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  • So this is really soon after the first poem I did, but I had another one because I am bored out of my mind. This is actually the first draft of what I am going to do for this month’s writing contest. This isn’t the final draft, and I might end up doing something totally different because even though the poem is supposed to be about hunting, I took a lot of liberties when creating this. It starts about hunting, but goes somewhere eles. Anyway…

    [spoiler title=”The Son”]
    This is what it comes down to 
    This last step
    This moment before the pounce
    That what she told me at least
    This is the final moment she said
    She is gone now

    The air is filled with tension 
    At least for me
    The mouse doesn’t know what is coming
    And when I pounce 
    A swift and elegant motion
    It is my meal

    I give thanks to StarClan for this prey
    Such useless words
    They represent them and the pain they caused
    What is the point in remembering StarClan?
    What is the point in remembering the clans?
    They only ever bring pain

    I know you are watching me
    Why hide?
    A two day old kit could see you
    You want to know who I am? 
    Well I must insist you hear me out first
    I do need help

    She was a truly talented cat
    I loved her
    My mother was amazing
    Who was my father? 
    None of your business
    I despise him

    She deserved everything 
    Everything
    But her betrayed her
    Just like any other clan cat
    He does not deserve anything at all
    Anything

    He told her he was a hero
    He lied
    My mother should have never trusted him
    She learned her lesson
    He was cruel

    Now, in the world are you 
    A clan cat?
    Your kind betrayed me
    And now you will pay the price
    You will die

    You wanted to know who I was? I am Darktail. Son of Smoke and Onewhisker. And I am coming to destroy you all. 

    [/spoiler]

  • Chapter 2 of A War Between Peace!

    Chapter 2

    Brooks coming by

    “What do you mean I’m not a warrior?” Woodpaw yelled at Pantherfrost. “I mean, you failed the assessment.” She snapped back. Woodpaw showed sadness in his eyes. “Why?” “Because you don’t listen!” Pantherfrost growled at him. “You never do! You deserved it! All your friends will become warriors, except for you, because you don’t use your ears!” “You wouldn’t understand the feeling! You fox-hearted mouse-brain!” Woodpaw snapped and ran. “Wait!” Pantherfrost called. “I didn’t mean it!” “Ugh. Yeah go ahead and run away! We could do the assessment again. But no, you,” Pantherfrost stopped talking when she heard the bush move. She unsheathed her claws. “Who’s there?” She growled. Then out popped Brookheart.

    “Aha! What are you doing here BushClan warrior?” Pantherfrost mewed. “I was there! Last night! At that weird prophecy gathering!” Brookheart said in panic. Pantherfrost sheathed her claws. “Oh. Hi.” She meowed. “What are you doing here? You could get in a lot of trouble!” “Let me explain,” Brookheart protested. “I need your help.” “Great explaining.” Pantherfrost whispered to herself. “Why? Can’t you get like Ravinepaw’s help?” “No,” Brookheart shook her head. “I need you.” “fine, what is it?” Woodpaw jumps out of nowhere. “I knew you were a betrayer!”

    “I knew it! First you make me lose my assessment, now you’re going to help some BushClan warrior you met last night? You also got out of camp with leader’s permission!” Woodpaw yowled at Pantherfrost. “You won’t even bear to live in clan once I tell Graystar!” “Woodpaw, please,” Pantherfrost starts but Woodpaw cuts her off. “No! I need revenge on you, and this is perfect.” He scraped the ground with his front paw. “Don’t think I forgot about you,” nodding to Brookheart. “I can’t wait until BushClan finds out you went out of camp twice without permission, to meet up with other clan cats.” Then he bounded off towards camp. Brookheart unsheathed her claws and ran the direction Woodpaw went. “Brookheart! Wait!” Pantherfrost yells. This cat’s got problems. Pantherfrost thought. A she ran after Brookheart, she smelled a hunting patrol.

