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“Nobody will stop you from creating. Do it tonight. Do it tomorrow. That is the way to make your soul grow – whether there is a market for it or not! The kick of creation is the act of creating, not anything that happens afterward. I would tell all of you watching this screen: Before you go to bed, write a four line poem. Make it as good as you can. Don’t show it to anybody. Put it where nobody will find it. And you will discover that you have your reward.” Kurt Vonnegut
I’m creating a story for a made up clan I made called CrystalClan, along with the other two clans, SunClan and MoonClan. It’s called Pheonix Ash. Here’s just the first couple paragraphs of the prologue: A grey cat stumbled into camp. Weak and covered in wounds, he collapsed. Goldstar leaped down from his den.
“Who are you?” he asked the cat. The cat raised his head.
“I-I’m A-Ash.” he said weakly.
“We’re going to help you, Ash.” Goldstar murmured. “Take him to the medicine den, and get a place for him to sleep.” the apprentices rushed to get moss and feathers for Ash’s bed, while Lightcloud, Icepaw,and another warrior carried him to the medicine den. Snowstorm, the deputy, walked up to his leader.
“Are we taking him in?” he asked.
“Of course. He’s a cat who needs our help.” Goldstar replied. “At least, until he’s better.” Lightcloud stumbled from her den.
“Icepaw just had her first prophecy, and I feel it’s important.” she said. “The prophecy said this: The red-eyed ash will interfere with with the path the stars have bestowed on the cat who is Pheonix.”
“Ash has red eyes…” murmured Goldstar. Snowstorm looked at him.
“Are you still going to take him in?” he asked.
“Yes… Until his wounds heal and there’s no sign of infection.” Goldstar said. Snowstorm opened his mouth to protest, then closed and gave a gruff nod to his leader. A pit formed in Goldstar’s stomach. Oh stars, I hope I’m making the right decision. He thought, looking toward the medicine den
Warriors Series 5.5: Echoes of the War
Novella 1: Sushi’s Society
Chapter Ten
“Sushi, are you awake yet?”
The elderly she-cat lifted her head, blinking blearily. “Almost,” she muttered. She rose shakily to her paws, feeling her aged joints creak in protest.
Tooth watched her with amusement sparkling in his yellow eyes. “Getting slow in your old age, Sushi?” he joked.
Sushi gave a mock growl, swiping out at the gray tom with a sheathed paw. “Don’t talk back to your elders, young cat,” she growled, though amusement trickled into her tone. “Old or not, I can still rip your ears off.”
Tooth just purred his amusement. He waited as the elderly leader stepped away from her nest, shaking out her pelt. “Come on, you promised you’d speak to the trainees today,” he reminded her. “They’re waiting for you.”
She just grunted in reply, waving her tail dismissively as she followed Tooth out of the den.
Three and a half greenleafs had passed since Sushi had become the leader of BloodClan. Since then, Sushi had made her nest exactly where she had when she was nursing her kits, in the abandoned twoleg building. The den was large enough to house multiple cats; she could see all of their nests laid out along the floor of the building. But it wasn’t just any cats who lived in the building that had come to be known as the Council Home.
As Sushi and Tooth stepped out of the building and into the alley beyond, she was greeted with a familiar sight. The ten cats of the Council were seated on the cobblestones, with the trainees sitting in front of them, listening to every word. All of them looked up as Sushi and Tooth approached. “Ah, Sushi, good of you to join us,” one of the Council members, Tooth’s brother, joked. The gray tom had once been one of Scourge’s guards, called Fang, but after Sushi had begun reforming the group, he had requested to take back his old name, Cobweb. Some of the guards had followed his example, but some, like Tooth, preferred to keep their guard names.
Sushi settled in with the Council, sitting before the trainees. Six eager young faces stared back at her. At twelve moons old, Penny and Puddle were the oldest of the trainees. They were at the very end of their training. Bounce, Beetle, and Swipe were two moons younger than Tire and Flash’s litter, and generally more rambunctious. The youngest was Chatter at seven moons old, who had started his training a little over a moon ago.
“Well, let’s see how you shape up,” Sushi mewed, whiskers twitching. She sat directly in front of the trainees, tail wrapped around her paws. The trainees drew themselves up taller, staring at their leader in awe. “Show me how much you can remember of our traditions. Recite the twelve laws of the Code of the Street.”
Six pairs of ears shot up in interest. It was Chatter who spoke first. “Ooo, I remember! The first code is that no cat may harm another, except in defense of themselves or someone else.”
Sushi dipped her head. “Very good. Next one?”
“No cat may take what belongs to another cat,” Penny mewed immediately. The reddish-brown she-cat was smaller than her brother, with a soft pelt, but she possessed a sharp intelligence that made Sushi think she might be a good contender for the Council some day.
Her brother Puddle spoke next. “The next law says that any dispute that cannot be solved peacefully among the concerned cats, must be brought to the Council and the leader to settle.”
“And then, no cat may ignore a kit in danger or pain,” Bounce added.
Swipe mewed, “No cat should waste food by killing prey they won’t eat.”
“Avoid the attention of twolegs – don’t take their food unless desperate, and never draw their attention to the existence of the Society of the Street.”
Sushi listened, her heart warm with pride. The young cats of her Society had learned well. “Well remembered,” she rasped. “What’s next?”
Penny started to speak, but Chatter cut her off. “Cats who can’t hunt or care for themselves will live in the Home of Elders, and will be cared for by the trainees of the Society, as part of their training. Ooo, and the next one is that a cat becomes a trainee when they turn six moons old, and each trainee must live in the Council Home for their six moons of training, before they can become full self-reliants.”
The red-brown tabby glared at Chatter a moment, before picking up the list. “A cat who comes to live in Twolegplace after they are over trainee age do not have to train as trainees if they don’t want. But they won’t be given the title of self-reliant unless they do, and they must allow any kits they may have to be trained as trainees.”
