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  • (Maple you should make a discussion page for the Tests using a secret page. Not a real discussion page.

    Guys, should I reveal Storm and Marina’s backstory or not? Because you guys probably haven’t seen the hints yet….)

  • Wait you know from Sing? (I just finished watching it for the first time today 😛 ) I feel like Tawny is Ash 😛 Jay (who you haven’t met yet . . . 😉 ) is like her boyfriend who dumped her, and what’s-her-face who becomes his new girlfriend is someone who I will create. 🙂 =P
    Here’s some songs!

    Boulder to Birmingham – Eclipse and Meingink (idk how to spell it 😉 😛 )
    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M9A48houSs0

    Well I have been listening to this song, and it’s kinda good for Tawny, so
    Firework – Tawny
    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QGJuMBdaqIw
    Actually it’s good for all tests cats 😺

  • Daughter

    Sang by Sylver Lily and Orion

    ~ ~ ~ ~ ~

    SYLVER LILY
    (Sang)
    So many things to tell them,
    But there are rules to obey.
    Harnor tries to not let us help them,
    But still I’ll have my say.

    A stronger calling lies within me…
    For me this not a place to play.
    He may find this amusing,
    But there’ll be a price to pay.

    (Spoken)
    I can’t do this anymore, Orion.
    There’s more than rules here for me… for us.
    You know that we can’t let them fail.
    You know what it means to fail.

    (Sang)
    Inside me lies a greater pull,
    A tug that pulls at my heart.
    If playing by the rules means
    Standing at the side of the playground,
    I cannot play that part.

    (Spoken)
    You have to understand.

    ORION
    (Spoken)
    I know. But Sylver Lily…

    (Sang)
    You know that I’ve always taken risks…
    A leap is better than a step.
    But how can we override Harnor
    After all we’re still like his pets.

    How can we possibly do this?
    Break all the rules that he set.

    SYLVER LILY
    (Sang)
    There must be a way…

    ORION
    (Sang)
    How can there be a way…

    SYLVER LILY AND ORION
    (Sang)
    To break the rules we have to obey.

    SYLVER LILY
    (Spoken, slightly upset and frustrated)
    How can you not even try? They are our DAUGHTERS! We need to at least take a chance!

    ORION
    (Spoken, upset)
    I love them so much, but it’s Harnor’s rules.
    They’re like playthings to him… he won’t deliberately harm them….

    (Sang)
    I know that you want to help them,
    But remember the rules we must obey.
    Harnor won’t let us help them,
    If we go against him we’ll have to pay.

    I love them both to pieces,
    I know this isn’t a game.
    But please listen to me,
    And hear what I have to say.

    Love… is a strong tug…
    But listen to your brain right now, not your heart.
    If you play by the rules you can
    Have a safer part.

    (Spoken)
    Let’s play it safe for now.
    No real danger has come to them yet.

    SYLVER LILY
    (Spoken)
    But what will happen when it does? We should plan first.

    (Everything below is sang until the next “spoken.”)

    SYLVER LILY
    So many things to tell them,

    ORION
    I know that you want to help them…

    SYLVER LILY
    But there are rules to obey.

    ORION
    But remember the rules we must obey…

    SYLVER LILY
    Harnor tries to not let us help them,

    ORION
    Harnor won’t let us help them…

    SYLVER LILY
    But still I’ll have my say.

    ORION
    If we go against him we’ll have to pay…

    SYLVER LILY
    A stronger calling lies within me…

    ORION
    I love them both to pieces…

    SYLVER LILY
    For me this not a place to play.

    ORION
    I know this isn’t a game…

    SYLVER LILY
    He may find this amusing,

    ORION
    But please listen to me…

    SYLVER LILY
    But there’ll be a price to pay.

    ORION
    And hear what I have to say.

    SYLVER LILY
    (Spoken)
    What? What is more important than the two most important things – Storm and Marina?

    (Everything below is sang until the next “spoken.”)

    SYLVER LILY
    Inside me lies a greater pull,

    ORION
    Love… is a strong tug…

    SYLVER LILY
    A tug that pulls at my heart.

    ORION
    But listen to your brain right now, not your heart…

    SYLVER LILY
    If playing by the rules means
    Standing at the side of the playground,

    ORION
    If you play by the rules you can…

    SYLVER LILY
    I cannot play that part.

    ORION
    Have a safer part.

