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  • (whiterabbit i dont know if you did not come to help tigerleaf or if your comment has not been approved yet so im just not going to say if you were there or not and just say tigerleaf had her kits) tigerleaf had three kits. ripplekit: a tom that looked exactly like river but with tigerleaf’s white front paws. jasperkit: tortoiseshell she-cat with river’s yellow eyes. firekit: blue-gray tabby she-cat that looked like bluefire. tigerleaf purred as her kits began to suckle and fiercely groomed jasperkit whose fur kept poofing up anyway. she brought her kits closer with her tail and fell asleep (but it was really hard because ripplekit kept biting her tail XD )

  • Silvershadow’s ears burned with rage. Stonecry pushed it far enough becoming mate’s with her! Now she’s expecting HIS kits?! She spotted him sitting in a ray of sunshine and padded as calmly as she could torward him, but when she halted in front of him, she hissed and raked her claws across his ear. Stonecry’s fur bushed and he gaped at her “what was that for?” Silvershadow arched her back and spat at him, barely hearing Tigerleaf wailing in pain “you know what it was for!” Her eye’s grew suddenly sorrowful “I thought you wanted to be my mate. But when that stupid rouge saved you, you forgot about me! And now she’s your mate, expecting your KITS! She isn’t even what she seems! All she’s told you is lies! I heard her talking last night…”

  • ( i dont know what to do. should tigerleaf run away from the clans to be with river or should river live in the clan to be with tigerleaf? pLeaSE VotE

  • a rogue walks into the clearing, mumbling. ” hey has anyone seen my friend riv-” he began but he stopped when he saw silvershadow ” umm hi” he muttered shyly. river came running out of the nursery and jumped onto the rogue “creek!” he meowed happily. “get offa me” creek laughed before getting up. creek looked at his paws when silvershadow looked in his direction. river looked back and forth between the two with amusement in his eyes. “ohhhhhhh. hey silver! if you can get creek to act like this then he has got a serious cru-” he was silenced by creek putting his tail across his mouth followed by angry whispering. river backed off but he still had amusement shining in his eyes. creek walked over to silvershadow “ummm… hi… im creek” he whispered “whats your… umm … name?” creek looked down and shuffled his paws waiting for an answer.

    • Silvershadow was still rigid from shock, staring in the direction Stonecry had disapeared, and blinked when Creek spoke to her. “Oh, Silvershadow” she mewed, forcing her voice to sound lively. Does Stonecry mean he doesn’t love me anymore? She thought, gazing distractedly at Creek. (That was a good idea Tigerleaf. I can fall in love with Creek, and when I expose Peachshine, Stonecry can apolagize and ask to be my mate, and then it will be a choice between him or Creek

      • Okay, I guess it can be just us unless anybody else wants to come. I can help you learn how to hunt birds!

        • “So, you have to crouch down into a regular hunting crouch, and make sure you creep up quietly. The smallest sound could alert the bird, and then it will screech so loud that all the prey would surely be back down their holes. Just in case you do make a noise and it tries to flutter up, make sure you can jump really high to catch it in mid-air. Lets practice being quiet first.

            • “Lynxpaw! Listen to my instructions before trying it yourself. You were too loud, I warned you that would happen! We’re going to go closer to the MistClan border, now that you’ve scared all the prey away thats here. Follow me and I’ll tell you what I was trying to tell you earlier about catching birds, and this time you better be listening! So, you have to crouch down into a regular hunting crouch, and make sure you creep up quietly. The smallest sound could alert the bird, and then it will screech so loud that all the prey would surely be back down their holes, as you probably know from experience. Just in case you do make a noise and it tries to flutter up, make sure you can jump really high to catch it in mid-air. Once we get there, we will be practicing being quiet, which I can tell is not your strong suit. Then, we will practice leaping and jumping up high. We’ll hopefully have time to try catching some real birds if you don’t send one screeching again.”

