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โNobody will stop you from creating. Do it tonight. Do it tomorrow. That is the way to make your soul grow โ whether there is a market for it or not! The kick of creation is the act of creating, not anything that happens afterward. I would tell all of you watching this screen: Before you go to bed, write a four line poem. Make it as good as you can. Donโt show it to anybody. Put it where nobody will find it. And you will discover that you have your reward.โ Kurt Vonnegut
the end of Silverstream…
Silverstream was having Graystripe’s kits
Blood poured out of her stomach as she had Featherkit and Stormkit
She put all the blood back inside her stomach and zipped it with a zipper
She had made it! She was alive!
Then, suddenly, Cinderpelt accidentally stepped on Silverstream’s head and made her die.
And that my fellow cats and kits, was Silverstream’s end. Better than Graystripe’s and Firestar’s end, right? No not really. ๐
I’ve inspired someone to do such an amazing piece of art :’)
Oh Embie, Firestar and Graystripe’s End are inspirations to us all.
Oh my goodness, how do you two pull off these wonderful stories! I was moved to tears by its greatness ๐
I want to write but not done with a chapter. So I’m just going to do this.
“Hey Brindlepaw!” Brindlepaw heared her sister, Larchpaw, meow worriedly and scared. “What happened?” Brindlepaw turned her head to Larchpaw, whos eyes were wide with fear.
“I didn’t finish my prey. Is that okay?” Annoyed, Brindlepaw replied, “As long as you didn’t throw it into a deep pit.” Larchpaw flicked her ear. “What if I fed it to the grass and the soil? Doesn’t it make it grow?”
Brindlepaw’s temper went off. “Plants only grow with water and light,” Brindlepaw hissed, “Not with your food.” Larchpaw’s eyes were full of confusion. “Water’s food.” She pointed out. Brindlepaw snorted, and then ran away from where Larchpaw was sniffing the earth.
Cool! I love how they’re trying to grow plants, which isn’t something we see much in Warriors.
Yellowfang’s End
Yellowfang was in the forest fire.
Twolegs came and put out the fire and saved her life!
But when they brought her to the adoption center…
One of the workers accidentally stepped on her.
And that, my friends, was the end of Yellowfang.
Wow! That is truly magnificent. -applauds-
*bows*
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO YELLOWFANG? OH EMBIE THIS IS A MASTERPIECE. THIS IS BEAUTIFUL. IT WAS FAR MORE UPSETTING THAN YELLOWFANG’S ACTUAL DEATH; THIS IS WHAT SHOULD HAVE HAPPENED.
I’m glad you felt the drama ๐
Awwwwwwww Poor Yellow ๐ ELIGANT AS ALWAys EM!
Thanks ๐
So here it is! My new fanfiction! Sorry if this is short wanted to get something out today but have to go to bed.
Alone in the War 1:
Prologue
Fireblaze stood over Lilypetel. His eyes burned with grief and fury. โYou let my mate die!โ
He snarled.
โWe didnโt let her die. She chose to jump in front of Longstar. She saved his life.โ Greenflower argued.
Fireblaze turned to Longstar. โYou let her die when she had a kit!โ His voice trembled with fury. He glanced over at Riverkit who was trembling behind Cloudlight.
Longstar stepped forward. โShe was my littermate! Why would I want her to die?โ
Fireblaze lunged forward and dug his claws deep into Longstarโs flank. Riverkit squealed in fear. Thornfang lunged forward and pulled Fireblaze of of Longstar.
โYou are banished from this Clan! If you come back we will kill you.โ Longstar snarled.
Fireblaze hissed. He padded up to Riverkit. Cloudlight lunged in front of her. โIf you touch her..โ She hissed, fury blazing in her blue eyes.
โFine! But I will get my revenge. I donโt care if I have to kill every single one of you.โ Fireblaze snarled and padded out of camp.
Hype! I love these type of revenge stories so much!
Awesome! ๐
This is an awesome story!:D
Sounds awesome! Hype for more!
