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  • Welcome to my writing contest!

    The rules are:
    The minimum word count is 350 words
    The maximum word count is 5,000 words
    You can do 2 prompts
    The contest ends May 28
    First place will receive two secret pages
    Second place will receive one secret page
    Third place will receive a short story about their favorite ship

    The prompts are:
    SkyClan never got kicked out
    BluestarXRosetail
    Leopardfur became mates with Frogleap
    IvypoolXHawkfrost
    Turtle Tail lived
    Evil Jayfeather
    Hopekit and Wishkit lived
    Thistleclaw was good

    Have fun writing!

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    • I’m Sorry, I don’t know any of these characters… (Akkkk I’m only on the new prophecy series)… I would otherwise.

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    • 🐺รuรђiкเT ɭ๏שєร ฬ๏ɭשєร!!!🐺 (♥ Sushikit/Sushipaw/ Sushipanda ♥) says:

      I’m going to do IvypoolXHawkfrost and Evil Jayfeather.
      1. The Feather of the Dark Jay (Evil Jayfeather)
      Chapter 1 coming soon!

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    • I’m going to do the ‘Thistleclaw was good’ prompt and the ‘Hopekit and Wishkit lived’ prompt.

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    • I’ll join! I’ll post the first part in another comment.

      EDIT: Forgot to say, I’m doing the Thistleclaw was good one.

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  • Yellowfang felt a pain in her belly dawn was cracking, “My kits,” she gasped hobbling out of the med den. Sagewhisker would cover for her she thought. Grabbing some herbs she walked out of camp. She walked to the dead tree. their she laid down. Panting she ate some herbs, “Kits, come soon.” The sun was shining when the pains stop Yellowfang was exhausted but three healthy kits lay beside her. She thought how could I ever give them up Lizardfang was a terrible mother to her three kits Yellowfang didn’t want hers to be awful like her vision said. Yellowfang decided “I’ll keep them and their names will be Wishkit, Hopekit, and Brokenkit. Wishkit for the wishes of life and all of hers may come true. Hopekit for all of her hopes. And Brokenkit for the way it breaks my heart that I have to stop being a medicine cat.” She let the its suckle for a while then brought them back to camp where Raggedpelt was waiting for her. She simile at him how surprised he would be at the decision she was making. “I have something to say,” she declared to the clan Sagewhisker was staring at her in amazement, “I have broken the code of the medicine cats.” She let the words sink in for a moment then Sagewhisker let out a yowl, “How could you? You said you would still be a medicine cat after you had these kits Yellowfang!”

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    • Ack I didn’t know this was saved! ingore it

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  • Yellowfang felt a pain in her belly dawn was cracking, “My kits,” she gasped hobbling out of the med den. Sagewhisker would cover for her she thought. Grabbing some herbs she walked out of camp. She walked to the dead tree. their she laid down. Panting she ate some herbs, “Kits, come soon.” The sun was shining when the pains stop Yellowfang was exhausted but three healthy kits lay beside her. She thought how could I ever give them up Lizardfang was a terrible mother to her three kits Yellowfang didn’t want hers to be awful like her vision said. Yellowfang decided “I’ll keep them and their names will be Wishkit, Hopekit, and Brokenkit. Wishkit for the wishes of life and all of hers may come true. Hopekit for all of her hopes. And Brokenkit for the way it breaks my heart that I have to stop being a medicine cat.” She let the its suckle for a while then brought them back to camp where Raggedpelt was waiting for her. She simile at him how surprised he would be at the decision she was making. “I have something to say,” she declared to the clan Sagewhisker was staring at her in amazement, “I have broken the code of the medicine cats.” She let the words sink in for a moment then Sagewhisker let out a yowl, “How could you? You said you would still be a medicine cat after you had these kits Yellowfang!” Yellowfang groaned, “Sagewhisker I can still be a medicine cat.” Cederstar jumped in before Sagewhisker could respond, “Yellowfang who is the father?” he asked. Sagewhisker rolled her eyes but stayed quiet Yellowfang knew what she was thinking, “Raggedpelt.”

