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This page will now be used for contests, the first one being a short story contest.
Here’s the prompt: The main characters best friend/mate/family/whoever they are closest to is killed in a battle. The main character is torn between revenge and the code. Which will they choose?
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Have fun! If you want to join, just reply to this comment with your story!
I’ll join, but I can’t promise I’ll actually finish it, because I’m I have at least 4 fanfics I’m working on, along with a collaboration with Nightwish.
I might join, depending if I have time 😛
my story:
Tallbumble sat in his nest, thinking about how MapleClan and BirchClan had been at war since he was a kit, and as soon as he became a warrior, he was in almost every battle. MapleClan’s deputy, Songshine had assigned him to every raiding patrol, every battle patrol and every border patrol. He was constantly exhausted, yet the only cat he found comfort in was his mate Petalcloud. Her cream fur always shone in the sunlight, and her amber eyes reflected the light, making them look like little suns. “Tallbumble! You, Petalcloud, Moonpelt, Shinefur, Dewtail, and Brackenrunner are going on a raiding patrol to BirchClan camp. Destroy all their herbs and take their prey.” He was snapped out of his thoughts by Songshine’s orders. He curtly nodded and stalked off with his patrol. “Take that BirchClan mange-pelts!” Tallbumble heard his clanmates’ fierce battle cries. He swiped at a BirchClan warrior’s belly, sending him running. He smelled the tang of blood. He turned, the worst thing he could have ever imagined was happening right before his eyes. He crouched over his mate’s body, trying not to think about the blood rapidly pouring out of her neck. “Tallbumble, don’t forget me” Petalcloud croaked. He watched helplessly as Petalcloud’s flanks stop rising. “No!” He yowled, slumping to the ground. He buried his muzzle in her blood-stained fur. “MapleClan, retreat!” They left with Petalcloud’s body despite his clanmates’ protests. He didn’t sleep that night, only thinking about how he would rip apart the snakeheart who killed his mate. “You’ll pay for this, Troutstream, someday, I’ll avenge Petalcloud” he vowed. The next day, he was on a border patrol. He saw Troutstream and stalked up to her. “You! You’re the snakeheart who mercilessly killed Petalcloud!” He leaped at the dark ginger she-cat, hooking his claws onto her pelt. “Tallbumble stop!” Yelled Dewtail. “No! She killed Petalcloud!” He growled, sinking his teeth into Troutstream’s leg. Dewtail and Moonpelt grabbed his scruff, hauling him off of the BirchClan cat. “Let me go!” He snarled. He watched Troutstream tremble. “Tallbumble, revenge isn’t the answer” who was it? “Petalcloud?” He looked up to see his starry mate gazing at him, her eyes full of love. “My death was fate, and it’s only the first step in your journey.” She mewed calmly. He watched apparition fade and nodded in apology to Troutstream. “When Featherstar finds out about this, she’ll have me on apprentice duties for moons” he sighed. “But I deserve it. I tried to kill a cat today”. “Let’s go back to camp” murmured Dewtail.
I love it! It’s really good!
I reposted it as Swirlfeather since that’s the alias I use here now
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I’ll join if I have time to finish it.
I want to join, please!
I’m busy with a collab and other fan fics, my writing may be rushed but I’ll try my best!
I didn’t put my story here so I’ll just repost it.
My story was kinda long with 535 words so I put it in a spoiler box (Also it was a good reason to use a spoiler box.)
[spoiler title=”My story: Tiger’s Scar’s Love”] My story: Tiger Scar’s love
All Tiger’s Scar could think about was Silver Blossom. And the battle of course. The battle between MoonClan and SunClan. The other two clans, ForestClan, and CloudClan stayed out of the battle since they were having their own battles currently.She was dead but and that was all that mattered.
And now every time he thought of SunClan, all he could see were her beautiful green eyes, and delicate, tabby pelt.
His mate.
His love.
His everything.
Now she was dead and it was all their fault
What started as a territory dispute eventually became a battle.
Perhaps if SunClan didn’t bring it up to the other clans and perhaps if they didn’t end up launching a surprise attack this battle may have never come up. But it had and she had died.
Silver Blossom had died in a foolish battle.
And there was only one cat Tiger’s Scar wanted to get his claws on.
There was only ONE cat.
And his name was Jagged Wave.
He swore by StarClan he would get his revenge.
The next day her funeral happened. As the elders put Silver Blossom in her grave an ear-piercing scream echoed in the air. It didn’t take him long to realize it was his. Between sobs, he looked away. Promising himself once again, that he would get his revenge.
That night Tiger’s Scar quietly walked away from his nest. “Tiger’s Scar?” a sleepy voice called out. It was Kind Lake, “Where are you going?” Tiger’s Scar looked behind him at a pretty she-cat with grey stripes and amber eyes. “Oh nowhere” he quickly replied. “Just for a short walk.” She blinked “I can go with you if you want” she offered. “It’s okay” he quickly replied. She closed her eyes “Ok, but remember I’m here for you if you want” she murmured. “Yes, of course,” he said and quickly scampered away.
First, he sneaked to SunClan territory making sure to be quiet. Every now and then as a patrol passed, he hid behind a bush. He heard a tom named Small Creek sniff around before walking away. Inwardly he sighed with relief. “Thank StarClan” he whispered.
Then he quickly but quietly walked and ran to the warrior’s den. He looked around checking where Jagged Wave was. He saw him. He was sleeping with a she-cat, who he recognized as Whispering Willow. He had a mate. For a moment Tiger’s Scar hesitated wondering if he should spare Jagged Wave just because he had an innocent mate.
“Tiger’s Scar don’t do it” a sweet voice suddenly whispered in his head as he looked around he could make out the starry shape of Silver Blossom.
“But Silver Blossom he killed you” he whimpered.
“But think of his family. How would they react?” asked Silver Blossom.