“There must be a Council of ten cats at any given time,” Beetle mewed. “New Council members must be voted on by the Counil, and must be at least two leafbares old. They will advise the Leader and make important decisions for the Society.”
Swipe mewed, “The Council and Leader will vote on all important decisions for the Society – each cat has one vote, but the leader’s vote counts for three. They will vote on when trainees are ready to become self-reliants, whether a cat is qualified to be a border guard or a healer, who the next leader will be, and how to settle disputes between cats.”
Sushi nodded. “Excellent. And the last law of our code?”
It was Bounce who spoke now. “The Council cannot decide to have a cat killed for any crime, unless it is deemed absolutely necessary to prevent the cat from being a danger to others.”
Sushi purred, rising to her paws. “Very well done, all of you.” She couldn’t help but be proud, even if none of these young cats were her kin. They were the legacy of all that she had worked so hard to build, these last three greenleafs.
There were approving murmurs from the other Council members. One lanky ginger she-cat stood, amusement sparking in her eyes. “They certainly listen better than we did at that age, huh Sushi?” she teased.
Even though she knew the she-cat only meant it in good fun, Sushi couldn’t help but flinch. It had been seasons since her vicious attack on Tally and her brother Drip, but she still felt guilty about it. As Tally reached down to nudge Penny playfully with her muzzle, Sushi could see the large tear in her ear, and the long-healed scars along her side.
The other Council members also rose to their paws. A few of them were former members of Scourge’s guard, who had decided to help Sushi make Twolegplace a better place to live. Snipe, Cobweb, and Tooth were among those. Tally hadn’t been a guard, but she had suffered from the cruelty of the guards first-hand, and had proved to be intelligent and fiercely protective of the cats of Twolegplace, which made her invaluable as a member of the Council.
Sushi turned her gaze from the older Council cats, looking instead at the younger cats. A proud purr escaped her as she gazed at three particular cats, mewing encouragement to the trainees. Sunny, Snuggle, and Shy were all Council members – they had helped Sushi come up with the idea of the Council in the first place. Shy was still quiet as ever, but he had gained a lot of confidence, and he had helped come up with a lot of the Code. Snuggle’s compassion made him perfect for the Council, and Sunny had matured into an intelligent, kind, and courageous cat. Sushi couldn’t be more proud of her.
A dark tabby tom approached Sunny, touching noses with her before both cats rubbed muzzles, purring. Sniff was a member of the Council, as well as Sunny’s mate. His mother Minty had returned to Twolegplace with her kits shortly after Sushi became leader. She didn’t say much about what had happened to her mate Willie, only that she no longer wanted anything to do with him. Minty was an elder now, and all four of her kits had taken important positions in the Society. Icicle was one of the three healers, while Cloud and Snowflake were border guards.
The last two Council members were the youngest, a pair of sisters named Sunbeam and Tawny. They had been young when Sushi started forming the Society, but their enthusiasm and their dedication to helping form the new laws had impressed Sushi enough to make them members of the Council.
Penny’s voice broke Sushi from her thoughts. “Are you going to watch our training today?” the young she-cat asked, watching her leader hopefully.
Sushi shook off her thoughts. “I am,” she told the young she-cat. “I’ll be watching you and your littermates particularly. Impress me today, and I’ll get the Council to take a vote on whether you’re ready to be self-reliants.”
Both Penny and Puddle gaped at their leader, eyes blazed with joy. They bounded, joyful as kits, after their fellow trainees as the Council began leading them further down the alley. It was the duty of the Council to train the trainees of the Society; they were to be taught how to hunt, how to fight, how to avoid twolegs and navigate twolegplace safely. The trainees lived in the Council Home during their moons of training, though they could visit family and friends whenever they wanted. And for two young cats, Sushi got the feeling that they wouldn’t be confined to the Council Home much longer.
As she stared after the Council and the trainees, something bittersweet clenched her heart. She had a feeling that wasn’t the only change coming to the Council Home soon.
SCENEBREAK
After training finished for the day, Sushi decided to take a walk on her own. Her joints were stiff with age, and she couldn’t move as fast as she used to, but she managed to keep up a steady pace as she swept across the edge of Twolegplace. As she neared one of the bigger entrances into Twolegplace from the outside, she slowed, gazing curiously at the rooftops. Sure enough, a pair of eyes glowed in the growing darkness, staring down at her. “Who’s there?” a voice called down, friendly in tone.
Sushi stepped out of the shadow of the alley, calling up, “It’s me.”
“Sushi!” The glow of the eyes disappeared for a moment. Then a dark gray tom began descending from the roof, leaping the last few tail-lengths to the ground. The scruffy tabby darted across the street, quickly reaching Sushi. “To what do I owe the pleasure?” For a moment, his ice-blue gaze filled with alarm. “Is something wrong?”
“No, no, nothing’s wrong Scruff,” Sushi assured the tom quickly. “I was just out for a walk and wanted to see how the borders were.” Scruff was one of the various border guards of the Street Society. There were four ranks that a fully trained adult cat could achieve in the society – self-reliant, border guard, healer, and Council member. The most general of these was self-reliant. Self-reliants were cats recognized as being fully able to hunt and fight, and to be able to take care of themselves. They hunted for their own prey, found their own dens, and lived alone, or with whatever friends and family they chose. No particular duties were asked of them, other than to follow the Code of the Streets, and defend their fellow Society members if need be.
Border guards like Scruff required additional training from the existing border guards, after their training with the Council – it was the same for healers. Border guards were expected to patrol and keep an eye on the borders of Twolegplace. They would welcome any new cats into Twolegplace when they arrived, inform them about the Society, and direct them towards the Council Home so they could introduce themselves to the Council. They had to be able to fight, in case any cats coming into Twolegplace posed a threat, but mostly they served to welcome and inform newcomers, not to fend them off.
