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Repost because I forgot to add questions 😛
Hello ^^ So this is a novel I made a bit ago, and I thought I would share it with whoever wanted to read it. It is about a cat named Heartily, it has lots of adventure and action included! Sorry it’s a bit all jumbled up, I copied and pasted it from Pages, and it went all funky. But everything you need to know is still all in tact!
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1T53MGJMOaAx0T6McP-Mzz6IRnZ5SYRK3p-0TLlgatdk/edit?usp=sharing
You don’t have to, but if you gave the story a go, here are a few questions I hope you’d consider answering <33
1. Who is your favourite character so far?
2. Who is your least favourite character so far?
3. Depending how far you've read into it, do you see any potential ships 👀
Page flip, my bad ~
My favorite character of your novel is probably Heartily! Haven’t had the chance to read a lot of it yet, but i think I see a Scout/Heartily thing going on…..
Another sneak peak 😀 I wrote this a while ago so don’t judge the grammer mistakes!!! This is kinda a “calm before the gore” thingy.
Without wasting a split-howl, Windgust kicked her back and leaped to his paws. Twistedstalk calmed herself; fury had nearly blinded her. She reared up and slammed her forepaws on Windgust’s back. The white wolf sprang back and began to circle again, his tail weaving through the air. Twistedstalk didn’t know what to expect. Feeling suddenly nervous, she growled, backing away. Windgust yipped in triumph and rushed at her. With a snarl, Twistedstalk blocked him with her flank. She was already aware that he threw his weight around to much: his one flaw. When she blocked him, Windgust tumbled back. He shook himself, scattering dirt everywhere. Twistedstalk lowered herself to the ground and propelled forward, bumping into Windgust’s legs as she darted past. The white wolf snarled playfully. “We need to save our energy”, he woofed, regaining his balance. Twistedstalk bobbed her tail in agreement. Her back barely ached now. She was ready for anything.
“Should we wait for the wolves to come to us–or should we attack first?” Windgust cocked his head, one ear facing back.
Twistedstalk wasn’t sure. For once she didn’t want to be the dominant mate. Which would be better? She thought. If they could surprise the other wolves, than surely that would be an advantage. She thrust her chest forward. “We should attack soon”. Windgust nudged her cheek. “We will drive those wolves away. They have no right to be threatening us like this.” Then he trotted over to the dead deer and began to eat, staining his muzzle red. “I’ll be back”, Twistedstalk yipped. When Windgust twitched his tail in protest, she growled. “I won’t go far. If anything happens, either I’ll scent it or hear it. Just howl, okay? It will be quick”. Windgust finally obliged, though he still looked nervous. I’m leaving him in a vulnerable position, but he can handle it, she thought.
NICE. I love it!
tysm!
The Painted Wolf! Hi!!!!
HIIIII
Why don’t u do art on the Warriors website anymore? I missed it!
I do, its just that warrior cats.com takes a while to accept art for some reason?
Ohhh. Well, I missing your art!
Wow so amazing. TwistedStalk ur amazing!!!
Awwww, tysm!
yes, Twisted is amazing!!!!!
Yes! So is her art!
Painty, when you drew the pic of Nova and Twisted as warriors, it made me so happy! You are so kind, thanks for joining the Blog as well! I LOVE your art. You are my favorite CreaterClan member!
I saw that pic! It was cool. Darn, I wish I had CreatorClan!
you inspired me to do both of those things!!! I also love your art. we are quite similar, what are the chances!?! both love wolves, both do art, both read warrior cats and both read the wolf chronicles!!!! (I think we are only 2 years apart as well! maybe)
Echos of the wolves Book 1 blurb=
Nova and King are the only wolves remaining from an event they call “The Vanishing”. They meet an young wolf pup named Willow, though she is fearful of Nova. They go through many things on their journey to discover the mystery and Nova discovers a family past relating with the wolves of the Stargazers pack- a group of wolves able to read signs in the stars.
