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  • Can I claim this?
    If no one from above reclaims this then I am going to use it for my fanfiction.
    Thanks!

  • WindClan Allegiances (main clan) from the beginning:
    Leader: Crowstar (tom)
    ~Short black tabby fur with icy blue eyes, lean
    -Smart and serious

    Deputy: Longstep (tom)
    ~Short pale fur with dark brown stripes, brown eyes, tall and skinny
    -Witty and funny

    Med cat: Heatherpelt (she-cat)
    ~Medium length light brown fur with darker stripes on tail, light green eyes
    -Kind and patient

    ……Warriors:……
    Haretail (tom)
    ~Fluffy white fur, amber eyes
    -Lazy (work smarter not harder motto)
    Flamerunner (tom)
    ~Short orange fur, bright green eyes (like Firestar)
    -Snarky and arrogant
    Sorrelheart (she-cat) (apr.Hickorypaw)
    ~Short tan calico fur, light yellow-green eyes
    -Not the smartest cat, likes to gossip, hangs around the nursery but doesn’t want to have kits
    Applebreeze (she-cat)
    ~Pale brown tabby she-cat with darker stripes and green eyes
    -Cool and collected, really fast, popular, potential deputy
    Breezefur (tom)
    ~Handsome short length light gray fur with darker gray stripes, light teal eyes
    -Likes to act calm, but cares a lot about how cats perceive him, especially Palenose (who he knows is very critical)
    Palenose (she-cat) (apr. Cloverpaw)
    ~Short light orange fur with white spots, piercing blue eyes (and light pink nose)
    -Kind, shy, and loyal to cats she likes. If she doesn’t like you she is very judging.
    Stormfang (tom) (Mate: Dawnflower)
    ~Long gray fur, haunting dark blue eyes, muscular, broad-sholdered
    -Gruff and respected
    Meadowwhisper (she-cat)
    ~Thick-furred, ragged gray and white she-cat with grass green eyes, short legs, many scars, almost deaf
    -Serious about the warrior code, old, insists on being a warrior, fierce
    Quickleaf (she-cat)
    ~Small, quick, short light brown fur with white “eye shadow like-fur” over her eyes, patch of white fur on her chest
    -Weak fighter, but amazing hunter, impatient
    Goldenwish (she-cat)
    ~Medium length golden tabby coat, amber eyes
    -Kind, young, naive, mischievous
    Owlwing (tom) (apr. Whitepaw)
    ~Long dark brown fur with light brown on his muzzle, pointy ears, yellow eyes
    -Wise, very perceptive, but doesn’t gossip like Sorrelheart
    Speckledbreeze (she-cat)
    ~Medium length light brown fur with white dots speckling her entire pelt, black eyes
    -Very fast, changes her opinion often
    Lightdapple (she-cat) (apr. Reedpaw) (Mate: Hawkflower)
    ~Short light yellow fur with white socks(feet and ankles), dark green brown eyes
    -Moody, but very kind to Hawkflower)

    ~~~~~Apprentices:~~~~~~
    Hickorypaw (she-cat)
    ~Short dark brown fur, brown eyes
    -Slow, clumsy, likes kits, is helpful with herbs but has trouble remembering them
    Whitepaw (tom)
    ~Short white fur, pale gray blue eyes
    -Super energetic, disregards others opinions
    Cloverpaw (she-cat)
    ~Soft, velvety gray she-cat with green-blue eyes and white splotches
    -Sweet and shy, has a crush on Reedpaw because he saved her life (prologue)
    Reedpaw (tom)
    ~Handsome, tan furred tom, striking green eyes
    -Noble tom, can be arrogant, met Honeypaw (see Shadowclan) at a gathering and really likes her, oblivious to Cloverpaw’s crush
    *******Queens:*******
    Dawnfeather (she-cat) (Mate: Stormfang)
    ~Light orange she-cat with long fluffy fur, blue eyes
    -Understanding, somewhat detached from her kits
    *****Gorsekit (tom)
    ~Light brown tom with dark brown stripes, green eyes
    *****Swiftkit (tom)
    ~Light gray tom with dark gray stripes, green eyes
    Hawkflower (she-cat) (Mate: Lightdapple)
    ~Brown short fur, light brown fur on her chest with black speckles, yellow eyes
    -Generous, honorable, protective
    *******Blossomkit and Snowkit’s adopted mother

