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[image description: a black-and-white photo of a kitten sleeping in a cavity of a typewriter]
Iโm making a fan fic about snowkit!
The adventures of snowkit
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prologue
Is this right, a cat asked from the shadows, yes speckledtail, how is that possible! She hissed
I donโt know but calm down a blue she cat mewed
I donโt know how or why but it happened we will just have to help him
Speckledtail looked away and the place started to fade
I know your out their, be safe my little oneโ speckledtail whispered than they disappeared.
Chapter 1
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He played with his moss ball in the center of the clearing analyzing its substance and mass. How was this created he thought. Then suddenly he was lifted into the air being squeezed and his lungs rightened he looked up to see a hawk soaring through the sky with him. He thought quickly, another few seconds and itโll kill me he thought he saw the claws piercing his fur and felt the wind and looked at the hawks angle. Then he got it he bit the left foot loosening itโs grip and he hopped up the wind pushing him onto its back but barely and he dangled off of its tail in horror at the long drop below.
Ran out of Tim hope you like it!
Niceeeeeeeeeee.
noice!!
Hewo again!
So. Second Chapter. Introduces Vyx (Bramblefire) and Elley (Cindy). Hope you guys like it! ๐
Chapter Two: I Meet My Very Hyper Roommate
โMs. Blacksmite, what do you think youโre doing?โ
I snap my head up from my notebook and stare into the face of my homeroom teacher, Mrs. Weatherburn. Sheโs got a tight, light brown bun on the top of her head, and piercing yellow-brown eyes that remind you of a hawk. Her tongue is quick and sharp, her sharp claw-like fingernails pierce through my shoulder as she asks again, โWhat are you doing?โ
I smile sheepishly and pull out an earbud out of one ear. โOh, hey, Mrs. Weatherburn,โ I smirk. โHow am I messing up now? As far as I can see, nothing in the rules states I canโt listen to music while Iโm taking notes, or while Iโm studying for that matter.โ
โWell, the rulebook also states no listening to music without permission as well.โ
โWell, what if I asked you now?โ
โMy answer is no, Blacksmite,โ Mrs. Weatherburn sneered. โHand over the earbuds. Now.โ
โOr,โ I weedle, โIโll just put them in my backpack very quickly and quietly and you can be on your way.โ To prove my point, I take them out of my ears entirely and put them into my bag, then zip up the front pocket.
Mrs. Weatherburn grunts, satisfied. โThank you, Ms. Blacksmite. Now, please continue your notes.โ
I nod, then after she walks away, heave a sigh of relief and continue finishing my note to Chip, whoโs sitting right behind me. I tap my foot three times, then on the fourth, shove the folded-up piece of paper to my friend.
We on for movie night? the note says.
Out of the corner of my eye, I see Chip nod, his dark leaf-green eyes with those flecks of golden widening with excitement.
Chipโs been my best friend ever since sixth grade, when we were forced into a group project together. I think it was in History. Anyways, we were sitting in our group with Holly and another boy named Frank when all of a sudden, Chip asked, โUm, just wondering for no reason, but does anyone here like…um, theatre songs and stuff?โ
I gasped. โI do!โ
Pretty soon, we were talking about everything, from politics to whether we liked pineapples on our pizza or not. And after that, we were inseparable.
The bell rings, tugging me out of my thoughts. Everyone starts getting up from their chairs and starts walking towards the door. I stand up and turn to Chip.
โHey,โ I say, grinning. โWhat do you say that we go find our dorms?โ The only class that the freshmen (and basically everyone) has today is homeroom, where they can get their schedules, room assignments, and everything else we need for this year.
โSounds good to me,โ Chip replies. He swings his bag onto his back and then we walk to the building to the right of the main building, which is on the other side of the fountain across from the entrance.
Inside, itโs quiet, which is weird, since everywhere else is practically registered on the Richter scale. The walls are whitish-grey, and dark oak doors line it, along with a bronze number on the door, telling us our dorms. Thereโs a sign to my left that says Stairs to 2nd 3rd 4th Floors, and then an arrow pointing up, and I can see the stairs.
I pull out my list that I received in homeroom.
Dear Ms. Blacksmite,
Below is your dorm room. Dorms are organized so that the first number is the floor that you are on, and the last numbers are the number dorm room total you have (ex. 289 means 2nd floor, 89th room in the building).