Wowie! I love this! I can’t wait for more ๐
Awesome Goldie! Can’t wait to see more!!!
Thanks guys! <3
Enemies in the Shadows
Chapter 20
Dawnpaw followed Hollybird through the deep pine forest. She and Lightningpaw were nearly done with their apprenticeship. Only a few more days, and they would both be fully-fledged warriors! As Dawnpaw thought of this, she was filled with confidence, excitement, and determination. She took a few more steps until she was at a bare, damp, grassy piece of land. Although it had no official name, Dawnpaw liked to call this place the โShadow Fieldโ because, during sunny days, early dawns, or cloudless dusks, the trees surrounding the clearing would cast tall, dark, eerie shadows onto the bright, grassy clearing. She looked to Blackwhisker and Hollybird for instructions, like she had done thousands of times before.
Hollybird twitched an ear as though dismissing a flea. โAlright,โ she mewed. โYou two are going to sniff out any scents you can smell in the clearing. Donโt leave anything unspoken of.โ Blackwhisker nodded. โRemember,โ he added seriously, โfailing to notice the scent of an enemy invasion, a loose dog, or a rampaging will be the difference between life and death for you and possibly your Clan.โ
Dawnpaw nodded seriously. Hollybird nodded at her to begin sniffing out any odd scents. Dawnpaw sniffed the air warily. Aside from the usual damp and sweet scents of the marshes and pine forest, she could smell a very faint trace of badger, the odor of a recent ShadowClan patrol as well as another strange, fresh scent. Dawnpaw sniffed the air again. The scent seemed so familiar. It was like a mixture of rogue and ShadowClan.
โI can smell stale badger,โ Dawnpaw reported, โa patrol that just passed by, and fresh rogue scent.โ
Hollybird growled. โRogues,โ she spat. โAlways messing around in our territory.โ Blackwhisker shrugged. โMaybe we could try to defeat them peacefully?โ he suggested. Hollybird snorted. โWhat kind of rogue would give up without a fight?โ
Lightningpaw sniffed the air. โI can smell badger, too,โ he remarked. โI think it was here around two days ago?โ
Blackwhisker sniffed. โItโs definitely stale,โ he agreed, โbut the badger might still be around. Iโll tell Marshflame to tell the patrols to keep a lookout for one.โ
Hollybird nodded. โIโd say you two passed this test. Now, itโs onto the fighting test.โ Dawnpaw noticed that Lightningpawโs eyes lightened at the thought of the fighting test. Dawnpaw was slightly unnerved at her brotherโs readiness to fight. Youโre worrying over nothing! she scolded herself. Almost every apprentice dreams of being a fighter! Yet she was still wary of her brotherโs love for battle. She realized how different Blackwhisker and Lightningpaw were from each other; Blackwhisker was always trying to find a peaceful solution while Lightningpaw was quick to unsheathe his claws.
โSo,โ said Blackwhisker, โfor this part of the assessment, you two will fight each other, and Hollybird and I will observe your technique and strategy.โ
Lightningpaw and Dawnpaw began to circle around each other, waiting for the other to make the first move. Suddenly, Lightningpaw sprang forward, claws extended, teeth bared. Dawnpaw dodged to the side and let Lightningpaw crash into the grass. Taking advantage of his brief vulnerability, Dawnpaw leapt onto him and grabbed him by the shoulders. However, Lightningpaw threw her off and scored his paws across her back. Dawnpaw, enraged, faked an attack to one side. Lightningpaw fell for it, and Dawnpaw landed a strike onto his jaw. He fell onto the ground with an oof and laid there for a couple moments. Dawnpaw was about to land another attack when Lightningpaw suddenly burst into action. He thrashed his paws wildly and kicked out with his back paws. Dawnpaw was caught off-guard and tumbled backwards. Lightningpaw leapt onto her and pinned her down, paws on her neck.
โOkay, you two can stop,โ mewed Hollybird.