“Don’t kill this cat, he was only doing his duty. Tiger’s Scar you have to move on. We both knew this would happen. There is a cat who loves you as dearly as I loved you. Move on, my love, and one day we shall see each other in the stars.
As Tiger’s Scar walked back to camp, he couldn’t help but smile, for one day he would meet Silver Blossom in the stars. [/spoiler]
Uh, sorry for the length, its 2100 words, but here [spoiler title=”Lust For Vengeance”] Crowpaw whipped around, lashing out with a black paw at the enemy warrior behind him. The jet-black apprentice was as big as any warrior. If he did well in this battle, him and his sister, Robinpaw, would gain their warrior names that night.
Crowpaw screeched as the tom behind him snapped his jaws down on the base of Crowpaw’s tail. Crowpaw spun around, ripping his tail free. His expression darkened as he saw a huge white tom trapping Robinpaw down with a paw, his other one raised for the death blow. With a yowl of fury, Crowpaw sped past the brown cat he was fighting, and threw himself at the white cat, slamming his paws down on the tom’s neck, unbalancing him and knocking him away from Robinpaw. A ways away, Icestar, the WindClan leader, got his head free from the RiverClan leader’s grasp.
“WindClan, retreat!” Icestar yowled.
Crowpaw watched as the white cat leapt after his Clan, disappearing into the reeds.
“Mouse-brains.” he muttered under his breath. “Why would they want our territory anyway? They couldn’t catch a fish if it swam into their mouth.”
“Crowpaw?” the RiverClan leader, Redstar, approached him. “You did well today. An apprentice will become a warrior tonight.”
“An apprentice, sir? What about Robinpaw?” Crowpaw asked tentatively, though seeing his leader’s face, he feared what the answer would be.
“Crowpaw… Crowpaw, Robinpaw is dead.”
Crowpaw sat at the base of the Wetrock, awaiting Redstar’s signal. His ceremony had been delayed for a few days due to Redstar’s injuries, and in those days, Crowpaw’s heart had become hardened and bitter at the loss of his sister. He just didn’t understand. There had been no enemy warriors near Robinpaw, and he didn’t think her injuries were severe enough to kill her. Before he could ponder this anymore, the call for a meeting came, ringing out loud and clear, bouncing around the clearing.
“Let all cats old enough to swim the rapids gather beneath the Wetrock for a Clan meeting!” Redstar sat on the rock, wrapping his fox-red tail around his white paws.
Cats milled about, sitting in loosely generated groups around the base of the Wetrock.
Three kits bundled over, bouncing on tiny paws while their mother tried and failed to make them sit still. Crowpaw wondered why such young cats were coming to a meeting, when he realized they were Blackbird’s kits, six moons old and ready to be apprenticed.
“Smallkit, Berrykit, and Smokekit, come forward.” Redstar wasted no time in starting the meeting. “From this moment on, you will be known as Smallpaw, Berrypaw and Smokepaw. Smallpaw, your mentor will be Sanddune.” Crowpaw glanced at the pale tabby tom, a young warrior, barely past his own apprenticeship.
“Berrypaw, your mentor will be Stoatfoot.” Redstar waited for the black-and-white tom to touch noses with his new apprentice before continuing. “Smokepaw, your mentor will be Hollybush.”
Redstar motioned to the black she-cat, then looked at Crowpaw.
“We have another ceremony to perform tonight. I call upon my warrior ancestors to look upon this apprentice. He has worked hard to understand the ways of your noble code, and I commend him to you as a warrior in his turn. Crowpaw,” Redstar turned to Crowpaw. “Do you promise to uphold the warrior code, and to protect your Clanmates, even at the cost of your life?”
Crowpaw looked around at all the familiar faces of his Clanmates. He knew these cats, and yet… Crowpaw knew something none of them did, and he couldn’t completely trust any of them until he knew for sure. He suspected that one of his Clan killed his sister, and he couldn’t do anything about it.
“Crowpaw?” Redstar’s voice jerked him out of his thoughts. “Do you swear this oath?”
Crowpaw opened his mouth and closed it again. Being a warrior was all he’d ever wanted, him and Robinpaw, ever since their parents both drowned in the river, but to accept without Robinpaw, without justice?
“I.. I” Crowpaw looked around once more, and the friendly expressions, some sympathetic, on his Clanmates’ faces, made him burn with rage. One of them killed his sister, and they just sat there and smiled like nothing had happened? “I.. I don’t.” he half whispered.
Redstar’s eyes widened in surprise. “Excuse me?”
“I said, I don’t.” Crowpaw said louder. “How can I?” With every word, Crowpaw became more sure of himself. “It’s all Robinpaw ever wanted, ever worked for. How can I live her dream without her?”
Redstar’s eyes softened. “That’s very noble, Crowpaw, but I’m sure she’d-”
“I said no.” Crowpaw stood and stared his leader in the eyes as he defied him. “You can give me a name, and all the status of a warrior. But I do not make that promise. Not until I have avenged Robinpaw.”
Redstar stood, tail lashing. “You have too much anger in you, but I will not deny you the honour of a full warrior name, Crowpaw. You will be known as Crowfrost, because your heart was broken, and mended crooked. There is ice in your veins, Crowfrost. And you must let it melt before you do something you regret.” Redstar stared at Crowfrost, a mix of anger, sympathy and disgust in his eyes. “This ceremony is as good as dead. No one shall speak of it, except for the apprenticeships. He isn’t sheltered by the claws of StarClan. This cat,” he shot daggers at Crowfrost with his eyes. “This cat has a warrior name, but he is not a warrior in my eyes, nor in StarClan’s.”
Crowfrost fought the urge to flinch at his leader’s wounding words. But the black cat sat tall, and puffed out his chest.
I am broken, but I’ll tell them I’m fine. But they wouldn’t believe me if they knew the things that cross my mind.
Crowfrost sprinted through the forest, his long strides eating up the earth underneath him. He was chasing Robinpaw’s voice. She was calling him, and he would find her.
