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Updated!
Here’s the chapter outline. Tell me in the comments if there’s anything I should add or stuff.

Prologue (Dewfeather) – leader is seen speaking to StarClan cats in StarClan. They tell Loststar about a prophecy. Loststar doesn’t believe it. (also if we could say in this chapter that the Clan is called ShadeClan, that would be great)

Chapter 1 (Clockwork) – Swiftkit plays with Clockkit (mossball or hide and seek, or something like that) and then Tigerkit and Tigerkit’s sidekick come and ruin it because they’re a bully. Then we see Tigerkit’s mother being cruel to him. (Also they are all kits at this point.)

Chapter 2 (Clockwork) – Swiftkit and Clockkit are playing together again, then Clockkit is called away by someone and Tigerkit comes back and starts picking on Swiftkit.

Chapter 3 (Clockwork) – Songfeather is washing Swiftkit and Demonkit because it is their apprentice ceremony today. It is also Tigerkit’s, Tigerkit’s sidekick’s and Clockkit’s. After the ceremony the mentor takes Swiftpaw on a tour of ShadeClan territory. Tigerpaw is trying and failing to impress his mother

Chapter 4 (Dovefeather) – all the apprentices boast about the things they did and eat some prey. Then they go to sleep. (sorry, I’m not the best at describing!)

Chapter 5 (Dovefeather) – the mentor tells Swiftpaw to help the elders’, and an elder tells Swiftpaw a story about StarClan and prophecies and stuff.

Chapter 6 (Needleblaze) – some cats go to the Gathering, all of the apprentices don’t. The apprentices are annoyed, but then they start blaming each other. But then Swiftpaw’s Demonpaw stops the fight.

Chapter 7 (Dovekit/feather) – Swiftpaw’s mentor wakes Swiftpaw up for hunting training, and they teach Swiftpaw how to hunt INSERT PREY HERE. Also the mentor warns Swiftpaw of exiled cats, such as Shatteredmask, who was exiled for trying to kill Loststar, or something like that. (btw guys Ttera is Shatteredmask but Swiftpaw doesn’t know that)

Chapter 8 (Dovekit/feather) – Swiftpaw walks over to Clockpaw and Clockpaw tells them that they learnt how to hunt INSERT PREY HERE. Swiftpaw praises them, but then sees Loststar looking at Swiftpaw strangely.

Chapter 9 (Snowpaw) – they see snow for the first time and Tigerpaw dares Swiftpaw to go out in it. Swiftpaw says “okay” or something like that.

Chapter 10 (Moonpelt) – Swiftpaw gets lost in a snowstorm and wakes up in DustClan camp with the DustClan medicine cat standing over her.

Chapter 11 (Riverpond) – the DustClan med. cat tells Swiftpaw that they have greencough/yellowcough. Something like that. One of the warriors escorts them back to EchoClan and Loststar is angry.

Chapter 12 (open) – Loststar punishes Swiftpaw and Tigerpaw gloats.

Chapter 13 (open) – Swiftpaw learns battle training. Tigerpaw, uh, bullies them. Surprise, surprise.

Chapter 14 (Moonpelt) – Swiftpaw has a dream from StarClan about the prophecy.

Chapter 15 (Tigerstar) – DustClan attacks. Tigerpaw kills the warrior and is made a warrior.

Chapter 16 (Demonpaw) – Demonpaw is killed somehow. Sorry, Demonpaw. You will be deeply deeply DEEPLY missed. Tigerpaw is horrible about it and Swiftpaw is so angry that she tells him something about his mother not liking him. Then they fight!

Chapter 17 (open) – the fight is broken up by Loststar who blames it on Swiftpaw for an unknown reason

Chapter 18 (open) – Swiftpaw is punished.

Chapter 19 (open) – Clockpaw and Tigerpaw’s sidekick are made warriors. Clockwork and Songfeather try to comfort Swiftpaw.

Chapter 20 (OPEN) – Swiftpaw decides she is going to prove herself worthy of being a warrior by going out in the middle of the night to hunt. She doesn’t tell anyone because no one ever tells anyone anything in Warriors. She meets Ttera.

Chapter 21 (open) – Swiftpaw takes Ttera back to camp because she is trespassing, and then Loststar sees Ttera and is shocked.

Chapter 22 (Shatteredmask, sorry guys) – Ttera and Loststar trash-talk each other until Loststar sends Shattered away. Then he very reluctantly makes Swiftpaw a warrior.

Chapter 23 (Goldenberry) – Clockwork is overjoyed and so is she! She goes to have her vigil but it is broken up by foxes invading camp.

Chapter 24 (Moonpelt) – the fox fight is still going on! But it ends at the end of this chapter. Goldenstripe and Swiftnose’s mentor are killed by the foxes.

Chapter 25 (Stormsong/Needlesomething) – Swiftnose is sent on patrol. She meets the kittypet. Suddenly Ttera attacks the kittypet for a reason that the writer can decide.

Chapter 26 (open) – Swiftnose is punished again (make it the most unfair and random reason) and is getting angry. She is taken to a pit by Tigerstripe who gloats (duh) and is thrown in.

Chapter 27 (Goldenberry) – she has a dream from StarClan, and Demonpaw! Demonpaw says she’s been given a warrior name in StarClan, Demonmist. Demonmist tells Swiftnose that trouble is coming, and she must overthrow Loststar.

Chapter 28 (open) – Swiftnose wakes up, and is given prey by the bully’s sidekick. The bully’s sidekick quickly and quietly says she feels sorry for her, then walks away. Swiftnose sneaks out (again).

Chapter 29 (Shatteredmask, sorry guys) – the elder catches Swiftnose and is sympathetic. They tell Swiftnose a similar story about a tom who was treated badly, then ran away. But he came back and became leader. (Btw guys this is going to turn out to be Loststar).

Chapter 30 (open) – Swiftnose goes back to her pit. Demonmist visits her randomly in the middle of the day and tells her something about her, Demonmist and Clockwork having to overthrow Loststar. Swiftnose is like “no, dude.” Demonmist tells her it’s the only way to- and then is cut off as she fades.

Chapter 31 (open) – Swiftnose is confused, but goes back to the elder and is like “I am in need of wisdom!” or something. She tells the elder about the stuff and the elder says “do not trust this cat” and Swiftnose is like “she’s my sister” (btw, sorry Demonmist, but you are being forced by the DF to do this)

Chapter 32 (Goldenberry) – Swiftnose sees Demonmist again and she questions her. Demonmist manages to not act suspicious and avoids the questions. Swiftnose realises something is up.

Chapter 33 (Shatteredmask, unless Demonmist wants to do it) – (Demonmist’s point of view) Demonmist reports back to the leader of the DF, and feels bad. Then general DF stuff happens. You know, the usual.

Chapter 34 (Snowpaw) – the elder is dying of something. Swiftnose is upset and Tigerstripe is horrible to her.

Chapter 35 (open) – Loststar is kind to Swiftnose, and she is kind to him. He tells her that he will be leaving that night, and he wants her to take over. She is surprised, or pleased, or something.

Chapter 36 (Shatteredmask) – Swiftnose’s leader ceremony. Features the elder, the Willowfrost, Songfeather, Demonmist, Goldenstripe, DustClan warrior, her mentor, Loststar and Ttera.

Epilogue (Tigerstar) – (three moons later) Swiftstar steps down as leader (you don’t have to mention why) and makes Tigerstripe leader.