โGood work!โ Blackwhisker purred to both of them. โLightningpaw,โ mewed the black-and-white warrior to his apprentice. โYou should work on trying not to fall for feints and dodges.โ โAnd you, Dawnpaw,โ added Hollybird, โyou should remember to keep your guards up no matter what, even if you think you defeated your opponent.โ Dawnpaw nodded.
โAlright!โ declared Blackwhisker. โJust the hunting test left, and you two are going to become warriors!โ
Dawnpawโs tail twitched wildly and her eyes widened. Iโm finally going to become a warrior!
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Dawnpaw came back to camp holding three frogs in her mouth. She and Lightningpaw had caught so much; she caught three frogs, one toad, and a mouse, while her brother hunted one large crow, two shrews, and a pigeon. Dawnpaw puffed out her chest when she had returned to camp with her impressive haul.
Bloomflower and Pinebranch rushed over to greet their kits, licking them lovingly all over. Lightningpaw ducked away, embarrassed. Dawnpaw couldnโt help doing the same.
โIโm so proud of you!โ purred Bloomflower, nuzzling them.
โGood job,โ added Pinebranch proudly, licking Dawnpaw on the ears.
Dawnpaw ducked away, before remembering that she was lucky to have such affectionate parents. Thereโs probably one cat out there who doesnโt really have the greatest parents.
โWhy are you hiding?โ teased Pinebranch. โDo you want to look messy for your ceremony? Youโre probably dirty from hunting all day!โ
Dawnpaw rolled her eyes. โI can wash later!โ
โReally?โ asked Bloomflower skeptically, nodding to Jumpstar, who was bounding up to the Tall Boulder.
โOh!โ exclaimed Lightningpaw. Dawnpaw gaped before immediately beginning to give herself a quick grooming.
โAll cats old enough to hunt gather beneath the Tall Boulder!โ he commanded.
Many cats were already washing in the clearing. Dawnpaw shifted her paws nervously as many eyes were set onto her and Lightningpaw.
โToday, as you may know, two of our apprentices passed their final assessments, and theyโve proved themselves to be truly dedicated and loyal to ShadowClan. Now, they will earn their status as a full warrior of ShadowClan.โ Jumpstar stopped for a few moments before announcing, โLightningpaw!โ
Lightningpaw walked forward excitedly, but he tried hard not to sprint up to Jumpstar like an overexcited kit. Dawnpaw remembered wistfully long ago when she and her brother had been made apprentices and Lightningpaw had shuffled forward awkwardly to meet Jumpstar; now, he walked with confidence and self-control. So much has changed since then, thought Dawnpaw nostalgically.
โLightningpaw,โ Jumpstar declared, โdo you promise to uphold the warrior code and protect and defend your Clan, even at the cost of your life?โ
โI do,โ replied Lightningpaw seriously.
โThen,โ Jumpstar announced, โby the powers of StarClan, I give you your warrior name. Lightningpaw, from now on you will be known as Lightingstorm. StarClan honors your skill in battle and your perseverance, and we welcome you as a full member of ShadowClan.โ
As Lightningstorm leaned forward to lick Jumpstar, Dawnpaw felt anticipation building up inside of her. This is the moment Iโve been waiting for!
โDawnpaw.โ
This is it.
Dawnpaw walked forward to meet Jumpstar, her head held up high.
โDo you promise to uphold the warrior code and to protect and defend your Clan, even at the cost of your life?โ
โI do,โ replied Dawnpaw. She knew that she meant what she was promising to Jumpstar and her Clan.
โThen by the powers of StarClan, I give you your warrior name. Dawnpaw, from now on you will be known as Dawnwind. StarClan honors your curiosity and enthusiasm, and we welcome you as a full member of ShadowClan.โ
The next thing Dawnwind heard was the cheering of cats calling her name, just like when she had been made an apprentice all those moons ago.
Lightningstorm! Dawnwind!
As she was congratulated by her friends and family, Dawnwind thought that that moment was the happiest of her life.
