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  • Iโ€™m making a fan fic about snowkit!

    The adventures of snowkit
    โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”-
    prologue

    Is this right, a cat asked from the shadows, yes speckledtail, how is that possible! She hissed
    I donโ€™t know but calm down a blue she cat mewed
    I donโ€™t know how or why but it happened we will just have to help him
    Speckledtail looked away and the place started to fade
    I know your out their, be safe my little oneโ€ speckledtail whispered than they disappeared.

    Chapter 1
    โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”-
    He played with his moss ball in the center of the clearing analyzing its substance and mass. How was this created he thought. Then suddenly he was lifted into the air being squeezed and his lungs rightened he looked up to see a hawk soaring through the sky with him. He thought quickly, another few seconds and itโ€™ll kill me he thought he saw the claws piercing his fur and felt the wind and looked at the hawks angle. Then he got it he bit the left foot loosening itโ€™s grip and he hopped up the wind pushing him onto its back but barely and he dangled off of its tail in horror at the long drop below.

    Ran out of Tim hope you like it!

  • Hewo again!
    So. Second Chapter. Introduces Vyx (Bramblefire) and Elley (Cindy). Hope you guys like it! ๐Ÿ™‚

    Chapter Two: I Meet My Very Hyper Roommate

    โ€œMs. Blacksmite, what do you think youโ€™re doing?โ€
    I snap my head up from my notebook and stare into the face of my homeroom teacher, Mrs. Weatherburn. Sheโ€™s got a tight, light brown bun on the top of her head, and piercing yellow-brown eyes that remind you of a hawk. Her tongue is quick and sharp, her sharp claw-like fingernails pierce through my shoulder as she asks again, โ€œWhat are you doing?โ€
    I smile sheepishly and pull out an earbud out of one ear. โ€œOh, hey, Mrs. Weatherburn,โ€ I smirk. โ€œHow am I messing up now? As far as I can see, nothing in the rules states I canโ€™t listen to music while Iโ€™m taking notes, or while Iโ€™m studying for that matter.โ€ 
    โ€œWell, the rulebook also states no listening to music without permission as well.โ€
    โ€œWell, what if I asked you now?โ€
    โ€œMy answer is no, Blacksmite,โ€ Mrs. Weatherburn sneered. โ€œHand over the earbuds. Now.โ€
    โ€œOr,โ€ I weedle, โ€œIโ€™ll just put them in my backpack very quickly and quietly and you can be on your way.โ€ To prove my point, I take them out of my ears entirely and put them into my bag, then zip up the front pocket. 
    Mrs. Weatherburn grunts, satisfied. โ€œThank you, Ms. Blacksmite. Now, please continue your notes.โ€
    I nod, then after she walks away, heave a sigh of relief and continue finishing my note to Chip, whoโ€™s sitting right behind me. I tap my foot three times, then on the fourth, shove the folded-up piece of paper to my friend. 
    We on for movie night? the note says. 
    Out of the corner of my eye, I see Chip nod, his dark leaf-green eyes with those flecks of golden widening with excitement. 
    Chipโ€™s been my best friend ever since sixth grade, when we were forced into a group project together. I think it was in History. Anyways, we were sitting in our group with Holly and another boy named Frank when all of a sudden, Chip asked, โ€œUm, just wondering for no reason, but does anyone here like…um, theatre songs and stuff?โ€
    I gasped. โ€œI do!โ€
    Pretty soon, we were talking about everything, from politics to whether we liked pineapples on our pizza or not. And after that, we were inseparable. 
    The bell rings, tugging me out of my thoughts. Everyone starts getting up from their chairs and starts walking towards the door. I stand up and turn to Chip. 
    โ€œHey,โ€ I say, grinning. โ€œWhat do you say that we go find our dorms?โ€ The only class that the freshmen (and basically everyone) has today is homeroom, where they can get their schedules, room assignments, and everything else we need for this year. 
    โ€œSounds good to me,โ€ Chip replies. He swings his bag onto his back and then we walk to the building to the right of the main building, which is on the other side of the fountain across from the entrance. 
    Inside, itโ€™s quiet, which is weird, since everywhere else is practically registered on the Richter scale. The walls are whitish-grey, and dark oak doors line it, along with a bronze number on the door, telling us our dorms. Thereโ€™s a sign to my left that says Stairs to 2nd 3rd 4th Floors, and then an arrow pointing up, and I can see the stairs. 
    I pull out my list that I received in homeroom.