Crowww-frostt. The voice rang out, echoing in the forest.
Crowww-frostt! The eerie voice bounced around Crowfrost’s mind.
Crowww-frostt! It became louder until he couldn’t stand it.
“Where are you?” the young tom cried. “Who killed you? Tell me so I can avenge you!”
You know. You know, Crowfrost.
Like the fox is red, so is blood.
My body lays in the mud.
You think you know who you can trust.
Find who did it, find you must.
The one you think you can trust the most.
They’re the one who sank the low’st.
You are right, they’re in the Clan.
You must stop them.
Before they kill again.
Crowfrost woke, feeling like a thousand thorns were pricking his pelt. His sister’s rhyme had disturbed him to the depths of his core, and he sat up. Crowfrost dug his claws into the ground as he remembered Redstar’s words. This cat isn’t a warrior, this ceremony is dead.
Crowfrost trotted out of camp, ignoring the burning glares his Clanmates shot him, as if by sending him fiery stares Crowfrost might melt like the frost in his name.
He trudged along the riverbank, pondering Robinpaw’s words.
Suddenly, he stopped.
Like the fox is red, so is blood.
The one you think you can trust the most.
There was only one cat in the Clan no cat would suspect, not even Crowfrost.
Redstar.
It made sense. The words at the ceremony weren’t what he really meant. And even if Redstar did mean what he said, they were code for something else.
This cat isn’t a warrior, this ceremony is dead. This cat has a warrior name, but he is not a warrior in my eyes, nor in StarClan’s. He isn’t sheltered by the claws of StarClan.
Crowfrost rearranged the words in his mind:
This cat is dead, isn’t a warrior. That must mean Robinpaw. But when Crowfrost deciphered the rest of the message, his suspicions were confirmed, and it sent an icy chill down his spine, like the cold claws of the wind gripping him, and it wouldn’t let go.
This cat is dead by my claws.
Crowfrost sat at the mouth of the warriors’ den, watching the moon climb high, and the stars flicker in the sky. As the moon reached its peak in the night, he padded into the darkness of the camp.
At the entrance to Redstar’s den, he hesitated. What if he was wrong?
The cat as red as foxfur…. Robinpaw’s voice breathed in his ear, ruffling his ear fur.
Crowfrost took a breath and padded into the den. He immediately noticed Redstar’s sleeping form, curled in his mossy nest. Crowfrost padded forward until his paws were less than a mousetail from Redstar’s snoring muzzle.
Robinpaw’s voice whispered to him. Sandheart, Dawnflower, Robinpaw. Sandheart, Dawnflower, Robinpaw.
The voice chanted his parents’ names over and over again.
Sandheart, Dawnflower, Robinpaw. Sandheart, Dawnflower, Robinpaw.
“He killed them, too, didn’t he?” Crowfrost whispered to no one.
Sandheart, Dawnflower, Robinpaw. Sandheart, Dawnflower, Robinpaw.
Crowfrost took that as his answer. This new knowledge that his leader had killed his parents infuriated the young warrior even more, and he hissed, loud enough to awaken Redstar, but not enough to wake the rest of the camp. The Clan leader lifted his head, fear flickering in his eyes as he saw Crowfrost.
“I knew you’d come eventually, Crowfrost.”
“You left me a message. Why?”
“I wanted you to know what I did, and why I did it.” Redstar cringed as Crowfrost stepped closer.
“I came here to kill you.”
“I know. And you have every right to do so. But will you allow me the privilege of a last explanation?”
Crowfrost hesitated, before nodding and sitting back on his hindquarters. “Explain.”
“I did kill your parent.”
“Parent? There were two.”
Redstar sighed. “No. Sandheart… Sandheart wasn’t your father. I was.”
“What?” Crowfrost’s eyes widened in shock, and he searched the old cat’s green gaze for any indication that he was lying.
“Moons ago, my kits were born to Dawnflower. I gave them to Sandheart in order to keep you safe. WindClan’s leader, Icestar, and I have always had a deep hatred for each other, as you know. If he found out I had a son and daughter, he’d waste no time in capturing you, just to hurt me.”
“So you gave us up.” Crowfrost murmured, before his gaze hardened. “Fine, you’re my father. That explains Robinpaw’s red fur. But why’d you kill my family?”
“Dawnflower died trying to save Sandheart. I mistook him for Gritclaw in a battle.” Redstar named a WindClan warrior who looked very similar to Sandheart. “I shoved him in the river, and by the time I realized, Dawnflower had leapt in. They both drowned.”
“Explain Robinpaw.” Crowfrost snarled.
“That was.. That was purposeful, I’m afraid. She found out I was your father. I killed her to keep her quiet, as it would lose my place as Clan leader.”
“Why?”
“Because Dawnflower was a WindClan cat when she had you and Robinpaw. I broke the code, even though she joined RiverClan after.”
Crowfrost sat still, taking in what he had just learned. Pawsteps sounded behind him, and Icestar entered the den.
Crowfrost turned, flattening his ears as he picked up the WindClan scent.
“Icestar.” Redstar meowed coolly. “What do you want?”
Crowfrost moved instinctively in front of his leader. “Take another step, mange pelt, and I’ll rip your fur off.” he snarled.
Icestar seemed to stop and circle them. “I do not intend to hurt a young warrior. I want your leader. Come, stand with me, Crowfrost. I know you want him dead after what you just heard.”
With a jolt, Crowfrost realized Icestar had heard Redstar’s entire confession. Crowfrost walked towards Icestar, and faced Redstar’s teeth bared.
“Smart decision.” Icestar smirked at Redstar, his blue eyes triumphant. “This warrior is mine now.”
Suddenly, Crowfrost turned sharply, leaping onto Icestar’s spine and sinking his fangs in. He heard bone hit bone, and the WindClan leader let out an ear-splitting screech, and flung Crowfrost against the stone wall, before fleeing the den. Crowfrost’s head slammed into the rock, and blackness crept into his vision, and he sunk into a black sleep.