Your dorm room is: 361
Please find here a list of things that are not allowed in the dorm rooms:
Please put away all personal belongings when you get to your dorm. Thank you.
Sincerely,
Alissa Delacour
Alissa Delacour,
9th and 10th Grade Administrator
Putting my list away, I turn to Chip. โWhat dorm do you have?โ
โ387,โ he responds. โYou?โ
โ361. Get this: they think that animals are going to be kept in the dorms. How could they be, with people allergic to them?โ
โI donโt know. But letโs go up, okay?โ
โAโight.โ
We head up the stairs. Suddenly, Iโm slammed to the ground by a dude with silvery-grey hair.
โHey!โ I yell angrily. โWatch it!โ
โSorry!โ the guy yelps. โIโm so sorry! Here, let me help you up.โ He reaches out his hand. Grudgingly, I take it.
When Iโm on my feet again, Chip looks at the guy. โWho are you?โ
โMy nameโs Vyx,โ he replies. โIโm a freshman here.โ
I nod once. โUs, too. Iโm Bailey. This is Chip.โ
Vyx smiles. โNIce to meet you guys. Now, if youโll excuse me – wait, what dorm do you have, Chip?โ
โDorm 387.โ
โSame! Well, my stuffโs already all put up, so go ahead and make yourself at home. See you later, roomie!โ And with that, Vyx walks away.
I stare after him. Something about Vyx makes me think, Wow, heโs really cool.
Chip sneaks a glance at me. โBailey? You okay? Youโre looking pale and red at the same time.โ
I look at him, grinning. โโCourse I am. You know me. Now letโs get going.โ
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โHI! My nameโs Elley. Itโs nice to meet you!โ
I look at the girl whoโs sitting on the top bunk. Her hair is dirty-blonde, and is in long braids, while her pink flats dangle over the loft to the right.
The dormโs really cute. It has two loft beds, each nooked into…kind of like the wall cuts into itself and then keeps going. The loft beds are white-painted wood, with nothing on the actual bed, and a desk as part of the bottom one. Herโs is already set up; and…um, it looks like a unicorn exploded on it. No, Iโm being serious. Thereโs hot pink and yellow sprinkled everywhere over there. Thereโs a bathroom to my left, and two closets to my right, and it looks really nice.
I wave sheepishly. โUm…hey. Iโm Bailey. Nice to meet you, too, I guess.โ
โOh!โ Elley jumps down from the loft and squeezes me into a hug. โI love you already! Well, see you later, roomie!โ And with that, sheโs skipping out of the room.
I shake my head, smiling to myself. Elley looks really hyper…which will make her super fun. She sounds amazing.
Once Iโm done setting up my stuff, I check my phone. Itโs 10:37, which means that Iโve got about an hour before lunch starts. Grinning, I dash out of the hall and knock on Chipโs door. When he emerges, we jump down the stairs and out into the sun.
This year looks awesome already.
I hope you guys like it so far! If you want to make a character, I reposted the page on the Fan Fic Organizing page (if you already made one, I saw it, don’t worry), so you can go there.
Fire-child: Bailey
Water-child: Skylin/Skye (Rainyy’s)
Earth-child: open
Wind-child: Vyx (Bramblefire’s)
Ice-child: Open
Lightning-child: Taraji (Nightpaw’s)
Shadow-child: Violet (mine)
Light-child: Elley (Cindy’s)
(Chip ain’t in dis group)
Characters who still need a place to be put: Izzy (Icepaw’s)
You can make a character still for any of the slots, they just won’t be put in Bailey’s group. So. Ye.
great chapter! do you like pineapple on pizza? ๐
No actually I don’t. I just put that there for no reason. ๐
when bailey says she thinks it looks like a unicorn exploded on her bed- i cracked up๐๐คฃ
also, Elley reminds me of Luna Lovegood from harry potter- did you get your inspiration for her from there?
luna lovegood was a little less hyper tho ๐ Also cindy made the character
Yeah.
Aww this is so interesting and cool. I love the character interactions you have so far and thank you as well for including Vyx too. ๐
petalberry here… i have some bad news, my baby sister (i have triplet baby sisters, only one month old) oaklynn, died from a heart disease one hour ago, i may not be able to post alot of chapters, as im grieving and my family is too, i just wanted to tell you why, i may post on here (my mom says i need something to take my mind off it) so, in memory of oaklynn, in my Brambleclaw Neko fanfic i will be making a new thunderclan kit called oakkit, so if your confused about whose kit it belongs to, i decided, since i made daisy have toadkit and rosekit rn, She can be an adopted one.