    When Pantherfrost got to Brookheart, she was getting followed by the hunting patrol. Brookheart had blood splattered all over her fur. “Brookheart?” Pantherfrost meowed to her. She looked her shoulder at the hunting patrol. “You can go. Don’t tell anyone. I’ll handle this.” As the hunting patrol disappeared, she realized Brookheart was standing over Woodpaw’s body. “Wait- you killed him?!” Pantherfrost asked with a gasp of astonishment. “Yup.” Brookheart replied. “You didn’t care about him that much, right?” “He was my apprentice!” Pantherfrost growled in her face. “Oh.” Brookheart mews staring at the body. “Sorry. I just didn’t want anyone getting in trouble.” Pantherfrost grabbed the scruff of the body and started pulling. “What are you doing?” Brookheart asked. “I em bringling em who clan.” Pantherfrost said through a mouthful of fur. “Elp mah.”

    “So what’s the plan?” Brookheart asked when the reached the stream. “Put him in the water and take him out. Grab the hind legs.” Pantherfrost replied. She grabbed the front paws with her teeth, and dipped him in the water and got him out. “Now, we take him to the clan.” Pantherfrost mewed sadly looking at Woodpaw’s dead body. “My first apprentice…” she whispered. “What?” Brookheart asked washing herself in the stream. “Nothing.” Pantherfrost meowed back at her. “Nothing at all.”

    As Pantherfrost and Brookheart carry Woodpaw’s body into the CloudClan camp, Rivertail, Woodpaw’s mother, runs over. “Woodpaw!” She cries. Then she spots Brookheart, and stops dead in her tracks. As Pantherfrost puts him down, Stormstar, her leader, appears. “What’s going on here?” He demands. “This BushClan warrior found Woodpaw in their stream.” Pantherfrost replies. Looseclaw comes out of the medicine cat den. She put her ear to the heart. “He’s dead.” He announces. “Must’ve drowned.” “No! He didn’t drown!” Brookheart called. She ran over and Woodpaw’s chin to reveal where she struck him in the neck.

    As Brookheart left, Pantherfrost kept doubting herself. Yeah. Why didn’t you stop him yourself? Why did Brookheart do that? Can I trust her? I should have never went to that place last night. Grainfur pads over to her. “Hey, I’m sorry.” He mews to her. “Do you want to go on a walk?” Pantherfrost looks up at the moon starting to rise. “It’s okay if you don’t. It’s getting late.” He sighs and walks to the warriors den mumbling something. “Sure.” Pantherfrost calls after him.

    “So…” Grainfur says. “Look at the stars. Aren’t the beautiful? I can’t wait until my kit’s kits look at me when I’m a star.” “If you even have kits, that is.” Pantherfrost nudges him laughing. “Hey! I’m going to have 6 kits.” Grainfur protests. “How many kits do you think you’ll have?” Pantherfrost starts to frown. “After this incident with Woodpaw, I don’t even know if I want kits. Rivertail was so sad. Her only kit… gone…” Pantherfrost mewed. “Oh.” Grainfur meowed. “I think you’ll have millions of kits. But which star is your mom’s mom?” “Hmmmm… probably the red one. She must be really mad at me.” Pantherfrost laughed. “Mine’s the big bright one that’s blinking. She’s tryna tell me something.” Grainfur mewed. 

    As Pantherfrost and Grainfur walked back to camp, a starry cat flashed is the side of her eye. “You keep going. I’ll catch up with you later.” She meowed to Grainfur. “Okay. Don’t stay out too late. I don’t wanna go on a search party in the morning.” He said padded off. “What do you want?” Pantherfrost called into the distance. A starry cat appeared. “Go to the gathering place.” They said. “Now.” “Who are you, and why should I listen to you?” Pantherfrost snapped back. “Because your friends with my great great great great great great granddaughter.” The cat meowed. “Wow, an old cat.” Pantherfrost said sarcastically. “My name is Brook. I’m not from StarClan, but we live next to each other.” “So you’re Brookheart’s grandma?” Pantherfrost said confused. Brook nodded. “Well, she’s not my friend! And I’m not going!” Pantherfrost snapped. “You’ll regret it. Yes you will.” Brook meowed and disappeared.

    hoped you liked it! If you wondering about my newest book, The Fight to get Back, it’ll be out by Monday or Tuesday 🙂