    SYLVER LILY
    (Spoken)
    Why would I want a safe part if I could have a part that saves our DAUGHTERS’ lives?

    ORION
    (Spoken)
    Because it’s Harnor, that’s why! You’ve seen what he can do… What he does…

    SYLVER LILY
    (Spoken)
    And he could do that to them – to Storm and Marina! From what I’m hearing, you’re the one who doesn’t remember enough.
    Don’t you care?

    (Everything below is sang until the next “spoken”)

    ORION
    How can we possibly do this?

    SYLVER LILY
    I know that we can do this…

    ORION
    Break all the rules that he set?

    SYLVER LILY
    Break all the rules that he set.

    (Spoken)
    Orion, we can do this. Together.
    Maybe just once or twice.

    (Sang)
    Not too much.

    ORION
    (Sang)
    That’s too much…

    SYLVER LILY
    (Sang)
    When will it not be too much?

    SYLVER LILY AND ORION
    (Sang, both more tentative and understanding)
    I know that you want to help them…
    In your very own way…
    But won’t you open your eyes and see,
    What I am trying to say?

    We both love them to pieces,
    That much at least is true…
    But Harnor tells us so much that we have to do…
    Look at how that’s driven a wedge between me and you…

    If you want to help our daughters,
    Just look at me,
    Open your mind and your heart…
    And then I hope you will see.

    Fin.

    ~ ~ ~ ~ ~

    Phew! I’m done! And it took less than a week!

    The words just spilled out of me.

    Before you go, stay for a few facts and notes from me!

    1. Yes, I KNOW that there is some improper grammar! I understand that “me” should go after “you” and all that stuff, so please don’t waste your own time typing that out for me because I KNOW.

    2. FUN FACT: You wouldn’t expect this from a stargazer, but instead of Orion’s name being pronounced “O-ryan” like it should be, it’s actually pronounced “Or-eeon.”

    3. FUN FACT: I originally had Sylver Lily as “Silver Lily,” but for some reason I swapped the “i” for a “y” because it makes her name more unique AND because it sounds less delicate to me.

    4. I was actually pretty hesitant on what this song would really be about. When I first started with the lyrics, all I knew was that it would be about helping Storm and Marina. That’s absolutely it! In fact, the song basically wrote itself. I sometimes got confused about whether or not I wrote it? 😛

    5. I created Sylver Lily and Orion when Storm and Marina were made, but back then they were just “their parents.” Eventually I needed a name for them, so I created them about… just about a week before I wrote this song! Shows how much I fell in love with the two of them immediately.

    6. Storm is more like Sylver Lily while Marina is more like Orion, but both have, of course, traits of the parents that they are less like. I have a mini chart here if you want see the similarties, but this is only for the basic things, the surface things. There’s definitely more!

    Storm:
    Black pelt – Orion
    Silver sheen – Sylver Lily
    Electric blue eyes – Sylver Lily, but the electricity element is all Storm’s.
    Air and telekinesis powers – Sylver Lily
    Thick fur – Orion
    Long legs – Sylver Lily

    Marina:
    Black pelt – Orion
    Blue-green eyes – Orion’s mother
    Water and poison powers – Orion
    Relatively thin fur – Sylver Lily
    Sort of short legs – Orion

    There is much more that makes the difference more clear, by the way.

    7. I hope that you’ve seen a bit of their individual personalities. This song actually makes them look the opposite of how they normally are, though! You can take a guess or two in the comments of why you think this happened during this song and guess their normal personalities.

    8. Please offer some sort of review/note to let me know that you’ve read this! I love knowing that people have read through my work.

  • MAPLE! HERE ARE SOME REASONS I NEED YOU TO ACCEPT MY CHARACTERS! (Why am I doing this?)
    Love triangle
    Love triangle
    Love triangle
    Love triangle

    And Tawny will be having kits.

