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  • Peacebright’s POV:
    Yawn. Another boring day, in the SnowClan camp, surrounded by “good” cats.
    She sighed.
    And I have to watch the kits. Oh, can’t I go kill someone? I would love it, and I haven’t killed in a long time.
    She flicked her tail crossly.
    There are constant guards. I can’t get out. But just you wait… I WILL have my reward. But who to target….?

  • Quick FlowerClan update bc I’m gonna be on a plane on Sunday

    LEADER
    LILYSTAR – A small yellow and white tabby she-cat with a battle-scarred pelt, crippled hind paw, and green eyes who will do anything for her clan, daughter of Brightrose and Darkpool. Actually got the chance to live in the former FlowerClan, and was an apprentice, so remembers a lot about clan life. Ashflower’s mother.

    DEPUTY
    SHADOWMOON – A handsome black tom with yellow eyes who is very quiet, Blackfur and Cherryspirit’s son, both of whom are in StarClan, and was one of the only two cats in the current FlowerClan that actually got a chance to live in the former FlowerClan with his parents, albeit he was so young, he doesn’t remember anything. Leaf’s mate, and Nightpool’s father.

    MEDICINE CAT
    WINDBERRY – A jumpy fox-red short-furred she-cat with a black tail-tip/paws and yellow eyes, Sherry and Wave’s daughter. Wave is still alive.
    APPRENTICE: NIGHTPOOL

    WARRIORS
    DAPPLESHINE – A very gossipy tortoiseshell she-cat with silver eyes, Featherblossom’s mate. Daughter of Sweetfawn and Cloudthorn, both of which were warriors of the former FlowerClan, they are currently residing in StarClan. Violetpaw’s mother.
    APPRENTICE: GLOWPAW
    DAISYCLOUD – A pretty brown she-cat with white spots and blue eyes who is very gentle, Clifffall’s mate. Stemwish and Chesnut’s daughter, both of them are not alive anymore. Dustpaw’s mother.
    DAWNBREEZE – A pretty, lithe golden short-furred she-cat with black markings on her tail and green eyes, Freckleface and Kitty’s daughter (not Ice/Kitty in SnowClan.)
    APPRENTICE: DUSTPAW
    CLIFFFALL – A sand-colored tabby tom with one folded ear and amber eyes who is known among the clans for constantly falling off things, and having many scars that aren’t from battle but from falling, Daisycloud’s mate. Stomp and Stonefoot’s son. Runner and Fogstep’s brother. Runner is alive. Dustpaw’s father.
    ASHFLOWER – A silver tabby she-cat with green eyes, Lilystar and unknown’s daughter.
    APPRENTICE: MINTPAW
    PETALFLIGHT – A she-cat with many shades of gray on her fur, and gold-speckled blue eyes. Stripe and Darling’s daughter. Featherblossom’s younger sister. Both parents have passed away.
    APPRENTICE: POPPYPAW
    FEATHERBLOSSOM – A caring, handsome silver and white long-furred striped tom with blue eyes, Dappleshine’s mate. Stripe and Darling’s son. Petalflight’s older brother. Both parents have passed away. Violetpaw’s father.
     APPRENTICE: VIOLETPAW
    MISTBROOK – A funny blue-gray tom with blue eyes, Blizzardsong’s mate. Spice and Oak’s son. Spice is still alive. Frostsky and unborn kit(s) father.
    STONETRIP – A dark gray tabby tom with yellow-green eyes who falls off many things, Rouge and Wolf’s son. May have a thing for Frostsky.
    FROSTSKY – A blue and white tabby she-cat with blue eyes, Mistbrook and Blizzardsong’s daughter, unborn kit(s) sister. 

    APPRENTICES
    NIGHTPOOL – A calm black and white long-furred tabby tom with green eyes, Shadowmoon and Leaf’s son. Medicine cat apprentice. 
    GLOWPAW – A pretty white she-cat with yellow eyes who is very flashy and loves to be the center of attention, Fluffy and Muffin’s daughter. 
    DUSTPAW – A handsome light brown tom with yellow-brown eyes, Clifffall and Daisycloud’s daughter. 
    MINTPAW – A cream tabby tom with green eyes who is very catastrophic and leaves a mess behind wherever he goes, Amber and Lotus’s son, Poppypaw’s brother. 
    POPPYPAW – A honey colored she-cat with amber eyes who is very philosopher-like, Amber and Lotus’s daughter, Mintpaw’s sister. 
    VIOLETPAW – A pretty calico she-cat with blue eyes who worries a lot, Featherblossom and Dappleshine’s daughter. 