Healers were similar to Clan medicine cats, with some exceptions. There wasn’t just one at a time – there were generally a pawful of them at a time, spread out among different areas in Twolegplace so there was always a healer nearby if a cat needed one. Currently, there were three. Scraps was the first healer the Society’d had, and he was the oldest. He was the one who had trained Icicle and Bright, the other healers in the Society. They didn’t speak as much to their ancestors, the Cats of the Stars, as much as medicine cats did, and there was no restriction on healers having mates and kits. Mostly, they used the herbs they could find beyond Twolegplace in order to heal the sick and injured.
Being a member of the Council was the highest rank a cat could achieve, beyond becoming leader. Council members were highly respected, and highly influential in how the Society was run. They trained the young cats of the Society, they voted on all the important issues, and they decided on the new leader. The Society’s leader had a lot of influence as well, but Sushi had wanted to make sure that the Council had enough power to temper the leader, while still giving the leader enough to be in charge. She had seen what happened when one cat held too much power, and she never wanted to see it again.
Pushing her thoughts away, Sushi settled in beside Scruff, gazing out at Twolegplace. “It’s funny,” she murmured. “I was so miserable here when Scourge was in power. But I still missed it after I left, even though my family was far safer in the forest. I’m a Twolegplace cat at heart – always have been, I guess.” She lowered her head. “It was always my destiny to come back to this place.”
Scruff glanced at her, surprised. “Feeling sentimental tonight?” he teased lightly, though worry flashed in his ice-blue gaze.
Sushi shook out her pelt. “I suppose,” she admitted. “Just thinking about how much has changed since I became leader.” She grew somber. “And how much blood had to be shed before it could happen.”
Scruff was quiet for a moment as he gazed at Sushi. “You saved us. You know that, right?” he murmured. “When you turned us into the Society, you saved us from just being BloodClan for the rest of our lives. At least now, we protect each other, and the weak and elderly are cared for. Life is valued in our Society, the way it wasn’t in BloodClan. And it’s all thanks to you.”
The leader stared at Scruff, surprised at how sincere the gruff tom sounded. She couldn’t help but be touched by his words. She knew he was right – the Society was a group of peace, so different from BloodClan of old. It hadn’t been easy to turn BloodClan into the Street Society either. Sushi had been careful about it, introducing change slowly, an act of mercy here, a suggestion of compassion there. But it still hadn’t been enough for some cats. Frenzy and Viper had led a rebellion against Sushi with some of their supporters. After she had soundly defeated them and exiled them from Twolegplace, she had really started to change things. And now, three greenleafs later, the Society was flourishing, though the effort of casting out the traitors and protecting her Soceity for three greenleafs had cost her all but one of her lives.
It wasn’t all good news, though. Catflap had died not long after they returned to Twolegplace. Wrapper was gone too now, having died a few moons ago from an illness even Scraps couldn’t save her from. She had lived a long life, though, and Sushi knew that she and their parents were watching the Society from the stars, safe and strong and happy.
Sushi bumped her nose against Scruff’s cheek, mewing, “Thank you for what you’ve said.” She pulled back, gazing at the scruffy tom proudly. “My daughter raised you well.”
Scruff gazed back at her, his ice-blue gaze identical to his mother’s. “Thank you, Sushi.”
She glanced away from her daughter’s son, looking back out into Twolegplace. She knew what had to happen next. And as much as it pained her to let go of all she’d accomplished, she knew it was time.
And she knew that, for once, she had done enough.
SCENEBREAK
“Everyone, gather!”
It was a few days after the assessment of the trainees. The Council, the trainees, and a few self-reliants who’d wanted to attend were present. They were sitting around a garbage can inside the Council Home, which Sushi sat atop of for ceremonies.
Penny and Puddle were sitting just in front of the garbage can, looking up at Sushi with wide eyes as she mewed, “The Council has concluded their vote. They have decided that these two young cats are ready to become self-reliant members of this Society.” She lifted her chin, beginning the ceremony. “With the power bestowed upon me, the leader of the Society of the Street, I ask that the cats here today stand as witness. The cats before me have completed the training, and have shown themselves to be brave, honest, and kind. We welcome them today as full self-reliants of this Society.”
She gazed down at Penny first. “Penny, will you uphold the Code of the Street, and keep the peace of the street?”
“I will,” the red-brown cat said clearly.
“Your vow has been heard. Your cleverness and dedication will serve you well in the days to come. This Council now recognizes you as a self-reliant.” Penny bowed her head to Sushi, and Sushi bowed her head in return. Once she completed the ceremony for Penny, Sushi turned her attention next to her brother. “Puddle, will you uphold the Code of the Street, and keep the peace of the street?”
The black-and-white tom gazed up at Sushi, blue eyes blazing with pride. “I will,” he promised.
Sushi continued, “Your vow has been heard. Your patience and curiosity will serve you well in the days to come. This Council now recognizes you as a self-reliant.” The young tom dipped his head to Sushi, and she bowed her head back to him. When both cats lifted their heads again, Sushi could see that the new self-reliants were barely containing their pride. They departed back into the crowd, greeting their friends and family with cheerful mews.
Sushi allowed them to celebrate for a little while, then gave a yowl for silence. Every cat fell silent, looking back at Sushi in surprise. “I have one more announcement to make,” she rasped, tucking her tail around her paws. “My last announcement, in fact.”
Murmurs of surprise rose from the self-reliants, healers, and guards in the den, but her words came as no surprise to the Counil. They had spent days discussing Sushi’s proposal, and had given her their approval. She again felt the bittersweet mix of relief and regret as she continued, “I am stepping down as the leader of the Society of the Street. I will be retiring to the Home of Elders, to live out the last of my days in peace.”
The other cats continued to express surprise, but Sushi ignored them. Her gaze finally seeked out on cat from the crowd. Scraps was just as old as she was, but she knew he wouldn’t retire while he could still help other cats as a healer. The elderly tom sat beside Snuggle and Shy; when he caught her gaze, he gaze Sushi an encouraging nod.
Sushi waved her tail for silence, continuing, “The Council and I have voted upon the next leader. Your new leader will be Sunny!”