I’m trying not to say too much about my book. and things may change because I’m only on chapter 7 out of 20 something
I’m still working on the blurb too
OMG sounds epic! Have you ever read Fox Craft? It will be really inspiring for you! Part of the reason I started writing!
no I’ve never read fox craft but I want to. I’ve heard of it before when looking for more/interesting ebooks! that’s also how I found the wolf Chronicles!!!
foxcraft is now on my LOOOOONG list of books to get (and I mean LONG like 20-30 books) but it will be the next one to buy!
Echos of the Wolves is the coolest series name EVER! Much more creative than Wolf Call XDDDDD
uhhh, I kinda used a free AI generator to get an idea of a title for the series (not use the name it gives me). it was mostly the echo part the wolf one was my idea and then it also fits with the series character AKA Novas son? Echo! (his name was made before the series name)
the first books name is The Vanishing (forgot to say)
Wow you’re good at book titles!
Awesome! You seem like you’ve got a really interesting premise! I especially like the names of the characters (:
A gentle reminder that something like this would fit better on the fanfiction organization page. That is where people share blurbs for future work, talk about background for their story, and get help.
ok thank you
I have been writing a lot lately. A post-apocalyptic wolf novel, my favorite one that will be a series called Wolf Call, and another wolf book that I am only 40 pages into. I’ll try to post a bit of the post-apocalyptic one soon 🙂
Oooooh. I don;’t like post-apocaliptic stories but maybe with wolves and your characters you create I will!
ahhh! I just noticed what happened when I spelt don’t (I did this – ;’). HA HA.
I swear yall are gonna take over the fanfic page at this point ;-;
Ooop sorry😔
Sorry 🫢
My thoughts exactly ;-;
As Ripple said, a gentle reminder to not spam the page with comments 🙂
The fanfiction page is quite active, with many BlogClan members using it to post stories. Most of us will only post once per page flip, to allowing us to get their our seen/read by others.
This comment would also fit better on the fanfiction organization page, as that it where comments regarding any details (ie. talk of future work, explanation of characters, etc.) about the story should go.
(I hope this clears up any confusion. It’s great to have another prolific writer join BlogClan 😀)
I didn’t know. I’m extremely sorry and that’s the last I will post for a while and I will let others post their fanfic
There’s no need to appologise, Painted <3
It’s perfectly alright to feel eager to share your work! I’m sorry if myself or others came off too strongly.
ANOTHER deleted chapter from The spirit of a wolf (1st draft of my book) this chapter is in Kings POV (small amount of blood)
Nova stared at him, her eyes full of disbelief and grief. He had her pinned under his paws. Anger engulfed him and he fought himself to release this anger, though it was no hope.
Moments before, he had scratched her face leaving two bleeding scars underneath her eyes and his claws had scratched her shoulder that also bled the rich red blood, it seeped into the fur between his paw pads and reddening his white claws. His back claws dug into her flank, the blood staining her beautiful white tail. He seemed to win the fight over his mind and backed away but his own control seemed to let go of its grasp and his anger returned. He got close to Nova, growling and he was about to pounce when she jumped at him. She scratched his face leaving a scar on his nose and over his eye. Blood dripped into his eye and he clawed back at Nova though missed and she managed to land a blow on his ear, tearing away some of the soft flesh.
She began to disappear in a cloud of blue smoke. He gained control of himself once again and looked into her eyes as the smoke swirled around her; they were full of disappointment again and fear. Once she was gone he sat down, the silence unnerving.
“Why did I do that?” He thought to himself.
“Because it’s your destiny.” The voice. It had been there ever since the day he was left in the gorge, it taught him that he needed to fend for himself and it had helped him get out.
“Why is it my destiny? Did you do that? If you did, then why do I need you if all you’re going to do is hurt my family” he asked. It took a while to answer but once it did King was now back at the gorge.
“Yes, I did that but it was to help you. Don’t you forget the day in the gorge , I helped you get out. They aren’t your family anymore, they left you to die. You made a vow.”