    QUEENS
    BLIZZARDSONG – A silver, white, and gray tabby she-cat with yellow eyes, (going to be) (and is) mother to Mistbrook’s kits. (Week 4)

    ELDERS
    TALONBLAZE – A ginger and brown tom, Ivytail’s mate, Magnificent and Rumble’s son.
    IVYTAIL – A cream and brown she-cat with green eyes, Talonflame’s mate, Angel and Phoenix’s daughter.

    CATS OUTSIDE THE CLAN
    LEAF – A pretty and kind brown and white loner she-cat with green eyes, Shadowmoon’s mate, and Nightpool’s mother. Sand and Rocket’s daughter. Rouge’s half-sister.
    FLUFFY – A fluffy, white kittypet tom with blue eyes who loves his Twolegs very much. Muffin’s mate, and Glowpaw’s father. Lightning and Lake’s son.
    MUFFIN – A beautiful deep brown and caramel kittypet with yellow eyes, who can be adventurous and protective of her things, Fluffy’s mate, and Glowpaw’s mother. Chocolate and Candy’s daughter.
    AMBER – A pretty yellow kittypet with amber eyes. Sherry and Mango’s daughter. Lotus’s mate.
    LOTUS – A handsome black loner with green eyes, Lake and Tuna’s son. Amber’s mate. Fluffy’s half-brother.

    ROUGE’S GROUP
    ROUGE – A big, battle scarred rouge she-cat who despises the clans. Spice’s mate, Wolf’s former mate, and Stonetrip’s mother. White, with red splashes, making her seem like a very bloodthirsty or battle-hungry cat, which she is. She has green eyes, though they are bloodshot. Leader of a rouge pack. Carrying Spice’s unborn kit(s). Claw and Rocket’s daughter. (Week 2)
    WOLF – A dark gray tabby rouge tom, much like his son, Stonetrip, with amber eyes, who’s one and only fear is, ironically, wolves. Snow and Slate’s son.
    WAVE – A sly, black tom with blue eyes, Sherry’s mate, and Windberry’s father. Not very well liked, cooperating with Rouge and her group to get food and protection, in return for blackmailing his daughter. (although he doesn’t tell Rouge it never works, because then he would die.) Snake and Dot’s son.
    SPICE – Rouge’s most loyal follower. Formerly brown but now dyed red with blood to look like his leader. Blue eyed. Nothing like his son, Mistbrook. Fathering Rouge’s unborn kit(s). Cheese and Copper’s son.
    RUNNER – One of Rouge’s band of cats, Cliffall and Fogstep’s brother. Very loyal to Rouge. Not as much as Spice, though. Light brown furred, with amber eyes. Stomp and Stonestep’s son. May have feelings for Poppypaw.
    SHADOWLEAP – A “Clan cat”. Rouge’s slave. Black furred tom, with intelligent-looking silver eyes. Elegantfoot’s mate. Father to Elegantfoot’s unborn kit(s).
    ELEGANTFOOT – A “Clan cat”. Rouge’s prisoner. A tortoiseshell (Brown and cream) she-cat, with kind aquamarine eyes. Shadowleap’s mate. Mother to Shadowleap’s unborn kit(s). (FEW DAYS UNTIL KITTING)

  • Name vote!!!
    So Frostsky was who I was going to give the -sky suffix to, but since she’s gonna be a traitor and change her name, I’m gonna do a vote for another warrior. Here are the choices:

    Heathersky
    Havensky
    Hazelsky
    Hollysky
    Lightningsky
    Thundersky
    Milkysky
    Some other choice

