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  • Hi! Quick question about Silver Shadows; is it called the Mooncave, Moonlake, Starcave…Starclancommunicationplace? 😛
    Also, could you change my desc in the allegiances to “fluffy, lithe brown and white marbled tabby she-cat with mossy green eyes, white chest fur and forepaws, and petal-shaped cream patches” Ivysong’s desc to “fluffy light grey tabby she-cat with hazel-green eyes and white chest fur”? tysm ^_^

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    • 💮🌸Skye🌸💮 [Skypaw//Skymist//Misty Moon On A Fareway Sky//Has two fanfics going on! Check out Shinign Shadows and my newest: Shadowed Path!] says:

      Yup, I am! Just have to read the first one hold on-

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  • 💮🌸Skye🌸💮 [Skypaw//Skymist//Misty Moon On A Fareway Sky//Has two fanfics going on! Check out Shinign Shadows and my newest: Shadowed Path!] says:

    Hi, everyone! I’m writing the next chapter! Anything you want to see?

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    • Shadeleap (she/her) | Shades, Shade, Shadey | Shade lit up by Leaping Flames | Mentor to the amazing Sandbreeze! <33 | Running for SW! says:

      – Silverstar coming back with nine lives and choosing a deputy
      – umm idk that’s all I can think of 😛

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    • So, the medicine cats take Silverstar to the Moonlake and are like “okay so um do magic star communication ritual and we’ll just kinda watch you sleep 😛 ” and I think that Starclan would be too faded to give Silverdusk all her lives so it would be super dramatic but she still gets her leader name and a few lives. Maybe they had just enough power to give the medicine cats the prophecy so that’s why they don’t have enough power to give Silverstar all 9 of her lives, maybe only like 5 and that’s like a foreshadowing thing that there will be 5 prophecy cats or something idk
      Then the high ranks discuss who they want to be deputy but then Silverstar is like, “I already know who I want to pick,” and I wOnDeR wHo iT wiLL bE 😛
      So then Silverstar picks her deputy and then is like “So… we gotta leave” and half of Silverclan is like HECK NO and the other half is like SURE
      also Skye, remember that you’re writing in Skypaw’s pov, not Silverdusk’s. 🙂
      as you can see, I am really bad at describing these kinds of stuff professionally 😛

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  • 💮🌸Skye🌸💮 [Skypaw//Skymist//Misty Moon On A Fareway Sky//Has two fanfics going on! Check out Shinign Shadows and my newest: Shadowed Path!] says:

    Hi Silverdusk! Questions:
    Is Flamepaw/spirit your kit in the story?
    Is Iceglow your kit in the story?
    Who are the cats who give you your nine lives, and what are the lives? (Note: I added some dead ocs to make a flood flashback, is that okay?)

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  • If you’re still taking in OCs, could we put them in the other clans that we’ll be rebuilding, or find other ways to fit them into the story? That way, Silverclan won’t as huge as Thunderclan 😛 I’d be happy to help with that but it’s your choice ^^

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  • For Skypaw!
    When you’re writing the nine lives part, or just four lives because yes, here is something to follow. If you need ideas for lives, scroll down.

    https://warriors.fandom.com/wiki/Leadership_ceremony#:~:text=During%20the%20leadership%20ceremony%2C%20nine,to%20all%20cats%20they%20lead.

    Ideas for cats to include: Honeystar, Rosedawn (Silverstar’s mother I think), Silverstar’s mentor, and/or Coldstar ofc. *Adderstar watches from the background lol*
    Ideas for lives: determination, farsightedness, compassion, truth, healing, love, justice, faith, hope, and bravery

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    • 💮🌸Skye🌸💮 [Skypaw//Skymist//Misty Moon On A Fareway Sky//Has two fanfics going on! Check out Shinign Shadows and my newest: Shadowed Path!] says:

      Ty Morningpetal!

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  • 💮🌸Skye🌸💮 [Skypaw//Skymist//Misty Moon On A Fareway Sky//Has two fanfics going on! Check out Shinign Shadows and my newest: Shadowed Path!] says:

    I finished Chapter 2! Here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1XmJZeVaIjeBgmf_hV7pBdqrL19G48C5ib1g_wkR7_uI/edit
    Silv, your mother’s Echomist and your father’s Shiningdusk. In your life ceremony, I also included Shadepaw from Ivysong’s backstory and Songclaw, a cat I made up originally to die in the flood from Skypaw’s memory. Here are the lives given:
    Songclaw: Honor
    Shadepaw: Friendship
    Echomist: Patience
    Shiningdusk: Love
    Coldstar didn’t give you a life (she was going to give you a life for duty, but you didn’t let her, because of the whole StarClan-using-all-their-strenght-and-fading thing, read the chapter for more details, but she wished you “hope”
    I made this like the StarClan cats were using all their strenght to give you five lives, but if they used all their strenght, they’d fade. You didn’t want them to fade, so you denied your fifth life (a life for duty) and Coldstar gave you a wish instead: hope.
    I also tried to make it more emotional and show some of Skypaw’s doubt and paranoia. She sees a early life memory of her parents leaving her due to a natural disaster, and she thinks her new family and Clan will leave her again if she doesn’t save SilverClan. She doesn’t want to leave camp and she’s under a lot of pressure because of all her Clan’s problems.
    The prophecy is
    When the silver gleam is the only left, (when SilverClan is the only Clan left)
    The lake of moonlight shall lighten the heft, (the Moonlake gives Silverdusk her lives)
    And when the song of swans turns into a warning cry, (SilverClan needs to leave their territory and look for another home)
    A single star will light up the sky. (Silverstar will bring StarClan and the other Clans back)
    I put some thought onto it and used Wordhippo for a rhyme (“heft”, I’d never heard it before 😛 apparently its like “weight” or smt, so like, lighten the weight on Silv’s shoulders?)
    I’m actually pretty proud of this chapter :D! What do you all think?
    (Suggestion for Shadey: When Shadeleap gets named deputy, Skypaw jokes “you did say power ran in the family”)