“He’s over here!” yelled Nova, her voice young but wise. King looked up, hope filled his heart. They came back. His little tail wagged, making rocks tumble down the side. He was sitting on a ledge and if he moved it was almost guaranteed he would fall in. The wolves looked into the ditch, all looking hopeless. Nova looked over the edge, her silver eyes standing out in the dark of the sky.
“We’re here to help you, King. The big wolves will get you out”. He could hear murmuring from the older wolves and Nova’s expression became sad. He strained his ears to see if he could catch any words they were saying; “a foolish pup”, “we should leave him there”, “it’s impossible to save him”, “he’ll probably die if he came back, it’s better he’d stay here”. They all disappeared from the edge except for Nova who whispered “I’m sorry Brother, I can’t help, I don’t know how…” he pushed his ears back and whined “Sister, no please, my paw is hurt.” but she was already gone. That’s when the voice came. It told him how to get out, told him he would help him whenever he needed it, told him to get revenge….
If you’re going to share your fanfics, please do so via a link! Long comments like this can clog up the page easily
OK, sorry. I don’t have a blog email.
That’s fine! It’s easy enough to make one through gmail, or you can use a free cope and paste site
Yah, I don’t either.
maybe we should make one then. so we don’t fill up the comments anymore and we could share more on a Google doc? (I will need to ask to make one though)
Hi, can you please compile everything into one link? Like Ripple said above, you and Twisted are taking over the fanfic page, it’s not fair to those who are actually posting in one link if you get what I mean 🙂
Okay! I am so sorry, thanks for being so nice about it!
It’s alright, thanks for being so receptive <3
How do u write so amazing?!
This is amazing!
Hi! Like many others said, it’d be better if you wrote it in a google docs or justpaste.it; it explictly says fan fiction comments are not allowed above :> nice chapter, though!
Hi can I share a google document with my fanfic although I don’t have a blog email account thingy.
you need a blog email account to share docs c:
what if I cant make one
There are plenty of free copy and paste sites you can use, such as https://justpaste.it to share your story! https://justpaste.it/fhs87
Thx. Uhh…how do I paste my story? 🤔😁
If you’re on computer, select your entire story, then use control + c to copy (or command + c if you’re on Mac), then going into justpasteit, and click on the box where your want your story to go, then hit control + v (or command + v for Mac)
Okay thanks
What Lil said above; the blog doesn’t encourage users sharing irl names!
Got it!
Chapter 3 of Towering Flames are out!
Written by Starpelt, Sorrelsplash and Silverspirit
There has never been peace. The tension has always been near a breaking point between the four Clans, DawnClan, WiseClan, BreezeClan and ThornClan. When something happens, everything breaks.
The Clans finally go to war.
But four cats, one from each Clan, know this is wrong. Yet everything seems so bleak…
So how do they stop the incoming battle?
Read it here! https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dKyFcoNyECPKVKkzmhvK27bI5n_U2k0H-2p5rTFkEOA/edit
Questions:
Favourite character?
Least favourite character?
Opinion on Lostkit?
Predictions?
How do you think the Fight will go?
Thoughts?
Questions?
Thanks for reading!
Hooray!! A new chapter!
Favourite character? Shiveringpaw, Wisteriapaw, Dreampaw
Least favourite character? Darkstar, I think!
Opinion on Lostkit? She’s nice, but I think I need to see more of her to get a concrete opinion on her character! She’s definitely a victim of a lot of cruelty, which I feel bad for, but I’m curious to learn more about her personality beyond her suffering.
Predictions? Eclipsethorn and Midnightclaw will continue to do bad things from the shadows…
How do you think the Fight will go? Badly is all I can say…
Thoughts? This chapter definitely set up an ominous tone with in the clan. The entire leadership is flawed, and they’ve definitely set up a clan that is controlled through terror. It was really shocking and intriguing, and I’m definitely curious to learn more about the corrupt society. (my only thing is that we saw the queen being murdered again, by Eclipse and Midnight, but we already saw that in the prologue?) Having something a little different happen instead of something we already know might have been a little more interesting, but that’s my only advice!