  • heyy guys so im writing a fanfic about beauty and the beast as a warriors play, we decided ashfur is gaston, beast is brambleclaw and belle is squirrelflight: i cant write it all today so this is the edited version of “gaston”‘s song. LeFou is rainwhisker as in sunset it mentioned somewhere that they are close friends.

    rainwhisker: Gosh, it disturbs me to see you Ashfur
    Looking so down in the dumps
    Every guy here’d love to be you, Ashfur
    Even when taking your lumps
    There’s no man in the clan as admired as you
    You’re everyone’s favorite guy
    Everyone’s awed and inspired by you
    And it’s not very hard to see why
    whole clan:
    No one’s slick as Ashfur
    No one’s quick as Ashfur
    No one’s neck’s as incredibly thick as Ashfur
    For there’s no man in town half as manly
    Perfect, a pure paragon
    You can ask any Tom, kit, or Elder
    And they’ll tell you whose team they prefer to be on
    Who plays moss ball like Ashfur?
    Who break hearts like Gaston?
    Who’s much more than the sum of his parts like Ashfur?
    ashfur: As a specimen, yes, I’m intimidating
    whole clan: My, what a guy, that Ashfur!
    ashfur: I needed encouragement
    Thank you rainwhisker
    rainwhisker: Well, there’s no one as easy to bolster as you
    Too much?
    ashfur: Yep
    whole clan: No one fights like ashfur
    Douses lights like ashfur
    In a wrestling match nobody bites like ashfur
    Ashfur:When I hunt, I sneak up with my quiver
    And beasts of the field say a prayer
    First I carefully aimed for the liver
    And I shot from behind
    rainwhisker: Is that fair?
    Ashfur: I don’t care
    Whole clan: No one hits like Ashfur
    Matches wits like Ashfur
    In a spitting match nobody spits like ashfur
    ashfur: I’m especially good at expectorating
    whole clan: Ten points for Ashfur!
    ashfur: When I was a lad, I ate four dozen mice
    Every morning to help me get large
    And now that I’m grown, I eat five dozen mice
    So I’m roughly the size of a barge
    rainwhisker: Who has brains like ashfur!
    Entertains like ashfur!
    Who can make up these endless refrains like Ashfur
    ashfur: I use antlers in all of my decorating
    whole clan: Say it again!
    Who’s the tom among toms?
    Who’s the super success?
    Don’t you know? can’t you guess?
    Ask his fans and his five hangers-on
    Rainwhisker: There’s just one guy in town, who’s got all of it down
    And his name’s A-S-H
    I believe there’s another H
    It just occurred to me that I’m illiterate
    And I’ve never actually have to spell it out loud before
    ASHFUR!!

    done!
    i never want to see the name gaston ever again after deleting it and replacing it with ashfur 15 times 🙂
    any suggestions?

  • REPOST:
    So I’m making a Super Edition type book called Shinestar’s Legacy, based on Shinestar, whos warrior name is Shinestorm (dont judge)

    the four clans are StormClan (which Shinestar’s in), CloudClan, LightingClan, and RainClan.

    im going to publish it as a pdf in a few months time, i want it to be longer so yeah

  • K so this is the prologue to Shinestar’s Legacy, I am currently on Chapter 4

    Prologue

    Lightning flashed and rain poured around the fighting cats. Screeches and yowls sounded around the clearing. A silver tom dashed from cat to cat, tending to their injuries. Suddenly a shriek arose from a small secure den to the side of the clearing.

    “Hillheart’s kits are coming!” A mottled gray tom screeched at the silver tom. “Help her, Volewhisker!”

    Volewhisker looked at the sky. “This is a bad time to have kits.” But he followed the mottled gray tom towards the den where the shriek had sounded.

    A large brown tom dashed down the clearing. “Volewhisker, Rainstar was injured badly! He needs help!” 

    Volewhisker looked at the brown tom. “Woodclaw, go get Grasspaw. Hillheart’s having her kits.” 

    Woodclaw tore impatiently at the ground. “You know he’s on his last life!” 

    Volewhisker dipped his head. “May StarClan light his path.” He lifted his gaze to the stars, eyes filled with sorrow.