  • Can this more detailed backstory count as a level-up or no
    Lived in an old and abandoned Chinese twoleg city with a small group of cats. Harnor’s stories are like bedtime stories that kits will listen to. His mother’s name was Moon Boat, and he had a sister named Magnolia. The cats in this community were very enclosed, and it was a tradition almost to turn away outsiders, for they may corrupt the traditional community from within. His father, a black and white tom called Crane, is a descendant of an outsider, and the community will often glance at their family with distaste. After Lantern’s mother and father died in a bout of sickness, Lantern and Magnolia had nowhere to turn when they were sad. The two left the community and found another, smaller group of cats, since after they spent their life in the community, not having other cats around felt wrong. Magnolia became close friends with a tom in the group, a dark bluey-black cat named Plum. They eventually have four kits, Fairy, Peony, Dragon and Wintersweet. Lantern also found a she-cat, Chrysanthemum, but she ended up with another tom in the group. Lantern told Magnolia of his woes, and not long after, Harnor appeared for him. Lantern never told Magnolia that he was leaving, though he knows that she knows where he is.

  • this is Frost and Flame’s level up to level 2 if that makes sense 😛
    Frost-
    Frost sat alone thinking about her acquired “power”. She summoned some electricity randomly while she was with Pebble and she glowed. She wondered what else these so called powers were for, like sure she could accidently give people static shocks, but everyone could do that, she thought. What would happen when it got stronger, would it overtake her? Could she use it to save someone? She doesn’t know. The whole glowing thing didn’t make sense either, cats aren’t bioluminescent by nature so why did she glow when it happened? Then there was the healing part that she hardly noticed until recently, it could be useful, but does it work on other cats? as in could she heal other cats? All these thoughts swimming around in her head, she also glowed when this happened and the only way she noticed was because her cut was diminishing with no herbs whatsoever faster than it should be.

    Flame-
    Flame was bored and so he thought about what had happened recently, everyone including himself and his sister got magic powers of sorts. Water, he was stuck with water, of all powers surly that one had to be the most useless, what could he do? Become a fire man? Probably, but he didn’t want to be a fire man, he wanted to protect people (well cats but still). for now he could save them from butterflies and thirst and that’s pretty much it, he did notice how some cats with water were also spitting green liquid so he would have to try that at some point, maybe that could save more people. Frost, he wanted his power to be able to help his sister, Frost. I mean her having electricity would probably be enough for her to help herself but he wanted to be the classic brother and save his sister, with his power. So maybe he will become more powerful to his enemies at some point, but for now he will have to accept that he could save cats from heat stroke (if that could happen to cats)
    ——
    that’s it, its ok if they don’t level up, I wasn’t quite sure how to do this anyways but literally almost everyone else is higher than level 1 so I think its time they do too 😛 and that was wayyyy longer than intended, oops, sorry I made you read all that

  • Daughter
    Sang by Sylver Lily and Orion

    ~ ~ ~ ~ ~

    SYLVER LILY
    (Sang)
    So many things to tell them,
    But there are rules to obey.
    Harnor tries to not let us help them,
    But still I’ll have my say.

    A stronger calling lies within me…
    For me this not a place to play.
    He may find this amusing,
    But there’ll be a price to pay.

    (Spoken)
    I can’t do this anymore, Orion.
    There’s more than rules here for me… for us.
    You know that we can’t let them fail.
    You know what it means to fail.

    (Sang)
    Inside me lies a greater pull,
    A tug that pulls at my heart.
    If playing by the rules means
    Standing at the side of the playground,
    I cannot play that part.

    (Spoken)
    You have to understand.

    ORION
    (Spoken)
    I know. But Sylver Lily…

    (Sang)
    You know that I’ve always taken risks…
    A leap is better than a step.
    But how can we override Harnor
    After all we’re still like his pets.

    How can we possibly do this?
    Break all the rules that he set.

    SYLVER LILY
    (Sang)
    There must be a way…

    ORION
    (Sang)
    How can there be a way…

    SYLVER LILY AND ORION
    (Sang)
    To break the rules we have to obey.

    SYLVER LILY
    (Spoken, slightly upset and frustrated)
    How can you not even try? They are our DAUGHTERS! We need to at least take a chance!

    ORION
    (Spoken, upset)
    I love them so much, but it’s Harnor’s rules.
    They’re like playthings to him… he won’t deliberately harm them….

    (Sang)
    I know that you want to help them,
    But remember the rules we must obey.
    Harnor won’t let us help them,
    If we go against him we’ll have to pay.

    I love them both to pieces,
    I know this isn’t a game.
    But please listen to me,
    And hear what I have to say.

    Love… is a strong tug…
    But listen to your brain right now, not your heart.
    If you play by the rules you can
    Have a safer part.

    (Spoken)
    Let’s play it safe for now.
    No real danger has come to them yet.

