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  • ~Spur~
    Spur steps in front of the dungeon door, his wings on his hips. “Well, well, well,” he sneers, “look who’s here.” In his right wing he fiddled with the key to the dungeon.

    ~Fireblaze~
    He’s planning to lock us in! Fireblaze realized with a jolt. “I’ll distract him!” she whispers to Yuri, “You save the cub.” Turning to Spur, she shouts, “You seem to have mistaken me for a chicken who’ll put up with your nonsense!” With that, she marches out of the dungeon, beckoning for Spur to follow.

    ~Spur~
    Not wanting to look like he is afraid to argue with Fireblaze, Spur stomps after the hen, casting a final glare at Yuri.

    • Yuri leaps at Spur, eyes shining. She clenches the keys to the dungeon. “This what you want?” She asks, a hint of a tease in her voice. She bursts into the dark room, and spots Umbra. Smiling, she opens the cell door. “Come, Umbra.” She suddenly spots the shadowy fox. “You are Tempest?” She barks. “Come, you are free now.”

  • ~Victoria~
    Victoria sighed, drawing shapes in the sand with her wing. I have to help my friends! she thought desperately. Suddenly, an idea came to her. She cast a cautious glance at Sheila. Seeing that the older hen had turned away, she bolted across the road and out of her sight.
    Victoria looked around. This part of the city was unfamiliar and her feet were tired, but she kept going. Yuri and Fire will be so proud of me when they see me! I’ll be a hero! the exciting thoughts gave her energy and she picked up her pace.
    She soon came to Koshiro’s mansion, gazing up at it with amazement. She had never been here, but she recognized it from Fire’s stories.
    Excitement bubbling up inside her, she rushed through the gate, then stopped. I need to make a big entrance… Going around the mansion, she arrived from the back and spotted her friends. “Fire! Yuri!” she called, “I came to help!”
    Fire did not look as pleased as Victoria had expected her to be. In fact, she was scowling, her amber eyes blazing with anger. “You were told to stay with Sheila!” she exclaimed, her voice outraged.

  • Molly~
    Molly trusted Dusty. She truly did. But how, how could she know Sandy was hurt from when they weren’t even together?

    It didn’t make sense, and Molly was trying to work it out.
    Silverstream defender

  • ~Sandy~
    Sandy gazed at the battlefield, trying to see that her friends were okay. If there’s any trouble, I will go help them, despite my injury, She thought.
    “Are you okay?” the hen who had saved Sandy asked sympathetically. Sandy looked up at her awkwardly. “I’m fine,” she answered. The two still haven’t talked much, and Sandy was well aware that this hen saw herself as higher in rank than Sandy. “Thank you for saving me back there…” Sandy finally clucked. The older hen smiled. “I’m Slash,” she said, “What’s your name, little one?” “I’m Sandy,” Sandy answered, “I came here with my friends to save the cub.” “It’s a brave thing, for someone so young to come here,” Slash commented, her red eyes shining, “I think you did well.”

    • Feather-
      Feather races to the battlefield with the others on her tail. As she reaches it she notices that the good animals are winning. She slows down and the warriors stop besider her, “Let’s go!” Scar yowls, he charges into the battle jumping onto Sharpclaw while the rest of the cats attack the other Bloodclaws. The Feather sees Sandy sitting aside with another hen, “Sandy!” she calls and runs over, “What’s wrong? Faith, come here please.”

      • ~Slash~
        “She’s injured,” Slash explains quickly, “Spur did this. I’m Slash by the way,” she adds.

      • ~Elderberry~
        Following Feather, Elderberry kneels down next to Sandy and examines her. There is a long gash on her wing. “The wound is quite deep- we shouldn’t try to move her,” Elderberry remarks, “Let’s treat her here.”

        • Feather-
          “Yes, I’ve got some herbs, but i dont know what works on chickens.” Feather states.

          • ~Elderberry~
            “A lot of the same remedies work on chickens as on cats,” Elderberry replies, “But I’ll let you know in other treatment is needed.” She takes out her first aid kit and looks worriedly at the painfully small amount of medicine she had brought. “There are probably many animals hurt, I just hope we’ll have enough supplies for all of them, otherwise we’ll have to go back to the hospital for more, and that will take a long time.”

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    ~Athena~
    Athena gave a pained howl. “Help!” She struggled to breathe, and staggered to the edge of the room. Foliis and Nyx followed her, herbs and medicine in their mouths. “Where does it hurt?”
    “My bl-blood, it’s on fire.”