Robin was avenged, avenged with the truth.
Sandheart wasn’t killed, he was mistaken.
Dawn died saving her Clanmate.
Crowfrost opened his eyes. A cat, red as foxfur, sat in front of him.
“Redstar!” Crowfrost cried happily.
The cat turned, eyes closed, and sat facing Crowfrost.
“You came back.” Crowfrost took a step forwards but something wasn’t right…
Red, yes, red as blood.
I stared at him, wary but excited.
Taking a step forward, I stopped abruptly.
A river appeared, swallowing the red cat.
I bounded forwards, and stared over the side of the bank.
The cat was there, but only the closed eyes.
I peered closer, and the eyes snapped open.
Instead of a bright green, they were icy blue.
And Filled With Lust For Vengeance….
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That was awesome!
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im sorry, it looks like Shimmer claimed this already!
Sorry Orchidpaw, but I already claimed this page.
Oh, sorry!
This is my entry!
It is called Love or Life.
It’s kind of long, 828 words, so I put it in a spoiler box.
[spoiler title=”Love or Life?”] The images came flowing back to Tiger’s Roar. The bloody battle, the slashing of claws. . . and Blue Flower.
As soon as he remembered, he could again see Blue Flower’s desperate blue eyes as blood pumped from the wound in her throat. And then he could see her limp body laying in front of him, her eyes still filled with love and sorrow.
Blue Flower’s Dead! And it’s all the Clan’s fault.
Tiger’s Roar could not ignore the swelling of fury rising up in his chest, seeming to explode all around him. His mate, his love, and his everything had been killed by yet another battle with the Clans.
Taking a steadying breath and still trembling with rage, he made a vow.
“Your death will not be left alone. I will take vengeance.”
But next to his own nest he saw the sleeping form of Running Storm and all of the other warriors. By taking vengeance on his Clan, he would be hurting them and the Clan he had always loved so much.
In private torment, Tiger’s Roar stood up. He could see again Blue Flower’s blue eyes gazing lifelessly at him as the last breath left her body. He felt another surge of anger remembering the pointless battle that had killed more than just Blue Flower, but cats from the rest of the Clans as well.
They didn’t deserve to die. Tiger’s Roar was sure now. Blue Flower was his everything, but yet the Clans had chosen to kill her. Not even in the most peaceful way, but without him, with claws and teeth and last markings of rage.
Tiger’s Roar unsheathed his claws.
And at that moment, and as the stars finally began rising across the sky, he made his choice.
***
Tiger’s Roar quietly inched his way toward WindClan’s territory, searching for Black Wing. Blinded with anger and grief, he could only think of his sharp claws digging deep into Black Wing’s throat, getting vengeance on the cat that had killed his mate.
He rushed across the moor, now on WindClan land, and stopped besides the sleeping figures of the exhausted cats. Black Wing! Where are you?
Quickly he slunk away into the shadows, searching for the black and white tom. Where could he be. . .
There! He saw Black Wing who was sleeping next to the brambles. Making sure he didn’t wake anyone, Tiger’s Roar stalked towards him, his claws unsheathed and his amber eyes glinting with hunger.
Holding back a yowl of fury, he slashed his claws into the black cat,sending blood splattering on the ground. Black Wing let out a yowl of pain, and hearing his cry the other WindClan cats began to wake up.
Giving Black Wing one last nip on the shoulder, Tiger’s Roar disappeared into the shadows, feeling a rush of satisfaction . . . and guilt?
No. He pushed away the feeling, and felt a rush of satisfaction once more as he imagined Blue Flower’s loving blue gaze staring back at him.
RiverClan, you’re next. Tiger’s Roar sprinted across the clearing and swam strongly across the river, heading towards their camp. This time, he was searching for the cat who was the backbone to the Clans. RiverClan’s leader, Darkstar.
He quietly made his way into the leader’s den, trying to keep his tail still. He saw the sleeping gray figure of Darkstar and padded slowly, closer and closer. Tiger’s Roar unsheathe his claws and just as he was about to sink them in, getting revenge for Blue Flower’s death, he saw her blue eyes gazing sympathetically back at her.
He sheathed his claws in horror as Blue Flower’s spirit rose from the ground, her fur speckled with stars.
Blue Flower nodded, her eyes full of love, and began to speak. “Tiger’s Roar, I know you are grieving about my death. I know that you are upset and that you want to take revenge on other cats. But my dear, killing is not the answer. I died saving you, and I do not regret anything about it. My life was full of happiness and love, I couldn’t have asked for more. I am also sorrowful about my death and wish that I could stay with you longer, but this was my destiny. Killing these cats will make your destiny hard and full of twists and turns.”
As Tiger’s Roar stared at her, his eyes glistening with grief, Blue Flower continued. “Do not kill these cats, and live your own life. Your Clan is your life, and when your life is over, I will meet you in the stars.”
Blue Flower’s shape faded, her eyes shining with love. Tiger’s Roar wanted to curl up where she had been and whimper like a kit, but he knew that the least he could do was follow what she had told him to do.
Glancing back again at Darkstar, he sheathed his claws and returned to his home in ThunderClan. I’ll meet you in the stars, Blue Flower. [/spoiler]
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Here’s my entry called Sneezebird’s Revenge!
Sneezebird wrapped her tail protectively around her three kits as the battle with the rogues raged on around her.
“Are we gonna be okay, Mama?” Applekit asked timidly, her eyes round.
Sneezebird knew she had to stay strong for her kits. They couldn’t see her fear. “Of course we are, my darling.” Applekit shifted closer to her. “We have nothing to fear. Our warriors will win the battle.” She knew very well that her words could be false. The rogues had already taken over two of the Clans. Who was to say they wouldn’t destroy RockClan, too?
Suddenly, Emberheart crashed into the nursery. “Sneezebird!” he cried. “We have to get out of here now! Get the kits.”