Sunny was seated in the crowd near the rest of the Council. As Sushi’s gaze fell upon her daughter, she could see that Sunny’s family was seated with her. Her mate Sniff sat beside her, pressing his muzzle against her cheek and murmuring his congratulations to her. Sunny’s three kits were also seated nearby. Scruff was there, gazing back at his mother with pride. His sister Soot sat beside him. The tiny black she-cat looked eerily like Scourge, with her tiny frame, night-black pelt, and her one white paw. But her eyes were Sushi’s golden eyes, and they held a warmth that Scourge’s never had.
Sunny’s third kit sat a little apart from the others. Sushi felt a prickle of concern as she finally saw the large pale gray she-cat, seated a little away from her parents, her golden gaze fixed straight ahead. Sushi never did understand why Sunny had named her daughter Scorch, after the name Scourge had given her as a kit. And while she loved Scorch as much as any of Sunny’s kits, there was something about Scorch’s ambition that made her uneasy. Still, she didn’t think it was anything she had to worry about.
Returning her gaze to Sunny, Sushi called out, “Sunny, step forward.”
The tiny ginger tabby rose to her paws, padding through the crowd until she stood just before the garbage can. Sunny kept herself composed, but Sushi could see the excitement and pride in her gaze. But she also knew that Sunny had earned every moment of this, and all these seasons later, Sushi believed her daughter was finally ready to be a leader.
“Sunny,” she mewed clearly, “Do you promise to lead the Society of the Street with compassion, intelligence, and caution, keeping the peace on the street and protecting the cats of Twolegplace, for nine lifetimes?”
Sunny dipped her head, fierce conviction in her tone as she mewed, “I promise.”
“Very well,” Sushi said. “Then tonight, I and a guard will escort you to the Moonstone. I will tell the Cats of the Stars of my retirement, and you will be granted the nine lives of a leader. May you lead this Society well, my daughter.”
A cheer rose up from the crowd. “Sunny! Sunny! Sunny!” The cats in the Council Home surrounded Sunny, cheering for her in proud, joyful voices. Sushi remained on the garbage can, watching with pride.
It had been a hard road. She had killed and hurt so many cats for the sake of her family, and her first five leafbares had been lived in fear and hatred. But through it all, she had protected her family to any end. Now, all of Twolegplace was her family. She had taken the cruel system of BloodClan and torn it down piece by piece, and now the Society of the Street made sure every cat lived in peace, not fear. All of her sacrifices and suffering had led to this. Finally, she felt like it was all worth it. She had been forgiven. She had done enough, and now, she could rest.
And then, when her time was done, she would be with the cats she loved for the rest of eternity.
END OF NOVELLA ONE
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Yep, so we’ve finally reached the end of Sushi’s Society. ^^ I’m sorry for the extreme infodumps in this chapter, but I wanted to get out the needed information about the Street Society. Anyway, I’ll post the allegiances for this chapter, as well as a document with the Code of the Street, in case anyone was still confused.
So yeah, Sushi has turned BloodClan into the Street Society. Infodumps aside, I hope you enjoyed learning about the Society and how they work. It was fun coming up with the structure of this group, and the various ranks. I hope you liked it as well.
It’s a bit sad, being done with this story and these characters. I loved writing about Sushi and her family, building their characters, and it’s weird being done with them so quickly. But I really should get back to Trail of Ashes.
Speaking of Trail of Ashes, I did promise that this story would have some connection to what’s going on in Trail of Ashes, and that it would be revealed in this chapter. For those of you who caught on – yes, the Scorch in this chapter, SUnny’s daughter, is the same Scorch who is a member of Breeze’s group of rogues in Trail of Ashes. I know, it’s a really small connection, but I did say the connection would be small. And it might not seem so small later *hint hint*, as we might see more of Scorch’s character and importance to the story later, as we learn more about Breeze’s rogues. As for how she went from a self-reliant of the Society to one of Breeze’s rogues – let’s just say she tried to take power she thought she deserved and was exiled for it. I’ll hold off on saying more, in case I go into it more in the story later.
This particular chapter takes place around the time of the Dark Battle for the forest Clans, by the way. As of this chapter, Scorch, Soot, and Scruff (I had to make them all S- names, since Sunny’s litter was, and her mate was an S- too, I just had to. XD) are 2 1/2 years old. By the time we see Scorch in Waning Moon, she’s about 4 years old. Sushi is dead by then, as is Scraps, safe and happy among the Cats of the Stars.
Anyway, I hope y’all enjoyed this story as much as I did, I will have the allegiances and Code posted soon, and then it’s back to Trail of Ashes. 😀
Awesome, that was amazing! I love how the character of Sushi has changed throughout her life. Yay! Great effort! 🙃🐱🐈
Thanks. 😀 Yeah, I loved writing Sushi as she grew and changed, and sort of showing how dark she was willing to go, but also how much good she wanted to do. ^^
Awesome, MAYBE IT’LL BE A TRADITION TO HAVE A MATE THAT STARTS WITH AN S- AND NAME THEIR KITS WITH S- NAMES. Yep, I’m weird
Haha, maybe. XD
Sushi, Scourge, Sunny, Snuggle, Shy
ATTACK OF THE S- NAMES!!! RETREAT!!! 😛
As well as Sniff, Scruff, Soot, and Scorch now. XD
Help us the S- names are attacking
Indeed. XD
Wait!!!
My name is Stoatkit
My old name was Snow that Blankets Hill
My gathering team is the Swift-footed Shrews.
MY BLOGCLAN LIFE REVOLVES AROUND S-
IT’S TRUE
THE S- INVASION HAS COME
IT’S WORSE THAN THE HAMILTON EXPLOSION
Awesome! 😀
Thanks! 😀
Coming soon….
“Go away!” I just wanted to fit in….
The Stupid Adventures of Me:A Guide To Apprentices,By Apprentices.
A new adventure like no other.Moonpaw is always off by herself.Her entire world has always been flipped.Nothing was normal for her.But that can change,and she learns that there is no need to be normal after all….at least,that’s how she wants it to happen.