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    • OMGGG SKY THAT IS SOOO GOOD TYSM ILYYYYY <333
      tbh I was having a really bad day today and when I read this aaah you fixed my day :'D
      God Birchfrost gets really whiny like a kit when she’s in pain- I wrote her as more of a feisty, good-humored, easily-distracted and friendly only around close friends, but in here I love her more omg “ITS HURTING ALREADY SKYPAAAW” It made me laugh so much this was good XD
      The prophecy is amazing! It's fine imo that you omitted Coldstar because 1) The pain of being bonked by a tree probably hasn't eased that much, as said on page 16 "Standing slowly, Coldstar was taken aback to still feel pain in her muscles. I'm in Starclan? Her mind raced. Why can I still feel pain?!" sooo yes 😛
      and 2) This has happened before. I'm not going to quote LH SE but basically Crookedstar needed to rest so he couldn't give Leopardstar a life. This could also be ONE of the reasons for Coldstar not giving her a life. It's kinda rare for the previous leader to not give the new one a life, but that makes it unique! Awesome chapter Skye, I'm so so sorry this was a lot! <3

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    • also the comma goes inside the quotations 🙂
      ex:
      “Come on, Ivysong! You’ve got to at least try to stand on your own,” Skypaw mewed, gently nosing the gray she-cat’s injured hind leg.
      Ivysong flinched away from the small lilac tabby. “Only if you trust me to not hurt myself,” Ivysong hissed through gritted teeth. “You and Iceglow have been all over me since I broke my leg,”
      awesome chapter, Skye! <3

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      • 💮🌸Skye🌸💮 [Skypaw//Skymist//Misty Moon On A Fareway Sky//Has two fanfics going on! Check out Shinign Shadows and my newest: Shadowed Path!] says:

        Oh oops 😅
        Ty Petal!

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        • haha you’re good! I also forgot to put a period at the end instead of a comma :’)

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    • not sure if my comment just hasn’t been modded yet or I just didn’t post it-
      summary of what I said:
      I’d suggest having more parts of the prophecy unknown, where the reader is left in suspense instead of having the characters immediately solve it for them. Also, remember to italicize all of the “backstory” so it isn’t confusing. I had to reread the pages a few times before figuring it out haha – could just be me or just a writing mistake.

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        • thanks, Embix! 😛

          adding on to what I said –
          Cinderpelt, the best medicine cat imo, misinterpreted the “fire and tiger” sign as Squirrelflight and Brambleclaw going to commit mass arson to the clans 😛 So it would be great for the medicine cats to get a small part wrong. Also make sure Silverstar doesn’t pull a Firestar 😉
          tysm for adding Shadepaw, even though I scrapped him. The reason I did this was that Shadepaw was Ivysong’s brother, and Silverdusk said that Ivysong, Shadeleap and Silverstar were siblings, so it wouldn’t make sense for their mother to have two kits named Shadekit. If you could just change the name and forget about my terribly boring backstory, that would be awesome. 😛
          Also there were wayyy too many kits in that one part oml/lh (just my opinion)

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          • 💮🌸Skye🌸💮 [Skypaw//Skymist//Misty Moon On A Fareway Sky//Has two fanfics going on! Check out Shinign Shadows and my newest: Shadowed Path!] says:

            Ty! Yeah, I had the prophecy be solved really quickly, but I needed to make sense out of “we suddenly need to leave and get Silv’s nine lives” :)! We can still have some misleading, perhaps misterpreted omens. It never said where they need to go >:)
            Again, tysm for the feedback!

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    • Shadeleap (she/her) | Shades, Shade, Shadey | Shade lit up by Leaping Flames | Mentor to the amazing Sandbreeze! <33 | Running for SW! says:

      Awesome chapter Skye!! It was super intense at the end asfksjjakf i loved it!!

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  • Is it too much to be an editor? As in fixing mistakes? I’ve caught a lot of them in the story so far – totally fine if not, I’m just a huge perfectionist.

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  • Shadeleap (she/her) | Shades, Shade, Shadey | Shade lit up by Leaping Flames | Mentor to the amazing Sandbreeze! <33 | Running for SW! says:

    So i think it’s my turn to write a chapter (could be wrong idk), and if it is, is there anything specific i should put in?

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  • hey, Silv! When there’s further backstory on Adderstar and whatever, please don’t overdo it with the evilness. A lot of people do that in their fanfictions when it really isn’t needed 🙂 Look at Hawkfrost for example – He was an innocent kit who just wanted to protect his siblings and make his mother happy. He witnessed his own brother’s death and vowed to stay by his remaining sister’s side. Hawkfrost joined the clans and was very loyal until Tigerstar convinced him otherwise. All villains have motives! ^^
    And, just clarifying – when you’re having people add more OCs, are you going to add them to the other clans and/or make them loners/rogues?
    ALSO- Could you make Solarpaw and loner/interesting rogue? I could figure out a way to make that work.

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