Eaglekit squealed. “Are we going on an adventure?” His eyes were bright, and Sneezebird’s heart cracked. Her precious son had no idea what was going on.
Emberheart licked Eaglekit between the ears. “Yes, and you must be very quiet.” He looked at all three kits. “Can you do that?”
Molekit nodded solemnly. “I promise I can be the quietest kit ever!”
Sneezebird let her kits scramble onto her back as her mate helped get the other queens and kits out. “Hurry up, little ones,” she murmured. “We don’t have much time.”
Sneezebird krept out of the nursery, and shrieked as the rogues pounced on her and the world went black.
The rogues had ordered for everyone to gather as their leader made an announcement. Molekit and Applekit shivered from the cold, and Eaglekit tried to warm them up. Sneezebird drew them underneath her belly so the rogues couldn’t see them. To her dismay, Emberheart was nowhere in sight. Did the rogues kill him? she wondered in horror. The silver queen shook her head. No. She couldn’t let such terrible thoughts into her head when she had to act strong.
The rogue leader started talking. “I want all of the young cats to join me on the hill,” he ordered in a slimy voice.
Before Sneezebird could process what was going on, two massive rogues were pinning her down while three more snatched her kits away from her. “NO!” she screeched. “Applekit! Molekit! Eaglekit!”
“Mama!” Sneezebird squeezed her eyes shut at Applekit’s thin wail. “Mama! I’m scared!”
Sneezebird struggled against the rogues until she had no strength left. “Please,” she whimpered. “I need my kits!”
One of the rogues leaned in so Sneezebird could smell his foul breath. “You’ll never see those kits again,” he snarled.
Sneezebird dragged her paws to the base of the hill. She hadn’t seen her kits in so long… she didn’t even know if they were alive. The other queens huddled close to share their grief. They believed all of them were dead. Sneezebird couldn’t join them because that would be admitting that she lost everything.
The rogue leader, who she learned was named Snake, sat contently at the top of his little throne. He flicked his tail. “Bring them out.”
Curiosity fluttered in Sneezebird’s belly. Bring who out? Could it possibly be…? Yes! The kits! They were alive! There were Rainmist’s little ones… and there was Harepaw! She scanned desperately for her own babies, and her heart soared with hope as she spotted Molekit’s gray tabby fur, and farther in the line was Applekit! Her daughter’s paws were tied with reeds, and she tripped over herself. But… where was Eaglekit? Sneezebird couldn’t find his jet black pelt anywhere. No no no! “Where’s Eaglekit?” she cried.
Molekit looked at her with such haunted eyes that she knew. She knew.
“He misbehaved,” was Snake’s simple answer.
No.
Many seasons passed since Sneezebird lost her son. She had taken in Brindlefur and Sorrelflower after their own after their parents died. Moletooth was a warrior, and she couldn’t be more proud of him, but Applenose had been killed in a battle by Heatherthorn a few moons back.
“Oh, StarClan!” she had wailed. “Why are you doing this to me?”
She still didn’t know the answer.
“Sneezebird!” Frozenclaw called. “I want you on a hunting patrol with Echodust, Spikefur, and Whistleshade.”
Sneezebird didn’t feel like going on the patrol. She had felt sick the entire day, and she was so tired. “Okay,” she muttered. She dragged herself over to the awaiting patrol. “Where are we going?” she asked Echodust.
“To the hunting grounds near ShadeClan,” Echodust answered.
Sneezebird felt something tingle in her paws. ShadeClan was where Heatherthorn lived. Heatherthorn, who had joined the rogues that killed her son. Heatherthorn, who murdered her daughter.
Maybe it was time to get her revenge.
“Sneezebird? Are you good?” Spikefur’s question brought her back to reality.
Sneezebird nodded. “I’m good.” She was better than she had been in a long, long time.
Once the patrol was near the ShadeClan territory, Sneezebird was on full alert for Heatherthorn. She had to get away from her Clanmates. “I caught a mouse trail,” she announced. “I’m going to follow it.”
Whistleshade looked up. “Do you want help?”
Sneezebird bit back a hiss. “No, I’m fine,” she replied calmly.
Finally, she was alone. Sneezebird kept her eye out for the ShadeClan deputy’s brown pelt, which was hard with all of the trees. A twig snapping in the distance caused Sneezebird to jerk her head up, and she saw Heatherthorn a few tree-lengths away. She was all alone.
Sneezebird slid her claws out. I will finally get my revenge, she thought in delight. She started to creep forward, but something made her stop.
Was this what Applenose would have wanted? Or Eaglekit? Pain seared her heart at the thought of her precious kits disappointed in her. A scent washed over her. Applenose.
“Heatherthorn is a loyal warrior,” she whispered, and Sneezebird nearly cried out at the sound of her daughter’s voice. “You can’t kill her. My death may have been caused by her, but I do not blame her. We were in the middle of a war.”
Sneezebird dug her claws into the ground. “But it’s not fair,” she sobbed.
“I know.” Applenose sounded sad. “But if you kill her, what will happen to your kits?”
Sneezebird bristled in shock. “What?”
“You didn’t know?”
Sneezebird let out a shuddering breath. “No… I didn’t.”
Applenose’s scent started to fade. “You don’t need to kill Heatherthorn to avenge me and Eaglekit’s death. You can honor us by remembering who we were.”
Sneezebird stared into the trees in shock. She was expecting kits? Joy flooded through her. She had to tell Emberheart! She had to tell Moletooth! She had to…
Sneezebird glanced back at Heatherthorn, who was stalking a squirrel, completely unaware of her presence.
She had to turn around.
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My story was kinda long with 535 words so I put it in a spoiler box (Also it was a good reason to use a spoiler box.)
[spoiler title=”My story: Tiger Scar’s love”] All Tiger’s Scar could think about was Silver Blossom. And the battle of course. The battle between MoonClan and SunClan. The other two clans, ForestClan, and CloudClan stayed out of the battle since they were having their own battles currently.