    Dear Ms. Blacksmite,
    Below is your dorm room. Dorms are organized so that the first number is the floor that you are on, and the last numbers are the number dorm room total you have (ex. 289 means 2nd floor, 89th room in the building). 
    Your dorm room is: 361
    Please find here a list of things that are not allowed in the dorm rooms:

    • Any food
    • Any drinks (water is allowed)
    • Any animals
    • Anything that causes moderate to severe allergic reactions in your roommate

    Please put away all personal belongings when you get to your dorm. Thank you.

    Sincerely,

    Alissa Delacour

    Alissa Delacour,

    9th and 10th Grade Administrator

    Putting my list away, I turn to Chip. โ€œWhat dorm do you have?โ€
    โ€œ387,โ€ he responds. โ€œYou?โ€
    โ€œ361. Get this: they think that animals are going to be kept in the dorms. How could they be, with people allergic to them?โ€
    โ€œI donโ€™t know. But letโ€™s go up, okay?โ€
    โ€œAโ€™ight.โ€ 
    We head up the stairs. Suddenly, Iโ€™m slammed to the ground by a dude with silvery-grey hair.
    โ€œHey!โ€ I yell angrily. โ€œWatch it!โ€
    โ€œSorry!โ€ the guy yelps. โ€œIโ€™m so sorry! Here, let me help you up.โ€ He reaches out his hand. Grudgingly, I take it. 
    When Iโ€™m on my feet again, Chip looks at the guy. โ€œWho are you?โ€
    โ€œMy nameโ€™s Vyx,โ€ he replies. โ€œIโ€™m a freshman here.โ€
    I nod once. โ€œUs, too. Iโ€™m Bailey. This is Chip.โ€
    Vyx smiles. โ€œNIce to meet you guys. Now, if youโ€™ll excuse me – wait, what dorm do you have, Chip?โ€
    โ€œDorm 387.โ€
    โ€œSame! Well, my stuffโ€™s already all put up, so go ahead and make yourself at home. See you later, roomie!โ€ And with that, Vyx walks away.
    I stare after him. Something about Vyx makes me think, Wow, heโ€™s really cool. 
    Chip sneaks a glance at me. โ€œBailey? You okay? Youโ€™re looking pale and red at the same time.โ€
    I look at him, grinning. โ€œโ€˜Course I am. You know me. Now letโ€™s get going.โ€

    *******************

    โ€œHI! My nameโ€™s Elley. Itโ€™s nice to meet you!โ€
    I look at the girl whoโ€™s sitting on the top bunk. Her hair is dirty-blonde, and is in long braids, while her pink flats dangle over the loft to the right. 
    The dormโ€™s really cute. It has two loft beds, each nooked into…kind of like the wall cuts into itself and then keeps going. The loft beds are white-painted wood, with nothing on the actual bed, and a desk as part of the bottom one. Herโ€™s is already set up; and…um, it looks like a unicorn exploded on it. No, Iโ€™m being serious. Thereโ€™s hot pink and yellow sprinkled everywhere over there. Thereโ€™s a bathroom to my left, and two closets to my right, and it looks really nice.
    I wave sheepishly. โ€œUm…hey. Iโ€™m Bailey. Nice to meet you, too, I guess.โ€ 
    โ€œOh!โ€ Elley jumps down from the loft and squeezes me into a hug. โ€œI love you already! Well, see you later, roomie!โ€ And with that, sheโ€™s skipping out of the room. 
    I shake my head, smiling to myself. Elley looks really hyper…which will make her super fun. She sounds amazing. 
    Once Iโ€™m done setting up my stuff, I check my phone. Itโ€™s 10:37, which means that Iโ€™ve got about an hour before lunch starts. Grinning, I dash out of the hall and knock on Chipโ€™s door. When he emerges, we jump down the stairs and out into the sun.
    This year looks awesome already. 