  • Coldstar waited, staring around the Gathering place. It wasn’t Gathering night, not yet, but she was here for a reason. Her sharp green flecked gold eyes spotted a flash of movement and flame-colored fur. Flamestar! Her heart skipped a beat. Flamestar padded up to her. Hello, he meowed, brushing his pelt along hers. Flamestar! She meowed.She got a mischievous gleam in her eyes. Want to swim? He stared back. Maybe.. He pushed me into the water, laughing. She gasped, swimming. Her heart beat happily. How I love him! She thought. She splashed him. Still laughing, he jumped into the lake. We swim around each other, splashing. Coldstar stops, staring into the water. What is it? Flamestar asks, swimming over. Oh, nothing except the biggest fish ever! She says. I bet only the best hunter can catch it, me. She meows smugly. Flamestar leaps at the fish with claws outstretched. Coldstar, at the same time, also leaps and the two of them collide, laughing, right on the fish. They swim back to shore with the fish in Coldstar’s powerful jaws. Once on shore, they share the fish, taking big hungry bites. Flamestar smiles mischievously when he and Coldstar are done the huge, plump fish. Want to explore? He asks. Coldstar nods eagerly. Come on! He pads off. Coldstar follows. Come, look what I found! Coldstar runs, following the sound of his voice. When she nears him, she sees him looking down into a hole.Come on! He meows, jumping in. She follows. Together, we curl up, sharing tongues until I let the soft rasping of Flamestar’s tongue wash me to sleep. Her last thought was, why can’t this last forever?

  • Here’s Stonetrip’s perspective:
    Stonetrip couldn’t help, but stare at Frostpaw. Her ice blue eyes were so… beautiful. “Hey Frostpaw,” he stammered, “How would you like to go hunting with me?” Frostpaw looked at him with her big blue eyes, “I would love to,” she meowed, her voice sounding like singing birds. The two walked out of camp side by side. Frostpaw walked closer to Stonetrip, pelts brushing. “Look a mouse!” Stonetrip whisper yelled. “Do you want it?” Frostpaw nodded and gracefully jumped to the mouse, killing it quickly. “Great catch!” Stonetrip meowed, admirdly. “Thank you,” Frostpaw purred. “Look at that squirrel on this tree. Doesn’t it look delicious?” she meowed pointing to the tree. “I’ll catch it,” Stonetrip meowed, desperate to make Frostpaw happy. He climbed the tree and almost fell off the top. He grabbed the squirrel and killed it. He climbed down and presented his catch to Frostpaw. “Hmm…” she meowed, disprovinging. “It doesn’t look as good up close. Besides its too skinny. My mouse can fill me up better,” She turned away from Stonetrip and began to walk back to camp. “Wait! Frostpaw!” Stonetrip meowed, after her. “Is there anything I can do? I can get you some bedding or catnip?” Frostpaw looked at him, “Oh its fine.” and continued walking. Well I guess she doesn’t like me, Stonetrip thought, miserably. “Wait there is,” Frostpaw meowed. “But it’s too dangerous and risky. You wouldn’t be able to do it,” Stonepaw perked up, “I can! You can count on me!” Frostpaw looked at Stonetrip eyes filled with joy, “Can you see what Lilystar and Shadowmoon are talking about in their den? I’m super curious!” Stonetrip nodded, “Of course!” “Thank you so much Stonetrip!” Frostpaw meowed, twinding her tail with his, making Stonetrip shiver with excitement “You’re so brave!” She touched his nose with hers. Suddenly, Stonetrip thought about Rainpaw and how he touched her nose. It made him happy. Rainpaw’s just a friend, he thought, Sure she’s kind of cute, but Frostpaw is beautiful, hopefully my future mate. I have to see what Lilystar is talking about. Then Frostpaw will love me.

    • Continued:

      Stonetrip sneaked up behind the den. He could hear voices from inside. “-raid” “Yes-” He pressed his ear to the walls. I got to hear everything, or else Frostsky won’t love me. He listened carefully, holding his breath. “Alright, Shadowsight. We won’t take the apprentices along, this is too dangerous. But Rouge’s group needs to be driven out. So, who shall we take for the raid party?” There was a pause, as if Shadowmoon was thinking. “I think,” He meowed finally. “We should take Dawnbreeze, Petalflight, Ashflower, Clifffall, Mistbrook, Stonetrip, and.. Frostsky.” Frostsky is coming along on this mission with me! StarClan, thank you for this. He thought. “Yes, yes. We will tell the warriors except for Stonetrip and Frostsky, new warriors tend to get excited, and will spill the plan to the rest. Alright?” Lilystar meowed. “Alright.” Shadowmoon agreed. There was a rustle, and the deputy slid out of the den. Stonetrip snuck back to Frostsky. Her eyes were shining. “That’s so brave of you! And you didn’t get caught! What did you hear?” She added. “Lilystar and Shadowmoon are planning a raid on Rouge’s camp.” He licked a paw. “Say WHAT?” She hissed. “Lilystar and Shadowmoon are planning a raid on Rouge’s camp.” He repeated. Frostsky’s fierce stare burned into him. “Are you coming? Am I coming?” She asked. “We’re both coming.” He mumbled. She looked relieved. “Oh, I’m glad. I wouldn’t want to go if you didn’t go. You’ll protect me, won’t you?” She blinked. “Of course.” Stonetrip promised. “Thanks.” She purred, and twined her tail with his. I’m so glad I did that. Frostsky actually likes me! His heart soared at the thought. And I’m not going to make her regret it.