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  • Yellowfang felt a pain in her belly dawn was cracking, “My kits,” she gasped hobbling out of the med den. Sagewhisker would cover for her she thought. Grabbing some herbs she walked out of camp. She walked to the dead tree. their she laid down. Panting she ate some herbs, “Kits, come soon.” The sun was shining when the pains stop Yellowfang was exhausted but three healthy kits lay beside her. She thought how could I ever give them up Lizardfang was a terrible mother to her three kits Yellowfang didn’t want hers to be awful like her vision said. Yellowfang decided “I’ll keep them and their names will be Wishkit, Hopekit, and Brokenkit. Wishkit for the wishes of life and all of hers may come true. Hopekit for all of her hopes. And Brokenkit for the way it breaks my heart that I have to stop being a medicine cat.” She let the its suckle for a while then brought them back to camp where Raggedpelt was waiting for her. She simile at him how surprised he would be at the decision she was making. “I have something to say,” she declared to the clan Sagewhisker was staring at her in amazement, “I have broken the code of the medicine cats.” She let the words sink in for a moment then Sagewhisker let out a yowl, “How could you? You said you would still be a medicine cat after you had these kits Yellowfang!” Yellowfang groaned, “Sagewhisker I can still be a medicine cat.” Cederstar jumped in before Sagewhisker could respond, “Yellowfang who is the father?” he asked. Sagewhisker rolled her eyes but stayed quiet Yellowfang knew what she was thinking, “Raggedpelt.” Sagewhisker just hissed and stormed off. Cederstar meowed, “Yellowfang I won’t make you leave camp but you are not allowed to be a medicine cat anymore.” Yellowfang’s eyes lit up, “Thank you Cederstar!” Half a moon has passed form the birth of the kits Raggedpelt has now became Raggedstar but many of the cats in the clans still distrust me.

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      • Oops yes Lizardfang was an elder

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    • Yellowfang looked at Brokenkit playing with Hopekit while Wishkit looked on quietly. She saw a flash of white all of the sudden with glimmering red on Hopekit running she went to see what happened. Seeing the blood glimmering on her side while Brokenkit looked shocked to see his sister like that but his claws were out. Wishkit looked on at her sister with conern in her eyes, “Hopekit,” she whimpered her sky blue wide. Brokenkit was cowering about to know what would happen. Yellowfang turned on her son, “How could you do this to your sister?!” she yowled. Brokenkit mewed, “She was fine a second ago.” Yellowfang just turned away and licked her kit. She would be fine she let out a sigh of relief. Right then she heard a yowl from the medicine den running towards it she saw Sagewhisker in a fit. Sagewhisker gasped, “Starclan is calling me.” “No!” Yellowfang yowled. Running into the camp she yowled, “Sagewhisker is dead.”

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      • A few moons later Yellowfang watch as her two remaing kits Wishpaw and Hopepaw got there warrior names Brokenpaw died in a battle with Windclan she was now deputy and it was amazing this warrior life. Her kits warrior names were Wishshine and Hopeglimmer. She was so proud of them as the clan called there names. Yellowfang just found out a day ago she was execpting a second litter of kits it was so wonderful.

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      • Stardust who has a second account which is way more detail then this one ~ Star that gleams like a speck of dust ~ Star Shadow ~ Night ~ Star ~ Blazesoul says:

        “What!” Raggedstar shouted. Yellowfang stammered as she talked, “She’s d-d-dead.” Her kits tumbled into the medicine den, “Why you so sad mama,” Wishkit mewed. Raggedstar answered for her, “She lost someone very imporant to her.” Yellowfang just stared at the dead body. She shook her head, “Kits we’re living here for now,” until there is a second medicine cat,” she mewed.