RIP oaklynn.๐
I’m so sorry,Petalberry. *hugs* It’s fine if you don’t post as much.
Thank you for understanding poppypawโค๏ธ
*hugs back*
i’m so sorry petalberry, we’re here for you <3333
It nice to know that so many people on here are so kind and comforting. Thanks rainyyyโค๏ธ
I’m sorry about Oaklynn, Petalberry. Take your time grieving. *Hugs*
Thanks. I will, but my mom said Oaklynn had a hard start in life and that she isnโt suffering anymore, Iโll try to believe itโค๏ธ
Oh my gosh, Petal, I’m so so so so so so so sorry. I wish that I could give you hugs, but I can’t. And it makes me very sad. We’re all here for you. *many crying emojis*
Thanks, I appreciate the support, โค๏ธ
this is such a kind community
Iโm so sorry! I hope you do well!
its not your fault nightpaw <3
thanks for thw support
Np. If you need anything please tell me
Im so sorry. Life really isn’t fair. *huggies*
it really isnt <3 *huggies back*
everyone here is so kind i feel like crying
*eyes widen* Oh no! I’m so sorry! We may not know each other, but I, and all of BlogClan, will be here for you. *gives a big hug*
thank you so much!- everyone here is so kind.
i love this community.
its okay blackflurry, its not your fault
*huggies*
Oh no, Petalberry, I am so, so sorry. It is fine if you dont post as much as you used to. *hugs*
Thanks cinder.
its not your fault, ๐๐
okay, hereโs the prologue to The Fight to Get Back. If you want to be in the story, please go to the fan fiction organization page. I really need more characters.
Prologue
โYes! We finally have the kids.โ She said with a smirk. โThe kids with powers that would save the world.โ โWell, kidnapping wasnโt as hard as I thought.โ He said with a sigh. With babies in his arms, he sat down on the wooden chair. โSo what do we do next?โ Another person asked. โHow do we know these are the children?โ Zack flashed her a look. โWell, you can tell by the blood.โ Rame picked up one of the babies. She pulled a needle out of her pocket and pricked the babyโs finger. They started to scream and cry. Rame got a vile and collected some blood. It was red and pink with blue-green sparkles. โSee?โ Rame shook the vile in front of Zack and Rayโs faces. โNow we wait until theyโre six. Thatโs when theyโll have developed powers, if they even get them. Then weโll home school them until theyโre thirteen.โ
โAnyhoo, go put those babies in their rooms. I put in some trampolines for them to bounce on.โ Rame groans as she sharpens her nails on the knife sharpener. โMom?โ Ray asks. โWho will homeschool them?โ โYou and Zack after your school.โ Rame replies not looking up. โOkay. Who will feed them?โ Ray asks again. โYou will, once a day, and youโll feed them raw slop leftovers from our dinner.โ Rame replies glaring at Ray. โDonโt tell one of your silly friends.โ
Zack rocked one of babies back forth, till he saw something on her arm. It was huge and red part of her skin. He dropped her on the rug, as she started to cry. Rame came rushing in to see what happed. She saw the red stop too, โwe kill her if she developed powers.โ
Ooh! Im excited for my character to pop up, this is good!
Translation- Im excited for the story to unflold
Darktail was looking at his mother. โPlease, Smoke. Find someone else to kill Onestar, Iโฆ I canโt.โ She looked down at him. โYou say this every night. Donโt you think it could get a bitโฆโ She flexed her claws. โBoring? Darktail, you will kill him. I am making you, after all.โ โIโm breaking free!โ Smoke looked at her son with unhidden distaste. โI got you EVERYTHING! Everything, and you complain?โ Darktail looked at her with equal disdain. โI will be free! And if you hadnโt got me โeverythingโ, I wouldnโt be!โ โWhen,โ Smoke lowered her voice dangerously โdid you break free?โ I always knew Rain would betray me โAhโฆ live and learn, I suppose.โ
Darktail woke up. This isnโt me, he tried to yowl. But just like every day since his mother diedโฆ he couldnโt. And just like everyday, it was true. Smoke, not him, was using his body. Smoke, not him, knew these cats. And it was Smoke, not him, who heard the battle cry and ran after Onestar. Smoke who jumped into the water. And it wasโฆ him. He was drowning. He was dying. He was ending his story here.
