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“Nobody will stop you from creating. Do it tonight. Do it tomorrow. That is the way to make your soul grow – whether there is a market for it or not! The kick of creation is the act of creating, not anything that happens afterward. I would tell all of you watching this screen: Before you go to bed, write a four line poem. Make it as good as you can. Don’t show it to anybody. Put it where nobody will find it. And you will discover that you have your reward.” Kurt Vonnegut
Darknesss Rising
Chapter 2:
At their leader’s command the band of rouges sprang at them snarling and spitting. ”Hide!” Dovewing hissed to her kits. Frostpaw fled to behind the nursery, with Sandypaw and Ripplepaw at her heels. There they crouched watching the battle with horrified expressions. Frostpaw watched, terrified, as a matted orange she-cat pounced on her mother. The she-cat raked her claws down Dovewing’s side then quickly swiped her paws under Dovewing’s paws, knocking her down. Then the she-cat pinned Dovewing down. “Please don’t kill me, I have kits to look after!” she pleaded to the she-cat. “ I had a kit once and he was perfect, but your old leader killed his father, and now he has turned into the terrible monster he is now. I don’t have a care in the world if your kits are motherless.” The orange she-cat snarled. As she bent to make the killing bite, Lionblaze’s son, Fernong knocked the she-cat off Frostpaw’s mother, and together they drove the orange she-cat into the woods raking their claws in her side and forcing her back. Frostpaw shuddered with relief, but her blood instantly went cold, where was her father? She looked desperately through the battling cats but couldn’t find the pale gray tabby pelt of Bumblestipe. ”Where is Bumblestripe?” she asked her littermates who were crouched beside her. ”I don’t know should we look for him?” Ripplepaw asked anxiously, his pelt standing on end. “But Dovewing said to stay here….” Sandypaw mewed. “No Sandypaw, we will look for him, he’s our father!” Frostpaw replied. “We’ll have to be careful, follow me!” Frostpaw mewed. Slowly, Frostpaw lead the way around the camp looking through the next section of battling cats. “There he is! He’s fighting Scourge The Second!” Sandypaw hissed in her ears. Frostpaw looked in horror, Scourge was slaughtering him, and in a little more time their father would be dead! “We have to help him!” Ripplepaw said in a quiet wail. “I know! Sandypaw, you claw his legs and try to knock his paws from underneath him. Ripplepaw, pretend his tail is rabbit, kill it! I’ll jump on his back and see what I can do… Then Bumblestripe can deal with him from there.” Frostpaw mewed confidently though her gaze showed how scared she was. “Ready?” she asked. “We got your back Frostpaw!” Sandypaw said and Ripplepaw nodded. Frostpaw raced towards Scourge The Second and leaped onto his back, from there she clawed her heart out. She could hear her littermates attacking him from their assigned spots. Even though they had never fought before they fought with the courage of Lionclan. Scourge The Second let out a grunt of surprise and toppled to the ground. Bumblestripe stood there numb with shock as his kits battled Scourge. Finally he came to his senses and drove Scourge The Second back into the woods. “Bloodclan! Retreat!” Scourge The Second yowled. His rouges aimed lasted bites and blows at Thunderclan before trotting obediently back to their leader. “Don’t think this is the last time you’ll see us Kittyclan, we’re only getting started! We are recruiting more Bloodclan warriors!” And then he fled, his rouges at his heels. Dovewing and Bumblestripe raced over to them! “Are you okay?” Dovewing asked, sniffing their pelts anxiously. “Why didn’t you stay where you were told?” Dovewing asked her eyes troubled. “We’re fine and we couldn’t find Bumblestripe so we went to look for him. We saw Scourge slaughtering him so we fought him off.” Ripplepaw said puffing out his chest proudly. “You all were almost slaughtered by Scourge The Second?!!!!” Dovewing exclaimed in a hoarse voice. While they told their story to Dovewing, Frostpaw saw Alderpaw scurry over to them. “Are you hurt?” he asked. “We’re fine but I think Dovewing and Bumblestripe are.” Frostpaw told the medicine cat apprentice. While Alderpaw treated her parents’ wounds, Frostpaw glance around the clearing. None of the cats seamed to badly injured. “Let all cats old enough to catch their own prey join me under Highrocks for a clan meeting!” Bramblestar yowled into the night sky. This time all cats from the smallest kit to the oldest elder came out to see what their leader had to say. “We thought that we had driven out Bloodclan but apparently we were wrong! Scourge The Second has been keeping Bloodclan alive and now has come to take over the clans. From now on no apprentice is allowed out of camp without a warrior escort and kits are strictly forbidden out of the nursery clearing. We will have bigger hunting and border patrols to insure that every cat is safe for now. We will prepare to battle like rogues and this time we will drive Bloodclan out for good. Make sure your wounds are healed. No exceptions. Training and patrols will carry on as normal but each patrol will be assigned a look out cat and a formidable fighter to lead the patrol. Mentors, train your apprentices to fight like rogues. Understood?!” He mewed. “Yes!” the cats yowled. Sorrelstripe padded over to her.” It’s been a long day, why don’t you get some rest. Training can wait until tomorrow.” She mewed. Frostpaw nodded gratefully to her mentor before wearily padding to the apprentice’s den.
Awesome! Good job Frosty <3
Thanks! I love your tribe name! <3
Also, did we stop doing Rerising? I am back from exams and stuff so I could do it again… only 1 more day of Middle school!!!
We can start it up again! I’ll have to write this chapter now, or later 😛 We’ll have to go to the old blog to check our chapters again, or I can repost it on the fanfic collab page. 🙂
I reposted it on the Collab page, 🙂 HYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYPE
Just as great as last time <3
Dark Shadows
By- Streamkit
Prologue-
Suncloud looked down at her second litter. There were toms this time. One a sleek black, like his father. He was a fighter, his birth had shown that. A real struggle. But not as much as the fourth kit; a dark gray she-kit, her markings like rippling water. Suncloud gazed at her with distaste. Redleaf, the medicine cat, said that if the kit’d struggled anymore both of them would have been killed. That was not the only reason she didn’t like her. The tiny kit looked very much, almost too much, like Kestrel, the killer of Nightleaf. The killer of her mate. Even though Suncloud knew it wasn’t the kit’s fault, she couldn’t help noticing the growing feeling of dread and hate that filled her up more and more every time she looked at her.