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Here’s a piece of work I actually put some backbone into ๐
Finally, the big two-oh chapter! ๐ So, they’re finally warriors! What convenient timing ๐ And, if you were really paying attention to what was written – and what wasn’t written – you might’ve noticed that they still haven’t visited the Moonstone! Actually, if you were really paying attention, you would’ve definitely noticed, not might’ve noticed. Don’t worry, I’ve got that covered ๐
Ahh! 20 chapters! ๐
Amazing. I love their new names! Were they ones we suggested awhile back? Or did you come up with these ones? ๐
. . . Dear, I didn’t notice. I better go feel guilty. ๐
Nope, I came up with them myself ๐ Dawnwind was originally going to be called Dawnfire, but then I realized that it sounded like ‘on fire’ ๐
I JUST HAD TO UPDATE IT QUICK ๐ I have music on………………….. it has me motivated *bounces around* P.S PLZ DO NOT START SHIPZ! I NO LIKE DAT! AND OTHERS DO NOT WIKE IT EEEEEEEEEEEEDA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Life In BlogClan Chapter 16 (More DRAAAAAAMAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA ๐ )
Owlwater woke up to see Maplepool snuggled up next to him. At first he was suprised, but then he warmed by it. He shook his head. I can’t have a crush on Maplepool! What would Eagleclaw do?! What would Emberfang think?! Er…. I guess it’s fine for now…… Maplepool woke up. “Eep! Ah! Sorry Owlwater..I…” She stuttered.
“It’s fine…” Owlwater he said. He licked Maplepool’s ear. Maplepool was suprised and blushed. She nosed Owlwater’s cheek. “Er let’s eat…..” Meowed Owlwater, embarassed, wondering if rumors had spread about him and Maplepool. He shrugged it off and got up. Maplepool got up after him tiredly and yawned.
They padded out of the warriors den together, tails slightly twined. Flarespark giggled at them. Maplepool smiled awkwardly at her older sister, blushing. Emberfang stared at them solemnly. Maplepool pressed closer to Owlwater. Shy and scared of cats watching. Owlwater nosed her ear. “It’s fine. They’re just suprised.” Owlwater mewed to her.
Maplepool took a vole from the fresh-kill pile and Owlwater took shrew. The laid down next to each other by Wavesplash and Stormy Sea. Wavesplash quietly whispered something in Stormy Sea’s ear. Stormy Sea looked suprised but smiled. Maplepool noticed that Wavesplash and Stormy Sea had connection. Most cats thought they were mates. Stormy and Wavesplash padded over to Cakestar’s Den together chatting.
“BlogClan! Wavesplash will be moving to the nursery” Cakestar announced happily. She was excited for more kits in the Clan.
The clan was cheerful that day. “I bet Maplepool will be next.” Giggled Liontail in Flarespark’s ear. Flarespark laughed at her sister’s remark about their younger sibling. Maplepool looked cheerfully at her former mentor. Wavesplash grinned back to the young ginger she-cat as she padded over to the nursery.
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The camp had been quiet the past few days. Emberfang wouldn’t talk to Maplepool. Maplepool sadly looked at her brother as he talked with Iceshard. “I guess to the clan weโre mates now.โ Owlwater laughed softly as he laid beside Maplepool. โWho says we arenโt mouse-brain?โ Maplepool giggled batting the yellow tom playfully on the ear. “I guess we are then.” Owlwater laughed to his new mate.
Wavesplash rested outside the nursery, excited for her kits. Stormy Sea ambled over to his mate. “What are you thinking for names?” He mewed cheerfully to the silver she-cat. “Well, we could give one a tribe name like yours…….Maybe Gray Bird? Or Silver Ocean?” Wavesplash recited. “I like Silver Ocean. And maybe Shadowkit or Softkit?” Stormy Sea purred.
“Winterbreeze! We need to stock up on blessed thistle, borage, chamonile, chervil, dandelion, grass, iris, ivy, lamb’s ear, lotus, narcissus, raspberry, water mint, and windflower. Could you go out and look for those herbs?” Kat yowled to the black and white tom. Winterbreeze nodded but said nothing. He walked out of the medicine den and was on his way.