Allegiances for War of Peace:
NightClan:
Leader-Spikestar, she-cat with sharp claws and a golden yellow pelt, formerly known as Spikeclaw
Deputy-Goldstripe, brown pelt with a golden yellow stripe down the middle of his back, apprentice, Brownpaw
Medicine cat-Yarrowtooth, gray(grey? I forgot how to spell grey(gray)) tom, with emerald green eyes, apprentice, Fernpaw
Warriors:
Ravenheart, black and gray tom, with weird blue eyes, apprentice, Scarpaw
Freshberry, blue she-cat with green eyes, apprentice, Sunpaw
Coldstalk, orange tom with a cut in his ear, apprentice, Moonpaw
Redwood, a orangish tom, with brown eyes
Sheerpelt, a very scuffed up tom with no fur
Clearfur, a silver she-cat with bright blue eyes
Ivysplash, a black and orange tabby she-cat, with blue eyes
Ceadarheat, a yellow tabby tom with a very thick pelt, apprentice, Eclipsepaw
Scavengeclaw, a brown tom with gray,(grey?) eyes, apprentice, Ravinepaw
Mountain warriors: (warriors who were born in a tribe, but came to the clans)
A fish that lives in rushing water (Rushingriver), a blue she-cat with orange eyes, apprentice, Leafpaw
Eagle that uses sharp talons (Sharpeagle), Gray tom with blue-green eyes
Twig that breaks in hunting (Twighunt), orange and red tom with brown paws and one eye
Moon the comes out at night (Moonnight), black she-cat with gray stripes and amber eyes
Apprentices:
Sunpaw, a yellow she-cat with an orange eye and a blue eye
Leafpaw, a tan colored she-cat who has green blind eyes
Fernpaw, a brown she-cat with white speckles and scar on her hind leg
Eclipsepaw, a blue-grey tom with green eyes
Moonpaw, a black she-cat with a white paw
Scarpaw, only has one eye and a brown and white pelt
Ravinepaw, a blue-gray tom with white speckles
Brownpaw, a fully brown tom
Queens:
Petalcream, a cream-colored she cat with blue eyes
Riverpelt, a blue she-cat with green eyes
Where a deer walks in the forest, (Forestwalk), brown she-cat with green eyes and is expecting kits
Sandfur, a tan she-cat who has orange eyes
Elders:
Feathernose, a white tom with brown eyes
Lilacstorm, a gray she-cat with light blue eyes
Grey/Gray is spelled in two different ways depending on where you live or what you were taught. I normally switch between both.
Same
I know that, but I never remember
Hereโs a new fanfic I came up with hope you like it (petalberry is it ok if I add your sister oaklynn in chapter 2 I just want to be nice and add her but Iโm asking first)
Human 2 cats chapter 1
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raven woke to bright sunlight in his eyes. He groaned and got up and put a black hoodie over himself and throwing on some jeans and sulking out of his bedroom his black hair hidden by the hoodie.
Ah shoot this isnโt the end but I ran out of time cya
of course- thanks for asking first,
you can add her ๐
Thanks, your welcome
Okay, this is the prologue of my new fan fiction (It’s nameless, so pls give me suggestions):
Prologue
Leaves swirled around the dark tortoiseshell as she flung herself towards Mapleshade and pushed her to the ground. In the corner of her vision, she saw Sandstorm, looking at her with gratitude in her eyes.
โSpottedleaf!โ Mapleshade snarled, surprise flashing in her amber gaze. โWhy didnโt you let me kill her? She stole Firestarโs love from you?โ
โThere was nothing to steal!โ Spottedleaf retorted, flexing her claws. โSandstorm made him happy.โ
Mapleshade growled and after a moment, lunged herself at the she-cat. Flailing her paws, Spottedleaf tried to claw the other tortoiseshellโs muzzle as she fell to the leaf-speckled ground, moss and ferns pressing into her fur.
It reminded her of her earlier home, when she was alive.
Mapleshade stood above her, triumph in her sharp amber eyes.
Itโs overโฆ Spottedleaf thought weakly as Mapleshade sliced her throat.
Blazing pain streaked through her body, feeling like her pelt was on fire.
โNo!โ
A screech broke through her pain for a split second, until everything came rushing back.
Sounds of scruffing rose behind her, and after a few moments screeching sounded too. Spottedleaf started trembling.
What happened?
Flame-colored fur pressed against her side, along with a soft, sad whisper.