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  • Thunder across the Sky (SkyClan stayed)

    Chapter 1A: Borders and Battles
    “Daisyfawn! What are you doing on our territory?” Redtail growled. “You know that you can’t hunt here!”
    Daisyfawn ducked her head. “Please forgive me. My kits are near, and you know how little space we have to hunt in SkyClan.”
    “Leave ThunderClan territory!” Tigerclaw hissed. Ravenpaw recoiled. He knew Tigerclaw was fierce, but he didn’t think he’d drive off a half-starving queen. Tigerclaw growled. Daisyfawn wailed and ran away, but before that a SkyClan patrol emerged.
    “How dare you attack our queens?” A cat growled. It was Bristleblaze, SkyClan’s deputy and Daisyfawn’s mate.
    “Get off our territory, crowfood-eaters! ThunderClan, attack!” Redtail yowled.

    (Chapter 1B will be out, the comment’s too long)

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  • Chapter 1B: Borders and Battles

    Tigerclaw hurled straight into Bristleblaze and the two were in instant combat. A young warrior clawed at Ravenpaw. He tucked in his tail and clawed at the SkyClan cat’s side. The SkyClan cat, who Ravenpaw recognised as Marshflame, knocked into Ravenpaw and gripped him down, her claws digging into his stomach. Remembering the kit move, Ravenpaw let himself go limp. Marshflame wasn’t expecting Ravenpaw to give up so easily, so she relaxed her hold in surprise. Ravenpaw kicked out with his hind legs, and managed to pin Marshflame down.
    “Get out of our territory!” He hissed, fluffing up his fur to make him seem more threatening than he was.
    He let go of the she-cat, and she left ThunderClan’s territory, wounded. Ravenpaw was in shock. When another cat ran into him, he quickly unsheathed his claws, but sheathed them when he realised it was Redtail.
    “Ravenpaw,” he muttered hoarsely. “The battle’s over. We won.” Guilt clouded his face. “Bristleblaze is dead. He fell into the river.”
    “Ravenpaw, get back to camp and let Spottedleaf sort you out. Look at you!” Tigerclaw demanded. Ravenpaw realised that he was bleeding. He didn’t look back until he heard a scream.

    (Parts 2, 3 and 4 will be out soon I have low charge and it’s night lol)

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    • Chapter 2: Red as Blood

      Ravenpaw was still bleeding, but he forced himself to stop because out of the corner of his eye, he saw vibrant red fur underneath the brown one that belonged to Tigerclaw. Redtail kicked out with the same move Ravenpaw used. But Tigerclaw clawed him back; he ran a claw down Redtail’s face which caused Redtail to recoil.
      Redtail seemed to realise that he was playing defence. Instead of trying to hurt Tigerclaw he retreated backwards, standing on his hind legs as he batted away Tigerclaw’s claws.
      Redtail had backed into a wall. Now cornered, Redtail couldn’t use the same tactic as he was doing so Tigerclaw managed to run a claw down his eyes. Blinded, Redtail thrust his claws blindly towards Tigerclaw, who threw him backwards and pounced on top of him like he was hunting mice. Ravenpaw couldn’t see what happened next but Tigerclaw stood up, his mouth dripping with blood,
      Ravenpaw darted away, but Tigerclaw was faster. He pinned Ravenpaw to the ground by his tail. Ravenpaw struggled but he was too weak.
      “Maybe I’ll need an alibi.” Tigerclaw muttered.
      “There was a battle at Sunningrocks. Bristleblaze killed Redtail. I killed Bristleblaze in revenge. Run back to camp and yowl, “Redtail’s dead!” And I will spare you.”
      Ravenpaw didn’t protest. He just ran.
      “Redtail’s dead!” He cried. Weak from blood loss, he fell to the floor.

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    • Chapter 3: A New Warrior.