Questions? Have we met all the Povs?
About the question, you have for my PoVs 😛 I’ll be focusing on Wisteria and Shivering for the time being, Wisteria probably for interaction while Shivering for… something else that Im not gonna say 😛
Thanks for reading, Dusky! It really helps :>
Ooh yay! Those were two of my fav characters 😛
Thanks for being such a dedicated reader!!!
And yes, we have met all the PoVs. Originally there was going to be one for DawnClan, but we decided there were too many, so next chapter will be Wisteriapaw again 🙂
Yeah, I couldn’t get much into Lostkit’s personality in this chapter because there was so much I wanted to fit in, but we’ll be seeing more of her in chapter six!
Thanks for being such a dedicated reader!!!
And yes, we have met all the PoVs. Originally there was going to be one for DawnClan, but we decided there were too many, so next chapter will be Wisteriapaw again 🙂
Yeah, I couldn’t get much into Lostkit’s personality in this chapter because there was so much I wanted to fit in, but we’ll be seeing more of her in chapter six!
Oh and I might try and make it more clear but it’s just a dream. I would get rid of it, but it contributes to the story later… (No spoilers)
Favourite character? Wisteriapaw and Lostkit
Least favourite character? Prologue cats
Opinion on Lostkit? I like how protective she is! Her perspective is very interesting :))
Predictions? Muddykit dies
How do you think the Fight will go? Yeah Muddykit’s going to die for sure unless there’s like a miracle or something which I think there will be because Muddykit dying is too simple 😛 but then again maybe Lostkit’s going to want revenge if and when he dies and that helps the plot so yeah mixed feelings on this
Thoughts? Great chapter! Can’t wait to read the rest :))
Questions? Nup!
Thank you very much for reading!
*Skypaw looks up from the book*
“Yeah, Muddykit’s dead”
No spoilers, you’ll have to find out in chapter six…
Favourite character? Probably Shivering and Wisteriapaw!
Least favourite character? Darkstar and his minions 🙁
Opinion on Lostkit? She’s nice, I’d love to see more of her and her siblings!
Predictions? Darkstar will act harshly towards Lostkit and Heatherkit?
How do you think the Fight will go? Poor Muddykit, he won’t stand a chance D:
Thoughts? I love this so far! Can’t wait for the next chapter 😀
Questions? None for now!
Thank you for reading!!!
When I read Darkstar and his minions, I thought you meant the other type of minions…. 😂
I read this and started picturing Darkstar with a bunch of tiny yellow minions following him and screeching ‘BANANA’ and started laughing so hard lol 🤣
YESSS
Exactly 😂😂😂
Venom Within Chapter 2 and 3!!!
Rustkit is eager to explore the harsh desert lands alongside her brother. But a chance encounter with a sandstorm and a venomous snake will forever alter her entire life…
LINK: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Be_aELCxaem30sDFUNmRbjLXW5hcsLPSl4TFgxi3lzM/edit (Wattpad coming soon)
Questions!
Thoughts on our PoV?
Favourite characters?
Least favourites?
Thoughts so far?
Questions for me?
Theories?
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If you didn’t catch my previous post, I have started a new story; Venom Within!!! My intention is to post a couple chapters every week. I hope you consider giving my work a read, and enjoy! (:
Aw now I can’t call her Rustie anymore ;-;
Thoughts on our PoV? We need a new nickname for her… *intense thinking* AHA! PYTHERS!
Favourite characters? Burr ;-; and Rus- I mean Pythers 😛 also Mr. Prologue had an interesting perspective!