    SYLVER LILY
    (Spoken)
    But what will happen when it does? We should plan first.

    (Everything below is sang until the next “spoken.”)

    SYLVER LILY
    So many things to tell them,

    ORION
    I know that you want to help them…

    SYLVER LILY
    But there are rules to obey.

    ORION
    But remember the rules we must obey…

    SYLVER LILY
    Harnor tries to not let us help them,

    ORION
    Harnor won’t let us help them…

    SYLVER LILY
    But still I’ll have my say.

    ORION
    If we go against him we’ll have to pay…

    SYLVER LILY
    A stronger calling lies within me…

    ORION
    I love them both to pieces…

    SYLVER LILY
    For me this not a place to play.

    ORION
    I know this isn’t a game…

    SYLVER LILY
    He may find this amusing,

    ORION
    But please listen to me…

    SYLVER LILY
    But there’ll be a price to pay.

    ORION
    And hear what I have to say.

    SYLVER LILY
    (Spoken)
    What? What is more important than the two most important things – Storm and Marina?

    (Everything below is sang until the next “spoken.”)

    SYLVER LILY
    Inside me lies a greater pull,

    ORION
    Love… is a strong tug…

    SYLVER LILY
    A tug that pulls at my heart.

    ORION
    But listen to your brain right now, not your heart…

    SYLVER LILY
    If playing by the rules means
    Standing at the side of the playground,

    ORION
    If you play by the rules you can…

    SYLVER LILY
    I cannot play that part.

    ORION
    Have a safer part.

    SYLVER LILY
    (Spoken)
    Why would I want a safe part if I could have a part that saves our DAUGHTERS’ lives?

    ORION
    (Spoken)
    Because it’s Harnor, that’s why! You’ve seen what he can do… What he does…

    SYLVER LILY
    (Spoken)
    And he could do that to them – to Storm and Marina! From what I’m hearing, you’re the one who doesn’t remember enough.
    Don’t you care?

    (Everything below is sang until the next “spoken”)

    ORION
    How can we possibly do this?

    SYLVER LILY
    I know that we can do this…

    ORION
    Break all the rules that he set?

    SYLVER LILY
    Break all the rules that he set.

    (Spoken)
    Orion, we can do this. Together.
    Maybe just once or twice.

    (Sang)
    Not too much.

    ORION
    (Sang)
    That’s too much…

    SYLVER LILY
    (Sang)
    When will it not be too much?

    SYLVER LILY AND ORION
    (Sang, both more tentative and understanding)
    I know that you want to help them…
    In your very own way…
    But won’t you open your eyes and see,
    What I am trying to say?

    We both love them to pieces,
    That much at least is true…
    But Harnor tells us so much that we have to do…
    Look at how that’s driven a wedge between me and you…

    If you want to help our daughters,
    Just look at me,
    Open your mind and your heart…
    And then I hope you will see.

    Fin.

    ~ ~ ~ ~ ~

    Phew! I’m done! And it took less than a week!

    The words just spilled out of me.

    Before you go, stay for a few facts and notes from me!
    1. Yes, I KNOW that there is some improper grammar! I understand that “me” should go after “you” and all that stuff, so please don’t waste your own time typing that out for me because I KNOW.
    2. FUN FACT: You wouldn’t expect this from a stargazer, but instead of Orion’s name being pronounced “O-ryan” like it should be, it’s actually pronounced “Or-eeon” in Orion’s (the cat’s) name
    3. FUN FACT: I originally had Sylver Lily as “Silver Lily,” but for some reason I swapped the “i” for a “y” because it makes her name more unique AND because it sounds less delicate to me.
    4. I was actually pretty hesitant on what this song would really be about. When I first started with the lyrics, all I knew was that it would be about helping Storm and Marina. That’s absolutely it! In fact, the song basically wrote itself. I sometimes got confused about whether or not I wrote it? 😛
    5. I created Sylver Lily and Orion when Storm and Marina were made, but back then they were just “their parents.” Eventually I needed a name for them, so I created them about… just about a week before I wrote this song! Shows how much I fell in love with the two of them immediately.
    6. Storm is more like Sylver Lily while Marina is more like Orion, but both have, of course, traits of the parents that they are less like. I have a mini chart here if you want see the similarties, but this is only for the basic things, the surface things. There’s definitely more!
    Storm:
    Black pelt – Orion
    Silver sheen – Sylver Lily
    Electric blue eyes – Sylver Lily, but the electricity element is all Storm’s.
    Air and telekinesis powers – Sylver Lily
    Thick fur – Orion
    Long legs – Sylver Lily
    Marina:
    Black pelt – Orion
    Blue-green eyes – Orion’s mother
    Water and poison powers – Orion
    Relatively thin fur – Sylver Lily
    Sort of short legs – Orion
    There is much more that makes the difference more clear, by the way.
    7. I hope that you’ve seen a bit of their individual personalities. This song actually makes them look the opposite of how they normally are, though! You can take a guess or two in the comments of why you think this happened during this song and guess their normal personalities.
    8. Please offer some sort of review/note to let me know that you’ve read this! I love knowing that people have read through my work.