    Woodclaw slumped to the ground with wistful eyes. 

    “Go help with the battle. They need their leader.” Volewhisker hurried away. “And Hillheart is having her kits.”

    Woodclaw gave Volewhisker one last desperate look, then hared down the slope and dove into the fighting cats. 

    “Your Clan killed Rainstar!” Woodclaw screeched as he clawed mercilessly at a tortoiseshell warrior. The tortoiseshell screeched in pain and tore away. Woodclaw lunged for a pair of warriors fighting one StormClan warrior. 

    “Rainstar! Rainstar!” Woodclaw yowled his leader’s name to the storm ragin above with each blow he landed on the CloudClan warriors.

    His Clanmates took up the call and fought harder.

    “Rainstar! Rainstar!” 

    A calico she-cat yowled, “CloudClan, retreat!”

    Bloody cats tore from their angry StormClan opponents and raced away, disappearing over the slope. Woodclaw watched them go, then yowled, “Rainstar! Rainstar!”

    The grief-stricken StormClan took up the call and chanted their fallen leader’s name to the flashes of lightning. Volewhisker slid out of the nursery, eyes tired.

    “Hillheart has delivered three healthy kits: two toms and a she-cat.” Vinewing darted into the nursery. Before his eyes three kits squirmed and mewled besides Hillheart’s belly.

    “What shall we name them?” Vinewing looked at the kits with pride in his gaze.

    “The small black one is Pigeonkit.” Hillheart stroked her kit alongst its flank.

    “I think the silver one should be Streamkit.” Vinewing nudged the silver kit towards Hillheart’s belly.

    Suddenly the sun broke through the storm clouds and one shaft of light shone down on the gray-black tabby.

    “And this one is Shinekit.”

  • This is not meant to be taken seriously. This started when autocorrect turned Spotfur into Spitfire, and my friend (Phoenixflame) came up with this:

    Spitfire advanced on Rootspring, spitting fire from her eyes.

    “Why are you doing this to me?” asked Rootspring.

    “I am forever bitter,” Spitfire spat. “My fool of a mother named me Spitkit. I mean, what kind of name is that?”

    Roopspring shrugged. “I don’t know, maybe you spat a lot as a kit.”

    “Bristlefrost must have been more of a fool than I thought to have that train of thought,” Spitfire spat.

    Rootspring felt a stab of grief at the name of his deceased mate. According to Squirrelflight by the Gathering, this very cat had killed her. Spitfire. Wait. What?

    “What?” Rootspring said, mind reeling. “Bristlefrost was you’re MOTHER?!!!” No. Because if Bristlefrost was Spitfire’s mother, that meant. . .

    “Yes, Dad,” Spitfire spat. “I’m here to kill my precious father. Sorry your precious Bristlefrost never told you in life. Or, apparently in death, either