Only on the BlogClan 2 Wiki,coming this summer.
Chapter 6
An orange tabby landed right on Bearsong’s back.
Bearsong awoke instantly, and swiped a paw at the tabby, claws unsheathed. “Go away,” he snapped. He caught a wad of her orange fur in his claws, but the tabby didn’t even flinch. She stepped off of Bearsong’s back, then padded toward a tunnel.
Blue eyes wide and not leaving the tunnel, Bearsong stuck a claw into Redfang’s shoulder and nipped Goldfur’s ear to wake them up. “Let me sleep,” Redfang hissed, but Bearsong batted his head toward the tunnel, and he gasped. “What?” Goldfur asked, but his question was answered by seeing the tunnel. There were two scents: one, obviously the orange tabby’s, and the other…. Darkwing…?
“Come on,” said a voice inside the tunnel, definitely Darkwing’s. Redfang gave Bearsong a questioning look. Bearsong returned his gaze with a look that read ‘sure, why not?’. The three brothers padded into the tunnel, side by side.
“Come on,” Darkwing repeated. They were a little ways inside the dark tunnel when Darkwing abruptly stopped. She glanced at the tabby padding next to her, who had stopped too, and then looked at Bearsong. “Oh,” she began awkwardly. “um, this is Sundapple, my best friend.” “I didn’t think you–no, anyone–should be stuck in that darn hole, so we made this tunnel so you could get out.”
“Well, um, thanks, Sundapple,” Redfang stuttered. “Thank you,” Bearsong said, sheathing his claws. They continued padding along, until a flash of moonlight was able to be seen. There was sort of a ramp that came up and out of the tunnel, through a hole, and onto dry ground. “This hole is somewhere in that clearing where you and Darkwing fought,” Sundapple explained. “We didn’t want it to be anywhere in the camp, so we stuck it into farther territory.”
As they all climbed out, Bearsong suddenly felt something engraved in the mud they were standing on. “Um, guys,” he whispered, shifting his paw. “We’re not the only ones here.” “What do you mean?” Darkwing asked, peering into the mud. “Oh, no,” she said suddenly. “Fox tracks.”
As soon as she said it, two foxes erupted from the undergrowth. The moon was still high, so none of the Clan cats were waking up yet. Bearsong unsheathed his claws again.
He instantly aimed for the fox’s eye. He dug the claws of one paw in around its eye, and pushed the fox down on its side. He dug his claws in deeper, deeper, deeper still, until the fox shrieked in immense pain. Bearsong pulled on his paw, hard, when the eye was wrenched out in a massive wad of blood. The fox screeched, rolled on his back, and vigorously pawed at the socket. The other fox was attacking Darkwing and Sundapple. Redfang snuck up behind it and shoved his long claws into its side. It yowled and turned around to attack him.
The half-blind fox was still pawing at its eye socket. Bearsong looked at it quickly, then stalked up to it, jumped up, and slashed his claws across his opponent’s side. Blood poured out of the dying fox.
Bearsong drove the remaining fox into the camp with the help of Redfang and Goldfur. Then he had the most despicable idea a cat could have. He watched as Darkwing told Sundapple to sleep, and that they could handle the fox. Sundapple nodded, then walked toward the warriors’ den. She sat down and started licking the blood off her paws. Bearsong slunk over, and slashed open the side of the dark gray tom with three white paws. His blue eyes opened instantly. Bearsong bolted off to the fox. Sundapple hadn’t even noticed.
“Sundapple?” the tom asked her in a disbelieving voice. “You?” “What?” Sundapple said, mid-lick. She froze, absolutely still. “What’d I do?” “This?” the tom snarled, showing her his side. “No! No! I would NEVER do anything like that!” “Yuh-huh.” “Reedfoot, really! It WASN’T me!” The tom, Reedfoot, stood up and screeched at the top of his lungs, “GHOSTSTAR! GHOSTSTAR! SUNDAPPLE IS A TRAITOR! GHOSTSTAR!”
Bearsong grinned evilly.
The leader slunk out of his shadowy den, a cave cut into a rocky ridge, along with all the other dens. Each one had a leafy overhang over the entrances. Ghoststar narrowed his eyes. Although he could see out of his black eye perfectly fine, it looked like he was half-blind. “What did I hear?” he snarled into Sundapple’s ear. She still hadn’t moved a muscle. “I–” “Sundapple is a traitor,” Reedfoot repeated firmly, lashing his tail, blood dripping from his side.
Ghoststar looked around, parting his jaws. “Okay,” he hissed. “I smell only your scent, Sundapple, on this hole. You let out the prisoners. But they were fighting those foxes who had gotten into our camp. Then you attacked a Clanmate, Reedfoot, IN HIS SLEEP, when he didn’t do ANYTHING wrong. You are a traitor. Skycrash, lead the fight.” Skycrash, the deputy, a dark gray she-cat with silver patches, padded up to stand next to Ghoststar. “Did I hear you right?” Skycrash snarled, circling Sundapple. “No,” Sundapple whispered, choking, predicting what would happen. Skycrash lashed a paw out at her; Sundapple’s nose started to bleed. “Don’t EVER speak to me like that! ME OR GHOSTSTAR!” Skycrash shouted. “ATTACK!”