    • Idea
      Stonetrip stumbled along the FlowerClan and SnowClan border. Rainpaw! Rainpaw! I love you! I- I was blinded by Frostsky’s beauty! I need you! I love you! Rainpaw! He thought. All he could think about was the pretty SnowClan apprentice. How he loved her! Even when he thought about Frostsky before, his heart didn’t beat so fast. His paws didn’t feel like the wind. His belly didn’t tingle with excitement just to see her and be with her. B-but- what if Rainpaw hated him now? What if she didn’t want to be his mate or just meet him? Rainpaw, I love you! Please forgive me! He wanted to yowl.

  • Gracepaw’s plot ideas which are the reason why Blossompaw’s parents are from FlowerClan gave me my own ideas for plot twists. First, the other Flowerpaw made the new article about Firestar so Gracepaw I can’t answer your question on who Duststripe is but I think it’s most likely that he’s Dustpelt. Anyway these are the plot twists:

    1. Inspired by Gracepaw’s idea to hold Flashpaw’s kits when he’s a warrior, when Flowerpaw and Dustpaw are warriors, Flowersong starts to hold kits, and either when they are born or slightly before (I haven’t decided yet), she admits that, um, let’s call him Dustwhisker for now, is the father. Then SnowClan and FlowerClan fight over which Clan gets the kits, but they in the end make the decision to let Flowersong decide. I don’t want this to be too much like what happened with Graystripe and Silverstream’s kits, or what happened with Leafpool and Crowfeather’s kits. And yes Gracepaw, I am aware that this seems a bit like copying your idea, but I’ll try to make it unique.
    2. Inspired by Blossompaw’s parents being FlowerClan cats, Flowerpaw’s father is dead, and her mother ran away to be a kittypet
  • Goldenpaw sat in the middle of the Snowclan camp, observing the busy scene in front of her. She noticed Coldstar heading out of the camp, and Stripepaw stealthily stalked towards her a few heartbeats later. That’s weird… She rose to her paws and was about to follow, but was suddenly knocked off her paws by an object. Her instincts kicking in, she rolled away, pushing the other cat off her, and pinned her to the ground. Her victim squirmed under her, trying to escape. “Um…can you let me go now?” the cat squeaked, her voice sounding strangely familiar. Goldenpaw studied the she-cat and suddenly recognized her. “Oh-sorry!” she said apologtically, backing away. “I thought you were attacking me, Storkpaw.” Goldenpaw recalled that Storkpaw was the most mischevious out of the apprentices, and was often scolded by her mentor Stormdusk. Storkpaw got on her paws, giving her attacker a reassuring smile. “That’s okay! I would’ve probably done the same thing as you.” As Storkpaw shook out all the dust in her pelt, Goldenpaw spotted another, unfamiliar tom with white fur splattered with gray peeking out from behind a bush. Goldenpaw often noticed him following Storkpaw so closely, he was practically like her shadow. “Do you know anyone with gray and white fur?” she asked, turning to Storkpaw, who was grooming herself. “Yep! I have a friend named Pearlpaw like that. Why?” “Because he’s right-” Goldenpaw cut herself off as she realized that the tom was gone. Hmph.

  • (Peacebright’s up to something… talking about who to target. Who should it be?)

  • Dustfur padded out of the den and looked around at the many unfarmiliar cats. She still hadn’t gotten used to living in the SnowClan camp. She wondered if she would ever feel comfortable around her new Clanmates. Did they even like her?
    Shrugging off her nervousness, the pale brown she-cat headed to the fresh-kill pile.