw cats that smelled of her clanmates. She noticed an acid green river also, “Don’t touch the water!” she yelled “I’ll get you out” Somehow….

    Thistlestar clawed a few more pelts, she looked around and saw some of her cats hovering around the nursery, “Come on! Hurry!” she roared.

    • Blossomclaw heard Cinderfall’s voice through the nursery floor. “Alright!” She calles back, pulling Gorserunner away from the water & padding with a Quickwind away from it.

    • Everlight looked back and saw Cinderfall. When he heard what she said, he knew– she’d found their clanmates. I’m sorry, Redleaf, Everlight thought before whirling around and charging in to help. “Cinderfall! Here, if we put this branch into the hole, they can climb out!” He poked the end of the branch into the hole, letting it slide down until it hit the bottom. “Come on, can you climb up?”

      Redleaf saw her mate turn back and approach Cinderfall, who was staring at a hole in the ground by the nursery. That idiot! What is he doing? She hesitated, turning to help, but then she heard Thistlestar: “Come on! Hurry!” Tearing her gaze away from her mate, she ran, following Thistlestar out of the camp. She approached the leader and said “Thistlestar, I think Cinderfall and Everlight found where they’re keeping our clanmates.” She’d let Thistlestar decide what to do with that information. Thistlestar knew what she was doing. Redleaf was sure of it.

    • Fawnheart meowed. “I know how to get out! There’s an easier way to go.” Then she muttered, “How do you think they got him into here? You created the hole, not shadowclan.”

  • Quickwind looked to Blossomclaw. “I’ll help you two get out.” He meowed, eyes soft.

    Bramblepaw got into the clearing and set Cricketkit down, looking around. Where is Quickwind? she wondered. Then she remembered seeing him run with Blossomclaw to find Gorserunner. He was still in Shadowclan! i Have To Get him! she thought to herself, sneaking back out of the camp, sprinting to shadowclan.

      • Quickwind hesitated. “If the dirt caves in agaun, you could get trapped down here and die. I don’t want that to happen, and Gorserunner doesn’t either. I can stay and help you two. ” He replied. The Sandy tom walked over to Gorserunner.

        • Fawnheart suddenly sprinted up from somewhere farther down the tunnel. “We don’t have to climb! There’s an easier way to get out!” She yowled before muttering, ” how do you think they got Gorserunner here?”
          “Follow me,” She stopped and turned to see if they were following.

  • REPOST (idk if anyone saw this)

    ~Everlight~
    Everlight looked back and saw Cinderfall. When he heard what she said, he knew– she’d found their clanmates. I’m sorry, Redleaf, Everlight thought before whirling around and charging in to help. “Cinderfall! Here, if we put this branch into the hole, they can climb out!” He poked the end of the branch into the hole, letting it slide down until it hit the bottom. “Come on, can you climb up?”

    ~Redleaf~
    Redleaf saw her mate turn back and approach Cinderfall, who was staring at a hole in the ground by the nursery. That idiot! What is he doing? She hesitated, turning to help, but then she heard Thistlestar: “Come on! Hurry!” Tearing her gaze away from her mate, she ran, following Thistlestar out of the camp. She approached the leader and said “Thistlestar, I think Cinderfall and Everlight found where they’re keeping our clanmates.” She’d let Thistlestar decide what to do with that information. Thistlestar knew what she was doing. Redleaf was sure of it.

    • Blossomclaw heard Everlight meowing to Cinderfall, & nodded, “I’ll push Gorserunner up, Gorserunner, do you think you can climb the branch?” She gently mewed in his ear.

          • (she got the n the tunnel the other way) “You know how I followed you into the SC camp and then dissapeared? Well I was leading three shadowclan cats away from camp when I slipped in a hole. I heard your voices and ran down the tunnel to you. If we go back the way I came,” Fawnheart stopped to take a breath, ” we will come out of the ground close to the TC border.”

        • Dandelionpaw (I have returneddddddd) –

          Watching helplessly as Gorserunner seemed to sway slightly with dizziness, Dandelionpaw rushed in front of him, tears welling in her eyes as she stared at her mentor
          “Gorserunner come on, we have to go, don’t die, please don’t die, I can’t cope without you !”
          She pressed against him, supporting the tom in case he began to fall

    • Thistlestar hesitated, she stood in front of the nursery and when a shadowclan cat would walk over she’d snarl furiously.

  • Sweetspark looked over to her mother and gasped. “Pinewhisper?” she cried as she ran over to the brown tabby elder. She saw that her mother wasn’t breathing, from the way that her flank wasn’t moving. She pushed her muzzle into her mother’s fur, feeling like a kit again.
    Shimmerkit walked out after her mother and heard her wails. She saw Pinewhisper’s body, and Sweetspark pushed her back. “Shimmer, don’t look. Pinewhisper’s dead.”
    Cricketkit jumped over her mother’s paws, seeing Pinewhisper lying on the ground. She licked her grandmother’s paws and thought, Goodbye Pinewhisper.

  • Again Clo, this would be a good moment for a shadowclan *cough cough Dusktail cough cough* cat to turn up.

    Acornsplash stared at his clanmates. “Have you all got bees for brains?” He snarled.

    Poolstorm snarled at a brown tabby she cat, squaring off by the hole (it’s maplecloud 😉.) “don’t you dare hurt my friends.” She growled.

    Ryecloud buried her nose in to Pinewhispers cold fur. “May starclan be with you Pinewhisper.” She whispered.

    Ivysnow put herbs on Cricketkit. (Oof.)

    • Blossomclaw let out a gasp as a ShadowClan warrior stood at the end of the tunnel.
      (😛)
      Dusktail went down towards them and grabbed Gorserunner’s scruff and helped him.
      Blossomclaw’s fur rippled. “Why are you helping us?” She asked the tom.

      • Dusktail met blossomclaw’s eyes. “I’ve seen cats fall prey to the crazed sickness before.” He replied. “I don’t want it to happen to anyone else.” Poolstorm flinched. “Mouse brain.” She teased.

    • (Luna u control Dusktail 😛 )
      Gorserunner didn’t comprehend anything, he growled quizzically. He had heard faint cries of a young cat, but he didn’t notice that it was his apprentice.

      Cinderfall looked down the hole, the cats had disappeared, they most have went farther down the tunnel…

      Thistlestar was done, “Hurry up!” she practically barked, This is tearing my pride she huffed.

      • Everlight and Redleaf watched Dusktail lead the ThunderClan cats down the tunnel. “He’ll get them out,” Everlight murmured.
        “We should go,” Redleaf told him, hearing Thistlestar call once again for everyone to leave. The two flee, following Thistlestar.

      • Dandelionpaw –

        Her tail twitched nervously as she kept close to Gorserunner, trying to work her way through the darkness whilst he paws throbbed with pain. She had stepped on a sharp stone somewhere and the sore patch was giving her a slight limp.

    • Cricketkit winced at the herbs on her back, not enjoying the sent of them. She looked down at her limp leg and wondered, Will I have to be with these herbs every day soon?