Firestar!
โSpottedleaf! Please donโt go.โ Firestar mewed, his voice breaking. โYou…you promised youโd be there to welcome me.โ
Spottedleaf shook her head, focusing through a new wave of pain. โThatโs not going to happen, my love.โ She mewed quietly. โI cannot journey with you anymore. Iโm so sorry.โ
Firestarโs green gaze glowed with sadness as he pawed at the ground.
โNo! I still need you!โ
โLet her go, Firestar.โ Another cat shimmered into view, with gray fur and a flat, matted face. Fixing her fierce orange gaze on Spottedleaf, the cat shook her head.
โYellowfang?โ The ginger tom looked at her pleadingly. โDonโt let her disappear, please.โ
โThis is her destiny.โ Yellowfang said kindly, touching her gray muzzle onto Firestar’s flame-colored head. โLet her follow it.โ
โButโฆ she said sheโd wait for me in StarClan.โ Firestarโs mew cracked and he looked down in despair.
Iโm sorry, Spottedleaf wanted to say, but she didnโt have the strength. Instead, a small gasp escaped her throat, and she fell limp, her beautiful amber eyes dulling.
โGood bye, Firestar.โ She said, gazing at the one cat she had ever truly loved.
Then everything became dark.
Hope you like it!
Spottedleaf’s sacrifice
I wrote 2 poems
[spoiler title=”Cries of a Cheezit, Sobs of a Snake”] Cries of a Cheezit, Sobs of a Snake
By Pearpaw
everywhere i go, i can hear it
the sound of a crunchy cheezit
the hiss of a snake
follows in its wake
cannot escape
and now i hate cheezits
dreaded cheese cracker
and the not alive snake
many a night they keep the Pear awake
losing sleep
want to weep
now i hate cheezits
deep in the shadows
the snake cackles
prepare to scare
an innocent pear
cracker drama
cheezit trauma
a chat on the blog
through the thick fog
out the window i spy
dead snake with an eye
silent scream
cheezits are mean
moddocorrect
has made me a wreck
cheese cracker cheezits
cause me pain beyond reason
lonely snake
left destruction in its wake
snakes are bad
they make me mad
ruined a past romance (with cheezits)
cheezits are bad
they make me sad
how could i have lost so much?
what is this i say
in tones of dismay
[/spoiler]
[spoiler title=”Chaotic Cheezit Ruined Romance”] Chaotic Cheezit Ruined Romance
By Pearpaw
I used to
Love you
With all of my heart
Then it got broken
Fell apart
Into a million shards
We loved each other
Give or take
It was you who did the giving
And I the taking
Then, crept into the scene
A serpent came snaking
Into our cocoon of joy
Then it was my heart who did the breaking
Ruined by the taste of death
Destroyed by the memory of loss
Spinning in my head
The betrayal
Happiness came at the cost
Of forgiving
Of moving on
But I guess that was too hard
Iโll always be there
Standing in the dark
My heart split into shards
Forever leaving a mark
Of the pain
Driving me insane
Tears dripping like rain
Iโll be there
Alone the the dark
Patiently waiting
For my life to stop falling apart
Holding onto my heart
That is why I hate you now Cheezits.
[/spoiler]
So I might post poems here sometime, I dont really have a schedule for when I post them, but I have a ton of these things so I might as well share them. This one isnt very good, but I wanted to share it because I really like the concept.