The last kit, the only one with a name so far, had come swiftly and smoothly, much unlike his sister. She’d named him Swiftkit. Swiftkit was smaller than his brother, black and white. The rest she would have to wait to name- their eye color might make a better prefix than their fur. But secretly she’d already given them names- The sleek black tom, Shadekit; The dusky golden she-kit, Duskkit; The tiny ginger and white she-kit, a tiny copy of herself, Brightkit; and the dark gray she-kit, Streamkit. But she should wait and see.
“Streamkit!”
Duskkit was calling her again.
“Streamkit!”
“What?” answered Streamkit rather crossly. She had been listening to one of Featherleaf’s tales about how Windclan, aided by rogues, had invaded the camp and killed cats, including her father Nightleaf.
“We’re going to sn- Get off, Brightkit!”
Brightkit had jumped on her sister and stuffed her tail in Duskkit’s mouth. “Stop biting my tail then!”
Duskkit let go. “What did you do that for?”
“We’re not supposed to let anyone hear! Come on, Streamkit, we’re going to sneak out of camp. Swiftkit is waiting for us.”
“But what about Shadekit? Isn’t he coming?” Their brother had gone to Redleaf’s den with a bellyache.
“Never mind about him. Serves him right for eating my share of the squirrel.” Mewed Brightkit. “Come ON, Streamkit. You’re such a goody-goody sometimes.”
Swiftkit was indeed waiting for them. “We’re going to sneak out of the dirtplace tunnel.” he explained when Streamkit wrinkled her nose at the stench.
They had been out of camp for ages. Streamkit had suggested going back several times, but Brightkit had stopped her. Just a moment ago, she had picked up fox scent; she recognised it from when a fox had attacked camp.
“We really should be back now.” she mewed. Brightkit did not answer. Nor did Swiftkit or Duskkit. “Brightkit?”
She looked around. They were gone.
“Brightkit! Swiftkit! Duskkit!”
A wail answered her call. “Brightkit?” Streamkit raced forward towards the source of the noise. She let out a gasp of horror. An enormous russet creature had her littermates cornered. A fox! “Brightkit, Swiftkit, Duskkit, run!” Streamkit leapt forward, and began trying to climb up. “Come on!” Swiftkit and Duskkit followed, but Brightkit remained still. “Brightkit!” There was no answer. Their sister was limp and still, and the fox leant down to pick her up.
“No!” Swiftkit shrieked. He ran down, with Duskkit on his paws. They dragged Brightkit up with them, but the fox had grasped their way up. So far it was failing, and Streamkit hoped it would stay that way. They were almost at the top now…And with the fox unable to climb up….
Suddenly Duskkit plummeted down, landing on a ledge not far from the fox.
“Duskkit!”
“I’m coming!” they heard her mew.
Streamkit didn’t dare to watch. She and Swiftkit pulled Brightkit up. “Brightkit? Can- can you hear us?” Swiftkit mewed tentatively in her ear. Brightkit remained still. Her pelt was still dripping blood, her claws still unsheathed, her eyes still glassy. Her eyes…
“Swiftkit.” Streamkit mewed in his ear. “Swiftkit, she’s dead.”
Swiftkit’s eyes were wide. “She can’t be.” he protested. “She isn’t…” and he saw.
“No!” he cried.
“No!” cried Duskkit faintly. She dragged herself forward, and promptly collapsed. With a sickening feeling in her heart, Streamkit noticed that one of her paws were twisted a cruel, unnatural angle. Swiftkit groaned unexpectedly, and collapsed as well, revealing a long gash on his belly. Streamkit was tempted to let herself fall to the ground; but she couldn’t, not while she was still strong and her littermates… But she could hear voices, and she smelled scents… And with a flutter of hope, Streamkit let herself collapse beside her littermates.
Oh no, Brightkit! Waaaaaaaaaaah, Great, but sad. STUPID FOX.
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(Stoat was right! This IS a better intro XD Also, no shipping plz)
Chapter 20 (Yay, I can’t believe it’s been so long and everyone’s loved it! Thanks guys for encouraging me to keep this story <3)
Cakestar leaped to the High-Logs, smiling, it was a nice day so far, with even more amazing news. "All cats old enough to catch their own prey gather around for a clan meeting!" She yowled, her clan came gathering around in a huge blob. "We have three new queens moving into the nursery, Mapleheart, Goldenstreak with Emberfang's kits, and Maplepool with her and Owlwater's second litter." She mewed and leaped down from the logs.
The three queens padded into the nursery, "I didn't know Emberfang had a mate." purred Maplepool to Goldenstreak,
"When your kits became apprentices we started having feelings for each other, then the night they became warriors he asked if I wanted to be his mate and I said yes." Goldenstreak meowed, a little embarrassed. "Mapleheart, who's the father of your kits? Cakestar didn't say." Mewed Goldenstreak.
Mapleheart looked over, "Oh, I-I- forgot to tell her, it's, wait, can you keep a secret?" She asked, her fur started to bristle in fear. The two other she-cats nodded and Mapleheart continued. "It's Chocolateswirl………………, of RedditClan." She mewed. Maplepool stared at her, wide-eyed, while Goldenstreak just laid there, silent as a mouse.
"Sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo, your kits are half-clan?" Goldenstreak broke the silence.
"Yeah," Mapleheart replied, her tail twitched.
"They'll probably be good hunters and fast swimmers and fighters, they at least will be good the clan." Maplepool mewed, showing the bright, and positive side of the problem. "We'll keep the secret." She added. The nursery was silent for a moment until Goldenstreak spoke again.
"Let's get some sleep."
"Yeah"
The three she-cat put their heads down and rested.
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"All the cats that had greencough recovered, except Silverwind, she has died, she was our former medicine cat after Dawnmist, before me, my mentor, and a friend to many cats, may StarClan light her path." Kat mewed sadly to the clan. Syrupwing beside her, poppy seeds in her mouth, signaled with her tail it was time for Kat to go back to their den, and for Syrupwing to give more news, Kat nodded and took the poppy seeds and went back to the medicine den.