The warriors who had been sleeping woke up, looked around drowsily, then swarmed around the fox. They all attacked it, and, as soon as it was dead, they ran back to their dens. “No! Not the fox! Sundapple!” Skycrash yowled. A dark brown tabby she-cat with amber-orange eyes crept out of the warriors’ den. “Sundapple?” she repeated. “SHE ATTACKED REEDFOOT IN HIS SLEEP FOR NO REASON! SHE COULD HAVE KILLED HIM!” Ghoststar roared. “JUST ACCEPT IT, PINEFEATHER!” Pinefeather, the dark brown tabby, nodded quickly and backed into the den. Three more cats, a dark gray she-cat, a skinny gray tom, and a light brown tabby tom with lime green eyes, emerged from the den, too. “Ghoststar,” the she-cat whispered, “what are we going to do?” “Kill her, obviously, Floodsplash, what else?” the skinny gray tom snapped. “Gustpelt,” he said to the light brown tabby, “ask him.” Gustpelt nodded. “Okay, okay, Whisperfur.” Gustpelt had just opened his jaws when Ghoststar said to the brothers, “What are your names?” Bearsong stepped toward him. “I’m Bearsong, and these are my brothers, Redfang–” Redfang nodded as his name was said “–and Goldfur.” Goldfur respectfully dipped his head. “You can attack Sundapple with us, and you can stay with our Clan as long as you’d like, too,” Ghoststar told them. “Thank you.”
“Ghoststar?”
Ghoststar turned to look at Gustpelt. “You can begin the attack on Sundapple.”
Gustpelt grinned. Padding past his leader, he pinned the orange tabby down. He drew his paw back and plunged his claws into her shoulder. The warriors and apprentices had told the elders, the queens, and Fallenleaf (remember, he’s the medecine cat) about Sundapple.
The whole Clan leaped on the innocent she-cat with a loud battle cry.
Bearsong’s plan had worked.
to be continued
Oh, and does anyone have an idea for this jungle Clan? I made this Clan a long while ago, but I STILL don’t have a name. Any ideas?
GloomyClan?
HiddenClan?
DarkClan?
Anyone like the name SpecterClan?
Hmm… how about vineclan? or Flowerclan? or Leafclan? Or Mudclan? Or Rainclan? Or…. oh great starclan! someone stop me plz!
Ever since I learned that ‘specter’ means ‘ghost’, I’ve been thinking SpecterClan, since The Fifth Clan is creepy and unknown to other cats.
The Year of Harmony 1: Summer Snowfall
Prologue
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These days, do cats bother to tell of the Harmonic Valley? No, not at all is your answer.
Except me.
Wishmouse is my name. I’m an elder of ShadowClan, and I know of the Harmonic Valley, a place farther than the sun-drown-place…
Twolegs don’t know of there, but we Clans only exist because of the cats in that Valley! A crazy polliwog-brained cat named Dappleflight started a rebellion against the ValleyCats, and eventually she was cast out by the magic there. Dappleflight was like the other cats in the Harmonic Valley, bearing powers for each season. She used to bear newleaf powers, but as she strayed from the valley and out into the world, they faded away.
But not all that gleams is golden.
Dappleflight was a gleam, a trap that threw loyalty from the Valley to her.
The heroine today was golden, one who was an outcast, but demolished the philosophy of the in-crowd.
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chapter 1 when I feel like it aka forever from now >:3
EDIT Wow that was short :O
A Clan reborn
Prologue
The Night air whistled around two silhouettes. A burly tom stepped into the moonlight revealing a yellow and orange pelt and fiery amber eyes, followed by a black she-cat with shimmering gold eyes. They gave one last look behind them, and ran forward into the unknown. As they ran the she-cat spoke to the tom. “Flamefur. Are you sure this is the only way?” the burly tom answered “I’m not any happier than you are about this Shadowpelt.” I love her more than anything, and I know she loves me but it is tearing her to leave Shadowclan behind he thought. I wonder if Thunderclan will miss me. Shaking his head he thought of last night’s events. He had gone to their usual meeting place. He waited beside the crooked tree on the edge of their territory’s. Finally she came and called his name. He purred and came over to her, Flamefur immediately became worried since the look on her face was of terror. She spoke quietly and “said my clan knows that we have been meeting! Darkpaw saw me leaving last night…”her voice trailed off and she look at Flamefur. Flamefur could see what would happen she would be driven out. So he said the only idea he could come up with “let’s run away! There has to be another place to live.” Flamefur looked at Shadowpelt he could tell that she was not happy at all but he also saw that she loved him more than anything finally very reluctantly she said “Okay we should head out first thing tomorrow.” He nodded his agreement and they went their separate ways. The next day as the sun rose over the trees Flamefur waited by the border finally he saw her coming however he could tell there was another scent with her. He bristled as a she-cat with blue fur and spots of white stepped after Shadowpelt. Flamefur looked at Shadowpelt and growled “whats she doing here!?” The pretty she cats sky blue eyes became slits but shadowpelt stepped between them and said ‘She’s my sister she knew I was leaving and she wanted to come because well I’m the only family she has left! Besides she is a medicine cat. We will need her skills!” Flamefur thought of this for a while and finally agreed fine Shadowpelt and her sister relaxed. Shadowpelt quickly introduced them “this is Kindheart, kindheart this is Flamefur!” the sun began to rise higher and higher finally they set off into the unknown…
so yeah thats the prologue for my new fan fic chapter 1 is on its way! 🙂
also this is like the perfect warrior song! it has appeared in my article of songs too! Xd https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0Q4u8ZO0k3s
A Clan reborn
Chapter 1
Shadowpelt ran through the night air! On her right side her sister kindheart matched her step for step, on her left her mate Flamefur was running only a little ahead. Suddenly he screeched to a halt. The two she-cats came back to his side. The gasped as they saw what he was looking at. It was a small clearing surrounded by brambles, in the nights light glow a single moonbeam surrounded the clearing making it look like starclans hunting grounds. Kindheart was the first to break the silence. “It’s beautiful!” she looked farther away and added “This is a good area to find herbs too! We should go check it out.” Flamefur nodded his approval. He ran down followed by Shadowpelt then kindheart. When they reached the bramble wall they noticed a small hole in it just big enough for cats to squeeze through. Once inside Flamefur and shadowpelt decided it was the only choice. It had already started to grow over some areas creating potential dens. They decided it would be better to sleep and make this a home in the morning, Shadowpelt took one last look at the stars hoping her ancestors were watching then she closed her eyes and fell into a deep sleep. The next day Flamefur woke her up “kindheart has already left to gather herbs.” He murmured. Shadowpelt nodded and Flamefur said that they should start collecting moss, bracken, brambles and anything else they could find to build the camp. Shadowpelt quickly agreed and set off in search of building materials. When she got back she saw that kindheart had re-turned and was already organizing her herbs.shadowpelt dropped her bundle of moss, but before she could set out again Kindheart called her over. “Yeah what is it?” Shadowpelt mewed. Kindheart replied with happiness in her eyes, “Just thought you might want to know, your expecting kits!!” Shadowpelt gasped at that moment Flamefur came in, She rushed to him purring and told him the good news. His face lit up with happiness then he said ‘well you better rest I don’t want you out there! Anything could happen! A fox could get you or you could get lost or or something worse!” he looked at her with worry. Shadowpelt laughed and replied “I’m not fragile! Besides you need my help to gather moss and bracken for the dens!” At the mention of dens Flamefur perked up and rushed out saying “we have to get more materials I can’t have you sleeping on the cold ground!” Shadowpelt just laughed and looked at her sister, before she could say anything Kindheart answered her question “You can go out it’ll do you good to exercise.” With that Shadowpelt left to find more bracken and brambles. That night they had managed to finish part of the nursery.