    I hope you guys like it so far! If you want to make a character, I reposted the page on the Fan Fic Organizing page (if you already made one, I saw it, don’t worry), so you can go there.
    Fire-child: Bailey
    Water-child: Skylin/Skye (Rainyy’s)
    Earth-child: open
    Wind-child: Vyx (Bramblefire’s)
    Ice-child: Open
    Lightning-child: Taraji (Nightpaw’s)
    Shadow-child: Violet (mine)
    Light-child: Elley (Cindy’s)
    (Chip ain’t in dis group)
    Characters who still need a place to be put: Izzy (Icepaw’s)
    You can make a character still for any of the slots, they just won’t be put in Bailey’s group. So. Ye.

  • petalberry here… i have some bad news, my baby sister (i have triplet baby sisters, only one month old) oaklynn, died from a heart disease one hour ago, i may not be able to post alot of chapters, as im grieving and my family is too, i just wanted to tell you why, i may post on here (my mom says i need something to take my mind off it) so, in memory of oaklynn, in my Brambleclaw Neko fanfic i will be making a new thunderclan kit called oakkit, so if your confused about whose kit it belongs to, i decided, since i made daisy have toadkit and rosekit rn, She can be an adopted one.

    RIP oaklynn.๐Ÿ’”

  • okay, hereโ€™s the prologue to The Fight to Get Back. If you want to be in the story, please go to the fan fiction organization page. I really need more characters.

    Prologue  

    โ€œYes! We finally have the kids.โ€ She said with a smirk. โ€œThe kids with powers that would save the world.โ€ โ€œWell, kidnapping wasnโ€™t as hard as I thought.โ€ He said with a sigh. With babies in his arms, he sat down on the wooden chair. โ€œSo what do we do next?โ€ Another person asked. โ€œHow do we know these are the children?โ€ Zack flashed her a look. โ€œWell, you can tell by the blood.โ€ Rame picked up one of the babies. She pulled a needle out of her pocket and pricked the babyโ€™s finger. They started to scream and cry. Rame got a vile and collected some blood. It was red and pink with blue-green sparkles. โ€œSee?โ€ Rame shook the vile in front of Zack and Rayโ€™s faces. โ€œNow we wait until theyโ€™re six. Thatโ€™s when theyโ€™ll have developed powers, if they even get them. Then weโ€™ll home school them until theyโ€™re thirteen.โ€ 

    โ€œAnyhoo, go put those babies in their rooms. I put in some trampolines for them to bounce on.โ€ Rame groans as she sharpens her nails on the knife sharpener. โ€œMom?โ€ Ray asks. โ€œWho will homeschool them?โ€ โ€œYou and Zack after your school.โ€ Rame replies not looking up. โ€œOkay. Who will feed them?โ€ Ray asks again. โ€œYou will, once a day, and youโ€™ll feed them raw slop leftovers from our dinner.โ€ Rame replies glaring at Ray. โ€œDonโ€™t tell one of your silly friends.โ€ 

    Zack rocked one of babies back forth, till he saw something on her arm. It was huge and red part of her skin. He dropped her on the rug, as she started to cry. Rame came rushing in to see what happed. She saw the red stop too, โ€œwe kill her if she developed powers.โ€

