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    Shadeflake- black she-cat with blue eyes. He is an evil cat, who (of course) tried to take over ThunderClan. He was a loner at first, he hunted, played with his best friend, Bat. His name was shade then, and Bat soon found another cat, Mike. He was a kittypet, so they gave him the name, Cave. Shade noticed that Cave got more attention then him. It soon became worse and worse and Bat was paying no attention to him soon. Shade started to hate Cave and Bat, but he didn’t show a thing. His plan was in action, he committed murder and KILLED Cave. Bat was angry and soon ditched Shade (well of course.) Shade was lonely, he lived like that for a wile, but soon found another cat (yes again with another cat.) Her name was Shadow. They liked each other a lot a soon became mates. Later, Shade found a clan cat (Jetcloud) he was evil, and asked Shade to join the clan. Shade went back with Shadow and told her the news Shadow was grumpy and growled and stomped away. Shade wondered why. He later excepted, and Shadow was vary angry, and Shade was angry and her, to. Shadow scratched Shade and then ran. When Shade went into the clan, the clan was not very welcoming. They hissed, but soon decided that Shade could stay. The leader jumped on to the high rock and started the ritual. When Shade heard that she was an apprentice, she got angry, and thought she wasn’t a full member of the clan. She hissed and scratched the leader, and hissed that if she was going to be a member of this clan, she was to become a full one. The leader surprisingly agreed for her to stay after that, explaining that apprentices are full members of the clan. Jetcloud was his mentor, and taught him to hate ThunderClan. He taught her some deadly and powerful moves. Shadepaw did not get along with thee other apprentices, and preferred to be alone. She disagreed at the gatherings, and in some way broke the trues. (Not physically.) When she got her warrior name, Shadeflake, (which I’m surprised she did) She snook out of the Clan looking for her use-to-be mate. She found Shadow as a kittypet. When Shadow saw him he said, “I thought you where going to stay out of my business, or have you been kicked out of the clan, you filthy beast.” After that, they got into a battle, Shadow did pretty good, but Shadeflake soon killed him. Since Shadeflake had more privileges as a warrior, she started to harm cats more. In a battle with WindClan, Shadeflake made a worst enemy with there medicine cat. When Jetcloud found out, and told Shadeflake to kill her. Shadeflake didn’t like the fact that her use to be mentor was still telling her to do stuff. She said that she was already going to do that, and she gave him a warning. So of course Shadeflake killed Tinyfur. (Yes, Tinyfur.) Now so far Shadeflake killed 3 cats. Wavestar died by another battle, so his deputy, Lightfur became leader. Lightfur didn’t know that Jetcloud was evil, he was a good fighter, and Jetcloud became deputy. (Uh oh) Most cats disagreed, but Lightstar didn’t care. Jetcloud killed Lightstar by a lot of foxes, and he became leader. Jetcloud decided that Shadeflake should become deputy. Jetcloud was a bad cat, and cats started to turn on them. Shadeflake wanted to prove that she was a good cat so cats don’t turn on her, so she joined in, obviously turning to killing Jetstar. Not that much cats knew, but the cats that knew didn’t really care. She turned ThunderClan against each other. She declared war a lot and made apprentices become warrior at 4 moons in training, because he wanted everybody to not fell left out, and wanted more of his army. Cats started to figure out she was bad, and when she figured that out she ran away. Cats tried to hunt her down but couldn’t find her. She started to take of cats one by one, but once she tried a leader, Froststar, she took away three lives, but died on his 6th live. She joined the dark forest after that, she trusted no cats.