"I have an announcement, Greywillow will becoming medicine cat apprentice. Greywillow, do you truly want to spend your days healing cats?" Syrupwing asked, as if she was a wise, and older medicine cat.
Greywillow nodded, "I do." She tried hard not to squeal with excitement, her dream was HAPPENING, right then and there.
"Then you are now officially me and Kat's apprentice, with you formerly a warrior, your apprenticeship will go faster, and with your intelligence." Syrupwing mewed, then she pointed her crippled tail toward the medicine den where she and Greywillow went into.
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"Cakestar, there's some cats at our camp entrance, they claim their names to be Sparkpaw, Cherryfall, Molewhisker, and Birchfall, though, there are no cats in the clans who have these names, other than in our stories." Jayfrost reported, her fur bristled as she spoke, Cakestar nodded and padded after Jayfrost when she showed the way to them.
"What are you cats doing here? You have to be kittypets, BlogClan? Cakestar? Kat? Stormy Sea? What kind of names are these?!" Birchfall meowed sharply.
"We are no sort of silly kittypets, what are you doing on our clan's territory?" Cakestar asked.
"This is ThunderClan's! We need more territory, you cats have badger-lenghthes and badger-lengthes of territory!" Cherryfall hissed.
"Not all of it is ours, plenty of it is YoutubeClan's, RedditClan's, and FacebookClan's territories!" Cakestar growled.
"And we'll team together to protect it, we just moved here about eight moons ago," Jayfrost added, her glare was full of anger at the ThunderClan cats.
"What are these are these silly made up Clans? We are the real wild cats." Molewhisker hissed.
"I've lived for seasons out here in BlogClan. We're not silly made up clans like BloodClan or GlitchClan!" Cakestar lashed her tail at the four cats.
"We'll chase you silly kitties out!" Sparkpaw growled, trying to look fearsome,
"We have queens ready to kit in a moon or two!" Kat joined in in the argument. "Two cats just died. Both very special, the other medicine cat and our former medicine cat before me, I still have Syrupwing, who just became a full medicine cat, and Greywillow just became medicine cat apprentice, we can’t have more important cats die,” She added, her teeth bared, ready to snarl at these cats.
A voice sounded from bushes behind the ThunderClan patrol, “ThunderClan attack!”
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Owlwater and Emberfang guarded the nursery, they were heavily wounded, Sparkpaw and Ambermoon were still trying to break in there. Emberfang and Owlwater made sure they kept out though. Ambermoon was scared away finally, Sparkpaw following after the older cat, scared to fight alone against full grown warriors,
Bramblestar went for Cakestar, Cakestar was winning, finally Bramblestar yowled in fright, “THUNDERCLAN RETREAT!” The warriors of ThunderClan went scrambling back to their camp, where ever it was.
“Good Job, BlogClan,” She mewed to her clan and let Syrupwing look at her wounds and tend her. Syrupwing quickly gave Greywillow some tips about how to put cobwebs and poultice on a cat while treating a gash in Cakestar’s side.
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“Help! Mapleheart is kitting!” Maplepool shrieked from the nursery, Kat, Syrupwing, and Greywillow raced over to the brown tabby queen in pain,
“Ow! It hurts!” She screeched, her fur on her neck rose, and she screamed, a little tiny white kit with pale brown splotches plopped in the nest,
“Congratulations Mapleheart, you have a litter of one healthy….tom-kit.” Greywillow mewed and nosed the little kit toward Mapleheart’s belly.
“He’ll be Littlekit,” Mapleheart purred curling her tail around the white kit, Syrupwing padded outside the nursery,
“Mapleheart has given birth to one healthy tom-kit, she named him Littlekit.” Syrupwing announced to her clan, hoping they would be excited for the new arrival of a kit, Mapleheart’s mother, Jayfrost padded up to Syrupwing,
“Could I visit her?” She asked, her tail high with hope,
“Of course,” Syrupwing replied, and she led Jayfrost to the nursery.
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Yep there ya’ go, those of you guessing who Poolkit, Snowkit, and Sandkit’s parents are you can vote between Maplepool and Owlwater or Goldenstreak and Emberfang here- http://www.strawpoll.me/10501212
Ooooooo I really thought people would start fangirling! 😛
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Nice. I’ll try to draw Littlekit now.
Yay! Thanks! That’s gonna be Adorable <3
Guys, not sure if you already heard but-RERISING IS COMING BACK! YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYA *everyone cheers-HURRAY*
I’m gonna give a nice sneaky preview of chapter nine.
Bowheart peeked out of her den. She saw her daughter, with Ghostsoul. She shouldn’t be with a tom! She’s only been a warrior for a moon! She wanted to but in and pull Nightheart away but she had to keep ignoring her, she had to, Nightheart had betrayed her. She needed to remember that. Bowheart kept watching though, secretly, making sure no-cat saw her. She saw Nightheart whisper something into Ghostsoul’s ear. He had a look of suprise and nodded back to her. Bowheart watched as they made their way to her den. What did THEY think they were doing? Bowheart forced down a hiss and pretended she had been sorting herbs just as Nightheart and Ghostsoul made it to her den….
Dun dun dun…..! For those who don’t know, or don’t remember what Rerising is it’s a novella about ShadowClan coming back and getting into the swing of things after a horrible leaf-bare of being driven out and many cats dying. It stretchees in a bit into the next book but gives more info, and shows a different POV in some spots,So yeah, get hyped for the newest chapter and come-back of RERISING.