    ####Elders: ####
    Moorrunner (tom)
    ~Pale tom, brown eyes
    -Super old, Kind, slightly arrogant, used to be the fastest cat around the lake, loves telling stories of his speed, descendant of Windstar
    Hawktalon (she-cat)
    ~Long fluffy black fur, yellow eyes
    -Cranky, sassy
    Smallfeather (she-cat)
    ~Small light gray-brown furred she-cat, one purple eye and one amber eye
    -Oldest cat in Windclan, likes to sleep for the majority of the day, will get mad if the moss is wet

  • Riverclan:

    Leader: Lakestar (tom)
    ~Long gray fur, lake blue eyes
    -Known for going on raids into other clans territories

    Deputy: Otterfoot (tom)
    ~Short gray fur, light brown booties, brown eyes
    -Known for being a fairly old deputy but great at fighting in the water

    Med cat: Berrysplash (she-cat) (apr. Pebblepaw)
    ~Long white fur with red, orange, and black-brown splotches, teal eyes
    -Known to be patient, but never leaves the Riverclan camp

    …….Warriors: ………….
    Hailshade (apr. Stormpaw) (tom)
    ~White fur, ice blue eyes
    Troutleap (tom)
    ~Sleek brown tabby fur, brown eyes, fastest swimmer
    Rainstep (she-cat) (apr. Mossypaw)
    ~Long speckled gray fur, amber eyes
    Wavebelly (tom)
    ~Long light brown fur, brown underbelly, gray eyes
    Ripplestripe (tom)
    ~Handsome, regal, long gray tabby fur, long white chest fur, blue eyes
    -Potential deputy

    ~~~~~~~~Apprentices:~~~~~~~~~
    Stormpaw (tom)
    ~Fluffy gray fur, gray eyes
    Mossypaw (she-cat)
    ~Fluffy white fur with black splotches
    Pebblepaw (tom)
    ~Handsome, regal, long gray tabby fur, long white chest fur, blue eyes
    -Ripplestripe’s littermate

    _________Queens:______
    Dovemist (she-cat)
    ~Plump light gray fur, silver eyes
    *******Swankit (she-cat)
    ~Fluffy white fur, silver eyes
    ******* Splashkit (tom)
    ~Fluffy gray fur, silver eyes

    Featherlight (she-cat)
    ~Fluffy light brown fur, long fluffy tail, violet eyes

    • Shadowclan:

      Leader: Halfstar (she-cat)
      ~Two-faced cat, (looks like Yana, two-faced kitty)
      -Known to be a fair leader, said to have had a mate from another clan, said to have become mates with Smokeclaw to prove loyalty, then she became leader

      Deputy: Smokeclaw (tom)
      ~Handsome, rugged, black fur, amber eyes
      -Fierce warrior

      Med cat: Frondtail (tom) (apr. Whisperpaw)
      ~Light brown fur, with fluffy dark brown tail tip, green eyes
      -Young medicine cat, mentor died when Frondtail was still an apprentice

      ………….Warriors:………
      Aspentail (she-cat)
      ~White fur, small black/brown patches of fur, yellow eyes
      Nightwhisper (tom)
      ~Sleek black fur, silver eyes
      Wolffur (tom)
      ~Dark gray fur, black stripe going down his back, brown eyes
      Dawnfrost (she-cat)
      ~Cream fur, orange booties, orange tail tip, orange ear tips, orange muzzle, blue eyes

      ~~~~~~Apprentices:~~~~~~~~~
      Honeypaw (she-cat)
      ~Beautiful light yellow-orange tabby fur, green eyes
      -Met Reedpaw at a gathering and thinks he is a good friend
      Whisperpaw (tom)
      ~Long silver fur, silver eyes
      -Shy and paranoid

      **********Queens:***********
      Pebblecreek (she-cat)
      ~Fluffy dark brown tabby fur, beautiful green eyes

  • Thunderclan:

    Leader: Rosestar (she-cat)
    ~Long each/cream fur, gray eyes
    -Very small, can be timid, fiercely loyal

    Deputy: Lionflame (tom)
    ~Golden tabby, huge mane, blue eyes
    -Ambitious, charming, young

    Med cat: Mossyheart (she-cat)
    ~Black and white speckles, indigo eyes

    Warriors:
    Oakpelt (tom)
    ~Dark brown fur with unusual black markings, dark green, almost black eyes
    Forestclaw (tom)
    ~Orange, brown, black, and gray splotches and speckles all over his coat, light green eyes
    Duskheart (tom)
    ~Light brown orange tabby coat with one black splotch around his eye
    Adderstrike (tom)
    ~Small, quick, tan furred tom, unusual markings on his head, amber eyes

    Apprentices:
    Squirrelpaw (she-cat)
    ~Thick orange fur, black dots on pelt, green eyes

    Queens:
    Emberflower (she-cat)
    ~Long orange fur, pretty white markings on chest and belly
    *********Lightningkit (tom)
    ~Black kit with blue eyes
    **********Firekit (tom)
    ~Black kit with amber/orange eyes

  • Skyclan:

    Leader: Needlestar (she-cat)
    ~Silver fur with spiky tail, long claws, blue eyes
    -Smart, cunning, creative, known to be very persuasive as she convinced Halfstar to give up a strip of territory

    Deputy: Dappledsky (she-cat)
    ~White fur with light gray splotches, amber eyes
    -Rumored to have killed the previous deputy, an excellent liar and persuader

    Med cat: Bramblecloud (she-cat) (apr. Lionpaw)
    ~Super thick light brown fur, green eyes
    -An ancient medicine cat, very trusting and trustworthy, is often found on other clan’s territory collecting herbs or visiting with the other medicine cat’s

    ……………Warriors:……….
    Beechclaw (tom)
    ~Light brown fur with white markings, brown eyes
    Birdflight (tom)
    ~Black with white underbelly, yellow eyes
    -Fearless, daring, and an excellent tree climber and hunter
    Buzzardfang (tom)
    ~Tan fur with one brown booty on his left hind paw, yellow eyes
    -Skilled in battle, feisty, loyal, rugged
    Songfeather (she-cat) (apr. Cardinalpaw)
    ~Beautiful brown tabby she-cat with green eyes

    ~~~~~Apprentice:~~~~~~~
    Cardinalpaw (she-cat)
    ~Red fur with black booties, dark gray eyes
    Lionpaw (tom)
    ~Handsome, golden tabby fur, amber eyes
    -Charismatic

    <<<<<<<>>>>>>>>>
    Springheart (she-cat)
    ~Light yellow fur, fluffy tail, light green eyes
    Speckledsun (she-cat)
    ~Golden tabby fur, silver eyes
    **********Leafkit (tom)
    ~Brown kit, green eyes
    ***********Birchkit (tom)
    ~Tan kit, green eyes
    **********Flowerkit (she-cat)
    ~Yellow kit, green eyes
    ***********Pinekit (tom)
    ~Brown kit, green eyes

    ########Elders:#########
    Cloudjumper (tom)
    ~White fur, blue eyes
    -Used to be the best tree hunter in the forest