Kat watched as he left. If only he knew who his parents were….. she thought. She knew exactly who his parents were. In fact….she was one of them. Winterbreeze’s father was Shriekstar of YoutubeClan’s brother…..Screechingbreeze. A black tom with white splashes. Winterbreeze reminded her so much of Screechingbreeze, it made Kat’s heart shatter whenever she looked at Winterbreeze.
She knew she couldn’t tell him. He would probably step down from place as medicine cat, or pull a Hollyleaf and tell all the clans! Kat usually had to push those thoughts to the back of her mind and pretend it never happened. Even though it did.
Winterbreeze came back with the fowl tasting herbs in his mouth. The blessed thistle, lotus, and iris’s colors stood out among the other green herbs. The lamb’s ear felt soft in his mouth. He ran over to the medicine den to see Kat sorting herbs. “Kat! I’m back!” He mewed through the huge bundle of herbs in his mouth. “Oh! Hello Winterpa-breeze!” Kat mewed. She couldn’t believe Winterbreeze had his name already!
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Maplepool yawned. Morning…..finally… She pondered to herself. She slowly got up, weary from last night’s meeting with Kat. She padded outside shyly. She looked over to see Emberfang looking at her angrily.(I drew this scene. Ember looked like a grumpy Jayfeather ๐ ) It saddened her to see that, she hoped her news would cheer him up. “Owlwater! Come here!” Maplepool called to the tom. Owlwater got up and raced over. “What do you need?” He mewed curiously. “So I went to see Kat last night…” Started Maplepool. “Are you sick?” Fretted Owlwater. “No, not exactly Owlwater. She said that I was expecting your kits!” Maplepool Exclaimed cheerfully to the yellow furred tom. Owlwater licked her face happily. “Let’s go tell Cakestar. You can talk to Wavesplash about you two’s kits.
“BlogClan! We have another queen for the nursery! Maplepool!” Cheered Cakestar from the high-log. Emberfang looked even more annoyed now. However a spark of anxiety flashed in his eye for a second. Cakestar leaped down from the log and went to the fresh-kill pile.
Russetfeather licked her daughters ear. “I’m so proud of you Maplepool.” She mewed to the fluffy she-cat.”Thanks,” Maplepool whispered back softly. But there was someone missing……..Emberfang.
A few sunrises had passed and Emberfang wouldn’t even make eye contact with Maplepool. “WAVESPLASH IS KITTING!” Goldenstreak sqeaked loudly. Kat twitched her ears at the call. “Winterbreeze! Gather blessed thistle, borage, chamonile, chervil, dandelion, grass, iris, ivy, lamb’s ear, lotus, narcissus, raspberry, water mint, and windflower for Wavesplash!” She mewed sharply. Stormy Sea ran over to Kat. “Is there anything I can do?” He meowed to the medicine cat hopefully. “Go comfort Wavesplash.” Ordered Kat to the blue-grey tom. Stormy Sea nodded and dashed over to the nursery.
“Three she-kits and a tom!” Exclaimed Stormy Sea happily to the clan. He quickly dissapeared back into the nursery.
“What should we name them?” Wavesplash meowed. “Well, for the dappled tortioseshell she-kit how about Dapple Shell? And for the fluffy blue-grey she-kit Oceankit?” Stormy Sea mewed back. “Perfect. How about for the silver tabby she-kit, Greykit, and for the grey and white tom.., Stormy Night. After you.” Purred Wavesplash. “Great. Dapple Shell, Oceankit, Greykit, and Stormy Night.” Stormy Sea repeated. He tapped each one lightly with his tail as he said their name. He slowly made his way out o the nursery to tell the clan what the kits’ names are.
“DAPPLE SHELL! OCEANKT! STORMY NIGHT! GREYKIT!” The clan cheered happily for the kits.
Flowerstream and Mistleheart quietly padded into the nursery to see the kits.