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here is chapter 2 of lakeshine’s and my collaberation!! she will post chapter 3 tomorrow. i wrote this chapter we also post them on deviant art
Chapter 2
Flameclaw looked up at Turtlestar through narrowed eyes. The leader was lucky that the dark forest had not risen again. He growled at the long ago told story of the battle between the dark forest. However he knew they were not defeated since he had been there, training. He sniffed and stalked out through the camp barrier. When he was far away from camp he started muttering out loud. “Why has the dark forest not risen?! I have worked hard and i deserve to be up there not her!” he kept muttering to himself, his orange colored pelt gleaned through the trees. That’s when he realized that the ground had a blackish tinge the plants withered before him and the sky blackened out. He knew where he was and shouted “Why did you bring me here my clanmates might suspect that something is up.” At that moment a skinny tom with a pure white tail and grey pelt stepped out of the shadows. “You have been brought here you fool for part of a prophecy! The boundaries between Starclan and the Dark forest is weakening!” before Flameclaw could say anything the toms eyes turned misty grey and he began to chant out “Darkness will rule if the Burning flame” Flameclaw noticed that he looked like he wanted to say more but couldn’t instead he finished with “Unite and destroy the stars!” as soon as the last words were out everything began to spin so fast it was like a tornado then Flameclaw opened his eyes to find himself back in thunderclan territory, On his way back he pondered what this could mean… Over in riverclan territory…
Mossherb watched them bury Carpwhisker. She winced at Stonepelt’s words. The truth was she had let Carpwhisker die! For carpwhisker had known her secret, she wasn’t at all with starclan, she was in fact working with the dark forest. Luckily for her starclan did not know. She had visited the dark forest before many times before in fact on her first day as a medicine cat apprentice, in the moonpool instead of meeting starclan she had met a dark forest cat called Heronwing. Ever since then she had helped the dark forest. Of course she hadnèt actually killed any cat she had simply passed on information, until now. She went back to her den nodding to reedstar on the way, she thought and worried that Carpwhisker might have known that Mossherb had not tried her best, that she had intentionally let her die. She began to sort herbs when after a few minutes she realized there were no more herbs. she looked beside her but found no herb piles, only withered grass. She knew she was in the dark forest. She purred when Heronwing walked out of the shadows. Heronwing ignored her meow she simply stared at her with a blank mist gaze. Then she began to talk in a low voice “Darkness will rule if The healing herb and” Heronwings voice faltered and she ended with “Unite and destroy the stars!” even before the last word was out a great tide rushed towards mossherb she went under, and when she submerged she was back in her den sorting herbs, with Rushkit next to her showing her the thorn in his paw…
Great!
Finally. Posting. Chapter. Two.
Rainstar’s Hope
Allegiances
Leader: Darkstar- Dark brown tom with amber eyes
Deputy: Briarheart- Tortishell she-cat with green eyes
Med. Cat: Shadowfoot- White tom with smoke black paws
Warriors- Toms, and queens not expecting or nursing kits
Hawkmoon- Golden tom with green eyes
Foxtail- Red tom with green eyes and a white tail tip
Bumbleheart- Golden tabby Tom with green eyes
Rookfoot- Brown tom with amber eyes
Mousear- Light brown tom with amber eyes
Violetdusk- Cream she-cat with amber eyes
Flowerheart- Ginger she-cat with a white flower-shaped patch on chest
Nettlemoon- White she-cat with green eyes
Mintfur- Cream tabby she-cat with green eyes
Apprentices- Kits six moons old, in training to be warriors
Skypaw- White tom with sky blue eyes
Queens- She-cats expecting or nursing kits
Petalfur- Ginger she-cat with green eyes
Elders- Former warriors, retired
Speckleheart- Tortishell she-cat with weird grey eyes
Stripetail- light brown tom with amber eyes and a striped tail
Chapter 2
Rainkit couldn’t sleep. She just couldn’t stop thinking of the suspicious look on Shadowfoot. She knew it shouldn’t bother her anymore; she was almost six moons old. But it did. Was he implying that she was related to Dawnclan? She couldn’t be! Her mother was Petalfur and her father died before she was born. It all made perfect sense to her. Careful not to disturb her siblings, she padded out of the den. It was almost dawn. “Couldn’t sleep?” Rainkit jumped. It was Skypaw. “You frightened me! What are you doing up?” Rainkit answered her own question. ‘Dawn patrol’ she thought. ” I have dawn patrol today.” Skypaw must’ve seen the envy in her eyes. He purred.” Don’t worry, once you’re an apprentice, you’ll be out doing fun patrols while I’m stuck playing hunt the tick on Stripetail!” Rainkit purred in amusement. At the corner off her eye, she saw Darkstar jump onto HighLog. ” All those old enough to catch their own prey, gather her beneath the HighLog for a clan meeting!” Darkstar called out. She heard her mother calling from the nursery. ” I have to go. See you around.” She meowed to Skypaw. She padded into the den. Her mother practically jumped on Rainkit and started grooming her.” What’s going on?” Rainkit asked. Her mother replied. ” Today is the day!” She said between licks. “Finally!” Rainkit understood now. In just a few moments, they would be apprentices. They padded out of the den. “It is time for me to perform my favorite ceremony as clan leader. Rainkit, Dewkit, Streamkit and Poolkit, step forward.” They stepped into the middle of the clan, shaking in excitement. ” Rainkit, from this moment forward, you shall be known as Rainpaw. Your mentor will be Violetdusk.” Darkstar said. Violetdusk padded forward and pressed her nose against Rainpaw’s. “I trust she will teach you all she knows” Darkstar meowed. The ceremony went on, Dewkit became Dewpaw, with Bumbleheart as his mentor, Streamkit became Streampaw, with Mintfur as a mentor, and Poolkit became Poolpaw, with Foxtail as a mentor. ” Congratulations!” Skypaw meowed. “Come on! I saved you a nest beside mine. If that’s ok…” He went on quickly. Rainpaw purred.” That’s just fine.” She meowed. Skypaw lead her to the apprentice’s den. ” Right there!” He meowed. Her nest had feathers and fur lining it. Skypaw must’ve put those there. “It’s your first night in the apprentice’s den, I wanted to make sure you were comfortable.” Skypaw said. Rainpaw purred. They padded out of the den. ” Skypaw, since Violetdusk is taking Rainpaw for a tour of the territory, there is no need for a dawn patrol. You can check the elders for ticks instead.” Nettlemoon, his mentor, said. Skypaw purred. ” I told you!” Skypaw murmured as he padded away. Rainpaw purred. ” Can we go now?” Rainpaw asked her mentor. ” Yeah, and are we expecting trouble?” Dewpaw meowed. ” We’re not expecting trouble, but if we meet another clan, be polite, unless they attack. Then, flee back to camp for back up.” Violetdusk said. ” And since there’s no point in standing around here all day, let’s leave.” Bumbleheart meowed. They went through the thick brambles that surrounded camp. Immediately, new scents filled Rainpaw’s nose. But one smelt familiar, yet weird in some way. ” What’s this scent?” She said. Violetdusk’s fur pricked. “Sunclan”
Lol if I posted chapter two twice its cause I haven’t slept in 3 nights. I don’t think I did, but if I posted it twice, please tell me.