  • Here is the plot:
    -Windclan attacks barn cats/group and there are 2 kits left from the rogues
    -The mother died in the skirmish
    -The kits are taken back to WindClan
    -Then given a foster mother (Hawkflower)
    -Other kits tease them then get used to them
    -Mapleshade makes deal with bitter Snowkit (kit 1)
    -Snowkit agrees to do whatever it takes to be accepted
    -The new kits become apprentices
    A. Snowpaw gets apprenticed to a cat almost about to go to the elders’ den (Haretail)
    B. Snowpaw gets bitter about the old mentor (Haretail) and is mean and trains with Mapleshade
    C. Blossompaw gets apprenticed to the medicine cat
    -Blossompaw tells Snowpaw to stop training with Mapleshsade
    -Snowpaw says Blossompaw is jealous that they never got to be a warrior **lame reason, if you have an idea, share**
    -Snowpaw heads to the Dark Forest and witnesses Mapleshade killing another cat from StarClan
    -Snowpaw decides to not train with Mapleshade
    -Mapleshade says she will get her revenge
    -Heatherpelt (WindClan Med cat) tells Blossompaw about the Great Battle and Dark Forest
    -Blossompaw shares it with Snowpaw
    -Snowpaw is embarrassed about training with a Dark Forest cat so she snaps at Blossompaw
    -Gathering
    -Blossompaw brings up prophecy again
    -Snowpaw snaps at her again
    -Snowpaw meets a new cat, Lightningtail from Thunderclan (idea=Snowpaw gets scolded by Lightningtail for making noise during the gathering (Snowpaw was snapping at Blossompaw) and they agree to meet at night)
    -Snowpaw and Lightningtail cat have a heatherpaw/lionpaw (they meet at night) relationship
    -Blossompaw sees Snowpaw sneaking out, follows her, then sees her and Lightningtail, but decides not to tell
    -a med cat meeting
    -battle and moments with Haretail
    -Snowpaw, Gorsepaw, and Swiftpaw become warriors
    -she stops meeting with Lightningtail when she becomes a warrior (Lightningtail reacts like Tigerheart)
    -Lightningtail and Snow____ meet in battle
    -they talk and apparently, someone in LIghtningtail’s clan found out
    -then Lightningtail sees Lionflame
    a. Lightningtail snarls at Snow____ and they are fighting by the river
    b.Lightningtail falls into the river and dies because Mapleshade pushed him and held him down
    -Snow___ blames herself
    -Gorseshadow tells her to get over it and be useful
    -Snow____ comforted by Blossompaw
    -Blossompaw becomes official med cat after the battle
    -gathering
    -Heathertail dies
    -Snow_____ comforts Blossom_____
    -Snow____ gets apprentice (Riftpaw) >
    -Blossom_____ gets apprentice (Radientpaw) >
    -Gorseshadow gets apprentice (Rumplepaw) > They are all Palenose and Breezefur’s kits
    -Swiftdusk (Swiftkit) gets apprentice (Redpaw) >
    -Snow____ gets Gorseshadow as a mate
    -apprentice scenes
    -Swiftdusk likes Rumplepaw
    -apprentices become warriors
    -Gorseshadow drowns during flood
    -they mourn Gorseshadow
    -Snow____ has mate’s kits
    -Mapleshade lures kits out and they drown in the river ***might change this, it is really dark****
    -Longstep dies
    -Crowstar waits days
    -discontentment grows in Windclan
    -Crowstar goes to Moonpool with Blossom____
    – On the way back it snows
    Snow____ becomes deputy
    -Snow____ gets apprentice 2 (Sunpaw)
    -Radiantpaw(Med cat apprentice) becomes an official med cat
    -gathering
    -While going hunting, Sunpaw slips into the river and dies
    -Snow_____ confronts Mapleshade and tells her to stop
    -Mapleshade says that all Snow____ ever wanted was to be accepted ***this needs to be made better***
    -they mourn Sunpaw
    -Blossom____ dies due to drinking poisoned water
    -Crowstar has gone insane and tells the cats to not go near the water
    -they don’t go to the gathering
    -Radiant______(med cat) convinces Crowstar to go to the Moonpool
    -On the trip to the Moonpool with Radiant____, Snow____, and Crowstar
    -StarClan tells Crowstar that dark forces are at work ****needs to be made better****
    -Mapleshade leads rats to the group on the way back
    -Crowstar dies
    -Radiant____ and Snow_____ decide to go back to camp
    -Clan mourns Crowstar
    -Next day Snow_____ goes to moonstone and receives nine lives

    We can work on the plot later!
    🙂

  • Here are descriptions for the main characters and cats that aren’t on the allegiances in the beginning

    Snowkit, Snowpaw, Snow (shore, hawk, fall, cloud, heart, holly, mist, flight, drift, frost, snow)
    ~Light gray short fur with white stripes/markings, bright blue eyes, medium height and skinny/stringy, fast, lithe
    -Mischievous, Smart, Confident on the outside, but wants to be accepted and is really embarrassed about not being born in a clan on the inside