Least favourites? Pricklestar doesn’t vibe with me very much so him I guess
Thoughts so far? BURR NO
Questions for me? I’m kinda curious; what species of snake was it? 😛
Theories? Pythers leaves
Pythers 😛
I actually chose the name Rustkit to sort of pull a minor allusion to Rusty. They both got their names changes when they became apprentices, except Firepaw got a better name, and Pythonpaw was stuck with one that sort of represents all the trauma she went through…
The snake species was a red-bellied black snake! Here’s a link to an image of one + some basic info
https://www.australiangeographic.com.au/fact-file/red-bellied-black-snake/
I actually originally chose the nickname Pytho for her, but ended up changing it ‘cause I liked Pythers better 😛
Emeraldpaw 😏
Thoughts on our PoV? WHY DID PRICKLESTAR DO THAT TO POOR RUSTKIT >:C
Favourite characters? Feel sorry for Python 😛 Emeraldpaw because she’s the only one who hasn’t really been annoying so far
Least favourites? PRICKLESTAR, Flamepaw
Thoughts so far? Whyyyy Dusky ;-;
Questions for me? What actually is the relation between the snake’s bite and them going so-called ‘crazy’?
Theories? None!
Pricklestar’s motivations will soon be revealed, though if you take a look in the prologue, the SnakeClan cat who may or may not be related to Python, murdered her mother.
In answer to your question, we don’t actually know yet! The DuneClan cats certainly treat Pythonpaw as contaminated and tainted, but the repercussions she will experience have yet to be uncovered…
Honestly, these two chapters were pretty rough, weren’t they? 😛
Thoughts on our PoV? Nooo Rustkit- I mean, Pythonpaw D:
Favourite characters? Burrowpaw, he seemed like a nice brother…
Least favourites? Probably Pricklestar
Thoughts so far? This is so interesting, I can’t wait to read more of it! Will the scouts be unfriendly? How would Pythonpaw feel about her new rank? I can feel that it’s a really great fanfic, like your other ones 😀
Questions for me? None for now!
Theories? Hmm… none?
Thanks, Wynn!! I’m super glad you’re enjoying the story so far!
Thoughts on our PoV? nuuuuuuuu why? She’s so sweet :<
Favourite characters? Pythonpaw and Emeraldpaw
Least favourites?Pricklestar and Flamekit :<
Thoughts so far? I LOVE this!!!!
Questions for me? any ships your thinking about?
Theories? burrowpaw is somehow alive :O
Thanks so much for reading, Emmy!! Some character relationships may be being set up behind the scenes, but no current ships with the mains as of yet!
Thoughts on our PoV? I feel very bad for her, but the dynamic of her seeing herself as above the Scouts and then having to become one is pretty interesting. I’m looking forward to seeing how she interacts with her mentor!
Favourite characters? Burrowpaw </3, Emeraldpaw, Pythonpaw
Least favourites? Hmmm, Flamepaw, I suppose, although I don't really blame him for being upset. He's the one who has the most reason to believe it's Python's fault that Burrowpaw died. But he let Python believe he was gonna be supportive 🙁 would've stung less if he was mean from the outset
Thoughts so far? I'm really liking the atmosphere of this new Clan!! It's very different to any of the others I've read about in your fics. It seems very strained and lonely. Like an old western town in a drought!
Questions for me? None so far!
Theories? Not yet. I'm interested to find out how Python survived the bite, though!
Also, in the allegiances, I think you mixed up Copperpaw's description with Saltbreeze's /lh
Thanks, Jeri!! I really appreciate the thoughts and feedback!
I honestly love your description of DuneClan- it’s been so interesting to explore a clan that survives in a really challenging environment. I always really enjoy having unique clan cultures!
Thanks for the mention about the allegiances! I’ll be sure to fix that up (:
Thoughts on our PoV? I feel so bad for her. . . One mistake ended up making her whole life spiral
Favourite characters? Pythonpaw, Burrowpaw
Least favourites? Flamepaw and Pricklestar >:((
Thoughts so far? I think the whole Clan is a bit stupid. . .
Questions for me? None!
Theories? None for the moment :DD
Thanks for reading, Kiri!! Yeahh the clan isn’t at it’s peak right now… We’ll get to learn more about DuneClan and their cats and customs very soon tho!