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        Tinyfur- short furred she-cat with a white fur.
        Tinyfur was a kit, her littermate was joykit. She was interested in herbs, and soon became a medicine cat apprentice. The other apprentices teased her because she didn’t know any fighting moves. She told he mentor, but they didn’t care. Her sister started to teach her private lesson well she could still learn about herbs. A couple of the other warriors new, and some didn’t like it, but some didn’t care and some thought it was a good idea. When the other apprentices got there warrior name, they teased her, but it was time to show that she was also a good fighter. They ‘battled’ and Tinypaw actually beat one. She proved that she was a good fighter to, and now she only needed to focus on herbs. She got her medicine cat name soon after that, and when she got to the moon pool she got a prophecy from StarClan. It was about ThunderClan, and it said, “This is going to be a hard leaf fall, ThunderClan might wipe out WindClan if they don’t do something, WindClan might get destroyed.” Tinyfur decided to keep it to herself, but then at another half moon it comes back to her, but in a different way, “Beware of the rogue who destroys the trues, beware of the one who join the clans, beware of the one who seems suspicious.” Tinyfur felt dizzy. She decided to not tell anyone about it until she knows. At the next gathering, Wavestar told them about a new cat Shadeflake in the clans. Tinyfur new that the prophecy was about him, and after the gathering she told her use to be mentor. They made a team against him. She told her leader about the prophecy before, for an excuse to attack WindClan. She made enemies with Shadeflake, and wanted to attack her, but knew that she wouldn’t be able to beat him. She made more of a team, with Joyleaf, Jaggedbeak, Grasspelt, and Flamefeather. Later Shadeflake hunted her down, and killed her.

  • Here’s a poem for the poem contest:
    Needletail:

    I got her into this
    And now she is stuck here
    Under him

    Yet she worked
    She found a way out
    She survived

    I will not

    I am stuck here
    A prisoner
    Slowly starving

    Violetpaw comes to me
    She brings us food
    I am proud of her

    I am not proud of myself

    I do not know why I ever followed him
    I do not know what I ever saw in him
    I caused so much pain

    I have noticed the kits
    The queens, the elders
    How they are missing

    I do not think I could have ever helped

    I know Violetpaw is involved
    She told me
    She said she would get us out too

    I wish I had her courage
    But I never did
    I never could do the right thing

    I do not think I was ever right

    She came to me
    She told us we are leaving soon
    I am glad

    I wonder how Berryheart is
    And Sparrowtail
    I wonder if I will see them again

    I wish I had had the courage to go with them

    I see Darktail coming
    Violetpaw is with him
    This is not good

    He tells me
    How she betrayed him
    How she put poppy seeds in his fresh kill

    I could not have had the courage to do that

    We got to the lake
    He says he will drown me
    He holds me down

    Violetpaw pleads that he stop
    He agrees
    He told me that I deserve a second chance

    I think what is coming will need me to be strong

    He tells me to kill Violetpaw
    That is something I will not do
    No matter how much loyalty I will prove

    I lunge at Darktail
    He and his rouges fight hard
    I know I am going to die

    But maybe today I can be as brave a Violetpaw

    Violetpaw:

    She got me into this
    And now I am stuck here
    Under him

    Yet I worked
    I found my way out
    I survived

    If Needletail could join me she would have done the same

    She is stuck here
    A prisoner
    Slowly starving

    I come to them
    I bring them food
    Needletail is proud of me

    I do not think she should be

    I do not know why we ever followed him
    I do not know what we ever saw in him
    We have caused so much pain

    I have helped the kits
    The queens, the elders
    Helped them get away

    Needletail would have done more than I did

    Needletail knows I’m involved
    I told her
    I said I would get her out too

    I wish I had her courage
    But I never did
    I always hid behind her

    I do not think I can be brave now

    I went to her
    I told her we are leaving soon
    She was glad

    I wonder how Twigpaw is
    And Alderheart
    I wonder if I will see them again

    I wish I had the courage to go to them

    Darktail finds me
    He takes Needletail with me
    This is not good

    He tells her
    How I betrayed him
    How I put poppy seeds in his fresh kill

    I did not think I was brave enough to do that

    We go to the lake
    He says he will drown her
    He holds her down

    I plead that he stop
    He agrees
    He told her that she deserves a second chance

    I think what is coming will need me to be strong

    He tells her to kill me
    That is something I would let her do
    She has so much loyalty she must prove

    She lunges at Darktail
    Thanks to her
    I will live another day

    Maybe someday I can be as brave as Needletail

  • Oh cinderpaw thats the best peom i’ve read in my life. Wow ! (I get really emotional over needletail-its nice to know that there another person who likes needletail i feel like she is really underrated) You’ve got talent Cinderpaw!

  • Wow that the best peom i’ve seen, cinderpaw (i get emotional over needletail… it is good to know that someone else likes needletail…i think she is underrated) you’ve got talent Cinderpaw! (My previous comment was deleted(i think) or it got lost, sorry if this is a duplicate )