She was dead but and that was all that mattered.
And now every time he thought of SunClan, all he could see were her beautiful green eyes, and delicate, tabby pelt.
His mate.
His love.
His everything.
Now she was dead and it was all their fault
What started as a territory dispute eventually became a battle.
Perhaps if SunClan didn’t bring it up to the other clans and ended up launching a surprise attack this battle may have never come up. But it had and she had died.
Silver Blossom had died in a foolish battle.
But there was only one cat Tiger’s Scar wanted to get his claws on.
There was only ONE cat.
And his name was Jagged Wave.
He swore by StarClan he would get his revenge.
The next day her funeral happened. As the elders put Silver Blossom in her grave an ear-piercing scream echoed in the air. It didn’t take him long to realize it was his. Between sobs, he looked away. Promising himself once again, that he would get his revenge.
That night Tiger’s Scar quietly walked away from his nest. “Tiger’s Scar?” a sleepy voice called out. It was Kind Lake, “Where are you going?” Tiger’s Scar looked behind him at a pretty she-cat with grey stripes and amber eyes. “Oh nowhere” he quickly replied. “Just for a short walk.” She blinked “I can go with you if you want” she offered. “It’s okay” he quickly replied. She closed her eyes “Ok, but remember I’m here for you if you want” she murmured. “Yes, of course,” he said and quickly scampered away.
First, he sneaked to SunClan territory making sure to be quiet. Every now and then as a patrol passed, he hid behind a bush. He heard a tom named Small Creek sniff around before walking away. Inwardly he sighed with relief. “Thank StarClan” he whispered.
Then he quickly but quietly walked and ran to the warrior’s den. He looked around checking where Jagged Wave was. He saw him. He was sleeping with a she-cat, who he recognized as Whispering Willow. He had a mate. For a moment Tiger’s Scar hesitated wondering if he should spare Jagged Wave just because he had an innocent mate.
“Tiger’s Scar don’t do it” a sweet voice suddenly whispered in his head as he looked around he could make out the starry shape of Silver Blossom.
“But Silver Blossom he killed you” he whimpered.
“But think of his family. How would they react?” asked Silver Blossom.
“Don’t kill this cat, he was only doing his duty. Tiger’s Scar you have to move on. We both knew this would happen. There is a cat who loves you as dearly as I loved you. Move on, my love, and one day we shall see each other in the stars.
As Tiger’s Scar walked back to camp, he couldn’t help but smile, for one day he would meet Silver Blossom in the stars. [/spoiler]
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I’m changing the date the stories are due to April 2nd.
[spoiler title=”Lust For Vengeance”] Crowpaw whipped around, lashing out with a black paw at the enemy warrior behind him. The jet-black apprentice was as big as any warrior. If he did well in this battle, him and his sister, Robinpaw, would gain their warrior names that night.
Crowpaw screeched as the tom behind him snapped his jaws down on the base of Crowpaw’s tail. Crowpaw spun around, ripping his tail free. His expression darkened as he saw a huge white tom trapping Robinpaw down with a paw, his other one raised for the death blow. With a yowl of fury, Crowpaw sped past the brown cat he was fighting, and threw himself at the white cat, slamming his paws down on the tom’s neck, unbalancing him and knocking him away from Robinpaw. A ways away, Icestar, the WindClan leader, got his head free from the RiverClan leader’s grasp.
“WindClan, retreat!” Icestar yowled.
Crowpaw watched as the white cat leapt after his Clan, disappearing into the reeds.
“Mouse-brains.” he muttered under his breath. “Why would they want our territory anyway? They couldn’t catch a fish if it swam into their mouth.”
“Crowpaw?” the RiverClan leader, Redstar, approached him. “You did well today. An apprentice will become a warrior tonight.”
“An apprentice, sir? What about Robinpaw?” Crowpaw asked tentatively, though seeing his leader’s face, he feared what the answer would be.
“Crowpaw… Crowpaw, Robinpaw is dead.”Crowpaw sat at the base of the Wetrock, awaiting Redstar’s signal. His ceremony had been delayed for a few days due to Redstar’s injuries, and in those days, Crowpaw’s heart had become hardened and bitter at the loss of his sister. He just didn’t understand. There had been no enemy warriors near Robinpaw, and he didn’t think her injuries were severe enough to kill her. Before he could ponder this anymore, the call for a meeting came, ringing out loud and clear, bouncing around the clearing.
“Let all cats old enough to swim the rapids gather beneath the Wetrock for a Clan meeting!” Redstar sat on the rock, wrapping his fox-red tail around his white paws.
Cats milled about, sitting in loosely generated groups around the base of the Wetrock.
Three kits bundled over, bouncing on tiny paws while their mother tried and failed to make them sit still. Crowpaw wondered why such young cats were coming to a meeting, when he realized they were Blackbird’s kits, six moons old and ready to be apprenticed.
“Smallkit, Berrykit, and Smokekit, come forward.” Redstar wasted no time in starting the meeting. “From this moment on, you will be known as Smallpaw, Berrypaw and Smokepaw. Smallpaw, your mentor will be Sanddune.” Crowpaw glanced at the pale tabby tom, a young warrior, barely past his own apprenticeship.
“Berrypaw, your mentor will be Stoatfoot.” Redstar waited for the black-and-white tom to touch noses with his new apprentice before continuing. “Smokepaw, your mentor will be Hollybush.”
Redstar motioned to the black she-cat, then looked at Crowpaw.
“We have another ceremony to perform tonight. I call upon my warrior ancestors to look upon this apprentice. He has worked hard to understand the ways of your noble code, and I commend him to you as a warrior in his turn. Crowpaw,” Redstar turned to Crowpaw. “Do you promise to uphold the warrior code, and to protect your Clanmates, even at the cost of your life?”