  • Darktail was looking at his mother. โ€œPlease, Smoke. Find someone else to kill Onestar, Iโ€ฆ I canโ€™t.โ€ She looked down at him. โ€œYou say this every night. Donโ€™t you think it could get a bitโ€ฆโ€ She flexed her claws. โ€œBoring? Darktail, you will kill him. I am making you, after all.โ€ โ€œIโ€™m breaking free!โ€ Smoke looked at her son with unhidden distaste. โ€œI got you EVERYTHING! Everything, and you complain?โ€ Darktail looked at her with equal disdain. โ€œI will be free! And if you hadnโ€™t got me โ€˜everythingโ€™, I wouldnโ€™t be!โ€ โ€œWhen,โ€ Smoke lowered her voice dangerously โ€œdid you break free?โ€ I always knew Rain would betray me โ€œAhโ€ฆ live and learn, I suppose.โ€

    Darktail woke up. This isnโ€™t me, he tried to yowl. But just like every day since his mother diedโ€ฆ he couldnโ€™t. And just like everyday, it was true. Smoke, not him, was using his body. Smoke, not him, knew these cats. And it was Smoke, not him, who heard the battle cry and ran after Onestar. Smoke who jumped into the water. And it wasโ€ฆ him. He was drowning. He was dying. He was ending his story here. 

  • Allegiances for War of Peace:

    NightClan:

    Leader-Spikestar, she-cat with sharp claws and a golden yellow pelt, formerly known as Spikeclaw

    Deputy-Goldstripe, brown pelt with a golden yellow stripe down the middle of his back, apprentice, Brownpaw

    Medicine cat-Yarrowtooth, gray(grey? I forgot how to spell grey(gray)) tom, with emerald green eyes, apprentice, Fernpaw

    Warriors:
    Ravenheart, black and gray tom, with weird blue eyes, apprentice, Scarpaw
    Freshberry, blue she-cat with green eyes, apprentice, Sunpaw
    Coldstalk, orange tom with a cut in his ear, apprentice, Moonpaw
    Redwood, a orangish tom, with brown eyes
    Sheerpelt, a very scuffed up tom with no fur
    Clearfur, a silver she-cat with bright blue eyes
    Ivysplash, a black and orange tabby she-cat, with blue eyes
    Ceadarheat, a yellow tabby tom with a very thick pelt, apprentice, Eclipsepaw
    Scavengeclaw, a brown tom with gray,(grey?) eyes, apprentice, Ravinepaw

    Mountain warriors: (warriors who were born in a tribe, but came to the clans)
    A fish that lives in rushing water (Rushingriver), a blue she-cat with orange eyes, apprentice, Leafpaw
    Eagle that uses sharp talons (Sharpeagle), Gray tom with blue-green eyes
    Twig that breaks in hunting (Twighunt), orange and red tom with brown paws and one eye
    Moon the comes out at night (Moonnight), black she-cat with gray stripes and amber eyes

    Apprentices:
    Sunpaw, a yellow she-cat with an orange eye and a blue eye
    Leafpaw, a tan colored she-cat who has green blind eyes
    Fernpaw, a brown she-cat with white speckles and scar on her hind leg
    Eclipsepaw, a blue-grey tom with green eyes
    Moonpaw, a black she-cat with a white paw
    Scarpaw, only has one eye and a brown and white pelt
    Ravinepaw, a blue-gray tom with white speckles
    Brownpaw, a fully brown tom

    Queens:
    Petalcream, a cream-colored she cat with blue eyes
    Riverpelt, a blue she-cat with green eyes
    Where a deer walks in the forest, (Forestwalk), brown she-cat with green eyes and is expecting kits
    Sandfur, a tan she-cat who has orange eyes

    Elders:
    Feathernose, a white tom with brown eyes
    Lilacstorm, a gray she-cat with light blue eyes

  • Hereโ€™s a new fanfic I came up with hope you like it (petalberry is it ok if I add your sister oaklynn in chapter 2 I just want to be nice and add her but Iโ€™m asking first)

    Human 2 cats chapter 1
    โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”
    raven woke to bright sunlight in his eyes. He groaned and got up and put a black hoodie over himself and throwing on some jeans and sulking out of his bedroom his black hair hidden by the hoodie.