Sushi’s Society Allegiances
SOCIETY OF THE STREET
LEADER
SUSHI – large gray tabby she-cat with golden eyes and a tooth-spiked collar
COUNCIL
SNIPE – tortoiseshell tom with a tooth-spiked collar
COBWEB – gray tom with yellow eyes and a tooth-spiked collar
TOOTH – gray tom with yellow eyes and a tooth-spiked collar
TALLY – lanky ginger she-cat with white legs and dark amber eyes
SUNNY – tiny flame-colored tabby she-cat with one white paw and ice-blue eyes
SNUGGLE – large black-and-white tom with green eyes
SHY – sleek black tom with golden eyes
SNIFF – dark gray tabby tom with a perpetual sniffle
SUNBEAM – cream tabby she-cat with white paws
TAWNY – tawny she-cat with a torn ear and green eyes
HEALERS
SCRAPS – scrawny pale gray-and-white tom with pale golden eyes
ICICLE – sturdy, sleek-furred, pale gray tom with blue eyes
BRIGHT – pale cream tabby she-cat with amber eyes
BORDER GUARDS
REDWOOD – huge ginger tabby tom with yellow eyes and a tooth-spiked collar
BOX – scrawny brown tabby tom
TIRE – black she-cat with yellow eyes and one ear torn away
SNOWFLAKE – tiny, thick-furred white she-cat with yellow eyes
CLOUDY – pale gray-and-white she-cat with blue eyes
SCRUFF – scruffy dark gray tabby tom with ice-blue eyes
HUBCAP – dark gray tom with pale green eyes
DOVE – pale gray she-cat with green eyes
SELF-RELIANTS
GLASS – large dark gray tabby tom with pale green eyes
TUMBLE – tortoiseshell-and-white she-cat with one green and one blue eye
DIRTYFUR – brown speckled she-cat with green eyes
BRISTLE – large spiky-furred black tom with dark amber eyes
SONG – a tortoiseshell-and-white she-cat with green eyes
MAX – plump ginger tom with gray eyes
SHADOW – dark gray tom with golden eyes
DRIP – small gray-and-white tom with pale blue eyes
FLASH – bright ginger tom with yellow eyes
ZOOM – skinny black-and-white tom with a tooth-spiked collar and yellow eyes
ASH – pale gray tabby she-cat with green eyes
BLINK – ginger tabby tom with a tooth-spiked collar and one gray eye
SPECKLEFUR – speckled brown tabby tom with green eyes
BARB – spiky-furred black she-cat with pale green eyes
PRICKLE – spiky-furred light brown tabby she-cat with amber eyes
SCORCH – huge pale gray she-cat with golden eyes
SOOT – tiny black she-cat with one white paw and golden eyes
TRAINEES
PENNY – red-brown tabby she-cat with thick fur
PUDDLE – black-and-white tom with blue eyes
BOUNCE – gray tabby tom
BEETLE – silver tabby tom with yellow eyes
SWIPE – scrawny gray she-cat with green eyes
CHATTER – brown tabby tom with golden eyes and a white chest
ELDERS
MINTY – dark gray she-cat with pale blue eyes
BURROW – spotted gray tom with green eyes
SNOWY – fluffy white she-cat pale blue eyes
RAT – scruffy brown tabby she-cat with green eyes
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COVER: http://jayie-the-hufflepuff.deviantart.com/art/Cover-Sushi-s-Society-Novella-One-608430971
ALLEGIANCES: http://jayie-the-hufflepuff.deviantart.com/art/Sushi-s-Society-Allegiances-608432627
CHAPTER ONE: http://jayie-the-hufflepuff.deviantart.com/art/EOTW-Sushi-s-Society-Chapter-One-608430691
PREVIOUS: http://jayie-the-hufflepuff.deviantart.com/art/EOTW-Sushi-s-Society-Chapter-Ten-614185709
So yeah, as promised, here are the allegiances for Sushi’s Society, as of the start of the final chapter. ^^ A lot of changes from the first allegiances, as you can see.
There’s a ton of cats who have been born, and if I ever get to their ref sheets I’ll go into who’s related to who, but mostly I just wanted to show the ranking system.
I’ll post the Code of the Street in a moment, and after that, Sushi’s Society is complete and it’s back to Trail of Ashes.
Cool! 😀 Box’s name just made me laugh for some reason 😛
Yeah, I suppose it is odd, but there’s been other weird rogue names. 😛 And I wanted twolegplace-related names.
Box should be a canon prefix.
rename bramblestar to boxstarXD Wouldn’t exactly work for the forest cats.
Simple solution:
Teleport Box to the Clans!
okay it’s impossibleCode of the Street:
1. No cat may attack or harm another unless in self-defense or defense of someone else.
2. No cat may take what belongs to another cat.
3. All disputes that cannot be solved peacefully must be brought to the Council and Leader to settle.
4. No cat may ignore a kit in danger or pain.
5. No cat is to waste food by killing prey they will not eat.
6. Avoid the attention of Twolegs whenever possible. Do not take their food unless you are desperate, and do not draw their attention to the activities or existence of the Society.