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Maplepool padded out to her brother, wondering if she could rekind friendship with him. Emberfang made an irritated face at her and scooted away. Maplepool looked saddened at his outrageous act. She forced down a hiss and growl at him. “Em-Emberfang?” She asked. “What do you want?” He spat. Maplepool was taken aback from his fierce tone of voice. “May I speak with y-you?” Asked Maplepool, her fur bristled a bit on her shoulders. “Whatever. By nursery.” Emberfang mewed fiercely.
“Why are you so mad at me? Your are ignoring me, not caring, you can’t even look me in the eye!” Maplepool hissed to her brother. “Why-Wh-Why?! Why?! Really?” Emberfang forced down laugh. “I thought we were close! But apparently not! You ditched me for a mate! One of my greatest friends! Owlwater! Dragging him away from me!” hissed Emberfang.
“I didn’t know. I-I’m so-sorry. Please forgive me.” Maplepool started. “Yeah right!” Emberfang growled and scratched Maplepool’s shoulder. Maplepool let out a squeak of pain. “I’m really sorry Emberfang! What can I do! Please don’t take it out on my kits! I never meant to do anything!” cried Maplepool. Emberfang hissed again, thihs time he scratched down her flank and clawed up her tail. Maplepool let out shrieks and screeches of agony and pain. Blood poured from the deep wounds. Owlwater, Winterbreeze, and Kat came gliding over when they heard Maplepool’s cries. Winterbreeze grabbed Emberfang by the scruff and pulled him away. Emberfang broke out of what he did and shook his head. He had just attacked a helpless, defenseless, innocent queen. And that queen was his sister.
“Winterbreeze! Maplepool is kitting! Get blessed thistle, borage, chamonile, chervil, dandelion, grass, iris, ivy, lamb’s ear, lotus, narcissus, raspberry, water mint, windflower, and cobwebs. Bring extra iris and raspberries!” Kat yowled. Emberfang thought about what he had just done. He might’ve just killed his sister, or her kits, maybe both. He couldn’t let this happen. He raced over to Maplepool. There was a pool of blood surronding her. He held back tears. What did I do?! He yelled in his mind at the mess.
Winterbreeze came back with many, many herbs. Emberfang nudged some raspberries and iris toward Maplepool. “Eat these, please. Don’t die on me Maplepool. Your strong enough for this….” He mewed, a tear falling down his whisker. Maplepool slowly swallowed the herbs. She let out a screech of pain. Kat shoved cobwebs in Maplepool’s wounds. A little kit plopped down by Maplepool. Emberfang licked it quickly. It was a golden tabby….tom! “It’s a tom!” He exclaimed and nudged the little kit by Maplepool. “He looks like you Owlwater.” Remarked Emberfang. Owlwater nudged more herbs forward. “Eat these now.” He ordered Maplepool. She nibbled them up and shrieked again. This time, it was a ginger tabby with snow-white paws, muzzle, and a fluffy white chest. It was a…She-kit! “It’s a she-kit!” Purred Owlwater, nudging the ginger she-kit to Maplepool. “That’s it Maplepool. A healthy litter of a tom and she-kit.” Kat mewed happily.
“They’re beautiful…..” Maplepool breathed. “What will you name them?” Asked Emberfang softly. “How about Sunkit for the golden tom.” Owlwater mewed. “Emberfang, do you want to name the she-kit?” Maplepool asked the silver tabby. “Really? After what I did to you?” Emberfang retorted. ‘Of course, your still my brother. And you saved me.” Maplepool purred. “Okay, um. Syrupkit? For Maple Syrup?” Emberfang mewed. “I love it. Syrupkit and Sunkit.” Purred Owlwater. “Me too.” Maplepool meowed. “Let’s get back to camp. I can carry Syrupkit.” Emberfang offered. “Ok, I’ll carry Sunkit.” Owlwater mewed and they all padded off.
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Russetfeather looked at her grand-kits. “They’re adorable!” She squealed. Eagleclaw nosed Syrupkit and touched Sunkit with his tail lightly. “And hey have beautiful, matching names.” He purred.