    • ~Sandy~
      Through the corner of her eye, Sandy saw Athena. The cougar was badly injured! “Feather! Elderberry!” she clucked to the doctors, who were busy treating her, “Athena’s hurt!”
      Sandy lifted her head bravely. “Go help her,” she told them, “I’ll be okay.”

  • Carlotta~
    Animals were hurt everywhere. Carlotta lost track of the times she scurried across blood.
    “So much suffering. It’s not right.” she muttered.
    “How could we have gotten so hurt in this one battle?”
    Turtle 🐢

    • “I do not know,” Yuri admits, “but I do not like this. I never intended this to be this bloody. I never wanted murder in this fight. I wanted peace. Not… not this.” She looks down at Carlotta, ears at her side. “I should never have let them come. It was supposed to be me, and only me, but now I am the only one not hurt.” She sighs. “I feel really, really bad… I can not explain it any other way.”

      • ~Slash~
        Slash glanced at Yuri, her red eyes shining with understanding. “You know, there really was no way for you to tell what would happen,” she clucked sympathetically, “Sometimes, with wars, you can’t tell. Trust me, I’ve been in more than I can count. I should know. You can’t control what the opposing side will do,” she added, “It was Koshiro’s side who took it too far. But your side suffered for it.” The warrior hen looked up, turning to the battle, “Wounds will heal,” she reassured the others, “At this point, we’re just going to have to move on.”
        Standing up, she drew her sword, “Let’s win this battle.”

  • ~Sandy~
    Sandy looked up at Yuri. “Do you really think you could have stopped me?” she asked, a gleam in her eyes despite her weakness, “This was my choice, Yuri, and, you know, I think I wouldn’t have changed it-” she broke off, coughing.
    “Don’t talk, Sandy, you need to save your strength,” Elderberry said sternly, but Sandy shook her head. “There’s no point, Elderberry,” she smiled, “I know I’m hurt. Badly. You don’t have to hide it from me.” She looked at her friends, “It’s okay,” she murmured weakly, “I don’t mind.” She closed her eyes and put her head down, aware of the sensation of her sister’s warm body pressed close to her.

    ~Dusty~
    Dusty flopped down beside Sandy, barely noticing the other animals’ surprised stares on her. Molly would explain how they got here. Right now, all she cared about was her sister. “Sandy!” she choked on sobs, “No! Sandy! Will she be okay? She has to be okay… she has to be okay…”
    Dusty felt weakness overtake her, which she guessed came from more than just her sadness. She fell asleep in the middle of the now quiet battlefield, leaning on her injured sister, with tears still streaming down her face.

  • ~Shadow~ + *Ice*
    Shadow and Ice both jump at Sharpclaw, facing their greatest enemy, “Back down, Sharpclaw or we will make you” Shadow growls. Ice claws his face and pulls his tail.
    .*Slate*. + .:Snow:.
    Slate charges after Snow and pulls her into a quieter corner, “Why do we have to be like this?” she asks, Snow replies by slashing her, “BECAUSE FOR SOME REASON YOU CHOSE TO BE EVIL!!!!!!” Snow jumps on her.

  • ~Dusty~
    Dusty opens her eyes and lifts her head weakly. Sandy is still lying motionless beside her. “She’s alive,” Dusty chokes out, noticing the others’ worried gazes, “I know she’s alive. I can… still feel her pain.”

  • ~Slash~
    Slash gazed at the battlefield. “The battle is done!” she clucked loudly, so all the animals could hear, “Let’s leave now- it’s not safe for the injured animals to stay here. But as for you,” she said harshly, pointing her sword at Koshiro and Spur, “This isn’t over!”

    Very gently, she picked up Sandy, and walked towards the gate, waiting for the other animals to follow.

    • ~Fireblaze~
      Fireblaze let out a sigh of relief as she followed Slash away from the battle.
      Taking her phone out of her pocket, she quickly dialed Sheila’s number. After explaining to Sheila about what happened with Victoria, and finding out that the lawyer had searched everywhere for her, Fire turned to Yuri. “What are we to do with her?” she sighed, motioning at Victoria, “She has to be taught that what she did was wrong!”

      • “I do not know.” Yuri looks down at the floor. “I need to think about that. First, though, let us leave.” She walls along, with her head still dipped. The battle is over! There will be no more problems! So why do I feel like I have failed? She glances at the bloodstains around Koshiro’s mansion. That is why. The bloodshed. I did not want this to happen. What… what have I done?

    • Molly~
      Molly followed Slash. She only hoped there would be no more battles. She hated them. Hated seeing her friends get hurt…

      This isn’t over, Slash had said. What if it wasn’t? Was this how life was going to go on? Battles and bloodshed?
      Turtle 🐢