Nice! Petalfur, and Mintfur are canon 🙂
Here are all of the cats in Fading Stars and Growing Shadows, the collab project that Kindheart and I are working on. I wrote ThunderClan and RiverClan, Kindheart wrote WindClan and ShadowClan.
Allegiances
Thunderclan
Leader:
Turtlestar- a battle scarred, long furred, tortishell she-cat with yellow-green eyes
Apprentice, Graypaw
Deputy
Ashheart- Pale gray she-cat with brilliant emerald eyes
Apprentice- Dovepaw
Medicine Cat:
Owltalon- a dark brown tom with brown-gray points and a dark brown underbelly and back with leaf green eyes
Apprentice: Skysong- light gray tom with gray points and blue eyes
Warriors:
Blazeheart- Dark ginger tom with a black muzzle and one amber and one blue eye
Apprentice- Brackenpaw
Starlingshadow-yellow and ginger tabby she-cat with a black underbelly and muzzle with blue eyes
Maplefur- White and ginger tabby tom
Willowfur- silver and gray tabby she-cat with blue eyes
Gooseclaw- Black and silver tom with green eyes
Apprentice: Smokepaw
Shadedapple- Black and gray she-cat with brown and yellow paws and tail tip and gold eyes
Thornheart- Cream tom with blue eyes
Wolfheart- Gray and ginger tom with amber eyes
Apprentice: Squirrelpaw
Flameclaw- Battle scarred ginger tom with a yellow paw and a missing eye and ear
Finchfrost- White and gray tabby she-cat
Icepool- Pure white she-cat with ice blue eyes
Paleflight- Pure white tom with amber eyes
Nightfang- Pure black tom with gold eyes
Bumblefrost- Dark gray and black tabby she-cat with blue eyes
Apprentice- Pinepaw
Firethorn- Ginger and white tabby tom with green eyes
Reedfeather- Dark brown tom with a tuft of the end of his tail with amber eyes and three legs
Sunstrike- Ginger and yellow she-cat with green eyes
Badgerclaw- Cream and black tom with amber eyes
Duskheart- Black and silver tabby she-cat with amber eyes
Eaglefeather- Brown tom with amber eyes
Apprentice- Fernpaw
Lightningstrike- Dark gray tom with a white stripe and one blue and one green eye
Runningspirit- Black and white tom with gold eyes
Darktail- Dark ginger tom with a black tail and amber eyes
Bluestripe- Blue-gray she-cat with darker gray stripes and blue eyes
Apprentice-Stonepaw
Doeleap- cream and white she-cat
Apprentice- Whitepaw
Sootstrike- Dark gray tom
Apprentices
Whitepaw- Tortoiseshell and white she-cat
Squirrelpaw- Dark ginger tom with a fluffy tail
Brackenpaw- Ginger tom with a dark ginger belly
Smokepaw- Black and dark gray tabby she-cat
Graypaw-gray she-cat with darker gray stripes
Dovepaw- gray she-cat
Pinepaw- Dark brown tom with a gray stripe and muzzle
Fernpaw- Brown and gray tabby she-cat
Stonepaw- Blue-gray tabby tom
Queens
Lakeshine- Blue-gray and silver tabby she-cat with blue eyes (Mother to Gooseclaw’s kits, Ebonykit, Silverkit and Stormkit)
Elders
Cheetahtuft- yellow and black tabby she-cat
Brambleheart- Dark brown tabby tom
Sandpelt- Light ginger she-cat
Shadowclan
Leader
Pinestar- grey tom with white speckles that look like pine needles, yellow eyes.
Deputy
Stormfoot-white tom with grey paws with stormy grey eyes
Medicine Cat
Skyflower- pale she-cat almost a very light pink with sky blue eyes.
Warriors
Bristlepelt-Bracken(very light) colored tom with brown bristle splotches, brown eyes.
Apprentice-redpaw
Muddyclaw-brown tom with dust brown paws, green eyes
Branchtail-oak brown tom with bent tail (like branch) yellow parti-colored pelt leaf green eyes.
Tabbyclaw-Ginger tabby she-cat, dark blue eyes.
Apprentice-Icepaw
Palebird- very light pink she-cat with grey and orange splotches, amber eyes.
Sagefrost-Black tabby she-cat with white stripes, dark brown eyes
Apprentice-Blackpaw
Crowtail- black tom with muddy green eyes
Apprentice-Applepaw
Flowerpelt-Black she-cat with grey splotches, yellow eyes
Sprindlefoot- orange and black brindle she-cat with one white paw, amber eyes.
Frogpelt- muddy brown tom, green eyes
Snagtooth-black and grey tom with hazel eyes.
Snakefur-black tom with a white chest, dark blue eyes
Hawksparrow- brown tom hawk markings that are a greyish blue, green eyes
Shadowpelt-black she-cat, brown eyes
Frostheart- white she-ca twith a blue tail and yellow eyes
Greenclaw- greyish white she-cat with green eyes
Ambereye- black tom, amber eyes.
Tigerstripe orange tom with black tiger stripes yellow eyes
Hawkpelt-dark grey tom and scars all over his pelt and face, stormy grey eyes
Bluepatch-white she-cat with blue patches, green eyes
Glazefoot- yellow foot and brown tom with green eyes
Apprentices
Redpaw- reddish tom with blue eyes
Icepaw- white-grey she-cat with yellow eyes
Blackpaw-black tom with sky blue eyes
Applepaw- dark grey she-cat with dark brown patches and yellow eyes
Elders
Scorchfur-ash colored tom with grey eyes
Riverclan
Leader
Reedstar- a slender black tom with small, neat ears and dark gray eyes.