Kat padded in. “Visiting times are over. The queens need sleep.” She mewed. Russetfeather and Eagleclaw got up. “They’re perfect Maplepool.” Russetfeather mewed and padded out of the den.
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I’m mean I know Em’. Have a cookie for letting me do crazy things to your character ๐
YAS IT WAS POSTED! ๐
I can’t believe I missed this update but OH MY GOSH I’M A GRANDMA!!!!!!!
Bluefur’s Secret
Bluefur slipped into camp. One of her first days as deputy! She puffed out her chest as she strode to the middle of camp. It was time for the dusk patrols! The sun began to sink closer into the trees. Patchpelt and Leopardfoot were talking while sharing a squirrel. Rosetail was sharing tongues with her brother, Thistleclaw. Sunstar stood on the Great Rock. Tawnyspots was watching regretfully from his den. Did the elder miss his old position?
“Time for dusk patrols! Taking the first half of the territory will be Leopardfoot in the lead with Adderfang, Darkpaw, Tigerclaw, Whitestorm, and….uh…..Swiftbreeze! I will lead the second patrol with Patchpelt, Thrushpelt, Stormtail, and Lionheart. The rest can enjoy an early sleep!” Bluefur announced. The cats that were on a patrol stepped forward and gathered by Leopardfoot or Bluefur. Bluefur headed out with her patrol. She wanted to take the RiverClan border. Bluefur secretly hoped she would see Oakheart, but it wasn’t like she could talk to him.
“I’ll take the ShadowClan border,” Leopardfoot meowed to the deputy. Bluefur left camp with one last glance at Thistleclaw. His bright eyes showed hatred and envy burning in them. She shrugged and looked straight ahead. Nobody can stop her from fulfilling her destiny.
“Ah, sunningrocks,” mewed Thrushpelt. ThunderClan had just claimed the rocks. Bluefur smelled a RiverClan patrol coming. Ottersplash, Timberfur, Crookedstar, and Oakheart were in it. Bluefur padded to the edge of the rocks. Oakheart appeared. He blinked in acknowledgement. He looked happy. Did that mean Mistykit and Stonekit were alive? A pang of sadness overwhelmed Bluefur as she remembered the third kit, Mosskit. The small she-cat died in the snow. That bitter memory still haunted her.
“I heard Bluefur lost her kits. I express my apology,” Oakheart meowed to Thrushpelt. Thrushpelt nodded in grief. Bluefur saw a mouse scuttling along the rocks. Three smaller mice followed behind it. The largest mouse must be the mother. Out of anger, Bluefur killed the smallest mouse. The mother and its littermates cried in grief and fled.
“If I can’t have my third kit, neither can you,” muttered Bluefur as she carried on. She quickly ate the third mouse.
“Yes, we had Mistykit, Stonekit, and Mosskit. It’s a shame since a fox got them,” Thrushpelt explained. Ottersplash, who was nearby, lifted her ears in confusion. She strode forward which made Bluefur nervous.
“Weird. Graypool had two kits named Mistykit and Stonekit,” Ottersplash growled. Oakheart widened his eyes. Crookedstar stepped forward. Bluefur began to round up her cats.
“ThunderClan, let’s go. Bye, RiverClan!” Bluefur yowled as she thrust herself away from the crowd. Her cats quickly followed her. Thrushpelt widened his eyes, but didn’t say anything. Bluefur stiffly walked to the camp.
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Bluefur was alone. The incident from earlier made her cautious. The moon made the leaves turn silver. A light snow began to fall. The snow only landed on the moss. Was that a sign that Snowfur would protect Mosskit?
“This is for taking my deputy position!” Thistleclaw’s hiss echoed as he attacked her. Claws dug into her shoulder. Bluefur sunk her teeth into his own shoulder. He yowled in agony. Bluefur hissed wordlessly as she shoved him away from her.
“I saved the Clan!” Bluefur hissed. She sunk her claws in the ground. She felt the cold moonlight shine on her fur. Thistleclaw’s eyes had a wild light to them. He took a couple steps forward.