  • Sorry for the wait everybody, but I just got done typing it I hope you like it;
    CHAPTER 3 of Dark blazes;
    Cloudpaw still lay there, trembling, as Dovestar spoke. “”Cloudpaw, what happened to Leafsky?” she asked calmly, hoping her words had soothed the small tom. Cloudpaw looked up at her and gave a steady wail. “She g-got caught b- by…” Dovestar wished the tom would quit being so shy about it and spit it out.  Cloudpaw suddenly gave a loud yowl “A fox caught her!” and sank down to the ground again. Dovestar sighed. Leafsky was one of the kindest cats Fluffclan had ever had. She would be a terrible loss to the clan. She stroked her tail across Cloudpaw’s shoulders. Then, she turned to Asterstorm. “Do you know where her body is?” Asterstorm shook her head.  “We just saw the fox catch her when she went to catch prey alone, and then it grabbed her by the neck, and dragged her away. There was nothing we could do…” Her voice seemed to fade as the wind tugged at her fur.
    That evening, a vigil was held for Leafsky. The whole clan seemed to grieve for her as everyone settled down beside a stone that Cloudpaw carved the word “Leaf” into. Cloudpaw wailed, digging his muzzle into the side of the stone. Dovestar sighed. She had never seen the white apprentice like this. His green eyes sadly rested on the rock, and he smiled, as if remembering old times. Viperfrost let out a sad sigh, and Plumeflake started. Oh, Leafsky, how could you leave us? She felt ashamed. If she had kept Leafsky in camp, then maybe she would have lived, sitting here with her clanmates, enjoying a fresh mouse.
    That night, as Dovestar lied down she heard raindrops hit the night grass. So, even Staclan is weeping for her though,  she thought,laying her head down on her paws. The night was rolling slowly, and Dovestar was finding it hard to sleep. The dark night seemed to have no end as she got up and sat in the middle of the clearing. Moonlight shimmered over her fur as she lay down in the middle of the grass and spotted her deputy coming towards her. Willowfrost purred, settling down beside her. “So, what’s keeping you up lately?” she asked, looking at her leader.  Dovestar just sighed a reply. “Well, I’m just a bit traumatized by Cheetahstar’s death, that’s all.” Dovestar recalled the last words of the dying ginger cat.  Dovestream, cats of Fluffclan, you must protect the borders. You never know what the other clans are planning. She could remember every word of the former leader. 
    The next morning, Bramblefire padded quickly towards Dovestar. te seemed in a rush. “Hello, Bramb” meowed Dovestar, bowing her head to her former mentor. Te had a look of importance on tier face. “Whats wrong?” She asked, searching tis face for an answer. Tey shook tier head, saying. “Well, Cloudpaw doesn’t want to train today. And you must appoint him a new mentor.” The thought slipped Dovestar’s mind. “Haha, Ill get to that now, sorry.” She hoped that her clan hadn’t lost faith in her. She climbed on to highrock and yowled. All the cats gathered below. 

  • Okay, here is the prologue of my fan fic. The working title is The Girl of War, but suggestions are much wanted! For those of you who may be confused: this is about Magists, half-human half animal beings. They also have elemantal powers. They are fighting a war against the humans, who are ruled by the Supremacy. For more information, go to the comment I post on the Fan Fiction Organazation page.

    Prologue

    Dear Ms. Holiday, 
    It is, with deepest regret, that we must declare General Samuel R. Holiday killed in action. He has shown great sacrifice throughout his years. You will be given the purple heart upon the day of his funeral.
    Sincerely, 
    Colonel Robert J. Nigert

    Aunt Emmy held one like it, only hers read:
    Dear Mrs. Cassian,
    It is, with deep regret, we must declare Nurse Margaret H. Starling Holiday killed in a bombing of a nursing tent on the front lines. You will be sent a message containing the date of her funeral.
    Sincerely, 
    Colonel Robert J. Nigert

    I looked up. 
    “Why couldn’t they just send you an email?” I asked Aunt Emmy. “Then we would get it sooner, and it wouldn’t waste paper.”
    Aunt Emmy stared at me as if I had sloths parading out of my ears. She shook her head, her caramel colored hair swaying around her small antlers. “No tears for your parents?” she asked me. “Everyone dies someday.” I said. I knew everyone could see me trying to keep it together. I burst into tears, running into her arms. I knew all three of us would cry ourselves to sleep that night.