Deputy
Stonepelt-Blue-gray tabby tom
Medicine cat
Mossherb-Brown and cream she-cat with green eyes
Warriors
Streamflower- Pale gray and ginger she-cat
Sunfish- Blue-gray and ginger tabby she-cat
Hailstorm- Gray tom with silver spots
Pikejaw- Dark brown tom with a crooked jaw and jutting teeth
Beetlestreak- Dark brown tom with a black stripe
Apprentice-Brightpaw
Stormfire- Gray and Ginger she-cat
Mudslip- Dark brown tom
Beechpelt-Light brown she-cat
Mistfur- Black she-cat with silver tipped fur
Apprentice-Bluepaw
Apprentices
Brightpaw- Reddish-brown and white she-cat
Bluepaw- Huge blue-gray tom
Queens
Snowberry- white and brown she-cat (Mother to Hailstorm’s kits, Rushkit, Creekkit, and Sagekit)
Elders
Heronclaw-blue-gray and white tom
Windclan
Leader
Ashstar-black she-cat with light grey spots, green eyes
Deputy
Mudskip- muddy brown tom brown eyes
Medicine cat
Blizzardherb-snowy white tom with leaf or herb colored green eyes.
Apprentice mossleaf- Yellow tabby she-cat is blind
Warriors
Lostfleck-yellow and white patched she-cat with one green eye and one blue eye
Apprentice-Fluffpaw
Gorsefang-Huge dark brown tabby tom with green eyes
Nightshadow-black tom with dark blue eyes
Grounddigger-reddish tom with ice blue eyes
Flamefur- orange and yellow tabby with amber eyes
Smokepuddle- yellow tabby tom with a black patch on his back, amber eyes
Brindleflower- blueish grey she-cat with a very light pink patch over one eye, green eyes
apprentice-Brackenpaw
Littlefang-small she-cat with yellow fur and unusually small teeth, blue eyes
Plumblaze- orange tom with a black stripe from his nose and down his back
Slatestep- white tom with grey paws, brown eyes
Rabbitstripe- black tom with amber eyes
Apprentice-Greypaw
Mothshade- a black she-cat with grey markings resembling a moth’s wings on her back, amber eyes
Furzetooth tortishell she-cat with stormy grey eyes
Sandeyes-dust grey tom with sandy yellow eyes
Apprentice-Starpaw
Apprentice
Starpaw-black she-cat with a white star on her forehead green eyes
Fluffpaw-fluffy white tom with blue eyes
Greypaw- grey she-cat with blue eyes
Brackenpaw- bracken colored tom with green eyes
Queens
Swiftleap- yellow she-cat with one amber eye and one yellow eye (currently still pregnant)
Elders
Sorrelclaw- brown she-cat with splotches of black, blind in one eye the other is green
Nice names! Ashheart, Eaglefeather (Eagle Feather), Darktail, Sunstrike, Sunfish, Stonepelt, Reedfeather, Crowtail, Palebird, Lakeshine, and Wolfheart are canon ^^
I realize that the names are the same but I assure you that they are different from the cats mentioned in the books.
Yeah, I realize that, but unless it’s an AU-type thing, it’s not really fair to the authors to use their names in a fanfiction and claim them as your own.
Prologue of Darkness Falling
SORRY IT’S SO SHORT! I’LL TRY TO GET CHAPTER 1 OUT BY LATER TODAY! 😀
Snowstar blinked open his eyes. Soft grass and flowers were around him. He was in StarClan. A night black she-cat stood in front of him.
“Hello Snowstar.” She purred.
“Is something wrong with the clan?” Snowstar asked, worry flashing in his gaze.
“Oh dear Snowstar, you have so much to learn.” The she-cat mewed.
“Is something wrong? Fernstar, tell me.” Snowstar leaped to his paws.
Something flashed in Fernstar’s eyes. “I.. I can’t.”
“Wake me up then! If something is wrong with the Clan…”
“Snowstar, something is terribly wrong.” Fernstar trembled.
“Then let me wake up!” Snowstar shrieked.
Fernstar shook her head. “Wait.” She mewed softly.
“Let me wake up!” Snowstar screeched.
“Okay.” Fernstar whispered as he started to fade.
Snowstar awoke in his den. He leapted to his paws as Cherryflight ran into his den. “ShadowClan is attacking!” She shrieked.
Oh no I read chapter 1 first 😛 great!
Chapter 1 of Darkness falling
I’M TO IMPATIENT
“Greypaw wake up!” Gingerpaw shoved her.
“Whaa?” Greypaw mumbled.
“ShadowClan is attacking!” Gingerpaw yowled.
Greypaw leaped to her paws, bristling. She ran out of the den to a mass of writhing, shrieked cats.
Greypaw’s brother, Oakpaw was fighting with a huge ginger tom. The tom pinned him down, slicing at his face, Oakpaw cried out in agony. Greypaw leaped for the tom, landing square on his back. She clawed at his back, snarling. Oakpaw’s face was covered in blood but he sliced at the tom’s shoulder. The tom threw Greypaw off, running into the crowd, lost. Oakpaw ran after him.
“Cloudstorm!” Gingerpaw cried. Greypaw turned around. The sight she saw made her want to gag. Cloudstorm’s body was covered in blood, twisted at an odd angle.
“No. No. No!” Greypaw shoved through the ground, holding back tears. She ran to her father. “Gingerpaw get Flamerunner!” She choked out.
“Greypaw, he’s gone.” A voice meowed softly behind her.
“No! He can’t be gone!” Greypaw wailed.
Cherryflight shoved over to them. “Cloudstorm.” She whispered. She ran up to Greypaw and Gingerpaw and curled her tail around them. “Even though your father is gone, I will always be here for you.”
Grief blinded Greypaw. “I.. I have to go fight.” She jumped back into the battle. She clawed every ShadowClan warrior she saw. They killed my father. When she heard Oakpaw’s cry of grief, she felt like her heart was breaking. Suddenly, an apprentice leaped at her.