[spoiler title=”Brave”]
Needletail:
I got her in to this
And now she is stuck here
Under him
Yet she worked
She found a way out
She survived
I will not
I am stuck here
A prisoner
Slowly starving
Violetpaw comes to me
She brings us food
I am proud of her
I am not proud of myself
I do not know why I ever followed him
I do not know what I ever saw in him
I caused so much pain
I have noticed the kits
The queens, the elders
How they are missing
I do not think I could have ever helped
I know Violetpaw is involved
She told me
She said she would get us out too
I wish I had her courage
But I never did
I never could do the right thing
I do not think I was ever right
She came to me
She told us we are leaving soon
I am glad
I wonder how Berryheart is
And Sparrowtail
I wonder if I will see them again
I wish I had had the courage to go with them
I see Darktail coming
Violetpaw is with him
This isnโt good
He tells me
How she betrayed him
How she put poppy seeds in his fresh kill
I could not have had the courage to do that
We got to the lake
He says he will drown me
He holds me down
Violetpaw pleads that he stop
He agrees
He told me that I deserve a second chance
I think what is coming will need me to be strong
He tells me to kill Violetpaw
That is something I will not do
No matter how much loyalty I will prove
I lunge at Darktail
He and his rouges fight hard
And I know I am going to die
But maybe today I can be as brave a Violetpaw
Violetpaw:
She got me in to this
And now I am stuck here
Under him
Yet I worked
I found my way out
I survived
If Needletail could join me she would have done the same
She is stuck here
A prisoner
Slowly starving
I come to them
I bring them food
Needletail is proud of me
I do not think she should be
I do not know why we ever followed him
I do not know what we ever saw in him
We have caused so much pain
I have helped the kits
The queens, the elders
Helped them get away
Needletail would have done more than I did
Needletail knows iโm involved
I told her
I said I would get her out too
I wish I had her courage
But I never did
I always hid behind her
I do not think I can be brave now
I went to her
I told her we are leaving soon
She was glad
I wonder how Twigpaw is
And Alderheart
I wonder if I will see them again
I wish I had the courage to go to them
Darktail finds me
He takes Needletail with me
This isnโt good
He tells her
How I betrayed him
How I put poppy seeds in his fresh kill
I did not think I was brave enough to do that
We go to the lake
He says he will drown her
He holds her down
I plead that he stop
He agrees
He told her that she deserves a second chance
I think what is coming will need me to be strong
He tells her to kill me
That is something I would let her do
She has so much loyalty she must prove
She lunges at Darktail
Thanks to her
I will live another day
Maybe someday I can be as brave as Needletail
[/spoiler]
So that was Brave, about Violetpaw and Needletail. If you guys like this, I do have more comming
Looking at it in the spoiler box, it is really weird, so here it is as how it is supposed to look.
Needletail:
I got her in to this
And now she is stuck here
Under him
Yet she worked
She found a way out
She survived
I will not
I am stuck here
A prisoner
Slowly starving
Violetpaw comes to me
She brings us food
I am proud of her
I am not proud of myself
I do not know why I ever followed him
I do not know what I ever saw in him
I caused so much pain
I have noticed the kits
The queens, the elders
How they are missing
I do not think I could have ever helped
I know Violetpaw is involved
She told me
She said she would get us out too
I wish I had her courage
But I never did
I never could do the right thing
I do not think I was ever right
She came to me
She told us we are leaving soon
I am glad
I wonder how Berryheart is
And Sparrowtail
I wonder if I will see them again
I wish I had had the courage to go with them
I see Darktail coming
Violetpaw is with him
This isnโt good
He tells me
How she betrayed him
How she put poppy seeds in his fresh kill
I could not have had the courage to do that
We got to the lake
He says he will drown me
He holds me down
Violetpaw pleads that he stop
He agrees
He told me that I deserve a second chance
I think what is coming will need me to be strong
He tells me to kill Violetpaw
That is something I will not do
No matter how much loyalty I will prove
I lunge at Darktail
He and his rouges fight hard
I know I am going to die
But maybe today I can be as brave a Violetpaw
Violetpaw:
She got me in to this
And now I am stuck here
Under him
Yet I worked
I found my way out
I survived
If Needletail could join me she would have done the same
She is stuck here
A prisoner
Slowly starving
I come to them
I bring them food
Needletail is proud of me
I do not think she should be
I do not know why we ever followed him
I do not know what we ever saw in him
We have caused so much pain
I have helped the kits
The queens, the elders
Helped them get away
Needletail would have done more than I did
Needletail knows iโm involved
I told her
I said I would get her out too
I wish I had her courage
But I never did
I always hid behind her
I do not think I can be brave now
I went to her
I told her we are leaving soon
She was glad
I wonder how Twigpaw is
And Alderheart
I wonder if I will see them again
I wish I had the courage to go to them
Darktail finds me
He takes Needletail with me
This isnโt good
He tells her
How I betrayed him
How I put poppy seeds in his fresh kill
I did not think I was brave enough to do that
We go to the lake
He says he will drown her
He holds her down
I plead that he stop
He agrees
He told her that she deserves a second chance
I think what is coming will need me to be strong
He tells her to kill me
That is something I would let her do
She has so much loyalty she must prove
She lunges at Darktail
Thanks to her
I will live another day
Maybe someday I can be as brave as Needletail
Shoot that didnt even work and I have doomed everyone to a lot of scrolling. Sorry!