    A week later

    I fidgeted in my black dress. I could feel my cousin, Lyrical, doing the same thing. Lyrical was the same age as me. 
    “And now, we would like Ms. Darian Amori Holiday,” I scowled hearing my full name. I was Dria to pretty much everyone, and no one ever used my middle name. “Daughter of General Samuel R. Holiday and Margaret H. Starling Holiday,” I scowled deeper. No one ever used my parents’ full names! To  everyone, they were Sam and Peggy, not Samuel and Margaret. “To come forward to receive her father’s purple heart of sacrifice.” I jumped back a tiny bit. My tail was twitching the way it does when I get nervous. It was even more uncomfortable now, tucked inside the skirt of my dress. I stepped forward, not wanting to. “Now, we present Ms. Holiday with her father’s purple heart.” Someone dressed in military attire stepped up and tried to hand me a medal. They thought I was just an upset little girl. Someone who desperately wanted her parents back, but was too afraid to do anything. But they hadn’t bargained that I would take my blame out on them. I screamed, a sound so terrible it sounded like an eagle being strangled. I knocked the medal out of the soldiers hands and onto the floor. I stomped on it. Hard. “I don’t want a stupid medal!” I screeched at the person nearest to me- a small boy who jumped and ran to hide behind his mother. I turned to the stupid person blessing the funeral. “I want my parents back!” I kicked the medal across the floor. Two nurses and a soldier rushed forward to grab me, but I shook the two nurses off with a few shin-kicks. The soldier, however, hung on. He had probably trained to endure the hardest of conditions and blows. But he hadn’t been trained to endure me. I let loose another guttural scream, feeling my body heat up. Flames danced across my bare arm, setting the man’s uniform on fire. He ran away, trying to find water to put it out. I chased after him, but Lyrical came bounding up and held me back. “Dria, calm down!” she pleaded. There was a sizzling sound behind her. I could see the soldier with his arm stuck in a vase full of flowers. Out of habit, Lyrical turned her head. I caught a glimpse of her gazelle horns rushing at my face before the world turned to black. 

  • Sad backstory check- but still, poor Zephyr. 🙁

    Ami’s POV, 2:00 A.M.

        Ami sat up in the bed Fenri had provided for her. She couldn’t sleep, one reason because of her injury and another because she just couldn’t sleep. She lightly got up from the bed and walked towards the forest. A stroll wouldn’t hurt. 

    In The Forest

    Fin’s POV, 2:00 A.M.

        Fin heard quiet sobbing. She froze, and listened further. The quiet sobbing continued, and Fin could make out a voice whisper, 
         “I hope you’re in a better place now, Hope…” Fin carefully picked her way carefully towards the noise. She peeked behind a tree and saw a girl, about 14. Fin walked up to her and sat down next to her. 
    “I know the feeling.” The girl scrambled back in alarm, and Fin could identify her as a unicorn. 
         “D-Did you hear anything?” The girl demanded. Fin stared at her.
    “Only your sobbing and apology, yes.” The girl exhaled with relief, and she tried to put a brave smile on her face.
         “I’m Celeste. You?” Fin suddenly felt her heart seem to crack as she realized what was happening. She sighed and spoke.
    “I’m Fin.”
         “Well then, Fin,” Celeste said, wiping her tears, “Do you know where to go?”
    “That’s the issue,” Fin replied. “I have no idea where the heck I am.”

        The Local Park

             Drift’s POV, 2:42 P.M.

        “Zephyr!” Drift screamed. Ace had frozen to place, their eyes wide with shock and horror. Zeke lowered the pistol, and it crumbled to dust. Zeke smirked. Well, as best as he could with his stitched-up mouth. He then spoke with his spirit. 
         “There we go. Now, finally, no interruptions!” Zeke spread his wings and flew away. Drift raced to her friend, leaning over her.
         “Zephyr?” Drift whispered hoarsely. Suddenly she was confused. Where was the blood? And why was Zephyr holding something? She gently opened up Zephyr’s hand, and to her shock, a bullet shell was in there. Somehow Zephyr had managed to catch the bullet, but the impact must’ve knocked her unconscious. Drift released the breath she’d been holding and tried to shake Zephyr awake. 

    The Local Park    

    Artemis’s POV, 2:45 P.M.