“Your father’s gone.” The she-cat sneered. “We will kill every single one of you. But first, let me kill you.”
Greypaw tried to turn and run but the cat leaped on top of her. The cat clawed at her face. Greypaw sliced at the cat’s stomach. The cat let out a cry of pain but didn’t let go. Greypaw shrieked as the cat closed in for her eyes.
“Greypaw! I’m coming!” Gingerpaw yowled, trying to shove through through the crowd.
The cat slashed at her eyes, blinding her. The she-cat leaped off. “Oops.” Then bounded away.
Greypaw cried out in pain.
“This battle is over!” Branchstar called out. “ShadowClan retreat!” Cat’s broke away from each other and ShadowClan ran out of camp.
“Greypaw!” Gingerpaw cried.
Blood streamed down her face.
Flamerunner ran up, Cherryflight right behind her.
“Greypaw? Greypaw can you hear me?” Flamerunner’s voice was muffled, like she was far away.
Greypaw tried to look at her. All she could see was blackness.
“Greypaw? Can you see me?” Flamerunner asked.
“No.” Greypaw groaned, confused. “Why can’t I see anything?”
“Because you’re blind.” Where the worst words Greypaw would ever hear. “I’m so sorry.”
“I can’t be blind. I can’t be a warrior then.” Greypaw meowed, confused.
“You can never be a warrior.” Flamerunner mewed softly.
Cherryflight ran up to Greypaw. “My beautiful baby.” She whispered, curling around her. “It’s going to be okay.”
I can never be a warrior. I’m blind.
Wow! That’s so sad… yet your writing is SO good!!! Great job!!! I can’t wait to see more!
Thanks Frosty <3
Awesome!
Darkness Rising:
This is the last chapter I wrote before stopping so chp. 4 will be new.
Chapter 3:
“Hey! Wake up Frostpaw! It’s our first day if training!” Sandypaw mewed in her ear. “Whaa?” Frostpaw replied groggily. “Yes! Lionblaze, Ambermoon, and Sorrelstripe are taking us for a tour around the territory!” Sandypaw mewed. “Kay, I’m coming.” Frostpaw mumbled. She quickly groomed herself and then padded out of the den to where their mentors and her littermates were waiting. “Hello, Frostpaw!” Sorrelstripe said cheerfully. “Hi!” she replied. “Let’s go tour the territory and then us mentors will choose a second task for you to do separately.” Lionblaze mewed. “Okay.” Ripplepaw replied. As they set off through the woods Frostpaw enjoyed the feel of the luscious green grass under her paws and the sun’s rays warming her fur. A gentle breeze flowed through the magnificent oaks creating a soft whistling sound. “This is Thunderclan’s main hunting area, and soon we will arrive at the Shadowclan border.” Ambermoon told them. “ Isn’t this gorgeous?” Frostpaw asked Sandypaw. “It is nice!” Sandypaw replied. A while later Sorrelstripe mewed, “This is the Shadowclan border. Make sure to take a good whiff, and never cross their border.” Frostpaw could smell them, that’s for sure. “Yuck, they smell like crow-food!” Ripplepaw mewed scrunching up his nose. “Hush, we probably smell bad to them!” Lionblaze told his apprentice. “Let’s take a look at Windclan territory now.” Ambermoon said. As they padded towards the Winclan border Frostpaw thought she heard a voice saying, “The only way to find them is to join them…”, but the voice was so faint. “Did you hear that?” she hissed in Sandypaw’s ear. “Hear what? Are you feeling okay?” Sandypaw asked, her pale green eyes looking worried. “ Oh, yes I’m fine, I must have imagined it…” Frostpaw replied though she was certain she had heard it. Awhile later they arrived at the Windclan border. “ It’s really empty, how do they hunt?” Ripplepaw asked eying the land through narrowed eyes. “They chase rabbits across the moor, that’s why they have long legs and light bodies.” Ambermoon replied. “Anyway breathe the fresh air and then from here we will split up.” Sorrelstripe mewed briskly. “ I will be taking Frostpaw to for a hunting lesson.” Sorrelstripe mewed. Awesome! Frostpaw thought. “I’ll take Sandypaw to the lake to collect moss.” Ambermoon said. Lionblaze hesitated for a moment then said, “ Ripplepaw will learn some basic fighting moves today.” “What?! No fair!! Why do I have to do the boring chores?” “ They’ll have to do them eventually. Now, let’s be on our way Sandypaw.” Ambermoon mewed.
Frostpaw dragged her raven through the barrier with Sorrelstripe closely following behind her carrying a vole. It was her sixth day as an apprentice and she was loving it! “Wow! How are you such a good hunter?” Larkpaw asked as she dropped it on the pile. “Hunter’s luck, I guess!” She replied. “ I am so tired I’m going to my nest now, see you later!” Larkpaw said with a massive yawn. Frostpaw was really worried. She had been hearing the mysterious voice everyday and at night her dreams were very disturbing. “I’m going to talk to Jayfeather about this.” She decided quietly to herself. She walked into the medicine cat den cautiously, trying not to disturb any patients. She spotted the blind medicine cat sorting through herbs. “Hey, Jayfeather, I need to talk to you in private!” She hissed in his ear. “What?” he growled.” “I have been hearing a strange voice recently… “She told him everything including her disturbing dreams. “Well, we’ll have to wait and see but for now tell me if you have any other disturbing dreams.” He mewed. “Yes Jayfeather.” Frostpaw replied. She then realized how tired she was how tired she was and settled down into her nest in the Apprentice’s den. “Tomorrow Dewnose said that all of us are going to learn to fight like rogues. “ Larkpaw mewed to his sister, Honeypaw. Slowly, the chatter died and Frostpaw let the big black wave of sleep wash over her.