Thoughts on our PoV? Noooo…Poor Rustkit! (Well, now Pythonpaw…)
Favourite characters? Burrowpaw…*sniff*
Least favourites? Flamepaw, Foxshadow, Pricklestar, and LITERALLY EVERYONE ELSE
Thoughts so far? It’s great!
Questions for me? Nope
Theories? Well, my theory about Stormfang being Rustkit’s (Pythonpaw’s) father seems to be true…
Thanks, Detective!
There are certainly many cats against Python at the moment, but soon we’ll get to meet her allies and the cats she may learn to trust…
Thoughts on our PoV? I feel really bad for her, but it’s interesting to see her becoming a Scout, when she thought so low of them in chapter 1
Favourite characters? Burr :/
Thoughts so far? I like the vibe of this story! It’s interesting to see them in a desert environment, I don’t think I’ve read anything like this before :))
Questions for me? None
Theories? None yet
Thanks, Emb!! I really like writing about such a unique environment!
Glad you enjoyed!
Wait why did half my comment disappear 😭
Thoughts on our PoV? <333 I love herrr
Favourite characters? Burrowpaw (NOOOO)
Least favourites? Literally everyone who DARES be mean to Pythi. (Yeah, they'll have the face the wrath of the metal ruler)
Thoughts so far? Amazingggg
Questions for me? Have you seen my character Submission yet? Just asking
Theories? Flamepaw diededededededededs :DDDD
Thanks RiRi! I did get Fennecpaw, thanks for the submission!
Interesting theory…
mostly because i hate him 😛
I saw this earlier but forgot to reply 😛
OH NO
Burrowpaw :’)
Pricklestar >:(((
I literally yelled “YEAH” when I saw this post 😭
when will OasisClan be introduced?
nope!
also, I found a few mistakes! 🙂
https://freeimage.host/i/JwXFgEX – “the falling petals fell to the ground”
https://freeimage.host/i/JwXFUBt – Stormang 😛
https://freeimage.host/i/JwXF62s – StarClan instead of GalaxyClan
https://freeimage.host/i/JwXFr4n – Use of quotation marks
https://freeimage.host/i/JwXFPYG – StarClan is GalaxyClan, right?
Thanks, Mornz!!
OasisClan is going to be introduced in the next post (chapter 5)! I’m super excited to finally show off these mysterious and passive guys, especially since so many people added OCs there!
And thanks for the corrections- it really helps, since I can’t catch all of them <3
Thoughts on our PoV? Very detailed and stuff
Favourite characters? RUSTPAW COFF COFF
Least favourites? um idk maybe PRICKLESTAR
Thoughts so far? whyyyyy i liked rustkit :(((
Questions for me? nope!
Theories? pythonpaw becomes evil and wants vengeance or smthn like that
Thanks, Wiff!! I really appreciate that you took the time to give my story a read!
Python did have a rough start to the story. I can definitely see some darkness brewing around her, that might make your theory come true. We’ll just have to wait and see…
Chapter 11 and 12 of Taking Flight are out! <3
https://docs.google.com/document/d/16XDC-yogvTMrm0fokYKpp3SWD1_VceSP6sOZvTlWJes/
https://www.wattpad.com/1413016130-taking-flight-a-warriors-fanfiction-chapter-11
i decided to release 2 chapters since i didn't last week :3
questions (optional):
favourite/least favourite characters?
thoughts on the ending D:?
general thoughts?
suggestions/feedback?
questions?
tysm for reading <33
Read!!
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Hi so I don’t have a Blog Email so is there any other way to share my story on Google Docs or smth without creating a Blog Email?
Hi! When you go to share there should be an option “publish to the web” which gives you a link that you can send that doesn’t display user information at all, thats the best work around!
WHAAAAAAAAAAAA IM FINALLY FINISHED WITH CHAPTER 12!!! Go to Wattpad, search up my username (KitKat_123_KK) and find my story, as usual, here’s the blurb in case u wanna start!!