      “Alright, you can tell him.”
      “Ravenpaw. Ravenpaw, wake up.” Something nudged him on the flank.
      “Greypaw? Is that you?” Ravenpaw mumbled. “Who are you?” He asked as he noticed a ginger tom standing next to his friend Greypaw.
      “I’m Firepaw, I’m new to the Clan.” Firepaw purred.
      “You’re becoming a warrior!” Greypaw mewed.
      “Really?!” Ravenpaw looked at Spottedleaf to see if it was true. The pretty medicine cat nodded. Bluestar’s voice sounded from outside. “Let all cats old enough to catch their own prey gather beneath the highrock for a clan meeting!”
      Ravenpaw ran outside, suddenly excited.
      “We have some grave news. Our beloved deputy, Redtail, has been murdered by a SkyClan cat at a border fight. Tonight we will sit vigil for Redtail.” Bluestar mewed sadly. “We will need a new deputy. I say these words before the spirt of Redtail, so he may hear and approve my choice. Tigerclaw avenged Redtail’s death, and managed to drive of the SkyClan patrol. Tigerclaw will be the new deputy of ThunderClan.”
      The Clan yowled Tigerclaw’s name. Ravenpaw hesitated before joining in, but he didn’t want to seem like a traitor os he joined in quietly. That must be why he killed Redtail!

      The comment is to long lol part 3B is below!

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    • Chapter 3B: A new warrior

      Tigerclaw says that one of our apprentices thought bravely in the battle.” Bluestar added.” Tigerclaw, is Ravenpaw ready to become a warrior?”
      Tigerclaw’s voice seemed to be caught in his throat as he agreed, “Yes, he is.”
      “Then I, Bluestar, leader of ThunderClan, call upon my warrior ancestors to look down on this apprentice. They have trained hard to understand the ways of your noble code, and I commend them to you as a warrior in their turn.
      “ Ravenpaw, do you promise to uphold the warrior code and to protect and defend your Clan, even at the cost of your life?”
      Ravenpaw could scarcely believe this was happening. His voice shook, but it was strong and definite. “I do.”
      “ Then by the powers of StarClan, I give you your warrior name. Ravenpaw, from this moment on you will be known as Ravenfeather. StarClan honours your dedication and passion and we welcome you as a full warrior of ThunderClan.”
      Ravenfeather! Ravenfeather licked Bluestar’s shoulder. “I promise I will do whatever I think is best for the Clan.”
      Ravenfeather walked over to sit his vigil.

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  • SkyClan’s Tale: Chapter 1

    Lilypool was hunting on Thunderclan land when a patrol came up on her. She pounced on the vole before looking up.
    Bluestar growled, “What are you doing with that vole?”
    Lilypool shrank back the dead vole in her jaws, “Hunting for my starving clan.”
    Tigerclaw growled so did Redtail as he spoke, “On our terrtiory I suppose.”
    “Well what can you say you plump menaces to the clans!” Lilypool hissed.
    A Skyclan patrol emerged all carrying prey looking at the Thunderclan patrol. After a tense wait a patrol member from Skyclan spoke, “Bluestar you know we have very little territorry to hunt on.”
    “Thunderclan attack!” was Bluestar’s only response.
    The clearing erupted into yowls as the cats from the different clans fought with all their fury.

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  • SkyClan’s Tale: Chapter 1 BOLD

    Lilypool was hunting on Thunderclan land when a patrol came up on her. She pounced on the vole before looking up.
    Bluestar growled, “What are you doing with that vole?”
    Lilypool shrank back the dead vole in her jaws, “Hunting for my starving clan.”
    Tigerclaw growled so did Redtail as he spoke, “On our terrtiory I suppose.”
    “Well what can you say you plump menaces to the clans! We’re starving!” Lilypool hissed.
    A Skyclan patrol emerged all carrying prey looking at the Thunderclan patrol. After a tense wait a patrol member from Skyclan spoke, “Bluestar you know we have very little territorry to hunt on.”
    “Thunderclan attack!” was Bluestar’s only response.
    Lilypool hissed as a powerful dark tabby tom turned to her. “Tigerclaw,” she growled.
    He wasted no time leaping at her. Lilypool turned and slashed her claws along his sides. Tigerclaw growled and turned to face her slashing his claws out at her muzzle. Reeling back Lilypool fell to the ground.
    Tigerclaw let out a yowl of victory, “Die you fox-heart.”
    Lilypool waited for just a moment longer then grabbing him by his legs rolled over to the stream. Hissing she leapt away as Tigerclaw yowled with fury launching at her. She heard Sunflower there deputy calling to retreat Lilypool fled her wounds bleeding.

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