She awoke to sharp teeth nipping her tail. “Wake up, Bloodclan is attacking!” Leafpaw mewed. Frostpaw jumped to her paws. “What!!! Are we going to fight?” She asked nervously. “Of course! Be careful! This time Scourge II has brought twice as many rogues! Both she-cats raced out of the den and threw themselves into battle. Frrostpaw found herself facing a black tom with a stump for a tail. He was massive. “W-who are y-you?” she stammered, desperately trying to get out of the potential fight. “I’m Blackheart, and I’ll slaughter you, kit. “Oh, I’m sorry did you just call me a KIT?” she said frustration of her fluffy pelt bubbling out of her. Before she could control herself she was fighting him like a Dark Forest warrior. She slashed his eyes causing him to whimper with pain then she raked her claws down his legs with the force of a lion. Next, she lunged for his ears making him focus on protecting his ears instead of his neck. She took that brief second to slash her claws through his neck. Then, he fell, limp, onto the hard stone floor. She stared in horror at Blackheart, he was dead, and she, a loyal apprentice had killed him. That was breaking the code, she was a monster! Frostpaw backed away slowly shaking her head, what had she done? There was no time to think about that now. She had to help her clanmates. Once more she threw herself in battle, raking her claws down any Bloodclan warrior she could. Suddenly she heard the voice of Scourge II saying “Bloodclan, retreat!” Slowly all the Bloodclan warriors went to their leader. “You may have won again Kittyclan but once we outnumber you, they’ll be nothing to stop me!!!” Scourge II said his eyes glazed with madness. “You won’t be able to stop us because you don’t know how to control us! But soon, you will know what control is like, beacause you all will be under MY control. Farewell my kitty friends!” he snarled before padding out of the camp. “I know how we can control them.” Frostpaw said loudly. Slowly all Thunderclan cats turned their heads towards her. “We have to find out where their camp is so that we can ambush them while they are sleeping. It’s our only chance. You heard Scourge II, he’s only getting stronger and soon, we won’t be able to live here. But if we find their camp there is a chance of survival…” Murmurs of approval swept through the clan. “How do you suggest that we do that?” Bramblestar asked. “To find them, we must join them…”
Chapter 4 will be out in a few days!! 😀
Awesome! Hype for more!
Here is chapter three of the collab project that Kindheart and I are working on. I wrote this chapter and Kindheart should have chapter four up soon. Enjoy!
Fading Stars and Growing Shadows
Chapter 3
Gorsefang shook out his fur as he looked out to the moor. He was given the duty to guard the camp overnight with Grounddigger, Littlefang, Graypaw and Rabbitstripe. The leafbare night was cold and Gorsefang could tell that there was a storm coming on the breeze. He turned to Graypaw saying, “It’s awfully cold for a cat your size, you should head back to camp and go to sleep.” Graypaw started to backtalk the older tom but her mentor stopped her saying, “Gorsefang is right, and you should always listen to your senior warriors. Especially Gorsefang!” Graypaw hung her head and headed back to her den. Littlefang padded over to Rabbitstripe. “You shouldn’t embarrass your apprentice like that, especially such a young and kind apprentice like Graypaw! Don’t forget that only a moon ago you too were an apprentice.” Rabbitstripe snorted and padded around to the other side of camp. Littlefang padded over to Gorsefang and sat down so that their fur blended and turned into a sandy yellow color. She rested her head on his shoulder and said, “I know it was hard after we lost Morningkit, but how would you like to have another chance to be a father?” Gorsefang sucked in a breath and said, “What do you mean?” Littlefang brushed the earth with her paw, “I’m expecting kits.” Gorsefang purred and wrapped his entire body around her’s “This is such great news! We have to tell the whole clan, you have to move to the nursery! I’ll start making your nest tomorrow, I’ll find the nicest moss and feathers and…” Littlefang cut him off by covering his mouth with her plumy tail. “Be quiet, silly. You’re going to wake the whole clan up! I’m not moving to the nursery yet, I still have a moon before I have to move.” Gorsefang shook out his fur, “I guess you’re right, just try to be careful.” Littlefang nodded while yawning. Gorsefang licked between her ears. “Go to bed, I’ll be okay alone.” Littlefang butted his head and padded into camp.
Gorsefang let out a sigh as he sat on the cold boulder. Tonight has been rather peaceful, I haven’t even seen a bird. He straightened when he saw a startling bright shape appear from a rabbit burrow. He called over to Grounddigger. “I see something, I’m going to check it out.” Grounddigger flicked his tail in acknowledgment. Gorsefang jumped off his boulder and stalked across the snowy moor. He let out a gasp when he saw who the bright figure was. “Brindlepelt!” he whispered in disbelief. She turned around, “Son, how are you.” Gorsefang stood rooted to the ground. He shook his head, clearing his thoughts. “I’m good, Littlefang is expecting another litter, but how are you, dad and Morningkit?” Brindlepelt purred, “ Larktuft and Morningkit are happy, though they both miss you. I am not here for gossip. I am here because the border between StarClan and the Dark Forest is weakening.” Her voice changed. “The stars will fade unless the gorse withers.” Brindlepelt disappeared and Gorsefang was left standing alone in the middle of the moor.
Meanwhile in ShadowClan
Skyflower sighed as she padded out of her den. Hawkpelt was once again off warrior duties due to some sort of injury. You’d think he trains in his sleep! The tom had already lost his eye and ear in less than two moons. If he gets any more injuries, he might have to retire. He takes longer to heal each time. A cat’s body is not built to take so much damage. She was snapped out of her thoughts when a lizard with large fangs scurried between her paws. She followed, mystified. She stopped abruptly when the lizard disappeared in the wind. Skyflower looked up to see her former mentor, “Lizardfang!” He purred and said, “I am here because StarClan needs your help, the border between StarClan and the Dark Forest is weakening.” He paused slowly fading, “The stars will fade unless the sky falls into the shadows.”
Great!
Great story! I loved it. Very interesting.
nice!
SUMMER SNOWFALL FANS:
I’m going to post Chapter 2 very soon! I just need to finish other important things and then I’ll get to work on it.
ALSO…
Crystallinestar, the leader, has a currently-unnamed sister who will have a kit! Pick a name here: http://www.strawpoll.me/10512993/ You can pick multiple choices.
In a single bloom of reincarnated stars, along with the rebirth of phantoms, arises a bright new spirit, but also, a mysterious dark spirit awaits deep into every cats’ fate…
StarClan, I can’t do italics in my 3DS.
Oooooh!