Itโs amazing
hello guys its me petalberry
as you all know i have.. reasons and im busy, so i cant always be on here.
but i wanted you all to know i am starting a warriorcats PMV of Ashfur (around the 2nd – 3rd ark?) with the song Evermore from beauty and the beast- i feel it really matches him and his thinking about squirrelflight. here are the lyrics:
I was the one who had it all
I was the master of my fate
I never needed anybody in my life
I learned the truth too late
I’ll never shake away the pain
I close my eyes but she’s still there
I let her steal into my melancholy heart
It’s more than I can bear
Now I know she’ll never leave me
Even as she runs away
She will still torment me
Calm me, hurt me
Move me, come what may
Wasting in my lonely tower
Waiting by an open door
I’ll fool myself, she’ll walk right in
And be with me for evermore
I rage against the trials of love
I curse the fading of the light
Though she’s already flown so far beyond my reach
She’s never out of sight
Now I know she’ll never leave me
Even as she fades from view
She will still inspire me
Be a part of everything I do
Wasting in my lonely tower
Waiting by an open door
I’ll fool myself, she’ll walk right in
And as the long, long nights begin
I’ll think of all that might have been
Waiting here for evermore
so guys, this MAP might take a month to be finished as i want it b e a u t i f ul.
any suggestions or questions guys?
I’m going to make a quick story about Sleekwhisker before she kills her mother, Dawnpelt.
Sleekwhisker walked beside Darktail. She admired the white spots on his fur, and his shiny blue eyes, which shone with excitment to go and fight another retreating cat. It was fun to kill Lioneye, but Sleekwhisker had a knot of regret in her stomach so hard she was surprised she hadn’t barfed yet. How could she kill her mother? No. She would do it. If she wanted to make Darktail notice her, not killing Dawnpelt wasn’t the way to do it.
If you kill Dawnpelt, you will be an orphan, because Crowfrost is dead, a voice in Sleekwhisker’s head said. Shut up! Sleekwhisker thought.
“Why are you so quiet?” Darktail asked.
“Oh, just thinking about killing the Clan cats, thats all,” Sleekwhisker meowed.
“Good,” Darktail said, “I was thinking about that as well.” Sleekwhisker felt her heart warm as Darktail gave her a smile. Perhaps this is a good start to matehood, Sleekwhisker thought, I mean, Needletail and Rain have been flirting for ages, and now Nettle has finally taken interest in Yarrowleaf. Violetpaw always looked small and fragile in the camp. She was, after all, the youngest.
“Here we are,” Darktail whispered to Sleekwhisker, eyes shining with excitement.
Sleekwhisker quietly stalked Dawnpelt, and she gulped. Her it goes, Sleekwhisker thought, hello orphan Sleekwhisker. Sleekwhisker leaped at Dawnpelt.
“Sleekwhisker?” Dawnpelt shrieked.
“Time to die,” Sleekwhisker snarled, “Mother.” Sleekwhisker shoved Dawnpelt in the water, down deep, and Sleekwhisker wanted to give a purr of satisfaction as she saw the bubbles rise up, but she couldn’t. Darktail came over.
“Perfect,” Darktail meowed, “I didn’t know she was your mother.” Sleekwhisker looked up.
“You’re braver than I thought, to kill your mother like that,” Darktail meowed. Sleekwhisker smiled. Darktail entwined his tail around Sleekwhisker’s, and she let out a purr of satisfaction. Yes, this starry night couldn’t get better. Darktail, Sleekwhisker thought, we make better partners than in just hunting and fighting. And, with that, Sleekwhisker purred.
beauty and the beast: warriors play
characters: (i need yall to help me decide lol)
i was thinking, squirrelflight could be belle and we could do some gaston/beast drama as ashfur/brambleclaw one?
also who do you think LeFou should be? lol
should belle’s father be firestar seeing as belle is squirrelflight?
i just re-watched the live action and let me tell you i actually laughed when the gaston song came up and LeFou was spelling gaston’s name and after the T he’s like “and i believe there’s another T- it just occurred to me that im illiterate and ive never had to spell it out loud before”
ANYWAY- tell who should be who! ๐
Gaston could be Ashfur because they’re both r/niceguys while Bramble could be beast because due to Bramble’s legacy he was seen as a threat. Also, Bramble and Beast are both jerks.
Oki! Chapter one will be out tommorow! ๐
this gonna be funny