        Artemis’s heart seemed to drop when she had heard the explosion. She unsheathed her claws and shifted into her kitsune form, racing towards the explosion. She leapt over monsters and demons, and she was astonished at how many there were packed together, ready to attack. Suddenly she heard a voice bellowing commands- well, no, not a voice, but seemingly a spirit talking for someone. She gritted her teeth as the realization came to her. Zeke was invading the town. She slowed down as she reached the edge of the explosion. It was dark blue, grey, and dark red, and blue-and-red flames burned. She launched herself in the havoc to come face-to-face with something that made her stop dead.
         “No…” Artemis murmured. “No- it can’t be.”
    “Yes, it can be.” Zeke’s spirit-voice replied. Artermis whipped around and came face-to-face with Zeke himself. Zeke’s spirit voice heaved a sigh.
         “Well, then, I suppose we could do this the old-fashioned way.” In Zeke’s hand appeared an iron sword with ancient markings on it. Artemis clenched her teeth as she realized what the markings meant. That just means I have to be careful. Artemis smiled. More careful than normal, I suppose. She lunged towards Zeke and met his strike with her claws, careful not to cut herself on the blade, or else she’d be toast. Suddenly, as she was leaping over Zeke, he managed to cut her. It was a small scratch, really; but her body froze up and she fell onto the ground, her body refusing to move other than her mouth. Zeke raised his sword for the kill, smiling.
         “It’s over, hero.” Suddenly an arrow sprouted from his neck and he collapsed. Artemis could only watch with shock as a black-haired girl lowered her bow triumphantly.
     “He was annoying,” She mused. “Trying to kill innocent people and all that.” Artemis just stared as the girl neared.
         “Hey, you alright?” The girl asked.
    “Do I look alright?” Artemis demanded. The girl’s eyes twinkled, her voice dripping with warm amusement.
         “Thought it’d be polite to ask. Fiona, get your butt over here!” 

    The Local Park

     Fiona’s POV, 3:10 P.M.

        After Fiona had broken Zeke’s spell, she unfroze the girl who turned out to be named Artemis. She was apparently trying to duel Zeke, but obviously failed; but Zephyr had come in just in time. This loss would cripple Aeryn, since Zeke was his number one general. But something just didn’t seem right… 

        “Fiona!” Zephyr called. “Can you look at this?” Fiona appeared beside Zephyr, who was staring down at Zeke’s sword. Fiona picked up the sword and studied the markings on its dark grey blade. 
         “Hm… these markings resemble a curse- well, curses,” Fiona mused. “Artemis is now free of these curses, because I, say, uncursed her.” Artemis was staring at her feet, yet said nothing. 
         “Hm. I suppose we could-”
    No.” Artemis growled, lifting her head, silvery-blue eyes flaring. Interrupting Fiona which seemed totally out of character for her, considering her shyness just a few moments ago. Fiona stared at Artemis before exchanging a wary glance with Zephyr. 
         “So…” Fiona said, shuffling her feet, eyes starting to twinkle, “What else can you do?” 

    In The Forest

    Artemis’s POV, 4:45 P.M.

        Artemis tensed her muscles. 
    “You ready?” Drift called. “Remember, these souls are being controlled by me. Just tell me when you get overwhelmed.” That won’t happen, Artemis thought, unsheathing her claws.
         “Ready.” Drift’s eyes immediately glowed pure white, and the armor and weapons laid out on the clearing in the middle of the forest began to shake and form a physical body. Their eyes glowed white, and they grabbed weapons- bronze, silver, copper, iron, whatever you could think of. One even had a pure diamond sword, which Artemis was slightly nervous about. Her tails swished nervously.
    “Remember, you can always back down,” Drift assured her. But Artemis clenched her teeth. The warriors lunged. Artemis inhaled deeply and she multiplied, the souls backing into a group, obviously confused. They suddenly realized what was happening and began to slash and hack at the illusions. They shimmered and dissolved into silver glitter that flew into the sky. Artemis snapped her fingers and she switched places with one of the fake hers. A soul jabbed at the place where she was in, and she winced as she realized how much that could’ve hurt. 
         “Locked and loaded.” Artemis grinned as she tensed, and lunged with a blood curling snarl. She sliced at the souls, disintegrating armor and watching the shocked expressions on their faces as they crumbled to dark grey dust. The five remaining souls leveled their weapons and charged. Artemis froze and reached for the souls’ mind, yearning for control. A millisecond of neurons and faint blood cells, and she was in. She willed them to trip and fall on their weapons and crumble to dust when she flashed out of their heads. She smiled and shifted back to human form. She spread her arms, staring at the gaping faces of Drift and Fiona.
    “Well, wasn’t that fun?”
         “You- just with a- a sword- just-” Fiona imitated slashing and hacking with her hands, eyes wide, then put them on her hips.
    “You better teach me how to do that before I summon a ventus spirituum to tear you apart.”
         “Oh, no, not a wind spirit that’s made out of the air I breathe and is a literal cloud that can do nothing!” Artemis gasped dramatically. Fiona narrowed her eyes.
    “I wasn’t kidding.”