    Ah shoot this isnโ€™t the end but I ran out of time cya

  • Okay, this is the prologue of my new fan fiction (It’s nameless, so pls give me suggestions):
    Prologue
    Leaves swirled around the dark tortoiseshell as she flung herself towards Mapleshade and pushed her to the ground. In the corner of her vision, she saw Sandstorm, looking at her with gratitude in her eyes. 
    โ€œSpottedleaf!โ€ Mapleshade snarled, surprise flashing in her amber gaze. โ€œWhy didnโ€™t you let me kill her? She stole Firestarโ€™s love from you?โ€
    โ€œThere was nothing to steal!โ€ Spottedleaf retorted, flexing her claws. โ€œSandstorm made him happy.โ€
    Mapleshade growled and after a moment, lunged herself at the she-cat. Flailing her paws, Spottedleaf tried to claw the other tortoiseshellโ€™s muzzle as she fell to the leaf-speckled ground, moss and ferns pressing into her fur.
    It reminded her of her earlier home, when she was alive. 
    Mapleshade stood above her, triumph in her sharp amber eyes. 
    Itโ€™s overโ€ฆ Spottedleaf thought weakly as Mapleshade sliced her throat.
    Blazing pain streaked through her body, feeling like her pelt was on fire.
    โ€œNo!โ€
    A screech broke through her pain for a split second, until everything came rushing back. 
    Sounds of scruffing rose behind her, and after a few moments screeching sounded too. Spottedleaf started trembling.
    What happened?
    Flame-colored fur pressed against her side, along with a soft, sad whisper. 
    Firestar!
    โ€œSpottedleaf! Please donโ€™t go.โ€ Firestar mewed, his voice breaking. โ€œYou…you promised youโ€™d be there to welcome me.โ€
    Spottedleaf shook her head, focusing through a new wave of pain. โ€œThatโ€™s not going to happen, my love.โ€ She mewed quietly. โ€œI cannot journey with you anymore. Iโ€™m so sorry.โ€
    Firestarโ€™s green gaze glowed with sadness as he pawed at the ground. 
    โ€œNo! I still need you!โ€
    โ€œLet her go, Firestar.โ€ Another cat shimmered into view, with gray fur and a flat, matted face. Fixing her fierce orange gaze on Spottedleaf, the cat shook her head. 
    โ€œYellowfang?โ€ The ginger tom looked at her pleadingly. โ€œDonโ€™t let her disappear, please.โ€ 
    โ€œThis is her destiny.โ€ Yellowfang said kindly, touching her gray muzzle onto Firestar’s flame-colored head. โ€œLet her follow it.โ€
    โ€œButโ€ฆ she said sheโ€™d wait for me in StarClan.โ€ Firestarโ€™s mew cracked and he looked down in despair. 
    Iโ€™m sorry, Spottedleaf wanted to say, but she didnโ€™t have the strength. Instead, a small gasp escaped her throat, and she fell limp, her beautiful amber eyes dulling. 
     โ€œGood bye, Firestar.โ€ She said, gazing at the one cat she had ever truly loved. 
    Then everything became dark.
    Hope you like it!

  • I wrote 2 poems

    [spoiler title=”Cries of a Cheezit, Sobs of a Snake”] Cries of a Cheezit, Sobs of a Snake

    By Pearpaw

    everywhere i go, i can hear it
    the sound of a crunchy cheezit
    the hiss of a snake
    follows in its wake
    cannot escape
    and now i hate cheezits

    dreaded cheese cracker
    and the not alive snake
    many a night they keep the Pear awake
    losing sleep
    want to weep
    now i hate cheezits

    deep in the shadows
    the snake cackles
    prepare to scare
    an innocent pear
    cracker drama
    cheezit trauma

    a chat on the blog
    through the thick fog
    out the window i spy
    dead snake with an eye
    silent scream
    cheezits are mean

    moddocorrect
    has made me a wreck
    cheese cracker cheezits
    cause me pain beyond reason
    lonely snake
    left destruction in its wake

    snakes are bad
    they make me mad
    ruined a past romance (with cheezits)
    cheezits are bad
    they make me sad
    how could i have lost so much?