When Cassie Evans starts high school and meets Blaze, a kid who seems to have a secret grudge against her family, her entire world is thrown upside down. As their friendship grows, they learn facts about one another’s pasts, and Cassie is horrified. Her father had arrested Blaze’s innocent father for murder, but the only problem was that her father was being honest, but the lie detector showed that Blaze’s father was innocent. Together, the pair unravel this mystery of the murder and find some of the most perplexing things about each other’s families.
– Hope yall like it!!!
Prologue is done! It only focuses on one character in one Clan, but let’s not talk about that 😛
(Note: I accidentally used star-cycle, which is night in Murky Waters – I swear it was an accident, Ri, we barely use that anyways 😛 – but they have different meanings, so I’m not changing it 😛 )
Prologue of ℂ𝕣𝕪𝕤𝕥𝕒𝕝𝕚𝕤𝕖𝕕 𝕊𝕖𝕔𝕣𝕖𝕥𝕤 is out now!
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Link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ESI8JuEUSWIFSaPOvlCUHvmcJmyH36BH7C73D2afuUc/edit
Questions :>
Favourite character?
Least favourite character?
Thoughts on Calciteberry?
Thoughts on Paledusk?
Thoughts on any other characters? (Pls specify which character)
What do you think of my writing style?
Was it too long/rushed?
Mistakes/areas for improvement?
Other opinions?
If I continue, will you read it?
Anything else?
Thanks <33
Read!
It’s super interesting so far! Can’t wait to see what happens next :DD
Thanks, Shimmz!
Read! I really enjoyed it and no I don’t think it was too rushed
Thanks, Smokey <3
Favourite character? Hmm probably none, I haven’t got a chance to delve into any personalities yet
Least favourite character? Calciteberry probably
Thoughts on Calciteberry? I’m sorry I’m not helping with clear answers 😭 not sure…
Thoughts on Paledusk? Not sure 😭…
Thoughts on any other characters? (Pls specify which character) Nope
What do you think of my writing style? Good!
Was it too long/rushed? Just right 🙂
Mistakes/areas for improvement? I just feel like Chalcedonynight is a bit of a mouthful…
Other opinions?
If I continue, will you read it? Yeah!
Anything else? I love the originality of this 🙂
Yup, I expected at least one person to dislike Calcite, I designed her personality to be that way you know 😛
And yes, Chalcedonynight IS a mouthful
but I had to pay tribute to Cloudo XDThanks for reading!
Favourite character? Too early to tell tbh
Least favourite character? maybe Paledusk
Thoughts on Calciteberry? Reminds me of living Yellowfang in her grumpiness
Thoughts on Paledusk? seems a bit manipulative
Thoughts on any other characters? (Pls specify which character) Poor Azuritesight…
What do you think of my writing style? Pretty good!
Was it too long/rushed? A little rushed, but not too noticeable
Mistakes/areas for improvement? You called the other queen Chalcedonywing, and then called her Chalcedonynight all the other times
Other opinions? I noticed this a couple times, that you didn’t make a new paragraph when the next person spoke. Threw me off a bit but not a big deal, I’m just really picky sorry 😂
If I continue, will you read it? Definitely!
Anything else? Nope!
Thanks for the feedback! And I didn’t make a new paragraph when the next spoke because idk 😛
And yes, I agree, it was a bit rushed.
Again, tysm for the feedback!
Chapter One of Echoes of Destiny is out!
Sorry for being inconsistent for this btw, if you’ve read just comment ‘Read!’
Link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1cJ7xxPmHY17XdpxRMxNnzfAYt9X0jjXEQ5199w3J8HA/edit
Questions:
Favourite character?
Least favourite character?
Thoughts on Amphitrite?
Thoughts on Yuki?
Thoughts on Sylvana?
Thoughts on Ventus?
Thoughts on Plasma?
Thoughts on Kiara and Kyler?
What do you think of the story so far?
Will you continue reading?
Questions?
Mistakes and/or areas for improvement?
Anything else?
Thank you SO much if you read, it helps a lot <3
Read! :DD
Thanks!
Read!
Ty for reading, Sorrel!