“But you couldn’t save Snowfur! I will kill you, Bluefur!” He yowled.
“Never! I will succeed Sunstar because I am right for it,” meowed Bluefur. Thistleclaw’s fur bristled as he flung himself forward. Bluefur ran towards him, but slid under him and flipped him on his back. Thistleclaw yowled in pain. He grunted as he collapsed on the grass. His eyes closed. Bluefur’s fur bristled as a cold breeze flew through her.
“I…..was at sunningrocks. I know what happened to those kits! Oakheart’s their father……and you broke the code!” Thistleclaw rasped as he got up. Anger jolted through Bluefur as she lunged for his throat. If she needed to kill him to protect the Clan, her kits, Oakheart, and herself, so be it! Thistleclaw took another gash to the flank. Blood began to pool on the ground.
“Never! I am a loyal ThunderClan cat. It is my destiny to lead the Clan, and it is your destiny to spill the blood of the Clan!” Bluefur hissed. She crouched down and lunged at him. Thistleclaw ripped open her other shoulder. Blood spilled onto his fur.
“What would Sunstar think if you, the Clan deputy, attacked me? I can tell him that! And I will!” threatened Thistleclaw. His eyes gleamed with a desire for Bluefur’s death. Bluefur flattened her ears. A breeze brushed past the two enemies.
“No, you won’t!” a familiar hiss announced a StarClan cat’s arrival. Her gray tipped ears and white fur were flat. Snowfur! Bluefur’s heart leaped for her sister. Thistleclaw’s eyes widened. He took a step back and crouched into the grass. His wounds made the grass turn a dark red with his blood.
“Bluefur is my sister. Love, please don’t do it. For me, if not for the Clan. Your destiny will be revealed soon. I love you, Thistleclaw. Please prove why,” meowed Snowfur. Thistleclaw’s eyes softened. He looked like a different cat. He nodded. Bluefur relaxed. Snowfur saved her.
“Bluefur, serve until your last breath. Moonflower and I hope to see great things from you,” Snowfur whispered in her ear as the white she-cat faded away. Thistleclaw snorted and ran back to camp. Dawn had come. The sky turned pink and bright. The wounds throbbed on Bluefur’s shoulders.
“Bluefur, Thistleclaw, what happened?” Goldenflower gasped. Cats began to surround the two. Thistleclaw had more wounds on him. It made Bluefur grin on the inside.
“We saw the fox that had killed my kits,” replied Bluefur. Thistleclaw glanced at her, but nodded. Rosetail led Bluefur to the den while Thistleclaw was telling the “story” to the apprentices.
“What did the fox look like?” Rosetail pressed.
“Evil, spiky fur, and amber eyes,” answered Bluefur while looking at Thistleclaw.
Brambleclaw’s End
Brambleclaw was drowning!
But then he was saved by Stormfur.
But, later, he ran into a rock.
He survived that too!
But when he was going back home to warn the Clans about Twolegs…
He tripped on a rock and fell into a gorge.
And that, my friends, was the end of Brambleclaw.
OMG BEST STORY EVAH! XD
Thank you ๐
OMG HOW BRILLIANT -cries-
Thank you, thank you! ๐
Ha. ๐
You should to Jayfeather.
Comin’ right up ๐
Omg… every of them is worth decades of applause ๐ I’d love to try one!
Seedpaw’s End
Seedpaw was drowning!
She reached the earth then.
She survived!
But then a leaf fell on her nose.
Seedpaw sneezed and fell backward into the water.
(Yours are way better [I’d spam ‘way’ more than nine hundred ninety-nine quadrillion times ๐ ] than this xD I just laugh at these for more than two minutes! )
Yours is a piece of art! ๐ *applause and tears*
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Dovewing’s End
One day, Dovewing was hunting.
She tripped on a rock and landed in the river that was in RiverClan territory.
But before she could land in the river, she caught on fire and burned.
The end.