  • creek smiles. ” do you mind if i call you silver? it was my friends name before she died” he meowed. “d-do you… mind i-if… maybe… w-we could g-go for a walk?” he stuttered before looking down. “u-unless you dont want to” he added quickly. whats going on? i dont usually act like this he thought. creek gazed into silvershadows eyes and grinned. i suppose shes just special. river was watching and began shouting “wow creek you found such a great mate! and next thing you know youll be having kits!” he laughed and creek glared at him “at least i havent already had 3 kits!” he retorted playfully. and tigerleaf walked out of the nursery with her kits following “dad! come play with us!” jasperkit squealed and river dissapeared into the nursery to play with his kits. creek looked back to silvershadow shyly “soooooo… walk?” he asked hopefully. (btw i forgot to write a description for creek. he is a blue-gray tabby tom with green eyes and a white tail and he is very floofy)

  • She followed Creek, and they soon came upon a cave. Stonecry and Peachshine’s scent drifted from inside, along with the scent of kits. How nice. They came here so Peachshine could have her kit’s in peace. She snorted and turned away again. “No, wait. Something’s wrong” Creek whispered, still creeping torward the cave. A sudden wail sounded from inside, the cry of a kit in pain. Silvershadow stiffened and leaped inside the cave with Creek beside her. She gasped when spotted Stonecry lying on his side, his eyes pained, and Peachshine lashing out at four kits that crowded together on the cave floor. One wasn’t moving. With a yowl of horror, Silvershadow flung herself in front of Peachshine and knocked her away from the kits “what are you DOING?! Those are your kits!” Peachshine stared at her, her eyes rounding with fear, but then her lip curled and a malicious light entered her eyes. “Do you think I care?” She spat, and then flung herself at Silvershadow.

  • She yowled furiously as Peachshine’s claws raked across her eye. Creek looked up sharply from nudging Stonecry to his paws. Silvershadow lashed out in turn, catching Peachshine’s ear in her claws, and tugging it until the flesh ripped. Peachshine attacked with renewed fury, churning her hind claws against Silvershadow’s fur. Silvershadow raked her claws across Peachshine’s stomach, and her blood spattered her muzzle. Peachshine gasped and swayed on her paws. Silvershadow reared up and batted her to the ground until Peachshine was on her back, staring up at Silvershadow, hate gleaming so strongly in her eyes, and with a thrust of her forepaws, she flung herself at Silvershadow’s neck and clung on, ripping at her throat with her claws until she felt that her neck was on fire with pain. Silvershadow yowled and in a desperate attempt to shake Peachshine off, she rolled onto her back, crushing the she-cat beneath her. Peachshine’s hold loosened, and while she lay winded, Silvershadow flashed forward and ripped open her neck. The hot reek of blood washed over Silvershadow, and she staggered back, away from the she-cats body. Tiredness dragged at her forepaws, and she felt queasy as her own pool of blood grew beneath her. She looked down at her paws, sticky with blood, and collasped onto her side. Stonecry…

    • (sorry I took so long my laptop broke and I had to grab my brothers tablet without him noticing) creek watched in horror as silbershadow began to bleed. Creek grabbed her by the scruff as she slipped in and out of consciousness. He led her to a secret tunnel underneath of peaches cave. He quickly picked some odd looking berry’s from off of the dirt walls and placed them in silbershadow mouth before laying down with her. These cascade berries are her only hope he thought miserably

      • (are they supposed to be healing?) Silvershadow coughed and blinked until her vision had cleared. Creek was gazing down at her, relief sparkling in his eyes. “Creek..?” Her voice was hoarse. “Where’s Stonecry? And… the kits? Are they ok?”

        • Whiterabbit heard much commotion going on outside and decided to go out and check what was happening. She carried Silvershadow back to the medicine den with some help and she asked Tigerleaf and Wishpaw if they could carry the kits. She was able to save everybody’s lives except for Stonecry’s, Whitestar’s most trusted senior warriors.

      • “No!” Silvershadow’s voice was no more than a gasp. “Stonecry!” She wailed and pushed her muzzle against his, as if her warmth would nurse him back to life. “I’ll take care of your kits as if they where mine” she whispered, finally drawing away, and began stumbling torward the nursery.

  • Firekit backed indignatly away from her mother’s licks. “I can wash myself!” She squeaked, tumbling out of the nursery and nearly tripping over Silvershadow’s paws and she was bounding in. The nursery was crowded now that the other four kits had moved in. Where had they even come from! Firekit lifted her nose in the air, and began padding forward, but squeaked as she tripped over another fluffy pelt. It was a gray tom-kit about as big as her, but much smaller. “Should you be out?” She cocked her fluffy head at the small kit. The kit mewled and crouched down. Can he talk or is he too small? Firekit sat down on her haunches and observed the kit “Firekit!” Her mother’s stern mew sounded from behind her. Tigerleaf’s head was poking out of the nursery.