7. Cats who can no longer hunt for themselves will live in the Home of Elders, and will be cared for by the trainees as part of their training.
8. When a cat turns six moons old, they must live in the Council Home as trainees and train for six moons to become self-reliants.
9. A cat who comes to live in Twolegplace after they are past trainee age do not have to undergo training, but they will not be given the title of self-reliant unless they do, and they must be willing to have their kits trained when the time comes.
10. There must be a Council of ten cats at any given time. New Council members must be voted on by the Council, and must be at least two leafbares old.
11. The Council and leader will vote on all important things for the Society, and the leader’s vote counts for three votes. They vote on when trainees are to be recognized as self-reliants, who is allowed to be a border guard or healer (along with votes from standing guards and healers), who the next leader will be, and how to settle disputes between cats.
12. The Council cannot decide to have a cat killed for any crime, unless it is deemed absolutely necessary to prevent the cat from being a danger to others.
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COVER: http://jayie-the-hufflepuff.deviantart.com/art/Cover-Sushi-s-Society-Novella-One-608430971
ALLEGIANCES: http://jayie-the-hufflepuff.deviantart.com/art/Sushi-s-Society-Allegiances-608432627
CHAPTER ONE: http://jayie-the-hufflepuff.deviantart.com/art/EOTW-Sushi-s-Society-Chapter-One-608430691
PREVIOUS: http://jayie-the-hufflepuff.deviantart.com/art/EOTW-Sushi-s-Society-Chapter-Ten-614185709
Here is the Code of the Street, written out in full. Obviously, Sushi took a lot of inspiration from the Warrior Code while creating this code, but there are definite differences. Hope you think this is interesting.
This concludes Sushi’s Society. Now, when I find time, it’s back to Trail of Ashes.
Cool! 😀 Is there allowed to be more than ten Council members at a time?
Nope, just ten. 😛 And thanks. 😀
It was a great novella <3
Thanks. 😀 Now it’s back to ToA. ^^
The night sky was filled with bright stars. Rainwhsiper fell behind the cats who where taking her. She had only started to realize the words they spoke, “She’s a rouge!” One sneered “No, she’s From another clan.” The cat snarled. Rainwhsiper felt her flank become cold and her paws became war. She looked up to the stars, hoping to see the three shining bright. They marked her three lost kits. Willowkit, Little out and Look it. She felt a pang of grief. “Could I have some water?” She asked with a sore throat.
Sorry it’s short. I’ll work on it more, is it good so far?
Cool! Can’t wait for more <3
Okey… I reallly need to stop starting to wright fan fic right before i go to bed… i leave it on the computer, thinking i’ll finish it in the morning, then… POOF! It’s gone D:
Also, here’s Rainkit/paw/pool/star
http://www.dolldivine.com/kitten-creator-2.php
whoops… it didnt work ima fix that
Aww 🙁 -huggles- Do you have to manually save it?
Also the link doesn’t work for me 🙁
Fanfiction that doesn’t have a name
Prologue
Rain poured down, the sky black. BlogClan streamed out of camp.
“It’s flooding!” Jayfrost yowled in terror, grabbing Maplekit in her jaws.
“StarClan help us!” Flowerstream yowled, nudging Foxpaw and Mistypaw forward. “We need to get to higher ground!” She yowled as black water bubbled at her paws.
Goldenpaw stumbled forward, falling into the water. It was now up to her flank. The swirling black water threatened to pull everyone down into it’s depths.
“Goldenpaw!” Wollowpaw cried the water surrounded her, keeping her from helping her friend.
Goldenpaw disappeared under the water.
“Where is she?” Jetclaw screeched, terror sparking in her eyes.
Wollowpaw stumbled through the water. “Help her!” She shrieked.
Sundance leapt for Goldenpaw, the water threatened to suffocate her as she looked around in the blackness. Goldenpaw’s sharp ginger streaks glowed in the water. She was down at the bottom. Sundance swam for her, grabbing Goldenpaw’s scruff in her jaws. She swam up, her lungs screaming.
“Goldenpaw!” Owlwater yowled, terrified. She lay limply in Sundance’s jaws.
“No. No. No!” Aspenflame shrieked.
“She can’t be dead!” Wavepaw wailed.
Goldenpaw coughed up water. Sundance carried her over to the other cats, licking her fur gently.
“We need to get to higher ground. Now.” Flame That Shines Like Sun meowed, still shocked that the camp had flooded.
Sundance kept licking Goldenpaw. “Wake up. Please.” She begged.
Winterpaw shoved through the crowd. He stopped at Goldenpaw. Suddenly, he jumped on her chest, pumping on it.
“What are you doing?” Wollowpaw shrieked, leaping at him.
Sundance held her back. “He’s trying to save her.” She mewed softly.
Goldenpaw coughed up more water, shuddering. More water was rising at all the cat’s paws. “Wollowpaw?” Goldenpaw rasped.
“Goldenpaw!” Wollowpaw yowled, relief glowing in her gaze.
“We need to go!” Cakestar yowled.
Sundance grabbed Goldenpaw in her jaws and ran for higher ground, all the other cats streaming beside her.
I love it so far! Can you stick me in?
Yes of course! Thank you!
It’s very good! put me in! please?
Of course! Thank you!
AWESOME! Thanks for including me <3
<3 You've included me in you're fanfic <3. Thank you. I'm going to try to get chapter one out by Monday 😀
Awesome! 😀
Thank you! ^^
Awesome! Hype for more! Thanks for the cameo <3
<3
Very nice! I wish I could write as well as you do. Would you mind including me next time? If not that’s fine.
Thank you! I don’t think I’m good at writing xD I can totally include you! I’m actually very honored that people want to be in my fanfic ^^