    Kit 2: Blossomkit, Blossompaw, Blossom (flower, lily, cloud, song, leaf)
    ~Auburn fur, light auburn underbelly and up chest, dark auburn stripes, light green eyes, short fur, medium and skinny,
    -Fierce, loyal, smart, can be sassy, doesn’t care about not being born in a clan

    Love interest of Kit 1 (Windclan): Gorsekit, Gorsepaw, Gorseshadow
    ~wiry, thin, brown/gray tabby tom with green eyes, a long tail,
    -Witty, can be cranky, Jayfeather like personality, smart, super fast

    Love interest of kit 2 (Thunderclan): Lightningtail
    ~Tall and lean and muscular black short fur, neon green eyes, his front left paw is light gray
    -Great tree climber, smart, honest, funny, mischievous

    The Windclan Apprentices:

    Snow_____ apprentice:
    =Riftpaw, son of Palenose and Breezefur
    ~Light gray fur, teal eyes
    -serious

    Gorseshadow apprentice:
    =Rumplepaw, daughter of Palenose and Breezefur
    -White with orange and gray spots all over, green eyes
    -sneaky and mischevious

    Swiftdusk apprentice:
    =Redpaw, son of Palenose and Breezefur
    ~Dark red, blue gray eyes
    -snarky and witty

    Blossom_____ apprentice:
    =Radiantpaw, daughter of Palenose and Breezefur
    ~Light orange fur with white spots, teal eyes
    -kind, compassionate, caring

    *********************
    Snow___ second apprentic:
    =Sunpaw, found on the moor(she-cat)
    ~Light brown-yellow with white booties and ear tips
    -energetic
    <<Snow___ treats her like her daughter

  • Can I make a prologue? I have a good idea of what I could do. I will write it down on google docs, and if I can, I will post it. Do you mind if I make up some names for the rouges?

  • WindClan Allegiances (main clan) from the beginning:
    Leader: Crowstar (tom)
    ~Short black tabby fur with icy blue eyes, lean
    -Smart and serious

    Deputy: Longstep (tom)
    ~Short pale fur with dark brown stripes, brown eyes, tall and skinny
    -Witty and funny

    Med cat: Heatherpelt (she-cat)
    ~Medium length light brown fur with darker stripes on tail, light green eyes
    -Kind and patient

    ……Warriors:……
    Haretail (tom)
    ~Fluffy white fur, amber eyes
    -Lazy (work smarter not harder motto)
    Flamerunner (tom)
    ~Short orange fur, bright green eyes (like Firestar)
    -Snarky and arrogant
    Sorrelheart (she-cat) (apr.Hickorypaw)
    ~Short tan calico fur, light yellow-green eyes
    -Not the smartest cat, likes to gossip, hangs around the nursery but doesn’t want to have kits
    Applebreeze (she-cat)
    ~Pale brown tabby she-cat with darker stripes and green eyes
    -Cool and collected, really fast, popular, potential deputy
    Breezefur (tom)
    ~Handsome short length light gray fur with darker gray stripes, light teal eyes
    -Likes to act calm, but cares a lot about how cats perceive him, especially Palenose (who he knows is very critical)
    Palenose (she-cat) (apr. Cloverpaw)
    ~Short light orange fur with white spots, piercing blue eyes (and light pink nose)
    -Kind, shy, and loyal to cats she likes. If she doesn’t like you she is very judging.
    Stormfang (tom) (Mate: Dawnflower)
    ~Long gray fur, haunting dark blue eyes, muscular, broad-sholdered
    -Gruff and respected
    Meadowwhisper (she-cat)
    ~Thick-furred, ragged gray and white she-cat with grass green eyes, short legs, many scars, almost deaf
    -Serious about the warrior code, old, insists on being a warrior, fierce
    Quickleaf (she-cat)
    ~Small, quick, short light brown fur with white “eye shadow like-fur” over her eyes, patch of white fur on her chest
    -Weak fighter, but amazing hunter, impatient
    Goldenwish (she-cat)
    ~Medium length golden tabby coat, amber eyes
    -Kind, young, naive, mischievous
    Owlwing (tom) (apr. Whitepaw)
    ~Long dark brown fur with light brown on his muzzle, pointy ears, yellow eyes
    -Wise, very perceptive, but doesn’t gossip like Sorrelheart
    Speckledbreeze (she-cat)
    ~Medium length light brown fur with white dots speckling her entire pelt, black eyes
    -Very fast, changes her opinion often
    Lightdapple (she-cat) (apr. Reedpaw) (Mate: Hawkflower)
    ~Short light yellow fur with white socks(feet and ankles), dark green brown eyes
    -Moody, but very kind to Hawkflower)