    At Aeryn’s Hideout

    Zephyr’s POV, 9:30 P.M.

        Zephyr crouched down and tightened her grip on her bow. Several monsters and spirits were gathered around a singular circular spot where the grass withered and turned black, and bones were littered around. Bones of people. As Zephyr focused on the bones’ features, she stifled a gasp. The bones of elves. Suddenly, the air seemed to tear like paper, creating a warp, and a man stepped through. He was a young man, really; most likely 20 or 21. His curly black hair and his gleaming red eyes were one thing. The bone crown sitting in his feathery black hair and the black and dark red scythe plastered with blood was another. The warp closed behind him, and he grinned, revealing perfectly white teeth, which Zephyr found odd, considering his… style. She realized who it was, and marveled at the sight of him. Aeryn.
    “Brothers! Sisters! Warriors!” The man cried. “At last, we gather here today to witness… the death of Legali, the last elf.” Two serpent-man hybrids brought a struggling middle-aged man forward. He had long, black hair, and icy blue eyes, just like Zephyr. But the thing that baffled her was how his eyes seemed to change colors- blue, purple, blue, purple. She also found it disturbing at how similar he looked to her and Ami. He had a deep tan, but his face had scratches that were stitched and patched up, but once again re-opened. He had pointy ears, of course, since he was an elf. Something that also surprised her was how he had folded-up pale blue angel wings that were ripped and bleeding. He then spoke.
         “You’ll never succeed,” The man growled. His shifting eyes narrowed. “Ever.”
    “My dear King Legali!” Aeryn exclaimed. “What an insult. Especially in the presence of King Aeryn, the one who leads all! I’m afraid I have to punish you for that. And your punishment that I pick is… death.” Suddenly Legali began humming a gentle tune. Zephyr’s body relaxed and she slumped, eyes wide with shock, and began to twitch before plunging into a far-away memory. 

        “Zephyr. Zephyr, wake up,” A woman pleaded. Zephyr opened her eyes. She was cradled in her mother’s arms, and an explosion made Zephyr let out a strangled scream. Her mother slapped her hand over Zephyr’s mouth and dove behind a collapsed wall as footsteps became louder. Zephyr felt tears streaming down her cheeks, and her mother’s soft brown eyes were bloodshot and red from crying. Her once long and curly blonde hair was tangled and dirty. Her diamond-and-steel tiara was lopsided and the biggest diamond was cracked. Her city was under attack, and her father and sister, the king and eldest princess, was nowhere to be found. A voice barked,
         “Find the king and queen at all costs. And if you find their children, take them, too. We need to search before we nuke the city. We wouldn’t want to kill any innocent elves, would we?” The general chuckled. Zephyr trembled, and her mother’s lip quivered. 
    “Do me a favor, my little snowflake,” Her mother soothed. “Run. Run as far away as you can from the city, towards the entrance of the deep dark forest. Duck and hide when you have to. Allison will be there waiting for you.” Her mother presented something from behind her. A bow, small enough for Zephyr’s 6 year-old hands. She grasped it, and the bow shifted into a crescent hairpin. 
         “A reminder of me. Now, go!” Her mother whispered fiercely. Zephyr stumbled away from her mother, who looked terrible, her once beautiful white linen dress torn and tattered, her wolf ears and tail flicking and twitching nervously. Zephyr ran towards the forest, weaving through the soldiers’ legs, completely ignoring her mother. She reached the forest, where Ami was waiting for her, and picked her up.
     “We need to go. Now,” Ami said, gritting her teeth. Zephyr flailed.
         “What about mommy?” She cried. “We can’t leave mommy! Or daddy!” Ami ran faster, and faster; and a huge explosion blew up the entire city, leaving Zephyr crying and screaming loudly as she mourned.

        Zephyr shook herself out of her vision. Her heart pounded in her ears. The man right there, the last elf, king of the elves who was facing death, was her father.

    Behold, yet another cliffhanger for thee whom dare to read this chapter. 
    

    Leafsky out-