    REPOST because only two people left reviews last time and I like my reviews so I am not satisfied. (Hamilton, anyone?)

    • I love this !
      The only reason I didn’t reply before was becuase I’m lazy.
      But it’s summer holidays now, so I’ve given up on laziness

  • So uh
    This is from Seusical the Musical
    Don’t ask
    But here!

    I Have Wings

    Artemi’s head hung low as her eyes bore into the ground as tears dripped from them. Through her mind echoed a tune she was certain no one had heard but her. She started murmuring the words.
    “There are secrets on a leaf,
    In the water, in the air,
    Hidden planets, tiny worlds,
    All invisible!
    Not a person seems to know.
    Not a person seems to care.
    There is no one who believes a thing I say…”
    She stopped to take a breath and sighed.
    “Well, I’m fairly certain
    At one time or other,
    Great thinkers all feel this way!”
    She stood up as the tears etched paths down her cheeks, and she looked into the sky. She remembered the song, clear as crystal, and thought it was a duet she sung alone.
    “I’m alone in the universe.
    So alone in the universe.
    I’ve found magic but they don’t see it
    They all call me a lunatic.
    Ok, call me a lunatic.
    If I stand on my own, so be it.”
    She stood taller and her eyes closed, squeezing the tears out of them as she did so. She started yelling to no one, though before she started Leaf silently joined her.
    “Cause I have wings.
    Yes, I can fly
    Around the moon
    And far beyond the sky
    And one day soon
    I know there you’ll be
    One small voice in the universe
    One true friend in the universe
    Who believes in me…”
    Leaf gasped, as he had heard the song once before. Artemi silently listened to the other part, when he started singing.
    “I’m alone in the universe.
    So alone in the universe.
    My own planets and stars
    Are glowing.”
    Artemi turned to him and ran to him.
    “Alone in the universe…” She sung gently, burying her face into his shoulder.
    He continued, his nonexistant tail wrapping around himself.
    “No one notices anything.
    Not one person is listening.
    They don’t have any way of knowing.”
    Artemi left his should to sing in a clear, beautiful, sweet voice that rung throughout the clearing.
    “Nobody knows that
    I have wings
    Yes, I can fly
    Around the moon
    And far beyond the sky
    Well someday soon
    You will hear my plea
    One small voice in the universe”
    She sighed. He had joined in near the end, and the two sat in silence for a moment.
    “One true friend in the universe.”
    The two joined together in a warm mixture of high, sweet notes from Artemi and middle-ish, kind, bouncy notes from Leaf.
    “Please believe in me …”
    Artemi gave a half-jump into the air, and pranced around the clearing for a moment, as Leaf simply stood in the middle.
    “Hello? Who are you?” Artemi asked hopefully.
    “My name is Leaf, I’m not from here.” Leaf replied.
    “I’m Artemi, I am from here.”
    “Are you real? Or are you just a figment of my imagination?”
    “Ok, I’m real alright.”
    “Do you imagine also?”
    “In bright colors!”
    “Me too!”
    “An-and I go to strange places, l-like Solla Sollew!”
    “I imagine you love that place, where troubles are few?”
    “Well, little dumbo, of course I do!”
    Artemi gave a small wink at the end of the sentence. Leaf caught it and ran up to her. The two started singing again, their voices blending like water and dirt would to make mud, but much prettier.
    “Nobody knows that
    I have wings
    Yes, I can fly
    Around the moon
    And far beyond the sky
    Well someday soon
    You will hear my plea
    One small voice in the universe
    One true friwnd in the universe
    Who believes in me.”