    what is this i say
    in tones of dismay
    [/spoiler]

    [spoiler title=”Chaotic Cheezit Ruined Romance”] Chaotic Cheezit Ruined Romance

    By Pearpaw

    I used to
    Love you
    With all of my heart
    Then it got broken
    Fell apart
    Into a million shards

    We loved each other
    Give or take
    It was you who did the giving
    And I the taking
    Then, crept into the scene
    A serpent came snaking
    Into our cocoon of joy
    Then it was my heart who did the breaking

    Ruined by the taste of death
    Destroyed by the memory of loss
    Spinning in my head
    The betrayal
    Happiness came at the cost
    Of forgiving
    Of moving on
    But I guess that was too hard

    Iโ€™ll always be there
    Standing in the dark
    My heart split into shards
    Forever leaving a mark
    Of the pain
    Driving me insane
    Tears dripping like rain

    Iโ€™ll be there
    Alone the the dark
    Patiently waiting
    For my life to stop falling apart
    Holding onto my heart
    That is why I hate you now Cheezits.

    [/spoiler]

  • So I might post poems here sometime, I dont really have a schedule for when I post them, but I have a ton of these things so I might as well share them. This one isnt very good, but I wanted to share it because I really like the concept.

    [spoiler title=”Brave”]

    Needletail:

    I got her in to this

    And now she is stuck here

    Under him

    Yet she worked

    She found a way out

    She survived

    I will not

    I am stuck here

    A prisoner

    Slowly starving

    Violetpaw comes to me

    She brings us food

    I am proud of her

    I am not proud of myself

    I do not know why I ever followed him

    I do not know what I ever saw in him

    I caused so much pain

    I have noticed the kits

    The queens, the elders

    How they are missing

    I do not think I could have ever helped

    I know Violetpaw is involved

    She told me

    She said she would get us out too

    I wish I had her courage

    But I never did

    I never could do the right thing

    I do not think I was ever right

    She came to me 

    She told us we are leaving soon

    I am glad

    I wonder how Berryheart is 

    And Sparrowtail

    I wonder if I will see them again

    I wish I had had the courage to go with them

    I see Darktail coming

    Violetpaw is with him

    This isnโ€™t good

    He tells me

    How she betrayed him

    How she put poppy seeds in his fresh kill

    I could not have had the courage to do that

    We got to the lake

    He says he will drown me

    He holds me down

    Violetpaw pleads that he stop

    He agrees

    He told me that I deserve a second chance

    I think what is coming will need me to be strong

    He tells me to kill Violetpaw

    That is something I will not do 

    No matter how much loyalty I will prove

    I lunge at Darktail

    He and his rouges fight hard

    And I know I am going to die

    But maybe today I can be as brave a Violetpaw

    Violetpaw:

    She got me in to this

    And now I am stuck here

    Under him

    Yet I worked

    I found my way out

    I survived

    If Needletail could join me she would have done the same

    She is stuck here

    A prisoner

    Slowly starving

    I come to them

    I bring them food

    Needletail is proud of me

    I do not think she should be

    I do not know why we ever followed him

    I do not know what we ever saw in him

    We have caused so much pain

    I have helped the kits

    The queens, the elders

    Helped them get away

    Needletail would have done more than I did 

    Needletail knows iโ€™m involved

    I told her

    I said I would get her out too

    I wish I had her courage

    But I never did

    I always hid behind her

    I do not think I can be brave now

    I went to her

    I told her we are leaving soon

    She was glad

    I wonder how Twigpaw is 

    And Alderheart

    I wonder if I will see them again

    I wish I had the courage to go to them

    Darktail finds me

    He takes Needletail with me

    This isnโ€™t good

    He tells her

    How I betrayed him

    How I put poppy seeds in his fresh kill

    I did not think I was brave enough to do that

    We go to the lake

    He says he will drown her

    He holds her down

    I plead that he stop

    He agrees

    He told her that she deserves a second chance

    I think what is coming will need me to be strong

    He tells her to kill me

    That is something I would let her do

    She has so much loyalty she must prove

    She lunges at Darktail

    Thanks to her

    I will live another day

    Maybe someday I can be as brave as Needletail

    [/spoiler]
    So that was Brave, about Violetpaw and Needletail. If you guys like this, I do have more comming

    • Looking at it in the spoiler box, it is really weird, so here it is as how it is supposed to look.

      Needletail:

      I got her in to this

      And now she is stuck here

      Under him

      Yet she worked

      She found a way out

      She survived

      I will not

      I am stuck here

      A prisoner

      Slowly starving

      Violetpaw comes to me

      She brings us food

      I am proud of her

      I am not proud of myself

      I do not know why I ever followed him

      I do not know what I ever saw in him

      I caused so much pain

      I have noticed the kits

      The queens, the elders

      How they are missing

      I do not think I could have ever helped

      I know Violetpaw is involved

      She told me

      She said she would get us out too

      I wish I had her courage

      But I never did

      I never could do the right thing

      I do not think I was ever right

      She came to me 

      She told us we are leaving soon

      I am glad

      I wonder how Berryheart is 

      And Sparrowtail

      I wonder if I will see them again

      I wish I had had the courage to go with them

      I see Darktail coming

      Violetpaw is with him

      This isnโ€™t good

      He tells me

      How she betrayed him

      How she put poppy seeds in his fresh kill

      I could not have had the courage to do that

      We got to the lake

      He says he will drown me

      He holds me down

      Violetpaw pleads that he stop

      He agrees

      He told me that I deserve a second chance

      I think what is coming will need me to be strong

      He tells me to kill Violetpaw

      That is something I will not do 

      No matter how much loyalty I will prove

      I lunge at Darktail

      He and his rouges fight hard

      I know I am going to die

      But maybe today I can be as brave a Violetpaw

      Violetpaw:

      She got me in to this

      And now I am stuck here

      Under him

      Yet I worked

      I found my way out

      I survived

      If Needletail could join me she would have done the same

      She is stuck here

      A prisoner

      Slowly starving

      I come to them

      I bring them food

      Needletail is proud of me

      I do not think she should be

      I do not know why we ever followed him

      I do not know what we ever saw in him

      We have caused so much pain

      I have helped the kits

      The queens, the elders

      Helped them get away

      Needletail would have done more than I did 

      Needletail knows iโ€™m involved

      I told her

      I said I would get her out too

      I wish I had her courage

      But I never did

      I always hid behind her

      I do not think I can be brave now

      I went to her

      I told her we are leaving soon

      She was glad

      I wonder how Twigpaw is 

      And Alderheart

      I wonder if I will see them again

      I wish I had the courage to go to them

      Darktail finds me

      He takes Needletail with me

      This isnโ€™t good

      He tells her

      How I betrayed him

      How I put poppy seeds in his fresh kill

      I did not think I was brave enough to do that

      We go to the lake

      He says he will drown her

      He holds her down

      I plead that he stop

      He agrees

      He told her that she deserves a second chance

      I think what is coming will need me to be strong

      He tells her to kill me

      That is something I would let her do

      She has so much loyalty she must prove

      She lunges at Darktail

      Thanks to her

      I will live another day

      Maybe someday I can be as brave as Needletail

  • hello guys its me petalberry
    as you all know i have.. reasons and im busy, so i cant always be on here.
    but i wanted you all to know i am starting a warriorcats PMV of Ashfur (around the 2nd – 3rd ark?) with the song Evermore from beauty and the beast- i feel it really matches him and his thinking about squirrelflight. here are the lyrics:
    I was the one who had it all
    I was the master of my fate
    I never needed anybody in my life
    I learned the truth too late
    I’ll never shake away the pain
    I close my eyes but she’s still there
    I let her steal into my melancholy heart
    It’s more than I can bear
    Now I know she’ll never leave me
    Even as she runs away
    She will still torment me
    Calm me, hurt me
    Move me, come what may
    Wasting in my lonely tower
    Waiting by an open door
    I’ll fool myself, she’ll walk right in
    And be with me for evermore
    I rage against the trials of love
    I curse the fading of the light
    Though she’s already flown so far beyond my reach
    She’s never out of sight
    Now I know she’ll never leave me
    Even as she fades from view
    She will still inspire me
    Be a part of everything I do
    Wasting in my lonely tower
    Waiting by an open door
    I’ll fool myself, she’ll walk right in
    And as the long, long nights begin
    I’ll think of all that might have been
    Waiting here for evermore

    so guys, this MAP might take a month to be finished as i want it b e a u t i f ul.
    any suggestions or questions guys?

  • I’m going to make a quick story about Sleekwhisker before she kills her mother, Dawnpelt.
    Sleekwhisker walked beside Darktail. She admired the white spots on his fur, and his shiny blue eyes, which shone with excitment to go and fight another retreating cat. It was fun to kill Lioneye, but Sleekwhisker had a knot of regret in her stomach so hard she was surprised she hadn’t barfed yet. How could she kill her mother? No. She would do it. If she wanted to make Darktail notice her, not killing Dawnpelt wasn’t the way to do it.
    If you kill Dawnpelt, you will be an orphan, because Crowfrost is dead, a voice in Sleekwhisker’s head said. Shut up! Sleekwhisker thought.
    “Why are you so quiet?” Darktail asked.
    “Oh, just thinking about killing the Clan cats, thats all,” Sleekwhisker meowed.
    “Good,” Darktail said, “I was thinking about that as well.” Sleekwhisker felt her heart warm as Darktail gave her a smile. Perhaps this is a good start to matehood, Sleekwhisker thought, I mean, Needletail and Rain have been flirting for ages, and now Nettle has finally taken interest in Yarrowleaf. Violetpaw always looked small and fragile in the camp. She was, after all, the youngest.
    “Here we are,” Darktail whispered to Sleekwhisker, eyes shining with excitement.
    Sleekwhisker quietly stalked Dawnpelt, and she gulped. Her it goes, Sleekwhisker thought, hello orphan Sleekwhisker. Sleekwhisker leaped at Dawnpelt.
    “Sleekwhisker?” Dawnpelt shrieked.
    “Time to die,” Sleekwhisker snarled, “Mother.” Sleekwhisker shoved Dawnpelt in the water, down deep, and Sleekwhisker wanted to give a purr of satisfaction as she saw the bubbles rise up, but she couldn’t. Darktail came over.
    “Perfect,” Darktail meowed, “I didn’t know she was your mother.” Sleekwhisker looked up.
    “You’re braver than I thought, to kill your mother like that,” Darktail meowed. Sleekwhisker smiled. Darktail entwined his tail around Sleekwhisker’s, and she let out a purr of satisfaction. Yes, this starry night couldn’t get better. Darktail, Sleekwhisker thought, we make better partners than in just hunting and fighting. And, with that, Sleekwhisker purred.

  • beauty and the beast: warriors play
    characters: (i need yall to help me decide lol)
    i was thinking, squirrelflight could be belle and we could do some gaston/beast drama as ashfur/brambleclaw one?
    also who do you think LeFou should be? lol
    should belle’s father be firestar seeing as belle is squirrelflight?
    i just re-watched the live action and let me tell you i actually laughed when the gaston song came up and LeFou was spelling gaston’s name and after the T he’s like “and i believe there’s another T- it just occurred to me that im illiterate and ive never had to spell it out loud before”
    ANYWAY- tell who should be who! ๐Ÿ™‚