    ~~~~~Apprentices:~~~~~~
    Hickorypaw (she-cat)
    ~Short dark brown fur, brown eyes
    -Slow, clumsy, likes kits, is helpful with herbs but has trouble remembering them
    Whitepaw (tom)
    ~Short white fur, pale gray blue eyes
    -Super energetic, disregards others opinions
    Cloverpaw (she-cat)
    ~Soft, velvety gray she-cat with green-blue eyes and white splotches
    -Sweet and shy, has a crush on Reedpaw because he is simply the best (her words)
    Reedpaw (tom)
    ~Handsome, tan furred tom, striking green eyes
    -Noble tom, can be arrogant, met Honeypaw (see Shadowclan) at a gathering and really likes her, oblivious to Cloverpaw’s crush
    *******Queens:*******
    Dawnfeather (she-cat) (Mate: Stormfang)
    ~Light orange she-cat with long fluffy fur, blue eyes
    -Understanding, somewhat detached from her kits
    *****Gorsekit (tom)
    ~Light brown tom with dark brown stripes, green eyes
    *****Swiftkit (tom)
    ~Light gray tom with dark gray stripes, green eyes
    Hawkflower (she-cat) (Mate: Lightdapple)
    ~Brown short fur, light brown fur on her chest with black speckles, yellow eyes
    -Generous, honorable, protective
    *******Blossomkit and Snowkit’s adopted mother

    ####Elders: ####
    Moorrunner (tom)
    ~Pale tom, brown eyes
    -Super old, Kind, slightly arrogant, used to be the fastest cat around the lake, loves telling stories of his speed, descendant of Windstar
    Hawktalon (she-cat)
    ~Long fluffy black fur, yellow eyes
    -Cranky, sassy
    Smallfeather (she-cat)
    ~Small light gray-brown furred she-cat, one purple eye and one amber eye
    -Oldest cat in Windclan, likes to sleep for the majority of the day, will get mad if the moss is wet

  • Thunderclan:

    Leader: Rosestar (she-cat)
    ~Long each/cream fur, gray eyes
    -Very small, can be timid, fiercely loyal

    Deputy: Lionflame (tom) (apr. Squirrelpaw)
    ~Golden tabby, huge mane, blue eyes
    -Ambitious, charming, young

    Med cat: Mossyheart (she-cat)
    ~Black and white speckles, indigo eyes

    Warriors:
    Oakpelt (tom) (mate: Emberflower
    ~Dark brown fur with unusual black markings, dark green, almost black eyes
    Forestclaw (tom)
    ~Orange, brown, black, and gray splotches and speckles all over his coat, light green eyes
    Duskheart (tom)
    ~Light brown-orange tabby coat with one black splotch around his eye
    Adderstrike (tom)
    ~Small, quick, tan furred tom, unusual markings on his head, amber eyes
    Lightningtail (tom)
    ~Tall and lean and muscular black short fur, neon green eyes, his front left paw is light gray
    -Great tree climber, smart, honest, funny, mischievous

    Apprentices:
    Squirrelpaw (she-cat)
    ~Thick orange fur, black dots on pelt, green eyes

    Queens:
    Emberflower (she-cat) (mate: Oakpelt)
    ~Long orange fur, pretty white markings on chest and belly
    **********Firekit (tom)
    ~Black kit with amber/orange eyes