Crowpaw looked around at all the familiar faces of his Clanmates. He knew these cats, and yet… Crowpaw knew something none of them did, and he couldn’t completely trust any of them until he knew for sure. He suspected that one of his Clan killed his sister, and he couldn’t do anything about it.
“Crowpaw?” Redstar’s voice jerked him out of his thoughts. “Do you swear this oath?”
Crowpaw opened his mouth and closed it again. Being a warrior was all he’d ever wanted, him and Robinpaw, ever since their parents both drowned in the river, but to accept without Robinpaw, without justice?
“I.. I” Crowpaw looked around once more, and the friendly expressions, some sympathetic, on his Clanmates’ faces, made him burn with rage. One of them killed his sister, and they just sat there and smiled like nothing had happened? “I.. I don’t.” he half whispered.
Redstar’s eyes widened in surprise. “Excuse me?”
“I said, I don’t.” Crowpaw said louder. “How can I?” With every word, Crowpaw became more sure of himself. “It’s all Robinpaw ever wanted, ever worked for. How can I live her dream without her?”
Redstar’s eyes softened. “That’s very noble, Crowpaw, but I’m sure she’d-”
“I said no.” Crowpaw stood and stared his leader in the eyes as he defied him. “You can give me a name, and all the status of a warrior. But I do not make that promise. Not until I have avenged Robinpaw.”
Redstar stood, tail lashing. “You have too much anger in you, but I will not deny you the honour of a full warrior name, Crowpaw. You will be known as Crowfrost, because your heart was broken, and mended crooked. There is ice in your veins, Crowfrost. And you must let it melt before you do something you regret.” Redstar stared at Crowfrost, a mix of anger, sympathy and disgust in his eyes. “This ceremony is as good as dead. No one shall speak of it, except for the apprenticeships. He isn’t sheltered by the claws of StarClan. This cat,” he shot daggers at Crowfrost with his eyes. “This cat has a warrior name, but he is not a warrior in my eyes, nor in StarClan’s.”
Crowfrost fought the urge to flinch at his leader’s wounding words. But the black cat sat tall, and puffed out his chest.
I am broken, but I’ll tell them I’m fine. But they wouldn’t believe me if they knew the things that cross my mind.
Crowfrost sprinted through the forest, his long strides eating up the earth underneath him. He was chasing Robinpaw’s voice. She was calling him, and he would find her.
Crowww-frostt. The voice rang out, echoing in the forest.
Crowww-frostt! The eerie voice bounced around Crowfrost’s mind.
Crowww-frostt! It became louder until he couldn’t stand it.
“Where are you?” the young tom cried. “Who killed you? Tell me so I can avenge you!”
You know. You know, Crowfrost.
Like the fox is red, so is blood.
My body lays in the mud.
You think you know who you can trust.
Find who did it, find you must.
The one you think you can trust the most.
They’re the one who sank the low’st.
You are right, they’re in the Clan.
You must stop them.
Before they kill again.
Crowfrost woke, feeling like a thousand thorns were pricking his pelt. His sister’s rhyme had disturbed him to the depths of his core, and he sat up. Crowfrost dug his claws into the ground as he remembered Redstar’s words. This cat isn’t a warrior, this ceremony is dead.
Crowfrost trotted out of camp, ignoring the burning glares his Clanmates shot him, as if by sending him fiery stares Crowfrost might melt like the frost in his name.
He trudged along the riverbank, pondering Robinpaw’s words.
Suddenly, he stopped.
Like the fox is red, so is blood.
The one you think you can trust the most.
There was only one cat in the Clan no cat would suspect, not even Crowfrost.
Redstar.
It made sense. The words at the ceremony weren’t what he really meant. And even if Redstar did mean what he said, they were code for something else.
This cat isn’t a warrior, this ceremony is dead. This cat has a warrior name, but he is not a warrior in my eyes, nor in StarClan’s. He isn’t sheltered by the claws of StarClan.
Crowfrost rearranged the words in his mind:
This cat is dead, isn’t a warrior. That must mean Robinpaw. But when Crowfrost deciphered the rest of the message, his suspicions were confirmed, and it sent an icy chill down his spine, like the cold claws of the wind gripping him, and it wouldn’t let go.
This cat is dead by my claws.
Crowfrost sat at the mouth of the warriors’ den, watching the moon climb high, and the stars flicker in the sky. As the moon reached its peak in the night, he padded into the darkness of the camp.
At the entrance to Redstar’s den, he hesitated. What if he was wrong?
The cat as red as foxfur…. Robinpaw’s voice breathed in his ear, ruffling his ear fur.
Crowfrost took a breath and padded into the den. He immediately noticed Redstar’s sleeping form, curled in his mossy nest. Crowfrost padded forward until his paws were less than a mousetail from Redstar’s snoring muzzle.
Robinpaw’s voice whispered to him. Sandheart, Dawnflower, Robinpaw. Sandheart, Dawnflower, Robinpaw.
The voice chanted his parents’ names over and over again.
Sandheart, Dawnflower, Robinpaw. Sandheart, Dawnflower, Robinpaw.
“He killed them, too, didn’t he?” Crowfrost whispered to no one.
Sandheart, Dawnflower, Robinpaw. Sandheart, Dawnflower, Robinpaw.
Crowfrost took that as his answer. This new knowledge that his leader had killed his parents infuriated the young warrior even more, and he hissed, loud enough to awaken Redstar, but not enough to wake the rest of the camp. The Clan leader lifted his head, fear flickering in his eyes as he saw Crowfrost.
“I knew you’d come eventually, Crowfrost.”
“You left me a message. Why?”
“I wanted you to know what I did, and why I did it.” Redstar cringed as Crowfrost stepped closer.
“I came here to kill you.”
“I know. And you have every right to do so. But will you allow me the privilege of a last explanation?”
Crowfrost hesitated, before nodding and sitting back on his hindquarters. “Explain.”
“I did kill your parent.”
“Parent? There were two.”
Redstar sighed. “No. Sandheart… Sandheart wasn’t your father. I was.”
“What?” Crowfrost’s eyes widened in shock, and he searched the old cat’s green gaze for any indication that he was lying.
“Moons ago, my kits were born to Dawnflower. I gave them to Sandheart in order to keep you safe. WindClan’s leader, Icestar, and I have always had a deep hatred for each other, as you know. If he found out I had a son and daughter, he’d waste no time in capturing you, just to hurt me.”
“So you gave us up.” Crowfrost murmured, before his gaze hardened. “Fine, you’re my father. That explains Robinpaw’s red fur. But why’d you kill my family?”
“Dawnflower died trying to save Sandheart. I mistook him for Gritclaw in a battle.” Redstar named a WindClan warrior who looked very similar to Sandheart. “I shoved him in the river, and by the time I realized, Dawnflower had leapt in. They both drowned.”
“Explain Robinpaw.” Crowfrost snarled.
“That was.. That was purposeful, I’m afraid. She found out I was your father. I killed her to keep her quiet, as it would lose my place as Clan leader.”
“Why?”
“Because Dawnflower was a WindClan cat when she had you and Robinpaw. I broke the code, even though she joined RiverClan after.”
Crowfrost sat still, taking in what he had just learned. Pawsteps sounded behind him, and Icestar entered the den.
Crowfrost turned, flattening his ears as he picked up the WindClan scent.
“Icestar.” Redstar meowed coolly. “What do you want?”
Crowfrost moved instinctively in front of his leader. “Take another step, mange pelt, and I’ll rip your fur off.” he snarled.
Icestar seemed to stop and circle them. “I do not intend to hurt a young warrior. I want your leader. Come, stand with me, Crowfrost. I know you want him dead after what you just heard.”
With a jolt, Crowfrost realized Icestar had heard Redstar’s entire confession. Crowfrost walked towards Icestar, and faced Redstar’s teeth bared.
“Smart decision.” Icestar smirked at Redstar, his blue eyes triumphant. “This warrior is mine now.”
Suddenly, Crowfrost turned sharply, leaping onto Icestar’s spine and sinking his fangs in. He heard bone hit bone, and the WindClan leader let out an ear-splitting screech, and flung Crowfrost against the stone wall, before fleeing the den. Crowfrost’s head slammed into the rock, and blackness crept into his vision, and he sunk into a black sleep.
Robin was avenged, avenged with the truth.
Sandheart wasn’t killed, he was mistaken.
Dawn died saving her Clanmate.
Crowfrost opened his eyes. A cat, red as foxfur, sat in front of him.
“Redstar!” Crowfrost cried happily.
The cat turned, eyes closed, and sat facing Crowfrost.
“You came back.” Crowfrost took a step forwards but something wasn’t right…
Red, yes, red as blood.
I stared at him, wary but excited.
Taking a step forward, I stopped abruptly.
A river appeared, swallowing the red cat.
I bounded forwards, and stared over the side of the bank.
The cat was there, but only the closed eyes.
I peered closer, and the eyes snapped open.
Instead of a bright green, they were icy blue.
And Filled With Lust For Vengeance….
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Ohh, this is really cool!! The ending is so suspenseful!
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I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT
if it isn´t too much, could you post what happens next on the fanfiction page?
Repost of my entry if anyone wanted to read it! [spoiler title=”E”]Tallbumble sat in his nest, thinking about how MapleClan and BirchClan had been at war since he was a kit, and as soon as he became a warrior, he was in almost every battle. MapleClan’s deputy, Songshine had assigned him to every raiding patrol, every battle patrol and every border patrol. He was constantly exhausted, yet the only cat he found comfort in was his mate Petalcloud. Her cream fur always shone in the sunlight, and her amber eyes reflected the light, making them look like little suns. “Tallbumble! You, Petalcloud, Moonpelt, Shinefur, Dewtail, and Brackenrunner are going on a raiding patrol to BirchClan camp. Destroy all their herbs and take their prey.” He was snapped out of his thoughts by Songshine’s orders. He curtly nodded and stalked off with his patrol. “Take that BirchClan mange-pelts!” Tallbumble heard his clanmates’ fierce battle cries. He swiped at a BirchClan warrior’s belly, sending him running. He smelled the tang of blood. He turned, the worst thing he could have ever imagined was happening right before his eyes. He crouched over his mate’s body, trying not to think about the blood rapidly pouring out of her neck. “Tallbumble, don’t forget me” Petalcloud croaked. He watched helplessly as Petalcloud’s flanks stop rising. “No!” He yowled, slumping to the ground. He buried his muzzle in her blood-stained fur. “MapleClan, retreat!” They left with Petalcloud’s body despite his clanmates’ protests. He didn’t sleep that night, only thinking about how he would rip apart the snakeheart who killed his mate. “You’ll pay for this, Troutstream, someday, I’ll avenge Petalcloud” he vowed. The next day, he was on a border patrol. He saw Troutstream and stalked up to her. “You! You’re the snakeheart who mercilessly killed Petalcloud!” He leaped at the dark ginger she-cat, hooking his claws onto her pelt. “Tallbumble stop!” Yelled Dewtail. “No! She killed Petalcloud!” He growled, sinking his teeth into Troutstream’s leg. Dewtail and Moonpelt grabbed his scruff, hauling him off of the BirchClan cat. “Let me go!” He snarled. He watched Troutstream tremble. “Tallbumble, revenge isn’t the answer” who was it? “Petalcloud?” He looked up to see his starry mate gazing at him, her eyes full of love. “My death was fate, and it’s only the first step in your journey.” She mewed calmly. He watched apparition fade and nodded in apology to Troutstream. “When Featherstar finds out about this, she’ll have me on apprentice duties for moons” he sighed. “But I deserve it. I tried to kill a cat today”. “Let’s go back to camp” murmured Dewtail. [/spoiler]
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